| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.182 | | leniency | 0.364 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 783 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 783 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "trembled" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "vibrated" | | 9 | "silk" | | 10 | "searing" | | 11 | "loomed" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 15 | | markdownWords | 27 | | totalWords | 778 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "Hel portal nearby." | | 1 | "Shifted." | | 2 | "dare." | | 3 | "“Laila.”" | | 4 | "teeth." | | 5 | "ate" | | 6 | "moved." | | 7 | "“You don’t belong here, little thief.”" | | 8 | "“Aren’t you?”" | | 9 | "above." | | 10 | "split." | | 11 | "“Stay. Play. Bleed.”" | | 12 | "breathed" | | 13 | "burned." | | 14 | "“Next time, Malphora.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.61% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 742 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.35 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 10 | | Grove | 4 | | Welsh | 1 | | Irish | 1 | | Roots | 1 | | Dozens | 1 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.826 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to writhe when she blinked" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 778 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 18.98 | | std | 13.68 | | cv | 0.721 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn’t have been able to see the stones in the dark, yet there they stood—pale as bone, carved with spirals that seemed to writhe when she blinked." | | 1 | "A whisper slithered past her ear—words in a language that made her teeth ache." | | 2 | "The shadow *split.* Dozens of them, slithering between the trees, their forms shifting—human, then beast, then something with too many eyes, too many mouths." | | 3 | "The flame connected with something solid, and the creature shrieked—a sound like tearing silk." | | 4 | "The shadow loomed over her, its form coalescing into something almost human—a woman with hollow eyes and a mouth stitched shut with thorns." | | 5 | "And then—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 747 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.03346720214190094 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002677376171352075 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 6.95 | | std | 5.19 | | cv | 0.747 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 30.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.2857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the faintest shiver, as" | | 1 | "Then the left." | | 2 | "Then, from the darkness, a" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn’t have been able" | | 1 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 2 | "She’d crossed it." | | 3 | "She clenched her fists." | | 4 | "It didn’t *dare.*" | | 5 | "It skittered sideways, vanishing into" | | 6 | "She didn’t run." | | 7 | "Her blood turned to ice." | | 8 | "Its edges blurred, as if" | | 9 | "She lunged sideways as the" | | 10 | "She slashed with the torch," | | 11 | "She ducked, the torch arcing" | | 12 | "She had to be." | | 13 | "She hit the ground hard," | | 14 | "Her fingers closed around something" | | 15 | "She fumbled for her lighter," | | 16 | "She reached for Rory, fingers" |
| | ratio | 0.205 | |
| 20.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against Rory’s" | | 1 | "The air thickened, pressing against" | | 2 | "She shouldn’t have been able" | | 3 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 4 | "The Grove didn’t make sounds" | | 5 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 6 | "The pendant’s warmth pulsed, a" | | 7 | "*Hel portal nearby.* But the" | | 8 | "She’d crossed it." | | 9 | "The wildflowers at her feet" | | 10 | "A whisper slithered past her" | | 11 | "Something older, something that coiled" | | 12 | "She clenched her fists." | | 13 | "The scar on her wrist" | | 14 | "The trees ahead shifted." | | 15 | "The pendant’s glow seeped through" | | 16 | "Rory adjusted her grip on" | | 17 | "The flame didn’t flicker." | | 18 | "It didn’t *dare.*" | | 19 | "Something moved at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.88 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 93.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "A whisper slithered past her ear—words in a language that made her teeth ache." | | 1 | "Its edges blurred, as if the dark itself had taken shape." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.091 | | leniency | 0.182 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |