Run: 2026-09-25-01M3CKJTEN0EYT069GZ1YC004T

Run Details

Duration:
18.2s
Cost:
$0.017724
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came just as the kettle began to whistle. Rory froze, her hand hovering over the stove. Three sharp raps, then a pause, then two more. Not Eva’s rhythm. Eva would’ve barged in by now, shouting about forgotten keys or another obscure text she’d unearthed. Ptolemy lifted his head from the armchair, ears twitching. Rory exhaled through her nose and turned the gas off. The flat was a mess—books stacked like Jenga towers, a half-unpacked rucksack from last night’s delivery shift, and a bra draped over the lamp. She nudged a pile of scrolls aside with her foot and made for the door. The third deadbolt stuck. She jiggled it, cursed under her breath, and yanked. The door swung open. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway, one hand resting on the head of his cane, the other tucked into the pocket of his tailored charcoal suit. The overhead light caught the platinum in his hair, the sharp line of his jaw. His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—flickered over her, lingering on the scar on her wrist before meeting her gaze. “You’ve been avoiding my calls.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the door handle. “Funny. I don’t recall giving you my number.” “Eva did.” Of course she did. She should’ve slammed the door. Should’ve told him to piss off. But the way he looked at her—like she was a puzzle he’d been trying to solve for years—rooted her in place. “What do you want, Luc?” He stepped forward, forcing her to retreat. The scent of bergamot and something darker, something like gunpowder, followed him inside. “To talk.” “About?” “You know about what.” She did. The last time they’d spoken, it had been in the back room of Silas’ bar, her voice raw from shouting, his from trying to reason with her. That had been six months ago. Six months of radio silence, of her telling herself she didn’t care. Ptolemy chose that moment to slink between her legs, tail brushing against Lucien’s trousers. The half-demon didn’t flinch. Just watched the cat with mild amusement before his gaze snapped back to her. “You’re still angry.” “No shit.” A muscle in his jaw twitched. “I handled it poorly.” “You lied to me.” “Omitted.” “Same thing.” He exhaled, low and controlled, and adjusted his grip on the cane. “I had my reasons.” “Reasons you couldn’t share with me?” “Reasons that would’ve put you in danger.” Rory barked a laugh. “And now? Am I in danger standing here?” Lucien’s mouth thinned. “Not from me.” The air between them crackled, thick with everything unsaid. She wanted to hit him. Wanted to kiss him. Wanted to scream. Instead, she crossed her arms. “You’re not here to apologise.” “No.” “Then why?” He lifted his free hand, as if to reach for her, then stopped. His fingers curled into a fist. “Because the situation’s changed. And because I need your help.” Rory’s pulse spiked. “My help?” “There’s a job. One that requires… your particular skills.” “You mean my ability to get into places I shouldn’t?” “Among other things.” She studied him—the way his shoulders filled the doorway, the faint shadow of stubble along his jaw, the way his cane tapped once, impatiently, against the floorboards. He was always so damn composed. Except when he wasn’t. Except when she’d seen the cracks in that armour, the nights he’d let her see the man beneath the fixer. “And if I say no?” His voice dropped. “Then I’ll have to find someone else.” “You’ll find someone else anyway.” Lucien’s black eye gleamed. “Not like you.” The words hung there, heavy and dangerous. Rory looked away first, her gaze snagging on the chaos of the flat. Eva’s research notes were everywhere—pages of scribbled theories, red string tacked to the walls like some mad detective’s board. A half-empty glass of wine sat on the coffee table, lipstick smudged on the rim. “You’re stalling,” Lucien observed. “No. I’m thinking.” “About?” “Whether I want to work with a liar.” He flinched. Just a fraction, just enough for her to see. “Fair.” Rory exhaled sharply. “Why now, Luc? Why not six months ago? Why not when it actually mattered?” The question seemed to knock the wind out of him. For the first time since he’d arrived, he looked uncertain. His thumb traced the ivory handle of his cane, back and forth, back and forth. “Because I was an idiot.” “That’s not an answer.” “It’s the only one I’ve got.” She wanted to press. Wanted to dig until she found the truth beneath the polished surface. But the way he stood there, like a man bracing for a blow, made her hesitate. Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the back of the sofa, knocking over a stack of books. The thud echoed in the silence. Lucien’s mouth quirked. “Still keeping dangerous company, I see.” Rory rolled her eyes. “He’s a cat.” “And I’m a half-demon. You’ve never been one to judge.” “Don’t flatter yourself.” He chuckled, low and rough. The sound sent a shiver down her spine. “There she is.” “There who is?” “The Rory Carter who doesn’t take shit from anyone. Not even me.” She should’ve been immune to it by now—the way his voice wrapped around her name, the way his eyes darkened when he looked at her. But she wasn’t. And that pissed her off more than the lies, more than the silence. “You don’t get to do that,” she snapped. “Do what?” “Act like you know me. Like you’ve got some claim on me.” Lucien’s expression shuttered. “I never said I did.” “You didn’t have to.” The words were out before she could stop them. His gaze dropped to her lips, then back to her eyes. The air between them thickened, charged with something electric, something that had nothing to do with anger and everything to do with the way her body still remembered his. Rory took a step back. “You should go.” He didn’t move. “Not until we’ve settled this.” “There’s nothing to settle.” “Bullshit.” She bristled. “Excuse me?” “You heard me.” He took a step forward, closing the distance between them. “You’re still angry. Still hurt. And I’m still…” He trailed off, his jaw tightening. “Still what?” His free hand came up, hovering near her cheek but not quite touching. “Still here.” Rory’s breath hitched. She should’ve pushed him away. Should’ve told him to leave. But the heat of him, the sheer presence, made her knees weak. “Luc—” The cane clattered to the floor as his hand cupped her face. His thumb brushed her lower lip, and she hated how her body leaned into the touch, how her traitorous heart pounded. “Tell me to stop,” he murmured. She should’ve. But the words died in her throat. His mouth was on hers before she could think, hot and demanding. Rory’s hands flew to his chest, not to push him away but to anchor herself. The kiss was a collision—teeth and tongue and six months of pent-up frustration. He tasted like whiskey and sin, and she hated how much she’d missed it. Then, just as suddenly, he pulled back. His breathing was ragged, his eyes dark. “Tell me to stop,” he repeated. Rory swallowed. “I should.” “But you won’t.” She didn’t. Couldn’t. Not when her body was alight, not when the old wounds between them felt like they might finally, finally scab over. Lucien’s hand slid to the nape of her neck, his fingers tangling in her hair. “Say something, Rory.” She licked her lips. “You’re an arsehole.” He laughed, low and rough, and kissed her again. This time it was slower, deeper. The kind of kiss that promised more than just a truce. When he finally pulled away, his forehead rested against hers. “I missed you.” The words were a punch to the gut. She wanted to believe them. Wanted to forgive him. But the past wasn’t that easy to outrun. “You’ve got a funny way of showing it.” His thumb traced her cheekbone. “Let me make it up to you.” “How?” “Let me in.” His voice was rough. “Not just the flat. All of it.” Rory’s chest ached. She wanted to. God, she wanted to. But trust wasn’t a switch she could flip. She stepped back, putting space between them. “You don’t get to waltz back in here and expect everything to be fine.” “I know.” “Then why are you here?” “Because I can’t do this without you.” His voice was raw. “Because I don’t want to.” The vulnerability in his eyes was new. Or maybe she’d just never let herself see it before. Rory exhaled, long and slow. “You’re lucky I’m a sucker for lost causes.” A slow smile spread across his face. “Does that mean you’ll help me?” She rolled her eyes, but the corner of her mouth twitched. “It means I’ll hear you out.” Lucien bent to retrieve his cane, his movements fluid. “That’s all I ask.” “For now.” He straightened, his gaze locking onto hers. “For now.” Ptolemy meowed, winding himself around Rory’s legs. She reached down to scratch behind his ears, her fingers trembling slightly. “So,” she said, forcing her voice steady. “What’s the job?”
created_at"2026-09-25T15:40:13.66Z" 9/25/2026, 3:40:13 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.093
leniency0.186
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1536
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"suddenly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1536
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"traced"
count2
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"silence"
2"pulse"
3"traced"
4"echoed"
5"down her spine"
6"charged"
7"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences129
matches
0"o with anger"
98.56% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences129
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences206
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1528
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1124
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Jenga1
Moreau1
Lucien9
Rory15
Ptolemy4
Wanted4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.833
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"something like gunpowder, followed him insid"
1"not quite touching"
2"tasted like whiskey and sin, and she hate"
3"felt like they might finally, finally s"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.654
wordCount1528
matches
0"not to push him away but to anchor herself"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences206
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs106
mean14.42
std14.38
cv0.997
sampleLengths
046
158
217
359
45
515
62
74
832
95
1022
111
124
1347
1432
153
162
1710
184
191
202
2116
226
237
2412
256
2631
271
282
2929
305
319
3210
333
3457
355
3610
375
387
3954
404
413
421
438
4412
4517
4640
474
486
4932
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs220
matches(empty)
45.77% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences206
ratio0.034
matches
0"The flat was a mess—books stacked like Jenga towers, a half-unpacked rucksack from last night’s delivery shift, and a bra draped over the lamp."
1"His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—flickered over her, lingering on the scar on her wrist before meeting her gaze."
2"But the way he looked at her—like she was a puzzle he’d been trying to solve for years—rooted her in place."
3"She studied him—the way his shoulders filled the doorway, the faint shadow of stubble along his jaw, the way his cane tapped once, impatiently, against the floorboards."
4"Eva’s research notes were everywhere—pages of scribbled theories, red string tacked to the walls like some mad detective’s board."
5"She should’ve been immune to it by now—the way his voice wrapped around her name, the way his eyes darkened when he looked at her."
6"The kiss was a collision—teeth and tongue and six months of pent-up frustration."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount477
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.039832285115303984
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0041928721174004195
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences206
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences206
mean7.42
std5.59
cv0.754
sampleLengths
010
18
29
33
416
59
610
724
815
94
109
114
1226
1315
1418
155
167
178
182
194
205
216
2221
235
247
2513
262
271
284
292
3027
316
3212
3314
344
3514
363
372
386
394
404
411
422
4312
444
456
467
474
488
493
47.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.28640776699029125
totalSentences206
uniqueOpeners59
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences118
matches
0"Of course she did."
1"Just watched the cat with"
2"Instead, she crossed her arms."
3"Just a fraction, just enough"
4"Then, just as suddenly, he"
ratio0.042
91.19% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences118
matches
0"She nudged a pile of"
1"She jiggled it, cursed under"
2"His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—flickered"
3"She should’ve slammed the door."
4"He stepped forward, forcing her"
5"He exhaled, low and controlled,"
6"She wanted to hit him."
7"He lifted his free hand,"
8"His fingers curled into a"
9"She studied him—the way his"
10"He was always so damn"
11"His voice dropped."
12"His thumb traced the ivory"
13"She wanted to press."
14"He chuckled, low and rough."
15"She should’ve been immune to"
16"His gaze dropped to her"
17"He didn’t move."
18"He took a step forward,"
19"He trailed off, his jaw"
ratio0.322
78.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences118
matches
0"The knock came just as"
1"Rory froze, her hand hovering"
2"Eva would’ve barged in by"
3"Ptolemy lifted his head from"
4"Rory exhaled through her nose"
5"The flat was a mess—books"
6"She nudged a pile of"
7"The third deadbolt stuck."
8"She jiggled it, cursed under"
9"The door swung open."
10"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
11"The overhead light caught the"
12"His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—flickered"
13"Rory’s fingers tightened around the"
14"She should’ve slammed the door."
15"He stepped forward, forcing her"
16"The scent of bergamot and"
17"The last time they’d spoken,"
18"That had been six months"
19"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
ratio0.763
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The air between them thickened, charged with something electric, something that had nothing to do with anger and everything to do with the way her body still re…"
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He trailed, his jaw tightening"
91.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"The last time they’d (would)"
1"Lucien observed (observe)"
2"she snapped (snap)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
4"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.07
leniency0.14
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.116
85.9437%