| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 77 | | tagDensity | 0.013 | | leniency | 0.026 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2038 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 77.92% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2038 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "quivered" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "measured" | | 6 | "chilled" | | 7 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 195 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 195 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 271 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2038 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 23.92% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 77 | | wordCount | 1626 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.52 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 41 | | Nyx | 16 | | Isolde | 14 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Water | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Water" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.239 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 130 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.491 | | wordCount | 2038 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 271 | | matches | | 0 | "gave that trunk" | | 1 | "accepted that answer" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 196 | | mean | 10.4 | | std | 9.47 | | cv | 0.91 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 54 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 195 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 279 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 271 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "Some carried leaves; others carried translucent shells that clicked together when their branches moved." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1628 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "beside small yellow blossoms" |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.022113022113022112 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0006142506142506142 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 271 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 271 | | mean | 7.52 | | std | 4.38 | | cv | 0.582 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 48.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.2988929889298893 | | totalSentences | 271 | | uniqueOpeners | 81 | |
| 53.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the darkness snapped back" | | 1 | "Only one had eyes." | | 2 | "Then Rory’s pendant warmed beneath" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her foot back." | | 1 | "She stepped forward again." | | 2 | "Their shadow stretched past her" | | 3 | "Their petals pressed against the" | | 4 | "They looked over their shoulder." | | 5 | "She kept her hands close" | | 6 | "She wore no coat, though" | | 7 | "It crumbled from the leather" | | 8 | "Their eyes had fixed on" | | 9 | "She followed Isolde." | | 10 | "They bent beside her." | | 11 | "She resisted the urge to" | | 12 | "She looked between the branches." | | 13 | "Their fingers sank an inch" | | 14 | "Their centres glowed green." | | 15 | "She held a finger near" | | 16 | "It bent towards her skin." | | 17 | "Her phone vibrated." | | 18 | "She dragged it from her" | | 19 | "It raised its bead." |
| | ratio | 0.176 | |
| 45.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 155 | | totalSentences | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped between the standing" | | 1 | "The other sank into a" | | 2 | "She pulled her foot back." | | 3 | "The bus growled." | | 4 | "Rain ticked against her coat." | | 5 | "She stepped forward again." | | 6 | "Their shadow stretched past her" | | 7 | "Nyx gathered themself into a" | | 8 | "Rory crossed the boundary." | | 9 | "The flowers bent beneath her" | | 10 | "Their petals pressed against the" | | 11 | "A scent rose from them:" | | 12 | "They looked over their shoulder." | | 13 | "The stones stood several paces" | | 14 | "She kept her hands close" | | 15 | "Nyx reached towards the boundary." | | 16 | "A thread of shadow peeled" | | 17 | "Trees grew in loose circles" | | 18 | "Some carried leaves; others carried" | | 19 | "Wildflowers crowded every patch of" |
| | ratio | 0.829 | |
| 53.48% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "To the right, it returned." | | 1 | "Now she saw how it" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Some carried leaves; others carried translucent shells that clicked together when their branches moved." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |