| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.343 | | leniency | 0.686 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1452 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "lazily" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.80% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1452 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "reminder" | | 2 | "intricate" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "echo" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "quickened" | | 12 | "depths" | | 13 | "raced" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "unreadable" | | 16 | "silk" | | 17 | "carried the weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 150 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 20 | | markdownWords | 20 | | totalWords | 1444 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "glowed" | | 1 | "more" | | 2 | "grown" | | 3 | "that’s" | | 4 | "lighter" | | 5 | "questions" | | 6 | "changed" | | 7 | "heard" | | 8 | "is" | | 9 | "taste" | | 10 | "wrong" | | 11 | "weeks" | | 12 | "wants" | | 13 | "many" | | 14 | "herself" | | 15 | "Don’t." | | 16 | "feelings" | | 17 | "pendant’s" | | 18 | "yet" | | 19 | "laughed" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.65% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 1216 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.73 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 21 | | Isolde | 14 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Nyx | 8 | | Shade | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Half-Fae" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.637 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "quite water, catching the dappled light in prismatic bursts" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.693 | | wordCount | 1444 | | matches | | 0 | "Not as she was now, but older" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 30.72 | | std | 24.73 | | cv | 0.805 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 93 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 77 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 59 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 63 | | 12 | 69 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 94 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 53 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 47 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 54 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 40 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 47 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 35 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 6 |
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| 94.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "been carved" | | 1 | "been kneaded" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "were arranged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t looking" | | 1 | "was pulling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 150 | | ratio | 0.073 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary of Isolde’s grove had been invisible until she crossed it—now, the world hummed around her, thick with the weight of something older than time." | | 1 | "The wildflowers here didn’t just bloom; they *glowed*, their petals shimmering with dew that wasn’t quite water, catching the dappled light in prismatic bursts." | | 2 | "She had expected the grove to be *more*—more light, more color, more of the ethereal grandeur the stories promised." | | 3 | "Ancient oaks, yes, but their bark had been carved—or *grown*—into intricate spirals and knotwork, their trunks wide as carts, their branches arching overhead to form a natural cathedral." | | 4 | "Not a bird, not a beast—something *lighter*." | | 5 | "Rory’s boots sank slightly with each step, leaving no prints behind—just as Isolde had promised." | | 6 | "The trees here bore fruit that wasn’t fruit—glowing orbs that hung like lanterns, their skins shifting between hues Rory had no name for." | | 7 | "Nyx made a sound—half laugh, half sigh." | | 8 | "The liquid within was darker than night, yet it reflected the sky above perfectly—except the sky in the pool wasn’t the same as the one above them." | | 9 | "And in her hand—" | | 10 | "The food steamed, rich and fragrant—roasted meats, fruits bursting with juice, bread that smelled of honey and hearth-fire." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1230 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.03577235772357724 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01056910569105691 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 150 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 150 | | mean | 9.63 | | std | 6.91 | | cv | 0.718 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 42.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.30666666666666664 | | totalSentences | 150 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw the standing" | | 1 | "Then it was gone, leaving" | | 2 | "Instead, she led them to" | | 3 | "Then the path opened into" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, voice like wind" | | 1 | "She had expected the grove" | | 2 | "It was quiet." | | 3 | "They weren’t stones at all," | | 4 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 5 | "Her voice was the sound" | | 6 | "She gestured, and the grove" | | 7 | "It hovered, spinning lazily, before" | | 8 | "It was warm." | | 9 | "She’d grown used to its" | | 10 | "It was *wrong*." | | 11 | "She knelt, dipping her fingers" | | 12 | "She jerked back, stumbling into" | | 13 | "She gestured to the path" | | 14 | "She looked at Nyx, who" | | 15 | "She knew this place." | | 16 | "They were tall, broad-shouldered, clad" | | 17 | "he said, and his voice" |
| | ratio | 0.162 | |
| 50.09% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 91 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of crushed" | | 1 | "The boundary of Isolde’s grove" | | 2 | "The wildflowers here didn’t just" | | 3 | "The trees stood unnaturally still," | | 4 | "Nyx drifted ahead, their form" | | 5 | "they murmured, voice like wind" | | 6 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 7 | "The metal was a constant," | | 8 | "She had expected the grove" | | 9 | "It was quiet." | | 10 | "The kind of quiet that" | | 11 | "They weren’t stones at all," | | 12 | "The symbols etched into them" | | 13 | "Rory reached out, then hesitated." | | 14 | "The last time she’d touched" | | 15 | "Nyx said, though they didn’t" | | 16 | "Rory snatched her hand back." | | 17 | "A rustle in the undergrowth." | | 18 | "The air shimmered, and then" | | 19 | "Her silver hair caught the" |
| | ratio | 0.82 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers here didn’t just bloom; they *glowed*, their petals shimmering with dew that wasn’t quite water, catching the dappled light in prismatic bursts." | | 1 | "The trees stood unnaturally still, their leaves trembling only when she wasn’t looking." | | 2 | "Nyx drifted ahead, their form rippling between solid and shadow, as if the grove itself tested their nature." | | 3 | "The last time she’d touched something Fae, she’d ended up with a week-long fever and visions of things that slithered in the dark." | | 4 | "The path beneath their feet was soft, almost spongy, as if the earth itself had been kneaded by unseen hands." | | 5 | "The trees here bore fruit that wasn’t fruit—glowing orbs that hung like lanterns, their skins shifting between hues Rory had no name for." | | 6 | "She’d grown used to its steady, faint pulse, like a second heartbeat, but now it thrummed against her collarbone as if alive." | | 7 | "The food steamed, rich and fragrant—roasted meats, fruits bursting with juice, bread that smelled of honey and hearth-fire." | | 8 | "They were tall, broad-shouldered, clad in a robe of deep crimson that matched the Heartstone’s glow." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She gestured, and the grove seemed to exhale around them" | | 1 | "Rory asked, unable to keep the awe from her voice" | | 2 | "Nyx warned, their voice suddenly solid, urgent" | | 3 | "he said, and his voice was the crackle of a fire devouring itself" |
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| 64.29% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.229 | | leniency | 0.457 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.171 | |