Run: 2026-09-25-01M3CKJG75CSXRYK4N2TG1KPBX

Run Details

Duration:
18.2s
Cost:
$0.018155
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air smelled of crushed petals and damp earth as Rory stepped past the last of the ancient oaks, their gnarled roots twisting like sleeping serpents across the forest floor. The boundary of Isolde’s grove had been invisible until she crossed it—now, the world hummed around her, thick with the weight of something older than time. The wildflowers here didn’t just bloom; they *glowed*, their petals shimmering with dew that wasn’t quite water, catching the dappled light in prismatic bursts. The trees stood unnaturally still, their leaves trembling only when she wasn’t looking. Nyx drifted ahead, their form rippling between solid and shadow, as if the grove itself tested their nature. “This place remembers me,” they murmured, voice like wind through dead branches. “Or perhaps it forgets. The Fae have long memories, but they are selective.” Rory adjusted the strap of her satchel, fingers brushing the cold hilt of the Fae-forged blade Isolde had given her. The metal was a constant, biting reminder against her palm. She had expected the grove to be *more*—more light, more color, more of the ethereal grandeur the stories promised. But it wasn’t. It was quiet. Too quiet. The kind of quiet that made her skin prickle, like the moment before a storm broke. Then she saw the standing stones. They weren’t stones at all, not really. Ancient oaks, yes, but their bark had been carved—or *grown*—into intricate spirals and knotwork, their trunks wide as carts, their branches arching overhead to form a natural cathedral. The symbols etched into them pulsed faintly, as if lit from within by embers. Rory reached out, then hesitated. The last time she’d touched something Fae, she’d ended up with a week-long fever and visions of things that slithered in the dark. “Don’t,” Nyx said, though they didn’t turn. “Not unless you want to owe the grove a favor.” Rory snatched her hand back. “Right. Because *that’s* not ominous.” A rustle in the undergrowth. Not a bird, not a beast—something *lighter*. The air shimmered, and then Isolde was there, standing between two of the great oaks as if she’d always been part of the scenery. Her silver hair caught the light like spun moonlight, and her lavender eyes held the kind of knowing that made Rory’s stomach twist. “You’ve come,” Isolde said, not a question. Her voice was the sound of wind chimes in a distant breeze. “I wondered if you would.” Rory swallowed. “You said you had answers.” Isolde smiled, slow and secretive. “I have *questions*. But answers? Those are rarer things.” She gestured, and the grove seemed to exhale around them. The flowers at their feet unfurled wider, their colors deepening from pastel to jewel-toned in an instant. “Walk with me.” The path beneath their feet was soft, almost spongy, as if the earth itself had been kneaded by unseen hands. Rory’s boots sank slightly with each step, leaving no prints behind—just as Isolde had promised. The Half-Fae moved barefoot, her toes barely disturbing the moss. Nyx, ever restless, shifted between shadow and solid, their violet eyes flickering like candle flames in the dim. The deeper they went, the more the grove *changed*. The trees here bore fruit that wasn’t fruit—glowing orbs that hung like lanterns, their skins shifting between hues Rory had no name for. One brushed her shoulder as she passed, and for a heartbeat, she *heard* it. A whisper, a song, a voice like a child’s laughter. Then it was gone, leaving only the echo of warmth against her cheek. “What *is* this place?” Rory asked, unable to keep the awe from her voice. Isolde plucked one of the orbs from its branch and tossed it into the air. It hovered, spinning lazily, before dissolving into a shower of sparks that vanished before they touched the ground. “A pocket. A breath. A place where the Veil is thin enough to *taste*.” Rory’s fingers twitched toward the Heartstone pendant at her throat. It was warm. Warmer than it had been in days. She’d grown used to its steady, faint pulse, like a second heartbeat, but now it thrummed against her collarbone as if alive. “And the Veil… it’s weaker here?” Isolde’s smile turned sharp. “Weaker. Stronger. Both. The Fae do not measure such things as mortals do.” Nyx made a sound—half laugh, half sigh. “She means it’s a door. Or a window. Or a wound. Depending on who you ask.” Rory’s pulse quickened. “And what’s on the other side?” Isolde didn’t answer. Instead, she led them to a clearing where the grass was silver and the air smelled of ozone and something sweet, like overripe plums. In the center stood a pool, its surface so still it might have been glass. But it wasn’t water. Rory knew that instantly. The liquid within was darker than night, yet it reflected the sky above perfectly—except the sky in the pool wasn’t the same as the one above them. It was *wrong*. The clouds moved in reverse. The stars were arranged in constellations she didn’t recognize. “Don’t touch it,” Nyx warned, their voice suddenly solid, urgent. Rory crouched at the edge, mesmerized. The pool’s depths seemed to stretch forever, and yet, when she leaned in, she saw no bottom. Only… movement. Shapes. A city of spires, wreathed in amber light. A feast so grand the tables groaned under the weight of it. A figure with too many eyes, watching her. She recoiled. “That’s Dymas.” Isolde’s eyebrows lifted. “Clever girl.” “But—” Rory’s mind raced. “The Veil’s supposed to be strongest at the summer solstice. It’s *weeks* away. How is this even possible?” “Time is a river here,” Isolde said. “And rivers have eddies.” Nyx’s form flickered, their edges blurring. “Or it’s a trap.” Rory’s hand went to the Fae blade. The cold of it steadied her. “Why show me this?” Isolde’s gaze was unreadable. “Because you asked for answers. And because the grove *wants* you to see.” She knelt, dipping her fingers into the pool. The liquid clung to her skin, dark as ink, before evaporating like mist. “The Veil weakens where belief is strong. And you, Aurora Carter, believe in *many* things.” Rory didn’t like the way she said her name. Like it was a secret. Like it was a debt. A gust of wind tore through the clearing, though the trees didn’t stir. The pool’s surface rippled, and for a heartbeat, Rory saw *herself* in the depths. Not as she was now, but older. Worn. A scar across her cheek she didn’t recognize. And in her hand— The Heartstone pendant burned against her skin. She jerked back, stumbling into Nyx. The Shade steadied her, their form solidifying beneath her grip. “Easy,” they murmured. “Some doors should stay closed.” Isolde stood, brushing her hands against her skirts. The dark liquid from the pool had left no stain. “The grove has shown you what it will. The rest…” She gestured to the path ahead, where the trees grew so close their branches wove together like a tunnel. “The rest is for you to find.” Rory’s throat was dry. “And if I don’t want to?” Isolde’s laugh was the sound of wind through leaves. “Then you shouldn’t have come.” The path ahead darkened, the silver grass giving way to something blacker than shadow. Rory’s pendant pulsed once, sharply, then settled into a slow, steady thrum. She looked at Nyx, who gave the barest shake of their head. *Don’t.* But the grove was pulling her forward, a current she couldn’t fight. The air here was thick, cloying, like breathing through wet silk. The trees whispered. Not in words. In *feelings*. Hunger. Longing. A grief so old it had fossilized. Then the path opened into a glade where the rules of the world seemed to bend. A table stood there, laden with a feast. The food steamed, rich and fragrant—roasted meats, fruits bursting with juice, bread that smelled of honey and hearth-fire. Rory’s stomach growled, but her mouth went dry. She knew this place. Knew it from the stories, from the *pendant’s* memories. Dymas. The sky above was the warm amber of the Hel realm, and the air carried the weight of indulgence, of excess. But it wasn’t real. Not here. Not *yet*. A figure sat at the head of the table, their back turned. They were tall, broad-shouldered, clad in a robe of deep crimson that matched the Heartstone’s glow. Rory’s fingers tightened around the Fae blade. The figure turned. Prince Belphegor’s smile was a knife’s edge. “Aurora Carter,” he said, and his voice was the crackle of a fire devouring itself. “I’ve been waiting for you.” The grove *laughed*. And then the world went white.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.343
leniency0.686
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1452
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"lazily"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
2"lazily"
3"perfectly"
4"suddenly"
5"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1452
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"reminder"
count1
2
word"intricate"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count2
11
word"quickened"
count1
12
word"depths"
count2
13
word"raced"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"unreadable"
count1
16
word"silk"
count1
17
word"carried the weight"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"reminder"
2"intricate"
3"etched"
4"pulsed"
5"shimmered"
6"stomach"
7"whisper"
8"echo"
9"warmth"
10"pulse"
11"quickened"
12"depths"
13"raced"
14"flickered"
15"unreadable"
16"silk"
17"carried the weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences127
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans20
markdownWords20
totalWords1444
ratio0.014
matches
0"glowed"
1"more"
2"grown"
3"that’s"
4"lighter"
5"questions"
6"changed"
7"heard"
8"is"
9"taste"
10"wrong"
11"weeks"
12"wants"
13"many"
14"herself"
15"Don’t."
16"feelings"
17"pendant’s"
18"yet"
19"laughed"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1216
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory21
Isolde14
Fae-forged1
Fae5
Half-Fae1
Heartstone3
Nyx8
Shade1
Hel1
Belphegor1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
2"Half-Fae"
3"Nyx"
4"Shade"
5"Belphegor"
places
0"Heartstone"
globalScore0.637
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite water, catching the dappled light in prismatic bursts"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.693
wordCount1444
matches
0"Not as she was now, but older"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean30.72
std24.73
cv0.805
sampleLengths
093
143
273
36
477
517
610
759
824
97
1044
1163
1269
1314
1447
1548
1617
1723
189
1994
2010
2154
224
235
2422
2511
2610
2717
2853
2919
3047
317
3224
3354
3410
3514
3639
3740
3816
3947
401
4129
4235
433
4427
453
466
94.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences127
matches
0"been carved"
1"been kneaded"
2"was gone"
3"were arranged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs216
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
1"was pulling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences150
ratio0.073
matches
0"The boundary of Isolde’s grove had been invisible until she crossed it—now, the world hummed around her, thick with the weight of something older than time."
1"The wildflowers here didn’t just bloom; they *glowed*, their petals shimmering with dew that wasn’t quite water, catching the dappled light in prismatic bursts."
2"She had expected the grove to be *more*—more light, more color, more of the ethereal grandeur the stories promised."
3"Ancient oaks, yes, but their bark had been carved—or *grown*—into intricate spirals and knotwork, their trunks wide as carts, their branches arching overhead to form a natural cathedral."
4"Not a bird, not a beast—something *lighter*."
5"Rory’s boots sank slightly with each step, leaving no prints behind—just as Isolde had promised."
6"The trees here bore fruit that wasn’t fruit—glowing orbs that hung like lanterns, their skins shifting between hues Rory had no name for."
7"Nyx made a sound—half laugh, half sigh."
8"The liquid within was darker than night, yet it reflected the sky above perfectly—except the sky in the pool wasn’t the same as the one above them."
9"And in her hand—"
10"The food steamed, rich and fragrant—roasted meats, fruits bursting with juice, bread that smelled of honey and hearth-fire."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1230
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.03577235772357724
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01056910569105691
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean9.63
std6.91
cv0.718
sampleLengths
030
126
224
313
418
512
613
720
810
919
103
113
122
1316
146
157
1628
1714
185
1923
207
2110
225
235
245
257
2624
2723
287
2912
305
312
325
335
3419
3517
363
3720
3815
3910
4018
419
4223
4314
4410
4513
4614
4715
4818
4914
42.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.30666666666666664
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences111
matches
0"Then she saw the standing"
1"Then it was gone, leaving"
2"Instead, she led them to"
3"Then the path opened into"
ratio0.036
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences111
matches
0"they murmured, voice like wind"
1"She had expected the grove"
2"It was quiet."
3"They weren’t stones at all,"
4"Her silver hair caught the"
5"Her voice was the sound"
6"She gestured, and the grove"
7"It hovered, spinning lazily, before"
8"It was warm."
9"She’d grown used to its"
10"It was *wrong*."
11"She knelt, dipping her fingers"
12"She jerked back, stumbling into"
13"She gestured to the path"
14"She looked at Nyx, who"
15"She knew this place."
16"They were tall, broad-shouldered, clad"
17"he said, and his voice"
ratio0.162
50.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences111
matches
0"The air smelled of crushed"
1"The boundary of Isolde’s grove"
2"The wildflowers here didn’t just"
3"The trees stood unnaturally still,"
4"Nyx drifted ahead, their form"
5"they murmured, voice like wind"
6"Rory adjusted the strap of"
7"The metal was a constant,"
8"She had expected the grove"
9"It was quiet."
10"The kind of quiet that"
11"They weren’t stones at all,"
12"The symbols etched into them"
13"Rory reached out, then hesitated."
14"The last time she’d touched"
15"Nyx said, though they didn’t"
16"Rory snatched her hand back."
17"A rustle in the undergrowth."
18"The air shimmered, and then"
19"Her silver hair caught the"
ratio0.82
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
8.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The wildflowers here didn’t just bloom; they *glowed*, their petals shimmering with dew that wasn’t quite water, catching the dappled light in prismatic bursts."
1"The trees stood unnaturally still, their leaves trembling only when she wasn’t looking."
2"Nyx drifted ahead, their form rippling between solid and shadow, as if the grove itself tested their nature."
3"The last time she’d touched something Fae, she’d ended up with a week-long fever and visions of things that slithered in the dark."
4"The path beneath their feet was soft, almost spongy, as if the earth itself had been kneaded by unseen hands."
5"The trees here bore fruit that wasn’t fruit—glowing orbs that hung like lanterns, their skins shifting between hues Rory had no name for."
6"She’d grown used to its steady, faint pulse, like a second heartbeat, but now it thrummed against her collarbone as if alive."
7"The food steamed, rich and fragrant—roasted meats, fruits bursting with juice, bread that smelled of honey and hearth-fire."
8"They were tall, broad-shouldered, clad in a robe of deep crimson that matched the Heartstone’s glow."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She gestured, and the grove seemed to exhale around them"
1"Rory asked, unable to keep the awe from her voice"
2"Nyx warned, their voice suddenly solid, urgent"
3"he said, and his voice was the crackle of a fire devouring itself"
64.29% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx warned (warn)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.457
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.171
77.4583%