Run: 2026-10-05-01M46B6EG2FQB3FK30F3KQX9BD

Run Details

Duration:
1m 38s
Cost:
$0.030304
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened as far as the chain allowed, and Lucien Moreau stood on the other side with blood on his collar. Rory kept one hand on the last deadbolt. “No.” His amber eye dropped to the chain. His black eye stayed on her face. “Good evening to you, too.” “You’ve got the wrong flat.” “I knocked on your door first. Your landlord directed me here.” “I’ll have a word with Silas.” “He had several for me.” Lucien held his ivory-handled cane against his thigh. Rain darkened the shoulders of his charcoal suit, and a split in his lower lip spoiled the precise line of his mouth. Rory had kissed that mouth in a stairwell six weeks ago. Four weeks ago, she had watched it shape the words You misunderstood. She started to close the door. He put a folded envelope through the gap. Her name covered the front in her father’s handwriting. The door stopped against his knuckles. “Where did you get that?” “Let me in.” “Answer me.” “From the man who cut my throat.” Her gaze caught on the blood again. Beneath his collar, a narrow wound ran from the hollow of his neck towards his jaw. “That’s a scratch.” “The distinction mattered more before he made it.” Someone opened a door downstairs. Voices rose through the stairwell, followed by the clatter of takeaway containers. Lucien turned his head towards the sound, and Rory saw him shift his weight off his left leg. She shut the door, lifted the chain, and opened it again. “Inside. Don’t mistake this for forgiveness.” “I wouldn’t dare.” “You’ve dared plenty.” He crossed the threshold. Rory slid all three deadbolts home while he stood among the tottering stacks of books that narrowed Eva’s hallway to a sideways passage. Ptolemy emerged from beneath the coat rack, sniffed Lucien’s shoe, and bit the hem of his trousers. Lucien looked down. “An excellent judge of character.” “He likes people who bring him chicken. You’re below chicken.” Rory took the envelope from him. The paper had softened at one corner, but the seal remained intact. She knew the blue fountain-pen ink, the long stroke of the C, the way her father pressed too hard at the end of her name. “Who had it?” “A collector named Vey.” “Collector of what?” “Debts. Objects. People, when his clients lacked imagination.” She looked up. Lucien’s jaw tightened. “He bought a batch of intercepted post. Yours caught my attention.” “Because you’ve been looking for my name?” “Yes.” No smirk. No polished deflection. The answer made her grip the envelope harder. “Eva’s out.” “I know.” Rory pointed at him with the letter. “Choose your next words with care.” “I called her before coming here. She told me where you were. She also told me she would remove my teeth if I upset you.” “That sounds like Eva.” “She didn’t specify an instrument.” “She owns pliers.” Rory backed into the sitting room. Books covered the sofa except for the narrow hollow where she had spent the past hour with her knees tucked beneath her. An open takeaway carton sat on a stack of photocopies. Curry-house heat seeped through the floor, carrying cumin and the noise of a kitchen extractor. She moved three books from a chair. “Sit.” “I’d prefer—” “Bleed on Eva’s rug and you can negotiate with her yourself.” He sat. The movement cost him. He caught the chair arm before his body settled, and the cane struck the floor with a sharp click. Rory put the letter on the mantelpiece. “Show me.” “It looks worse than it is.” “You used that line about the woman in your office.” He went still. “She was a client.” “She had your hand under her blouse.” “She had a blade against my ribs.” “And you couldn’t have opened with that?” Ptolemy sprang onto the table and pushed his head into Lucien’s sleeve. Lucien moved his hand away from the cat before it reached the blood. “I could have.” Rory waited. The radiator ticked behind her. “I should have.” She went to the bathroom for Eva’s first-aid box. When she returned, Lucien had unbuttoned his jacket. Blood soaked his shirt beneath the left side of his waistcoat. Rory stopped beside the table. “That isn’t your throat.” “No.” “How many holes have you brought into this flat?” “Two.” “Any more will cost extra.” She dragged a stool in front of his chair and sat with the first-aid box between her feet. “Jacket off. Waistcoat, too.” He obeyed without his usual flourish. His fingers slipped on the bottom button, and Rory caught his wrist before he could reach for it again. “Leave it.” His skin felt cold. That unsettled her more than the blood. She undid the button and eased the waistcoat aside. The shirt clung to his ribs. A cut crossed his flank, shallow at one end and deep enough at the other to make her put down the little packet of gauze. “You need stitches.” “I heal.” “Then get on with it.” “That blade interfered.” “Of course it did.” She reached for her phone. Lucien caught her hand. Rory looked at his fingers around her wrist. He released her. “Don’t call an ambulance. They can’t treat this.” “You don’t get to arrive bleeding and rule out everything useful.” “There’s a vial in the inner pocket of my jacket. Green glass. It needs pressure on the wound while it takes effect.” “Why haven’t you used it?” “I needed somewhere to stop.” “And every chair in London was occupied?” His gaze moved to the letter on the mantelpiece. “Vey’s men followed me from the shop. Eva’s wards cover this flat.” Rory glanced towards the hallway. Eva had spent an entire Sunday painting symbols beneath the doorframe while Rory held a bowl of something that smelled like burnt pennies. “Are they outside?” “They lost me near Spitalfields. I won’t leave until I’m certain.” “You could have told me that at the door.” “You were closing it.” “I had reasons.” “Yes.” She found the vial, held it to the light, and watched a dark liquid coat the glass. “How much?” “All of it.” She handed it over. He pulled the stopper with his teeth and drank, then bent forward with his fist pressed against his knee. Rory opened a sterile pad and placed it over the cut. His breath caught. “Sorry.” “Don’t be.” “I’m not apologising for anything else.” “I understood.” She pressed harder. His hand gripped the chair arm, tendons standing out beneath his skin. Up close, he smelled of rain, iron, and the cedar soap she remembered from his bathroom. She shifted her stool back an inch. Lucien noticed. He looked towards the window instead of following her face. “Was the letter bait?” “I don’t think your father intended it as such.” “That wasn’t what I asked.” “Yes. Vey knew I would come for it.” “Why?” His mouth opened. Closed. Rory reached into the box with her free hand and took out another pad. “You were fluent enough when you told me to go home.” “I had an audience.” “You had me.” The words scraped more than she intended. She kept her eyes on the wound. In his office, she had stood with a bottle of wine in one hand while the woman behind his desk fastened her blouse. Rory had offered him a chance to explain. He had looked past her towards the open door and smiled as though she had delivered a meal to the wrong address. Lucien leaned back against the chair. “Her name was Sabine. She came to establish whether you mattered to me.” “And you gave her a demonstration.” “Yes.” Rory lifted the pad. Fresh blood welled, thinner than before. She replaced it. “You could have called me afterwards.” “I thought distance would protect you.” “You thought.” He took the rebuke without looking away. “I made a decision that belonged to you.” The flat held the sounds from downstairs: metal against metal, an order called across the kitchen, a burst of laughter. Rory watched a pink stain spread beneath her thumb. “Evan used to do that.” Lucien’s face changed. He drew his hand off the chair arm and set it on his knee. “I know.” “No. You know what I told you. That isn’t permission to decide what I can bear.” “No.” “He would lock the door and call it looking after me. He’d read my messages because he worried. There was always a lovely reason.” Lucien lowered his gaze to her hand on his ribs. “I won’t offer you one.” “That’s a start.” She checked the wound again. The edges had begun to draw together. Against her fingertips, his skin warmed. “Does it hurt?” “Yes.” “Good. That means you’re not dead.” His split lip curved, then flattened when she refused to return the smile. “I missed you, Rory.” She reached for the tape. The roll dropped from her fingers and bounced beneath the stool. Lucien bent to retrieve it. “Stay put.” He stayed. She picked it up herself. “You don’t get to slip that in while I’ve got my hand inside your shirt.” “When would you prefer?” “When I can walk away.” He nodded towards the pad. “You can stop. I can hold it.” For several seconds, she kept pressing. Then she took his hand, placed it over the dressing, and stood. He made no move to follow. Rory crossed to the mantelpiece. She slid a finger beneath the envelope’s flap and tore it open. Her father had enclosed a bank statement she had sent to the Cardiff address by mistake, along with a sheet of thick paper. Aurora, Your mother insists you have no need of a reminder about Sunday, which means I have received three reminders to remind you. Rory folded the note before she reached the next line. “People went through his post.” “Yes.” “Can they get to him?” “Not through this. Vey wanted leverage over me.” “And you gave it to him by going there.” Lucien glanced down at his ruined shirt. “I recovered the rest of the batch, too. No one kept copies.” “Did you kill him?” “No.” “Would you tell me if you had?” “Yes.” She pressed the fold flat with her thumbnail. “Another answer I have to take on trust.” “I can give you Eva’s source. She checked what I brought out.” “So you spoke to her before you spoke to me.” “I asked her how to do this without making it worse.” “What did she suggest?” “Honesty. She expressed doubts about my ability.” Rory put the letter back in its envelope. “Eva has a gift.” She returned to the stool, but didn’t sit. Lucien held the pad against his side with one hand. The other rested open on his thigh. “Move your hand. I need to tape that down.” He lifted it. The bleeding had stopped. She secured the dressing, smoothing the tape along the curve of his ribs. He watched her face, and she felt every glance where her fingers touched him. “Stop looking at me like that.” “Like what?” “Like you remember.” “I do.” She tore the final strip with more force than it needed. “Your bathroom had terrible lighting.” “You complained about the towels.” “They were decorative. They repelled water.” “You used my shirt.” “You weren’t wearing it.” He drew a breath through his nose. Rory’s hand paused against the dressing. There it was: the same small hitch she had heard when she touched his neck that night. She removed her hand before memory could make the decision for her. “Throat next.” She tilted his chin with two fingers and cleaned the cut. His eyes closed at the first sting. A strand of platinum hair had fallen across his forehead; without the slick line of it, he looked less like a man who charged for every minute. “You could have told me to wait outside your office. You could have said anything except what you said.” “I know.” “I stood in the lift with that bottle until the doors opened on the ground floor. Then I stood there until someone asked me to move.” His jaw shifted beneath her fingers. “Rory—” “No. Listen.” He opened his eyes. “I wasn’t embarrassed because another woman was there. I was embarrassed because I’d believed you. That morning, you asked me to leave a toothbrush.” “I wanted you to.” She pressed the clean gauze beneath his jaw. “Then you should have acted like it.” He swallowed against her hand. “Yes.” Rory reached for a small plaster. Her fingers brushed his collar, and he held his breath until she drew them away. “You can breathe. I’m treating you, not kissing you.” “I noticed the difference.” She looked at his mouth despite herself. Lucien didn’t move. Rory peeled the backing from the plaster and fixed it over the cut, then sat on the stool again, close enough that his knee touched hers. “What else didn’t you tell me?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2161
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2161
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"unsettled"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"unsettled"
2"reminder"
3"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences139
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences284
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2161
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
54.87% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1314
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien18
Moreau1
You1
Rory25
Eva3
Sunday2
Cardiff1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"You"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.549
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like burnt pennies"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2161
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences284
matches
0"kissed that mouth"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs230
mean9.4
std9.95
cv1.059
sampleLengths
022
18
21
314
45
55
611
76
85
953
106
118
129
136
145
153
162
177
1823
193
208
2135
2211
236
243
253
2644
273
285
2910
3043
313
324
333
348
353
363
3711
387
391
4013
412
422
437
446
4525
464
475
483
4953
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs228
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences284
ratio0.004
matches
0"A strand of platinum hair had fallen across his forehead; without the slick line of it, he looked less like a man who charged for every minute."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1319
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.016679302501895376
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences284
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences284
mean7.61
std5.84
cv0.767
sampleLengths
022
18
21
37
47
55
65
711
86
95
108
1122
1211
1312
146
158
169
176
185
193
202
217
227
2316
243
258
265
2712
2818
2911
306
313
323
334
3423
3517
363
375
3810
396
4012
4125
423
434
443
458
463
473
4811
497
45.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2852112676056338
totalSentences284
uniqueOpeners81
25.25% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"Then she took his hand,"
ratio0.008
35.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount61
totalSentences132
matches
0"His amber eye dropped to"
1"His black eye stayed on"
2"She started to close the"
3"He put a folded envelope"
4"Her name covered the front"
5"Her gaze caught on the"
6"She shut the door, lifted"
7"He crossed the threshold."
8"She knew the blue fountain-pen"
9"She looked up."
10"She moved three books from"
11"He caught the chair arm"
12"He went still."
13"She went to the bathroom"
14"She dragged a stool in"
15"He obeyed without his usual"
16"His fingers slipped on the"
17"His skin felt cold."
18"She undid the button and"
19"She reached for her phone."
ratio0.462
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences132
matches
0"The door opened as far"
1"Rory kept one hand on"
2"His amber eye dropped to"
3"His black eye stayed on"
4"Lucien held his ivory-handled cane"
5"Rain darkened the shoulders of"
6"Rory had kissed that mouth"
7"She started to close the"
8"He put a folded envelope"
9"Her name covered the front"
10"The door stopped against his"
11"Her gaze caught on the"
12"Someone opened a door downstairs."
13"Voices rose through the stairwell,"
14"Lucien turned his head towards"
15"She shut the door, lifted"
16"He crossed the threshold."
17"Rory slid all three deadbolts"
18"Ptolemy emerged from beneath the"
19"Lucien looked down."
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
ratio0
88.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rory slid all three deadbolts home while he stood among the tottering stacks of books that narrowed Eva’s hallway to a sideways passage."
1"Eva had spent an entire Sunday painting symbols beneath the doorframe while Rory held a bowl of something that smelled like burnt pennies."
2"He had looked past her towards the open door and smiled as though she had delivered a meal to the wrong address."
3"A strand of platinum hair had fallen across his forehead; without the slick line of it, he looked less like a man who charged for every minute."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.7235%