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Run: 2026-09-29-01M3P2A4RNBT20FCXPZKMQN3AZ
Run Details
Model:
Claude Sonnet 5.5 (Reasoning)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
48.9s
Cost:
$0.060742
Provider:
Claude Platform on AWS
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
83.43%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
80.12%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.11%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
60.32%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
27.23%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
50.36%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
89.8524%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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AI
The third deadbolt stuck, the
way it always did.
I jammed my shoulder against
the door, wrenched the key, and swore at the metal until it gave. Then I opened the door, a bronze scroll
weight
raised in my right fist, and found Lucien Moreau on the landing. He looked the same. That was the insult. Charcoal suit without a crease, platinum hair combed back from his forehead, the ivory-handled cane planted between his polished shoes like a flag on conquered ground.
Only the split in his
lower lip spoiled the picture.
That, and the dark stain
on his left cuff. "You knock like the bailiffs," I said. "And you answer like a woman who owns a paperweight."
His amber eye dropped to
my fist, then rose again.
The black one gave nothing
away, as always. "Bonsoir, Aurora." "Don't." "Don't what?" "Say it like that. Like you've earned the whole name."
The corner of his mouth
twitched, then winced when the lip pulled. "Forgive me. Laila, then?" That one landed lower.
I had given him that
name on the first night, in the back of a club in Soho, when I didn't
know
whether I could trust him.
I had stopped lying to
him well before I stopped wanting to. "Six weeks," I said. "Seven, by my count." "You counted." "I count everything. It is a professional failing." He glanced past my shoulder, at the narrow hallway and the mountain of paper beyond it. "May I come in? Your neighbours downstairs are frying something that smells like a fire hazard, and I am bleeding on the landing." "Not my neighbours. Eva's." "Then Eva's neighbours are frying a fire hazard."
I should have shut the
door.
I knew it the way
you
know
a stove is hot.
Instead I stepped back, and
he passed close enough that I caught cedar and clove and something metallic underneath. His blood.
He always smelled of a
room I wanted to stay in.
I slid all three deadbolts
home behind him. Clunk, clunk, clunk. He watched me do it. "Eva's paranoia is contagious," he said. "Eva's paranoia is why she's alive." "Is she? Alive?" I turned.
He had drifted into the
front room, if you could call it that. Eva's flat above the curry house on Brick Lane had one bedroom, one bathroom the size of a wardrobe, and one living space where books had bred like rabbits. Scrolls poked out of milk crates. Sticky notes wallpapered the window frame. A cold mug of tea sat on a pile of Sumerian grammar, and on top of that pile, Ptolemy the tabby lay curled like a loaf, glaring at the intruder with round green suspicion. Lucien stopped a respectful metre from the cat. Ptolemy hissed anyway. "He likes you," I said. "He has excellent judgement." Lucien lowered himself onto the arm of the sofa.
He kept his spine straight
even when he hurt, and he hurt now.
I saw it in the
careful way he set the cane across his knees. "Three days, Aurora. She has not answered her phone for three days."
My grip tightened on the
weight
. "How do you
know
that?" "Because I called it. Eleven times." "Why the hell were you calling Eva?" "To avoid calling you." Silence. Downstairs a pan clattered and someone laughed in Bengali. Ptolemy licked one paw with great dignity. "That's a coward's answer," I said. "It is a true one. Those are rarer, and I would have thought you'd
know
the difference."
He said it lightly, but
his thumb slid along the ivory handle, back and forth, back and forth. "You left my house without your shoes." "You left the bed before I woke." "I left a note." "You left a *
bill
*."
I set the scroll weight
down, because I needed both hands to be angry properly. "'Consultation fee, one night, waived.' Waived. Like I'd been a parking ticket." "It was a joke." "It was not funny." "No."
His gaze held mine, and
that black eye had never looked so much like a hole in the world. "It was not. I wrote it at four in the morning, after I stood in my study for an hour and tried to work out how to tell you what I
knew
about Eva's research. I chose humour. I am aware it was the wrong tool." There it was. The thing we had never said aloud. The reason I had walked out barefoot, down his staircase and into the street, with his shirt still on and my boots in my hand. "Nine months," I said. "You
knew
for nine months what she was digging up. You sat across from me at the Golden Empress, drank Yu-Fei's tea, let me complain about her three-in-the-morning texts, and you *
knew
*." "I
knew
that people would pay for it." "And did they?" He said nothing. His jaw moved once. "Lucien." "Yes. Someone paid." The room went
very
small. I heard my own
pulse
, the cat's purr stuttering off, the ticking of Eva's cheap clock somewhere under the paper. "Who?" "That is what I came to tell you.
Not tonight's business, but I could not
... I owed you the sentence before the rest." He stood.
Slowly, because his ribs were
plainly unhappy about it, and he crossed the gap between us until I had to tilt my head to hold his eyes. "I sold a rumour. Not her name, not this address. A rumour that a scholar in London was translating something from Avaros. I thought it would earn a pittance and send treasure hunters chasing shadows. Instead a buyer came back with the right name, and the right street, and a
very
great deal of money." "You're telling me you got Eva taken." "I am telling you I was careless with the one thing I should have guarded." His voice dropped. "Which is you. I did not realise until too late that they were both the same thing." I hit him. Open palm, across the cheek, not hard enough to break anything and hard enough to mean it. His head turned with the blow. He did not lift a hand. When he faced me again, a red print bloomed on his skin, and he looked almost relieved. "Better?" he said. "No." "Nor for me." My palm stung. I flexed it, and the crescent scar on my left wrist flashed pale in the lamplight. His eyes followed it. He had noticed it the first night, too. He had pressed his mouth to it, and I had let him, and I
hated that I
could still feel it. "You have blood on your cuff," I said, because it was easier than anything else. "Whose?" "Mine, mostly. I visited a man in Limehouse who could describe the buyer. He did not enjoy the visit." He drew a breath. "The description was interesting. Tall, expensive coat,
no
reflection in the pub mirror. And he asked for you by name, Aurora. Not Eva's. Yours." Cold ran down my arms. "Why would anyone ask for me?" "I hoped you might tell me." "I deliver egg fried rice. I'm not exactly a threat to the underworld." "And yet." He tilted his head, studying me the way he studied ledgers, and something crossed his face that I couldn't read. "Tell me, has anything strange happened since Eva left? Anything at all. A dream, a stranger who
knew
your name." I opened my mouth to say *
no
*. I had a good, sharp, sensible *
no
* ready.
Then I thought of the
corner shop on Wilkes Street, two nights ago. The old man behind the counter who had called me something that wasn't Rory, or Aurora, or Laila. Who had smiled with too many teeth and said it again,
softly
, like a prayer. Lucien saw it. He saw everything, damn him. "Tell me," he said. "It was probably nothing." "Aurora." "He said..." My throat scraped. "He called me Malphora." Lucien went white. Not pale. White, the colour of bone, and the cane came up in his fist so fast I never saw him move. "Behind me," he said. "What? Why?" "Now." On the pile of Sumerian grammar, Ptolemy had stopped purring. Every hair on his back stood straight. He stared at the front door, ears flat, and a sound came out of him I had never heard from any cat, a low, wet growl like a drain unblocking. The smell hit next. Cumin and frying onions vanished, swallowed by sulphur, thick enough to taste. Lucien twisted the ivory handle. Steel whispered from the cane, a slim silver blade that caught the lamplight and threw it across the ceiling. "Tell me you locked all three," he said. "I did. You watched me." Behind him, in the hallway, the first deadbolt slid back on its own. *Clunk.* Then the second. *Clunk.* I grabbed the scroll
weight
. It
felt like holding a teaspoon
. The third bolt, the one that always stuck, glided open as smoothly as a knife through butter, and the door
began to
swing inward.
created_at
"2026-09-29T07:50:48.04Z"
9/29/2026, 7:50:48 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
22
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
69
tagDensity
0.319
leniency
0.638
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
83.43%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1509
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
2
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
3
adverb
"softly"
count
1
highlights
0
"lightly"
1
"very"
2
"slowly"
3
"softly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
80.12%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1509
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"weight"
count
4
1
word
"silence"
count
1
2
word
"pulse"
count
1
highlights
0
"weight"
1
"silence"
2
"pulse"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
100
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
100
filterMatches
0
"know"
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
147
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
55
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
6
markdownWords
6
totalWords
1509
ratio
0.004
matches
0
"bill"
1
"knew"
2
"no"
3
"no"
4
"Clunk."
5
"Clunk."
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
32
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
26
wordCount
962
uniqueNames
16
maxNameDensity
0.62
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien
6
Moreau
1
Soho
1
Brick
1
Lane
1
Sumerian
2
Ptolemy
4
Bengali
1
Eva
2
Slowly
1
Cold
1
Wilkes
1
Street
1
Rory
1
Aurora
1
Laila
1
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Ptolemy"
3
"Eva"
4
"Cold"
5
"Rory"
6
"Laila"
places
0
"Soho"
1
"Brick"
2
"Lane"
3
"Bengali"
4
"Wilkes"
5
"Street"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
59
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"felt like holding a teaspoon"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
1
per1kWords
0.663
wordCount
1509
matches
0
"Not tonight's business, but I could not"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
147
matches
0
"hated that I"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
84
mean
17.96
std
20.8
cv
1.158
sampleLengths
0
27
1
21
2
53
3
7
4
30
5
1
6
2
7
10
8
16
9
43
10
4
11
4
12
2
13
47
14
4
15
8
16
49
17
16
18
6
19
6
20
3
21
90
22
11
23
5
24
52
25
11
26
6
27
7
28
4
29
17
30
6
31
42
32
7
33
4
34
31
35
4
36
4
37
66
38
35
39
36
40
8
41
3
42
7
43
1
44
3
45
25
46
1
47
107
48
7
49
35
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
100
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
164
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
147
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.11%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
963
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
45
adverbRatio
0.04672897196261682
lyAdverbCount
7
lyAdverbRatio
0.007268951194184839
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
147
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
147
mean
10.27
std
9.34
cv
0.91
sampleLengths
0
9
1
18
2
21
3
4
4
4
5
26
6
10
7
9
8
7
9
20
10
8
11
2
12
1
13
2
14
10
15
12
16
4
17
4
18
27
19
12
20
4
21
4
22
2
23
24
24
23
25
4
26
8
27
6
28
11
29
19
30
2
31
11
32
8
33
3
34
5
35
6
36
6
37
3
38
2
39
13
40
29
41
6
42
6
43
34
44
8
45
3
46
5
47
13
48
13
49
14
60.32%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
13
diversityRatio
0.41496598639455784
totalSentences
147
uniqueOpeners
61
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
6
totalSentences
83
matches
0
"Then I opened the door,"
1
"Only the split in his"
2
"Instead I stepped back, and"
3
"Slowly, because his ribs were"
4
"Then I thought of the"
5
"Then the second."
ratio
0.072
27.23%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
40
totalSentences
83
matches
0
"I jammed my shoulder against"
1
"He looked the same."
2
"His amber eye dropped to"
3
"I had given him that"
4
"I had stopped lying to"
5
"He glanced past my shoulder,"
6
"I should have shut the"
7
"I knew it the way"
8
"He always smelled of a"
9
"I slid all three deadbolts"
10
"He watched me do it."
11
"He had drifted into the"
12
"He kept his spine straight"
13
"I saw it in the"
14
"My grip tightened on the"
15
"He said it lightly, but"
16
"I set the scroll weight"
17
"His gaze held mine, and"
18
"He said nothing."
19
"His jaw moved once."
ratio
0.482
50.36%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
68
totalSentences
83
matches
0
"The third deadbolt stuck, the"
1
"I jammed my shoulder against"
2
"He looked the same."
3
"That was the insult."
4
"Charcoal suit without a crease,"
5
"That, and the dark stain"
6
"His amber eye dropped to"
7
"The black one gave nothing"
8
"The corner of his mouth"
9
"That one landed lower."
10
"I had given him that"
11
"I had stopped lying to"
12
"He glanced past my shoulder,"
13
"I should have shut the"
14
"I knew it the way"
15
"He always smelled of a"
16
"I slid all three deadbolts"
17
"Clunk, clunk, clunk."
18
"He watched me do it."
19
"He had drifted into the"
ratio
0.819
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
83
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
32
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"Steel whispered from the cane, a slim silver blade that caught the lamplight and threw it across the ceiling."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
22
uselessAdditionCount
1
matches
0
"He said, but his thumb slid along the ivory handle, back and forth, back and forth"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
12
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
69
tagDensity
0.174
leniency
0.348
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
89.8524%