| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.038 | | leniency | 0.075 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1721 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.95% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1721 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "flicker" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 164 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 215 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1721 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 31.76% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 1480 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 2.36 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 15 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 35 | | Isolde | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.318 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like oak bark but felt like stone" | | 1 | "felt like stone, its grooves packed wit" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.581 | | wordCount | 1721 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 215 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 138 | | mean | 12.47 | | std | 12.51 | | cv | 1.003 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 36 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 260 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 215 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "Green leaves hung beside copper ones; blossom clustered around fruit black as polished coal." | | 1 | "Branches that had crossed overhead separated; others shifted into their places without a rustle." | | 2 | "Rory followed the gaps she left; pollen dusted her sleeves, smelling of oranges when she brushed it and salt when she brought it near her nose." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1483 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.016183412002697236 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 215 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 215 | | mean | 8 | | std | 5.23 | | cv | 0.654 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 56.28% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3488372093023256 | | totalSentences | 215 | | uniqueOpeners | 75 | |
| 20.70% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 161 | | matches | | 0 | "Then darkness covered them." |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 161 | | matches | | 0 | "She caught herself against a" | | 1 | "Their outline sharpened, violet eyes" | | 2 | "She raised a finger towards" | | 3 | "She moved sideways until six" | | 4 | "They stood in a crooked" | | 5 | "She had knocked three times" | | 6 | "Her fingers curled into her" | | 7 | "She put it away." | | 8 | "Their hand dissolved into ribbons," | | 9 | "They withdrew their arm." | | 10 | "She swallowed, felt it release," | | 11 | "Its petals spread with the" | | 12 | "Their shadow stretched ahead rather" | | 13 | "They both watched." | | 14 | "She switched it off." | | 15 | "She crouched and pressed her" | | 16 | "They moved in clusters, stopped" | | 17 | "Their knees made no impression" | | 18 | "It passed beneath a yellow" | | 19 | "She leaned closer." |
| | ratio | 0.236 | |
| 59.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 129 | | totalSentences | 161 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory found the first standing" | | 1 | "The next, something struck her" | | 2 | "She caught herself against a" | | 3 | "Nyx gathered beneath a bare" | | 4 | "Their outline sharpened, violet eyes" | | 5 | "Rory stepped back." | | 6 | "Rain threaded through the trees" | | 7 | "She raised a finger towards" | | 8 | "Nyx’s whisper stirred the hair" | | 9 | "Rory lowered her hand." | | 10 | "She moved sideways until six" | | 11 | "They stood in a crooked" | | 12 | "Knots bulged beneath the moss," | | 13 | "Rory glanced at Nyx." | | 14 | "She had knocked three times" | | 15 | "Her fingers curled into her" | | 16 | "Rory took out her phone." | | 17 | "The screen showed a blurred" | | 18 | "She put it away." | | 19 | "Nyx extended an arm into" |
| | ratio | 0.801 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 161 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 96.77% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She caught herself against a surface that looked like oak bark but felt like stone, its grooves packed with silver moss." | | 1 | "Their shadow stretched ahead rather than away from the light, a long, narrow shape that reached towards a pool in the middle of the clearing." | | 2 | "Rory felt the note through the soles of her boots before she heard it: a low vibration that climbed her shins and settled behind her teeth." | | 3 | "Branches that had crossed overhead separated; others shifted into their places without a rustle." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |