Run: 2026-09-29-01M3P2H6YWY3M945J7E8S5AEED

Run Details

Duration:
37.0s
Cost:
$0.038832
Provider:
Claude Platform on AWS

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered Camden High Street and turned the tarmac into black glass. Quinn ran through it with her coat flapping open and her lungs burning. Twenty metres ahead, Tomás Herrera cut between two night buses, a canvas medical bag clutched to his chest. "Herrera! Police! Stop!" He didn't. He glanced back, curls plastered to his forehead, and vaulted a low railing outside a shuttered vape shop. His trainers slapped a puddle. Water sheeted up behind him. Quinn took the railing in one push. Her boots landed hard and the impact ran up her shins. Eighteen years of foot pursuits had taught her one thing: the runner chose the route, and the chaser learned it. "You've got a dead man's blood in that bag, Tomás!" "It's not what you think!" His Spanish accent thickened with every breath. "Go home, Detective!" "Put it down and I will!" A laugh cracked out of him, thin and frightened. He swung left into Kentish Town Road and clipped a bin. It went over, spilling chip wrappers and a spinning can across the pavement. Quinn hurdled the mess without breaking stride. Neon smeared across the wet windows: kebab shops, a tattoo parlour, a pawnbroker with its grille pulled down. A group of students huddled under a bus shelter, watching the two of them pass. One raised a phone. Quinn ignored him. Three weeks of surveillance had brought her to this. Three weeks of watching a disgraced paramedic slip in and out of the back of a Soho bar, carrying bags that clinked and dripped. She had followed him tonight from a lock-up behind the canal, and he had made her at the corner of Jamestown Road. She still didn't know how. He took a hard right into an alley barely wider than her shoulders. Bricks streamed with runoff. A drainpipe gurgled. Quinn followed, one hand on her holster, her leather watch strap soaked against her wrist. Halfway down, Tomás stumbled. His hand shot out and caught the wall. The bag swung and something inside it knocked together with a wet, glassy click. "Tomás." She slowed to a fast walk, palms out. Her breath sawed in and out. "I'm not here for you. I want to know who you're patching up." He turned. Rain ran down his face and dripped from the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat. The scar along his left forearm showed pale where his sleeve had ridden up. "You don't want to know that." He backed away, one step, then another. "Believe me. Nobody who asks that question keeps sleeping." "Try me." "Your partner asked." His voice went flat. "Morris. Didn't he?" The name hit her like a slap. Her fingers tightened on the grip of her weapon. "What do you know about Morris?" "Only what I hear." He shook his head. "I'm sorry, Detective. Truly." He bolted. Quinn lunged and caught only wet air. She swore and pounded after him, out of the alley and across a service road where a bin lorry idled with its hazards blinking amber. The driver stared through the windscreen. She flashed her warrant card without slowing. The road dropped toward the railway. Ahead, behind a chain-link fence, rose a low Victorian building with boarded windows and a pale tiled facade she recognised from old photographs. Camden Town's forgotten sister: a Tube station closed since the war and sealed off ever since. Ivy choked the ironwork. A padlock the size of a fist hung on the gate. The gate stood open. Tomás slid through it. A man waited in the doorway beyond, huge and still, hooded against the rain, one hand resting on a length of pipe. Tomás dug into his pocket and held something up. It caught the light from a single caged bulb: a curved, yellowed sliver, carved with a spiral. Bone. The doorman nodded and stepped aside. Tomás ducked past him and vanished into the dark. His footsteps rang down concrete stairs, quick at first, then faint. Quinn skidded to a halt at the fence. Her chest heaved. Water ran off her chin and down the inside of her collar. "Police." She kept her voice even and pulled out her card. "I'm in pursuit of a suspect. Step aside." The doorman looked at the card. He looked at her. Under the hood, his face was a slab of scar tissue and old bruising, and he smiled like a man watching a child point a toy gun. "Warrants don't work down there, love." His voice rumbled. "Token or nothing." "Then I'll take nothing and arrest you for obstruction." "You could try." He tapped the pipe against his palm. "You'd be the third this year." Quinn's pulse hammered in her ears. She looked past him at the stairwell, a rectangle of black that seemed to drink the light. Warm air breathed up from it. It smelled of cinders, incense, and something sweeter and rotten underneath. Faint music drifted with it, strings played in a scale she didn't recognise, and beneath that, the murmur of many voices haggling. Nobody had told her about this. Not in the case files, not in Morris's notes, not in the three years of quiet, stubborn digging since he died. Except one line. She had read it a hundred times in his cramped handwriting on the last page of his notebook. *Ask about the market under the hill.* She had thought it meant a farmers' market. She had thought a lot of things. Her radio sat silent on her shoulder. She keyed it. "Control, DI Quinn. Requesting backup at the old Camden station on—" Static. A long, grinding hiss that ate the words. She released the button and tried again, and got the same wall of noise. The doorman's smile widened. "Right." Quinn holstered nothing, but let her hand fall from the grip. "Right." Behind her, boots scraped on gravel. She spun. A slight figure in a rain-slicked mac stood at the fence, face hidden in shadow. The figure said nothing. It flicked something small through the air, and Quinn's hand shot out on instinct and caught it. Bone. Warm, as if someone had held it a long time. The spiral was worn smooth by a thumb. When she looked up, the figure had gone. Only the rain remained, and the drip of the gutter, and Tomás's footsteps somewhere far below, getting fainter. She turned the token over. Nobody gave away something like this for free. A trap, then. Or a favour, and favours in her line of work cost more than traps. Her watch ticked against her wrist. Three years, two months, eleven days. She had counted every one. If she walked away, Tomás Herrera would sit with his bag and his secrets in whatever den waited below, and she would go home, dry off, file a report no one would read. If she went down, she went alone, without a signal, without a name to give anyone who came looking, into a place her whole career had told her did not exist. The doorman held out a hand, palm up, waiting for her to decide. Quinn closed her fist around the bone. She squared her shoulders the way she had on the parade ground twenty years ago, and set her boot on the first wet stair.
created_at"2026-09-29T07:54:39.458Z" 9/29/2026, 7:54:39 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1216
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1216
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"facade"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"facade"
1"footsteps"
2"pulse"
3"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords7
totalWords1216
ratio0.006
matches
0"Ask about the market under the hill."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.40% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1087
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
High1
Street1
Tomás7
Herrera2
Spanish1
Kentish1
Town2
Road2
Soho1
Jamestown1
Saint1
Christopher1
Victorian1
Tube1
Quinn11
Morris1
Three3
persons
0"Tomás"
1"Herrera"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Quinn"
5"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Kentish"
4"Town"
5"Road"
6"Soho"
7"Jamestown"
8"Victorian"
9"Three"
globalScore0.994
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like this for free"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1216
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean25.33
std16.65
cv0.657
sampleLengths
043
13
230
338
410
515
66
740
840
960
1035
1126
1228
1331
1422
152
1610
1722
1812
192
2045
2160
224
2352
241
2526
2623
2719
2837
2912
309
3116
3262
3327
3428
3515
3621
3723
384
3913
4044
4119
4226
4330
4417
4564
4613
4731
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs184
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences125
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount799
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.016270337922403004
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0025031289111389237
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean9.73
std6.58
cv0.676
sampleLengths
012
113
218
33
42
518
65
75
87
911
1020
1110
1212
133
146
159
1611
1713
187
1918
2015
214
223
239
2424
2522
265
2713
284
293
3015
314
328
3314
349
356
3613
372
3815
3914
4013
419
422
437
443
457
469
476
488
494
62.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.408
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners51
32.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"Only the rain remained, and"
ratio0.01
70.98% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences102
matches
0"He glanced back, curls plastered"
1"His trainers slapped a puddle."
2"Her boots landed hard and"
3"His Spanish accent thickened with"
4"He swung left into Kentish"
5"It went over, spilling chip"
6"She had followed him tonight"
7"She still didn't know how."
8"He took a hard right"
9"His hand shot out and"
10"She slowed to a fast"
11"Her breath sawed in and"
12"He backed away, one step,"
13"His voice went flat"
14"Her fingers tightened on the"
15"He shook his head"
16"She swore and pounded after"
17"She flashed her warrant card"
18"It caught the light from"
19"His footsteps rang down concrete"
ratio0.373
62.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences102
matches
0"Quinn ran through it with"
1"He glanced back, curls plastered"
2"His trainers slapped a puddle."
3"Water sheeted up behind him."
4"Quinn took the railing in"
5"Her boots landed hard and"
6"His Spanish accent thickened with"
7"A laugh cracked out of"
8"He swung left into Kentish"
9"It went over, spilling chip"
10"Quinn hurdled the mess without"
11"Neon smeared across the wet"
12"A group of students huddled"
13"Quinn ignored him."
14"She had followed him tonight"
15"She still didn't know how."
16"He took a hard right"
17"Bricks streamed with runoff."
18"A drainpipe gurgled."
19"Quinn followed, one hand on"
ratio0.794
98.04% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"If she walked away, Tomás"
1"If she went down, she"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Quinn ran through it with her coat flapping open and her lungs burning."
1"Three weeks of watching a disgraced paramedic slip in and out of the back of a Soho bar, carrying bags that clinked and dripped."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
93.3924%