Run: 2026-10-05-01M46B7DQ9525W3RY2FBCCG27F

Run Details

Duration:
1m 42s
Cost:
$0.030344
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened onto Lucien Moreau with rain on his charcoal suit and a brown envelope tucked beneath his arm. Rory kept her hand on the third deadbolt. “No.” His ivory-handled cane rested against the threshold. Water gathered at its tip and spread across the painted wood. “I had a longer opening prepared.” “Save it for someone who invited you.” Behind her, Ptolemy pushed his striped head between her ankles. Lucien looked down, then back at her. His platinum hair had come loose above one temple. She hated noticing. She hated the small impulse to smooth it back. “Eva gave me this address.” “Eva gives people lots of things. Unwanted advice. Obscure diseases from library books. My address wasn’t hers to give.” “She asked me to bring her the folio from the auction.” He lifted the envelope. Rory looked at the red wax seal. Eva’s handwriting ran across the front: LUC—NO COURIERS. THEY BEND THINGS. Of course. “She’s in Oxford.” “I know that now.” “Put it down.” He bent to lay the envelope inside the doorway. Ptolemy escaped over his shoe. Rory caught the cat beneath his belly before he reached the landing, but a crack split the stairwell below them. Lucien turned. A man shouted from downstairs, followed by the clatter of wood against tiles. “Don’t come down!” Rory leaned past Lucien’s shoulder. Through the stair rails, she saw the curry-house owner standing beside a broken tread. A delivery sack lay across the bottom steps. “That whole section’s rotten.” He pointed up at them. “Both of you, stay there. My brother’s coming with boards. Twenty minutes.” “Can we—” “No stairs!” The owner disappeared beneath the landing. Ptolemy hooked a claw into Rory’s sleeve. Lucien moved his cane away from the threshold. “I can wait out here.” The landing measured little more than the width of his shoulders. A cracked window let rain onto the boards, and the emergency light above him flickered with a faint electrical whine. Rory stepped back. “Twenty minutes.” He entered without brushing against her. That consideration irritated her more than contact would have. She shut the door, threw the first two deadbolts, then left the third alone. The flat smelled of cardamom from downstairs and the toast she had burnt before answering the door. Books occupied the sofa. Scrolls filled a washing basket. Eva’s notes covered the kitchen table, secured beneath mugs, a fossil, and one solitary boot. Lucien set the envelope on a clear square of counter. “Where would you like me?” The question caught beneath her ribs. She put Ptolemy down. “By the door.” He stayed there. Rory crossed to the kettle because her hands needed something to do. She filled it beyond the mark, tipped some water out, then pressed the switch. “You’re making tea.” “I’m making tea for me.” “Understood.” She took two mugs from the shelf. His gaze moved to them. She put one back. Outside, rain struck the window above the sink. A bus dragged a wash of headlights across the ceiling, revealing a web Eva had insisted belonged to a beneficial spider. Lucien unfastened his coat but kept it on. “You look well.” “Don’t do that.” “Do what?” “Talk as if we ran into each other outside a chemist.” His fingers left the coat button. “All right.” “And don’t agree with everything. You never used to.” “I’ve had six weeks to discover the weaknesses in my position.” She turned before she could stop herself. “Six weeks?” “Forty-three days.” The kettle clicked off. Rory looked at his face. One amber eye, one black; the same uneven gaze that had once followed her across Silas’s bar until she forgot which drinks she carried. He had no right to stand among Eva’s unpaid bills and remember the number of days. “Did you count the days before or after you handed over my name?” “After.” She gripped the counter behind her. He reached inside his coat. “Don’t.” His hand stopped. “It’s a letter.” “Everything was a letter with you. Or a contract. Or a harmless introduction that turned out to have teeth.” He lowered his hand. “Yes.” There it was again. No defence for her to dismantle. She had rehearsed this conversation while delivering noodles, while climbing the stairs above Silas’s bar, while lying awake with her phone facedown. In every version, Lucien explained himself until she found the lie. He stood beside Eva’s umbrella stand and gave her nothing to fight. “Why are you here?” “For Eva’s folio.” “That’s why you knocked. Why haven’t you asked me how long the stairs will take?” “Because I wanted to see you.” Her thumb pressed against the crescent scar on her wrist. “You could have said that before.” “I could have said many things before.” She poured water into her mug. Steam rose between them. “Like, ‘Rory, I’m going to give a demon your alias.’ That would have been useful.” “Laila was already in his ledger.” “You confirmed it belonged to me.” “Yes.” “You told me I was safe.” “I believed you were.” “And I believed you.” Lucien looked at the floor. Rain fell from his coat hem onto the mat. Rory set the kettle down with enough force to rattle the spoons. “When Evan wanted something, he made the decision first. Then he explained why I ought to be grateful. You wore a better suit.” His jaw tightened. He lifted his eyes to hers. “I didn’t have the right.” “No.” “I thought I could contain what followed.” “You thought you could contain me.” He drew a breath through his nose. “Yes.” The answer took the heat out of the next thing she meant to say. She watched him stand with it, without reaching for a qualification. Ptolemy jumped onto a stack of books beside the door. Lucien steadied the top volume before it slid. The cat sniffed his knuckles, then rubbed against them. “Traitor.” Ptolemy began to purr. Lucien withdrew his hand. “He’s susceptible to tailoring.” “He eats moths. Don’t flatter yourself.” A corner of Lucien’s mouth moved. Rory looked away before her own could answer. “Take your coat off. You’re dripping on an article Eva’s spent three years pretending to finish.” He removed it and folded it over his arm. “Where?” She cleared two books from a chair. “There.” Underneath, his suit jacket sat crooked on one shoulder. A strip of white gauze showed between his cuff and wrist. Rory stared at it. “What happened?” “A disagreement.” “Did the other person have a knife?” “A letter opener.” “Very civilised.” “He thought so.” She went to the cupboard beneath the sink, pushed aside cleaning bottles, and found Eva’s first-aid tin. When she turned, Lucien had not moved. “Sit down.” “You don’t have to—” “I know what I have to do. Sit.” He took the chair. She pulled another beside it and held out her hand. He placed his wrist across her palm. The bandage smelled of wet cotton. A dark patch had seeped through near his thumb. She unwound it, careful around the last turn, and exposed a shallow cut with one edge rubbed raw. “You tied this yourself.” “Yes.” “It shows.” “I usually hire expertise.” “Did you run out of people willing to answer?” His eyes met hers. “One.” She opened an antiseptic wipe. “That wasn’t an invitation.” “I know.” He flinched when she cleaned the cut. His fingers closed, then opened against her knee. “Hold still.” “I am.” “You’re arguing with your tendons.” That earned a breath of laughter. She remembered its feel against her neck one evening in his car, when neither of them had made any effort to reach her front door. Her hands paused. Lucien noticed. “Rory.” “Don’t.” He stopped. She placed fresh gauze over the cut and reached for the tape. “What’s in the letter?” “An acknowledgment from the ledger keeper. Your name has been removed.” “And I’m meant to take your word for that?” “No. There are three witnesses. Eva knows two of them. You can choose someone to verify the seal.” She tore the tape with her teeth. “Did you buy it?” “Yes.” “What did it cost?” His gaze dropped to their hands. “Nothing you owe me.” She fixed the last strip in place and released him. “That’s almost an answer.” “I sold my share in a business.” “What business?” “A private auction house in Mayfair.” “You loved that place.” “I liked owning it.” She remembered the afternoon he had taken her through its empty rooms, how he had watched her inspect a bronze horse and then offered her gloves rather than telling her not to touch. She had liked him most in those small moments. That had made the rest harder. “You don’t get to purchase forgiveness.” “I bought the correction. What you do with me is separate.” From downstairs came a hammer blow, then an argument about measurements. Rory returned to the kitchen and took down the second mug. “How do you take it?” “You remember.” “Then I’ve forgotten.” “No milk. No sugar.” She poured the tea. When she brought it over, he accepted it with his uninjured hand. His other wrist rested on his knee, the white dressing stark against the charcoal wool. “You could have sent the letter through Eva.” “I did. She hasn’t opened her post.” “That sounds like Eva.” “I wasn’t certain you wanted anything from me.” “I didn’t.” He nodded. She sat opposite him, leaving the first-aid tin open between their chairs. “I wanted you to knock six weeks ago.” His thumb stopped against the mug handle. “I came to Silas’s.” “I know. He told me.” “He told me to leave.” “I know that too.” “I should have asked him to give you a message.” “What message?” Lucien set his tea on the floor. He leaned forward, elbows on his knees, bringing his face level with hers. “That I missed you. That I knew missing you didn’t excuse what I’d done. That the morning you left, I found your hair clip under the passenger seat and spent ten minutes holding a piece of plastic instead of calling you.” Rory looked down at her mug. The tea had deepened to a colour she no longer wanted to drink. “It was a good clip.” “It was blue.” “It cost four pounds.” “I have it.” “Of course you do.” “Would you like it back?” She pressed her lips together. The laugh escaped through her nose. “Yes, Lucien. I’d like my four-pound hair clip back.” He reached into his inside pocket and produced it, wrapped in a folded handkerchief. She stared. “You brought it?” “It’s been in that pocket.” “For forty-three days?” He opened the handkerchief across his knee. One tooth had broken off the clip. She had done that herself, twisting it open while he waited at a red light. Rory picked it up. “This doesn’t fix anything.” “No.” “I’m still angry.” “I can see that.” “You always think you can see everything.” “Not with you.” She looked up. He had moved closer when he unfolded the handkerchief; their knees touched. Neither shifted. “Ask, then.” His gaze went to her mouth, then returned to her eyes. “May I hold your hand?” She put the clip on the first-aid tin. “Not that one. You’ll pull the dressing.” He offered his left hand, palm up, and she laid her fingers across it. His thumb rested against her knuckle without moving. Rory watched the place where their hands met. “You can ask me about the rest now.” Lucien tightened his fingers around hers. “What happened after you left my car?” She drew her chair closer, its legs scraping the floor. “I went upstairs. I took off the dress. Then I called Eva and asked her what a ledger keeper could do with a human name.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences138
tagDensity0.007
leniency0.014
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1962
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1962
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"solitary"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"flickered"
2"solitary"
3"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences140
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences277
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1961
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"In every version, Lucien explained himself until she found the lie."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1205
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien16
Moreau1
Ptolemy6
Rory15
Eva6
Silas2
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
5"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.836
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences100
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1961
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences277
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs225
mean8.72
std9.01
cv1.034
sampleLengths
020
18
21
318
46
57
638
75
819
911
104
1118
122
133
144
153
1614
1735
183
1927
2021
212
222
236
247
258
265
2731
283
292
3015
3114
3241
3310
345
356
364
373
383
3926
403
415
421
437
449
4529
468
473
483
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs222
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences277
ratio0.011
matches
0"Eva’s handwriting ran across the front: LUC—NO COURIERS."
1"One amber eye, one black; the same uneven gaze that had once followed her across Silas’s bar until she forgot which drinks she carried."
2"He had moved closer when he unfolded the handkerchief; their knees touched."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1211
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.018992568125516102
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008257638315441783
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences277
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences277
mean7.08
std5.48
cv0.774
sampleLengths
020
18
21
37
411
56
67
710
87
99
103
119
125
1319
1411
154
167
178
183
192
203
214
223
239
245
2520
262
2713
283
295
3014
318
329
3312
342
352
366
377
388
395
4011
4120
423
432
446
459
4614
4717
484
495
46.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2563176895306859
totalSentences277
uniqueOpeners71
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
ratio0
21.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount66
totalSentences133
matches
0"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
1"His platinum hair had come"
2"She hated noticing."
3"She hated the small impulse"
4"He lifted the envelope."
5"THEY BEND THINGS."
6"He bent to lay the"
7"He pointed up at them"
8"He entered without brushing against"
9"She shut the door, threw"
10"She put Ptolemy down."
11"He stayed there."
12"She filled it beyond the"
13"She took two mugs from"
14"His gaze moved to them."
15"She put one back."
16"His fingers left the coat"
17"She turned before she could"
18"He had no right to"
19"She gripped the counter behind"
ratio0.496
5.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences133
matches
0"The door opened onto Lucien"
1"Rory kept her hand on"
2"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
3"Water gathered at its tip"
4"Lucien looked down, then back"
5"His platinum hair had come"
6"She hated noticing."
7"She hated the small impulse"
8"He lifted the envelope."
9"Rory looked at the red"
10"Eva’s handwriting ran across the"
11"THEY BEND THINGS."
12"He bent to lay the"
13"Ptolemy escaped over his shoe."
14"Rory caught the cat beneath"
15"A man shouted from downstairs,"
16"Rory leaned past Lucien’s shoulder."
17"A delivery sack lay across"
18"He pointed up at them"
19"The owner disappeared beneath the"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.7866%