Run: 2026-10-05-01M46B2HJMNJ0442YDCYS4C2SC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 36s
Cost:
$0.032593
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped between the standing stones and lost the sound of the road. One foot rested on Richmond Park’s sodden grass. The other sank into a carpet of white flowers. Behind her, a bus moved through the trees without a sound, its windows carrying fragments of the evening sky. She pulled her foot back. The bus growled. Rain ticked against her coat. She stepped forward again. Silence. “Nyx.” Their shadow stretched past her shoes, though the sun had vanished behind the clouds. “I noticed.” “Does it do that to voices?” “Your voice reached me.” “That wasn’t what I asked.” Two violet eyes opened in the darkness beside an oak. Nyx gathered themself into a tall, narrow figure, their edges feathering against the bark. “Stand on this side and ask again.” Rory crossed the boundary. The flowers bent beneath her boot without breaking. Their petals pressed against the leather, each one cool as a wet fingertip. A scent rose from them: cut pears, stone dust, something sharp enough to make her teeth ache. Nyx followed. For a moment their body spread across the gap between the standing stones. Then the darkness snapped back into a human shape. They looked over their shoulder. “The gap was narrower from that side.” Rory turned. The stones stood several paces apart, their surfaces ridged like ancient oak trunks. Within those ridges, pale crystals caught a light she couldn’t find overhead. “Do you mean physically narrower?” “I left something of myself against the edge.” She kept her hands close to her coat. “Can you get it back?” Nyx reached towards the boundary. A thread of shadow peeled away from the nearest stone and wound around their wrist. “Yes.” Beyond the stones, the grove opened beneath a sky the colour of watered milk. Trees grew in loose circles around the clearing. Some carried leaves; others carried translucent shells that clicked together when their branches moved. Wildflowers crowded every patch of ground, blue bells beside red poppies beside small yellow blossoms with square centres. Rory looked up for the wind. Nothing touched her face. The branches continued to sway. A woman stood beneath them, silver hair falling to her waist. She wore no coat, though frost silvered the grass around her bare feet. “You brought the road in on your soles.” Rory glanced down. Mud from the park clung to her boots. “Sorry. Do you want me to take them off?” “The road cannot bear fruit here.” The woman held out one hand. Rory offered her boot instead, lifting it a few inches. A crease formed beside the woman’s mouth. Nyx’s voice stirred against Rory’s ear. “That was Isolde.” “Yes, I gathered.” Isolde touched the mud with two fingers. It crumbled from the leather and hung between them in a brown sphere. A tiny green shoot pushed through its surface. Rory lowered her foot. “I’m going to assume that wasn’t ordinary gardening.” “Ordinary gardens ask the same questions.” Isolde placed the sphere beneath a tree. “They take longer to answer.” A second leaf unfolded. Rory crouched without touching it. The mud sphere had become a pot, complete with a narrow rim and a crack down one side. “Where did the pot come from?” “Your foot remembered clay.” “My foot mostly remembered stepping in it.” Isolde turned towards a path Rory hadn’t seen until the woman put her foot on it. Flowers parted around her toes, leaving no print. “Come. The outer trees have heard enough of London.” Rory glanced at Nyx. Their eyes had fixed on the little pot. “Did you know it could do that?” “No.” That single word steadied her more than any reassurance would have done. She followed Isolde. The path curved between trunks broader than the doorway to her flat. Deep grooves ran through their bark, carrying clear liquid upwards. At shoulder height, droplets gathered beneath knots in the wood. Each held a moving patch of colour. Rory stopped beside one. Inside the droplet, someone’s hands folded a red cloth. The image turned as she leaned closer, revealing a table, a chipped cup, the corner of a window. “Nyx. Look at this.” They bent beside her. The hands vanished. A black staircase took their place. Nyx straightened. “What did you see?” “A table.” “I saw stairs.” Isolde waited at the next bend. “Some trees drink rain. These drink what falls from sleepers.” Rory watched the droplet swell. “Dreams?” “A name makes a small cup for a large thirst.” “That sounded like yes.” She resisted the urge to wipe it from the bark. The droplet quivered, showing her the red cloth again. This time the hands pulled it tight enough to reveal a tear. Rory stepped away. Shells rattled overhead. Beneath them came a low wooden note, followed by another at a different pitch. She looked between the branches. “Was someone playing music?” Nyx pressed their palm against a trunk. Their fingers sank an inch into the bark before they drew them out. “Something moved inside.” The wooden notes passed from tree to tree. Rory felt each one beneath her ribs, as though she had leaned against a speaker. When the sound reached Isolde, the seer lifted her chin. A cluster of flowers opened along the path. Their centres glowed green. Rory crouched beside them. Fine threads rose from each blossom, curved towards the next, and joined in a web above the ground. The next note made the web tremble. “They’re answering.” She held a finger near one thread. It bent towards her skin. A prickle crossed her knuckle, followed by the smell of oranges. Rory pulled back, laughing once through her nose. “That was a peculiar conversation.” Isolde’s lavender eyes rested on her hand. “You gave it warmth. It gave you summer.” “Was that a fair exchange?” “The flower kept its roots.” Nyx moved ahead of them, their feet touching neither blossom nor soil. Beneath a low branch, their outline split into two silhouettes. Rory stopped. “Which one was you?” Both figures turned. Only one had eyes. Nyx reached into the other and drew out a handful of darkness. The empty silhouette remained beneath the branch, lifting its arm after theirs had fallen. “A shade of a Shade.” “Did you make it?” “The grove borrowed me.” Isolde passed the imitation without looking at it. “A mirror need not have glass.” The copied figure flattened against the tree. Violet flowers opened where its eyes should have been. Rory gave that trunk a wide berth. Her phone vibrated. She dragged it from her pocket. No notification appeared. The time read 18:42, then 18:39. As she watched, the numbers changed to 03:11. “Isolde.” The seer glanced back. “I left work at six. What time would it be outside?” “A river does not wear the same water at both banks.” “I need something less poetic. I’ve got a shift tomorrow.” Isolde approached and laid a finger against the phone’s edge. The screen went black. “The little clock counted footsteps as hours.” Rory pressed the side button. Nothing happened. “That cost me eighty pounds.” “Then let it sleep.” Rory pocketed it with her jaw tight. “Nyx, remind me not to agree to anything measured in minutes.” “I would need minutes to do that.” A narrow channel crossed the path ahead. Water flowed through it in two directions: one stream ran along the bottom, dark and smooth, while another skimmed the surface towards them, carrying silver grains. Rory knelt at the bank. The grains had legs. Hundreds of tiny creatures strode against the current, each carrying a bead of water between hooked forelimbs. Where the channel narrowed, they climbed over one another without dropping their loads. “They looked like ants.” Nyx crouched opposite her. “No shadows.” Rory shifted her head. Everything else cast a pale outline across the bank. The creatures cast none. One stopped beneath her gaze. It raised its bead. Inside the water, a white flower unfolded. Rory looked over her shoulder. A blossom at the edge of the path had closed. “They’re carrying the flowers?” Isolde stood beside a stone bridge, its single arch no wider than Rory’s arm. “What grows here must also travel.” Rory watched the creature lower its burden and resume its march. She crossed the bridge without putting her boots near the stream. Beyond it, the trees thinned around a sunken court. Broad steps descended through banks of moss towards a circular floor. Roots held up an open roof of dark stone, their twists fitting into carved grooves as if the builders had shaped the roof around them. Rory stopped at the top step. Every surface carried marks: paired crescents, branching lines, narrow shapes like leaves split down the middle. Some carvings had worn shallow. Others held edges sharp enough to catch her sleeve. “Did someone build that before the trees?” Isolde laid her hand on a root. “The mason and the seed shared a table.” Nyx descended three steps. Their outline thinned. Rory reached towards them. “Was that hurting?” “No. There was less room for shadow here.” They drew their darkness closer, becoming a solid figure whose violet eyes no longer lit the surrounding stone. Rory followed. At the centre of the court stood a basin supported by three kneeling figures. Their faces had no mouths. Their hands joined beneath the bowl, fingertips passing through one another in loops of stone. Nothing filled it. Then Rory’s pendant warmed beneath her shirt. She caught the silver chain and drew the Heartstone out. Crimson light moved within the gem. Nyx looked from it to the basin. “Keep that clear of the rim.” “I wasn’t planning to put it in.” She stepped left. The warmth faded. To the right, it returned. At the basin’s far side, a seam divided the floor. Amber light shone through it, thin as a strand of hair. Rory knelt beside the crack, keeping the pendant cupped in her palm. Heat brushed her face. For an instant she smelled crushed grapes and bread pulled from an oven. Behind the scent came a clatter of dishes, faint enough that she held her breath to hear it. “Was that a kitchen?” Nyx stood over the seam. “Across the Veil.” Rory tucked the pendant away. “The flowers gave me oranges. That could just be lunch.” “Your stone knew the difference.” Isolde lifted a slender dagger from the folds of her clothes. Its leaf-shaped blade caught the pale light. Rory stood. “What needed cutting?” “An old door kept its teeth.” Isolde offered the hilt. The metal chilled Rory’s fingers through her glove. She turned the dagger, watching a white line travel along its edge. “Did you want me to open it?” “A gift was not a command.” Rory accepted that answer. She held the blade away from the seam. Nyx traced the basin’s rim without touching it. “There was writing here.” Rory leaned closer. Marks covered the inner edge, packed beneath a crust of mineral deposits. Isolde pointed to a pale thread stretched across the bowl. Rory had mistaken it for a cobweb. Now she saw how it passed through the stone instead of attaching to it. She slipped the dagger beneath the thread. The blade met resistance, then cut through. A sound like a struck cup rang across the court. Water rose from the empty basin. It gathered in a column, widened into a shallow disc, and hung at Rory’s shoulder height. Along its surface, small waves moved around an island of dry air. Rory lowered the dagger. Nyx leaned close enough for their eyes to reflect twice. “There was no vessel.” “There was the bowl.” “Not up there.” Within the suspended water, slender roots spread from nothing. Leaves followed, translucent and veined with gold. Rory watched one turn towards her. She offered the back of her free hand. The leaf touched her crescent-shaped scar. Water slid across her wrist without wetting her sleeve, and a cluster of bubbles collected beneath her thumb. Each bubble held a tiny, turning leaf. Rory raised her hand an inch. The water rose with it. “Look. It followed the skin.” Nyx brought their hand beside hers. The roots turned through the suspended pool and curled around their dark fingers, laying fine gold veins across the shadow.
created_at"2026-10-05T15:31:47.124Z" 10/5/2026, 3:31:47 PM
model"openai/gpt-6.1-sol-20260929"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency12712
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time95203
tokens_prompt1763
tokens_completion3385
native_tokens_prompt1706
native_tokens_completion2833
native_tokens_completion_images0
native_tokens_reasoning241
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"completed"
service_tier"default"
usage0.0325935
router(null)
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.21.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1791214307-b2elC7b5sav4dAt306Lx"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1791214307-8xrevHaeJvQ5YFIjDcPE"
upstream_id"resp_0a0555518e030975016ac3c2e3571087d1b91c6a788fe7f762"
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"dfb9d5c3-63f9-4263-8b78-4fa97dcb3d5e"
id"resp_0a0555518e030975016ac3c2e3571087d1b91c6a788fe7f762"
is_byokfalse
latency363
model_permaslug"openai/gpt-6.1-sol-20260929"
provider_name"OpenAI"
status200
total_cost0.0325935
cache_discount-0.0008515
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"OpenAI"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"
workspace_id"97e315e5-d303-487d-83c1-83180e8a13d4"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.013
leniency0.026
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2038
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2038
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"quivered"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"chilled"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"quivered"
2"warmth"
3"vibrated"
4"footsteps"
5"measured"
6"chilled"
7"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences195
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences195
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences271
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2038
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
23.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions77
wordCount1626
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.52
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory41
Nyx16
Isolde14
Heartstone1
Water3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Water"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.239
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences130
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.491
wordCount2038
matches
0"neither blossom nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences271
matches
0"gave that trunk"
1"accepted that answer"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs196
mean10.4
std9.47
cv0.91
sampleLengths
013
136
25
38
44
51
61
714
82
96
104
115
1224
137
144
1538
1624
175
187
1927
205
218
228
235
2420
251
2654
276
284
295
3024
318
3211
339
346
356
3617
376
383
393
4028
414
428
4318
444
4523
466
474
487
4924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences195
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs279
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences271
ratio0.004
matches
0"Some carried leaves; others carried translucent shells that clicked together when their branches moved."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1628
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"beside small yellow blossoms"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.022113022113022112
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0006142506142506142
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences271
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences271
mean7.52
std4.38
cv0.582
sampleLengths
013
18
29
319
45
53
65
74
81
91
1014
112
126
134
145
1510
1614
177
184
198
2013
2117
222
2313
249
255
267
272
2813
2912
305
318
328
335
345
3515
361
3714
388
3914
4018
416
424
435
4411
4513
468
473
488
499
48.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.2988929889298893
totalSentences271
uniqueOpeners81
53.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences187
matches
0"Then the darkness snapped back"
1"Only one had eyes."
2"Then Rory’s pendant warmed beneath"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences187
matches
0"She pulled her foot back."
1"She stepped forward again."
2"Their shadow stretched past her"
3"Their petals pressed against the"
4"They looked over their shoulder."
5"She kept her hands close"
6"She wore no coat, though"
7"It crumbled from the leather"
8"Their eyes had fixed on"
9"She followed Isolde."
10"They bent beside her."
11"She resisted the urge to"
12"She looked between the branches."
13"Their fingers sank an inch"
14"Their centres glowed green."
15"She held a finger near"
16"It bent towards her skin."
17"Her phone vibrated."
18"She dragged it from her"
19"It raised its bead."
ratio0.176
45.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount155
totalSentences187
matches
0"Rory stepped between the standing"
1"The other sank into a"
2"She pulled her foot back."
3"The bus growled."
4"Rain ticked against her coat."
5"She stepped forward again."
6"Their shadow stretched past her"
7"Nyx gathered themself into a"
8"Rory crossed the boundary."
9"The flowers bent beneath her"
10"Their petals pressed against the"
11"A scent rose from them:"
12"They looked over their shoulder."
13"The stones stood several paces"
14"She kept her hands close"
15"Nyx reached towards the boundary."
16"A thread of shadow peeled"
17"Trees grew in loose circles"
18"Some carried leaves; others carried"
19"Wildflowers crowded every patch of"
ratio0.829
53.48% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences187
matches
0"To the right, it returned."
1"Now she saw how it"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Some carried leaves; others carried translucent shells that clicked together when their branches moved."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.8960%