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Run: 2026-10-05-01M46B4GPV5XX3E94B62T33J0E
Run Details
Model:
GPT-6.1 Sol (Reasoning, Medium)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 26s
Cost:
$0.027573
Provider:
OpenAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
92.64%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
82.82%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
90.48%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
50.99%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
37.95%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
49.74%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
32.05%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
91.2222%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Rory opened the door and
caught Lucien Moreau’s cane before he could wedge it across the threshold. “Wrong flat.”
His hand tightened on the
ivory handle.
Blood ran from his cuff
and touched her fingers. “Then I apologise to the tenant.”
She kept the chain in
place. Through the narrow gap, his black eye held hers while the amber one
flicked
towards the stairs. Three months without a word.
Now he stood outside Eva’s
flat with blood on his shirt and the same polished manners he had used to ruin her life. “Does she know you’re here?” “No.” “Good. She’d charge admission.” “May I come in?” “No.”
Something scraped against the wall
below them. Lucien turned his head. Rory
knew that stillness
.
She had seen it once
across a crowded club, just before he broke a man’s wrist without spilling his drink. She released his cane. “What followed you?” “A poor decision.” “Yours or someone else’s?” “Mine.” That answer cost him.
She saw it in the
small movement of his jaw.
Rory shut the door to
release the chain. When she opened it again, Lucien slipped inside, and she threw all three deadbolts behind him. The last resisted.
She drove it home with
the heel of her hand. “Shoes off. Eva’s rules.” “Rory.” “Bleed on her rug and she’ll make your pursuers
look
reasonable.”
He looked down at his
shoes, then bent to unlace them.
The movement pulled a sharp
breath from him.
She caught his elbow before
his shoulder struck the wall. Under the charcoal wool, his arm felt rigid. “Where?” “Left side.” “How deep?” “Deep enough to make the stairs unpleasant.” “Sit down before you make the floor unpleasant.”
Ptolemy emerged from beneath a
chair, sniffed Lucien’s abandoned shoe and hissed. “Sound judgement.” “The cat or you?” “The cat. I opened the door.”
She led him into the
sitting room.
Eva had left scarcely enough
space for a guest, let alone a wounded one. Books rose in crooked stacks beside the sofa. Scrolls crowded the mantel, and research notes covered the small dining table beneath a cold cup of tea. Cumin and fried onions drifted up from the curry house below. The
familiar
smell made the blood on Rory’s fingers
look
worse. Lucien moved a pile of journals before sitting.
Even wounded, he aligned their
edges. Rory fetched the first-aid tin from the kitchen. “Where’s Eva?” “York. A library has something she wants, and its curator has something he thinks passes for
charm
.” “You’re staying here?” “Ptolemy refuses to feed himself. Don’t mistake it for a change of address.” “I remember where you live.”
Her fingers stopped on the
tin’s clasp. “Yes. That was rather the problem.” He looked away first.
She set the tin beside
him and held out her hand. “Jacket.”
He slipped it off with
his right arm.
His shirt clung to his
left side, black-red beneath the ribs. A narrow tear cut through the expensive fabric. “Knife?” “Not quite.” “Something supernatural, then. Excellent. I’ve got plasters with cartoon ducks.” “The ordinary gauze will suffice.” “Shirt.” He began undoing the buttons.
She crossed to the kitchen
for water, giving him those few seconds unwatched. There had been a time when he had undressed in front of her without this brittle care. His tie over her bedpost. Her mouth against his shoulder.
His hand open on the
pillow beside her, never gripping, even when she woke from dreams with Evan’s name caught in her throat. Then a photograph had arrived.
Her father outside his chambers
in Cardiff. Her mother leaving school. Rory herself unlocking the door above Silas’ bar. Lucien had known who took them. He had not told her until she laid the photographs on his desk. When she returned, he had folded his shirt beside the journals. The wound looked wrong. A dark line ran below his ribs. No clean edges, no torn flesh. The skin around it had sunk inward, as if something beneath it pulled. She put the bowl down. “Hospital.” “No.” “That wasn’t a question.” “A hospital will not help.” “Convenient.” He reached into his jacket and drew out a small glass vial. Pale liquid clung to its sides. “Pour this along the cut. Don’t touch it.” “What is it?” “A remedy.” “That’s a sales pitch. I asked for a name.” “Distilled ash from Avaros.” She glanced at him. “Your father’s side of the family remains a delight.” “On that, we agree.” Rory uncorked the vial. It smelt of burnt cloves and hot metal. She folded a towel beneath his hip, then knelt beside the sofa. His gaze followed her hands. Her sleeve slipped back, exposing the crescent scar on her left wrist. He shifted away. “Use the whole vial.” “I heard you.” She poured. The liquid struck the wound with a hiss. Lucien’s fingers dug into the sofa cushion. Beneath his skin, something moved towards the cut, pressing a small ridge through his flesh. Rory kept her hand steady. “Look at me.” His amber eye met hers. “Not the wound. Me.” “I am.” The ridge dissolved. Black fluid spilled onto the towel, and the pull beneath his ribs eased.
Only then did she set
down the empty vial. “That had better not have been contagious.” “No.” “Another answer I’ll require in writing.” She pressed gauze against the wound. His
stomach
tightened under her knuckles. “Hold that.” He covered her hand instead of the dressing. For a beat, neither moved. His palm felt warmer than she remembered. She could see the faint scar near his thumb, the one she had
traced
in bed while he pretended to sleep. Rory withdrew her hand. “Pressure, Lucien. It’s not a difficult instruction.” He obeyed. She went to wash the blood off her fingers. The kitchen sink sat beneath a shelf of chipped mugs. Eva had taped a note to the kettle: DO NOT USE FOR RITUALS. Rory turned the tap until it ran cold. Behind her, glass clicked against wood. “If you’re pouring whisky, put it down.” “Water.” “Your capacity for reform astounds me.” “I would have preferred the whisky.” She dried her hands and returned. He had not put his shirt back on. The dressing stayed white beneath his fingers. Without the jacket, the cufflinks and the
carefully
fitted layers, he looked less like the man people paid to solve their problems. The bones of his face stood sharp, and his slicked-back hair had come loose at one temple. She wanted to smooth it down. Instead, she took the armchair. “Why here?” “You weren’t at Silas’.” “You went to my flat?” “I knocked. He told me nothing.” “Good.” “He also threatened to put me through a window.” “Also good.” A brief smile touched his mouth, then vanished. “I needed to give you something.” “Send an email.” “Not this.” He reached into his jacket again. Rory sat forward. “Slowly.” His hand stopped.
Then he drew out a
cream envelope and placed it on the coffee table. She recognised her father’s handwriting before she touched it. Her name. Aurora, not Rory. “What have you done?” “Read it.” “No. You don’t get to arrive bleeding, hand me something from my father and give orders.” “The envelope never reached Cardiff. A courier intercepted it outside your mother’s school.” Her throat tightened. “I posted that six weeks ago.” “I know.” She stood. Ptolemy darted beneath the table. “You know.” “Yes.” “Have you been watching them again?” “No.” “Then explain it without selecting the flattering parts.” Lucien lowered his hand from the dressing. “The people who took those photographs kept copies. I bought the originals. I believed that ended it.” “You believed.” “I paid for
silence
. They sold it twice.” She picked up the envelope. The flap bore a cut so neat she would have missed it without the light above the table. Inside lay her letter and a thin sheet of black paper. Silver script covered the second sheet. Along its bottom edge, three names appeared in plain English. Brendan Carter. Jennifer Carter. Aurora Carter. Beside each name sat a small empty circle. Rory held it by the corners. “What are the circles?” “Collection marks.” She looked at his wound. “And you stopped the courier.” “Yes.” “Was he carrying this to you?” “No. To your father.” The paper crackled between her fingers. Downstairs, someone laughed in the restaurant. Plates clattered.
Such ordinary noise, just a
floor away. “What do they want?” “The ledger you took from the auction house.” “I gave it to Eva.” “And Eva hid it.” “You told me it contained debts.” “It does.” “You didn’t mention my family could become one.” “I thought I could keep you outside it.” She dropped the paper onto the table. “There it is.” “Rory.” “No. That sentence. You used it when I found the photographs. You used it when I asked why the man outside my work knew my name.” “I remember.” “You remember what you said. I remember checking every car behind me on the way home.” He rose too fast. His face lost colour, but he stayed on his feet. She did not help him. “I should have told you.” “Yes.” “I should have let you decide whether to stay.” “Yes.” “And when you left, I should have come after you with the truth, not another arrangement.” Her eyes burned. She looked down at the envelope until the ink steadied. “Then why didn’t you?” “Because you told me never to come to your door again.” For once, he offered no defence after the answer. She set her father’s letter apart from the black sheet. “You managed tonight.” “Tonight they changed the terms.” “Not because you missed me.” He stood on the other side of the table. His bare feet looked out of place among Eva’s loose notes. “I missed you while I buttoned my cuffs. When I passed the restaurant. When I heard someone laugh in the next room and turned before I could stop myself.” “Don’t.” “I won’t use it as an excuse.” “You’re using it as something.” “Yes.” She looked up. His hand rested on the table, close to hers, not touching. “I would like you to know.” The anger did not leave. It sat in her chest beside the ache of seeing him, and neither made room for the other. She walked around the table. Lucien stayed where he stood. Up close, he smelt of blood, soap and the faint bitter scent of his usual cologne. She touched the loose strand at his temple, then drew her fingers down to his cheek. His eyes closed. “You don’t get forgiven because you
look
like that.” “No.” “And you don’t get to make plans for me.” “No.” “If I tell you to leave, you leave.” He opened his eyes. “Yes.” She kissed him. Not
gently
. Her fingers caught the back of his neck, and his breath broke against her mouth. He kept his hands at his sides until she took one and placed it at her waist. Then he drew her closer. The edge of the table pressed against her hip. His thumb moved once through the fabric of her jumper. She
remembered that touch
in enough detail to resent it. She broke the kiss but did not step away. “You still owe me answers.” “All of them.” A scrape sounded from the hall. Lucien’s hand tightened, then released her waist. He reached for the cane. Rory caught his wrist. “The chain’s off. Three bolts are on. How long do they hold?” “Against the courier?” “Yes.” “Not long.” She took the black paper from the table. “Does he need this?” Lucien looked at the sheet, then at her. “For the collection.” Rory walked into the kitchen and held it over the gas hob. Behind her, the first deadbolt slid back. “Rory, burning it calls the creditor.” She turned the knob. Blue flame leapt beneath the paper. “Then he can explain his terms in person.” The silver writing flared. Lucien drew the blade from his cane. The second bolt snapped open. Rory dropped the burning sheet into the sink, and a man on the other side of the door spoke with her father’s voice. “Aurora. Open this door.” The third bolt
began to
turn.
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is_byok
false
latency
310
model_permaslug
"openai/gpt-6.1-sol-20260929"
provider_name
"OpenAI"
status
200
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
1
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
137
tagDensity
0.007
leniency
0.015
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
92.64%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
2037
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
2
adverb
"gently"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"slowly"
2
"gently"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
82.82%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
2037
totalAiIsms
7
found
0
word
"flicked"
count
1
1
word
"familiar"
count
1
2
word
"aligned"
count
1
3
word
"charm"
count
1
4
word
"stomach"
count
1
5
word
"traced"
count
1
6
word
"silence"
count
1
highlights
0
"flicked"
1
"familiar"
2
"aligned"
3
"charm"
4
"stomach"
5
"traced"
6
"silence"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
165
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
165
filterMatches
0
"look"
hedgeMatches
0
"tended to"
1
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
302
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
29
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
2037
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
17
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
90.48%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
39
wordCount
1344
uniqueNames
8
maxNameDensity
1.19
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
2
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien
12
Moreau
1
Eva
4
Rory
16
Evan
1
Cardiff
1
English
1
Carter
3
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Eva"
3
"Rory"
4
"Evan"
5
"Carter"
places
0
"Cardiff"
globalScore
0.905
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
109
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
2037
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
302
matches
0
"knew that stillness"
1
"remembered that touch"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
246
mean
8.28
std
8.9
cv
1.075
sampleLengths
0
17
1
2
2
16
3
6
4
23
5
28
6
5
7
1
8
4
9
4
10
1
11
7
12
28
13
4
14
3
15
3
16
4
17
1
18
14
19
37
20
4
21
1
22
11
23
11
24
8
25
18
26
1
27
2
28
2
29
7
30
8
31
12
32
2
33
4
34
6
35
7
36
62
37
14
38
8
39
2
40
17
41
3
42
13
43
5
44
7
45
6
46
4
47
11
48
1
49
27
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
165
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
225
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
302
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
811
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
11
adverbRatio
0.013563501849568433
lyAdverbCount
3
lyAdverbRatio
0.0036991368680641184
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
302
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
302
mean
6.75
std
4.9
cv
0.727
sampleLengths
0
17
1
2
2
7
3
9
4
6
5
6
6
17
7
5
8
23
9
5
10
1
11
4
12
4
13
1
14
7
15
4
16
4
17
20
18
4
19
3
20
3
21
4
22
1
23
4
24
10
25
8
26
16
27
3
28
10
29
4
30
1
31
11
32
11
33
8
34
10
35
8
36
1
37
2
38
2
39
7
40
8
41
12
42
2
43
4
44
6
45
7
46
14
47
8
48
18
49
11
50.99%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.31788079470198677
totalSentences
302
uniqueOpeners
96
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
7
totalSentences
156
matches
0
"Even wounded, he aligned their"
1
"Then a photograph had arrived."
2
"Only then did she set"
3
"Instead, she took the armchair."
4
"Then he drew out a"
5
"Such ordinary noise, just a"
6
"Then he drew her closer."
ratio
0.045
37.95%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
71
totalSentences
156
matches
0
"His hand tightened on the"
1
"She kept the chain in"
2
"She had seen it once"
3
"She released his cane."
4
"She saw it in the"
5
"She drove it home with"
6
"He looked down at his"
7
"She caught his elbow before"
8
"She led him into the"
9
"Her fingers stopped on the"
10
"He looked away first."
11
"She set the tin beside"
12
"He slipped it off with"
13
"His shirt clung to his"
14
"He began undoing the buttons."
15
"She crossed to the kitchen"
16
"His tie over her bedpost."
17
"Her mouth against his shoulder."
18
"His hand open on the"
19
"Her father outside his chambers"
ratio
0.455
49.74%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
128
totalSentences
156
matches
0
"Rory opened the door and"
1
"His hand tightened on the"
2
"Blood ran from his cuff"
3
"She kept the chain in"
4
"Something scraped against the wall"
5
"Lucien turned his head."
6
"Rory knew that stillness."
7
"She had seen it once"
8
"She released his cane."
9
"That answer cost him."
10
"She saw it in the"
11
"Rory shut the door to"
12
"The last resisted."
13
"She drove it home with"
14
"He looked down at his"
15
"The movement pulled a sharp"
16
"She caught his elbow before"
17
"Ptolemy emerged from beneath a"
18
"She led him into the"
19
"Eva had left scarcely enough"
ratio
0.821
32.05%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
156
matches
0
"Now he stood outside Eva’s"
ratio
0.006
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
50
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
1
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
91.2222%