| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.132 | | leniency | 0.263 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1283 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1283 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "flicked" | | 12 | "trembled" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "unreadable" | | 15 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 144 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 13 | | totalWords | 1278 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "Put it in. See what lies beyond. You are strong. You are worthy." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 1090 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 10 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Rory | 21 | | Nyx | 11 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.537 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite carvings—more like scars" | | 1 | "something like ozone and burnt sugar" | | 2 | "something like the first breath of a newborn" | | 3 | "quite reach, the air thick with the scent of wet earth and something older, something like the first breath of a newborn star" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.782 | | wordCount | 1278 | | matches | | 0 | "not with dew, but with something thicker, like liquid starlight" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 23.24 | | std | 16.68 | | cv | 0.718 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 57 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 51 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 64 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 46 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 47 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.65% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 144 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees stood unnaturally still, their bark etched with symbols that weren’t quite carvings—more like scars." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—deep indigo, fiery orange, a shade of green that hurt to look at." | | 2 | "In the centre of the clearing stood a pedestal of blackened stone, its surface smooth and unmarked save for a single, shallow depression—the exact size of the Heartstone." | | 3 | "She could feel their hunger, a gnawing emptiness that echoed the void inside her own chest—the one she’d carried since fleeing Cardiff, since Evan, since the life she’d left behind." | | 4 | "The grove seemed to sigh in relief—or disappointment." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1098 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.030965391621129327 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004553734061930784 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 144 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 144 | | mean | 8.88 | | std | 6.21 | | cv | 0.699 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 41.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.2986111111111111 | | totalSentences | 144 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Its faint pulse had guided" | | 1 | "She didn’t walk so much" | | 2 | "She’d never put much stock" | | 3 | "She stepped between the first" | | 4 | "Their petals shimmered, not with" | | 5 | "She pulled it out, the" | | 6 | "It was soft, too soft," | | 7 | "She yanked her hand back." | | 8 | "She adjusted her bag, the" | | 9 | "It moved, coiled, like smoke" | | 10 | "She reached out, and the" | | 11 | "She stopped a few feet" | | 12 | "She could feel their hunger," | | 13 | "They slithered into her ears," | | 14 | "You are strong." | | 15 | "You are worthy.*" | | 16 | "She tucked the Heartstone back" | | 17 | "She looked at the two" | | 18 | "She stepped onto the descending" |
| | ratio | 0.184 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 99 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "Its faint pulse had guided" | | 3 | "Nyx shifted beside her, their" | | 4 | "Rory glanced at them." | | 5 | "Nyx’s voice carried the whisper" | | 6 | "Isolde stepped forward, her silver" | | 7 | "She didn’t walk so much" | | 8 | "Isolde’s lavender eyes gleamed" | | 9 | "Rory flexed her fingers, the" | | 10 | "She’d never put much stock" | | 11 | "The trees stood unnaturally still," | | 12 | "She stepped between the first" | | 13 | "The world tilted." | | 14 | "The grove unfolded like a" | | 15 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours—deep" | | 16 | "Their petals shimmered, not with" | | 17 | "The air smelled of crushed" | | 18 | "Nyx’s form solidified, their violet" | | 19 | "Rory’s skin prickled." |
| | ratio | 0.961 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 97.26% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath her feet was bare, the moss and flowers retreating as if burned away." | | 1 | "The shadows at the edges of the clearing writhed, their forms elongating, stretching toward her." | | 2 | "She could feel their hunger, a gnawing emptiness that echoed the void inside her own chest—the one she’d carried since fleeing Cardiff, since Evan, since the li…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde laughed (laugh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.026 | | leniency | 0.053 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |