Run: 2026-10-05-01M46BASBB42JNAS95K8H2SNCM

Run Details

Duration:
1m 37s
Cost:
$0.029424
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory carried the empty delivery bags into the Raven’s Nest with their handles looped around her left wrist. Rain had darkened the shoulders of her jacket. Behind her, the green neon sign threw its colour across the wet pavement and the shoes of a woman sheltering in the doorway. “Are they still serving?” “The kitchen shut at nine. Silas might have crisps.” “I meant drinks.” Rory pushed the door with her hip. “Those he’s got.” The woman followed her inside. Rory heard the click of heels, then a pause as the door swung shut. At the bar, Silas looked up from a ledger. His silver signet ring held down one corner of the page. “You’re dripping on my floor, Carter.” “Invoice Yu-Fei. She sent me out.” Rory lifted the bags onto a stool. Water slid from her cuff over the crescent scar on her wrist. Behind her, the woman drew in a breath. “Rory?” She knew the voice before she turned. The second syllable lifted, as though her name came with a question attached. Six years before, that voice had travelled through thin bedroom walls, shouted over boiling kettles, demanded a second verse from musicians who had begun packing away their instruments. “Nia?” Nia Price stood beside a table beneath a framed map of the Baltic. Her hair, once a red tangle she cut herself over their kitchen bin, stopped in a brown line at her jaw. She wore a charcoal suit beneath an open coat. A pale band marked the place where she had taken off a ring. Rory looked at her shoes. Nia followed her glance. “Yes. I know.” “You used to say heels were a tax on women’s ankles.” “They were. I paid it.” Her mouth made the old shape of a smile, but she dropped it before Rory could return one. Silas closed the ledger. “What can I get you?” “White wine.” “Which?” Nia looked at the bottles behind him. “The cheapest dry one.” “And you, Rory?” “Tap water.” He took down two glasses. His left knee caught as he turned towards the sink; he shifted his weight without touching the counter. Rory moved the delivery bags to the floor. “I thought you were in Manchester.” “I was.” Nia pulled off her coat. The lining caught on her watch, and she worked it free with the precision of someone undoing a knot she could not afford to cut. “And I thought you were in Cardiff.” “I was.” They stood with the empty stool between them. Silas set down the drinks. “Take the table. You’re blocking the till.” “There’s nobody here.” “There’s me.” Rory picked up her water. Nia followed her to the table under the map. They chose opposite chairs, as they had in the university library when each needed the other to prevent her from leaving. Nia placed her phone facedown beside her glass. “You work here?” “I live upstairs. I deliver for a restaurant round the corner.” “The bags.” “The bags.” “What happened to law?” Rory drank. The water tasted of the metal tap. “Nothing. That was the problem.” Nia ran her thumb along the stem of her glass. “Sorry. I’ve been answering that question all day. I shouldn’t have brought it in here.” “What happened to music?” “There it is.” “You started.” “I deserved it.” At nineteen, Nia had kept a violin beneath her bed in a case with one broken catch. She had wrapped a belt around it for the walk to rehearsals. Rory remembered the mark the buckle left on her palm, and Nia insisting that a proper case would cost more than the violin deserved. “Do you still have it?” “The violin? Yes.” “Do you play?” “My downstairs neighbour has a baby.” “That wasn’t what I asked.” “No.” Nia lifted her wine but did not drink. Silas switched off the lamp above the till. A wall light remained on beside an old photograph of three men in summer shirts. Rory had lived upstairs for fourteen months without asking who they were. “What brought you to Soho?” “A client dinner. I left before pudding.” “That sounds serious.” “They were discussing how much they hated lawyers.” “Were you the only one?” “Six of us. We all laughed.” Rory watched Nia’s hand tighten around the glass. “What sort of law?” “Commercial property.” “You used to chain yourself to things to stop commercial property.” “A railing. Once.” “And the gates outside the vice-chancellor’s house.” “That was a bicycle lock. It hardly counted.” “It counted when I had to find bolt cutters.” Nia laughed. The sound came out too large for the room. She pressed her lips together, and Rory felt the impulse to apologise for having caused it. “I’d forgotten the bolt cutters.” “You paid me back in pasta.” “We were both grateful for the pasta.” “You put marmalade in the sauce.” “We’d run out of tomatoes.” “We lived above a shop.” Nia took a mouthful of wine. Some colour returned to her face. “You remember everything.” “No. Bits.” Rory moved her glass away from a groove in the table where it rocked. She remembered sitting on their kitchen floor, eating from the saucepan. Nia had balanced her feet on the cupboard doors because the lino felt cold through her socks. Evan had rung four times. On the fifth, Rory had gone into her bedroom. Nia touched the base of her glass. “I went back to the house.” “Which house?” “Ours. After you left.” “You still had your room.” “I mean after the tenancy ended. About a year later. Someone had painted the front door blue.” “It needed painting.” “I stood across the road like an idiot. A woman came out with a little boy. He had your bedroom.” Rory drew her wet sleeve away from her skin. “How did you know?” “He was at the window. He’d stuck those glow-in-the-dark stars all over the glass.” “I left mine on the ceiling.” “I know.” A bus passed outside, its windows filling the bar with a moving strip of light. Nia watched it disappear. “I took your things to your mother.” “Not all of them.” “What did I miss?” “My blue mug.” “The handle broke.” “You could have sent the pieces.” Nia looked down at the table. “I could have.” Rory had meant it as a joke. She could hear where the joke should have been, a space after the words. “Eva took me to London in her brother’s car. There wasn’t room for much.” “I remember.” “She said we could come back.” “You didn’t.” “No.” Nia’s phone lit up. A name appeared on the screen, then vanished beneath her hand. “Do you need to get that?” “Not yet.” “You can.” “I know.” Rory pulled at the seam inside her cuff. The thread had loosened during her shift, and she wound it around one finger until the tip went white. Nia leaned across the table. “Don’t.” Rory let go. For a moment they both looked at her hand. “You used to do that in seminars.” “I still have fingers to spare.” “Rory.” “What?” Nia sat back. Her coat slid from the chair and she caught it before it reached the floor. “I wrote you an email.” “When?” “After you left.” “I changed my address.” “I sent it to Eva.” “Then I saw it.” “You never answered.” “You asked me whether I was sure.” Nia opened her mouth. Rory waited. “I did.” “You wrote that he’d been under pressure.” “I know what I wrote.” “Then why bring it up?” “Because I kept it.” Rory glanced towards the bar. Silas had taken a crate of clean glasses from beneath the counter. He set each one on the shelf without looking at them. Nia folded her coat across her knees. “I used to open it to see whether I’d remembered it worse than it was.” “And?” “It was worse than I remembered.” The rain tapped against the front window. Rory put both hands around her glass, though the water offered no warmth. “You were there that night.” “Yes.” “You heard him.” “Yes.” “You told me in the morning that you’d had your headphones on.” Nia’s fingers stopped smoothing the coat. “I heard him.” Rory nodded once. She had rehearsed arguments for this admission while walking to lectures, while washing plates, while sitting beside Evan on the bus with his hand gripping her knee. None of those arguments had included the noise of Silas stacking glasses. “Why?” “I thought if I knocked, he’d open the door.” “He would have.” “And I didn’t know what I’d do after that.” “You could have stayed.” “I know.” “You went to breakfast.” Nia pressed her palm against her mouth, then lowered it. “I went to breakfast.” Rory looked at the woman opposite her: the clipped hair, the good coat with a frayed buttonhole, the hands that had once hauled a violin case and now lay flat on folded wool. She wanted some visible remnant of that morning. A stain Nia had failed to wash out. “Did you eat?” Nia’s brow creased. “What?” “At breakfast.” “I don’t remember.” “I remember thinking you couldn’t have heard. Because you’d gone downstairs and made toast.” Nia pushed the wine away. “I made toast.” Rory sat back. Her jacket stuck to the chair. “Eva knocked.” “I know.” “No, you don’t. She knocked, and he opened the door, and she asked him to move his car. She said someone needed the space. There wasn’t anyone. She got him outside.” Nia rubbed the pale strip on her finger. “That sounds like Eva.” “She didn’t know what to do either.” Nia dropped her hand into her lap. “No.” Neither touched a drink. Beyond the window, a man wrestled with an umbrella that had turned inside out. He gave up and carried it by the ribs. Nia’s phone lit again. “Who’s calling?” “My sister.” “Answer her.” “She’ll ask where I am.” “Tell her.” Nia picked up the phone, typed with both thumbs, then put it away. “I told her I was having a drink with you.” “Does she remember me?” “She still calls you the girl who fixed her bike.” “I changed an inner tube.” “She was eleven. You might as well have built it.” Rory reached for her water. This time the glass stayed level. “Are you married?” “Not now.” “Was it the job?” “No. It was him. And me. The job was somewhere to go after we’d stopped speaking.” “Any children?” “No.” Nia glanced towards the old maps on the wall. “Do you?” “No.” “Anyone?” Rory shook her head. Nia nodded, then looked at the delivery bags beneath Rory’s chair. “Are you happy here?” “Some days.” “That’s a better answer than mine.” “I didn’t ask for yours.” “No.” Rory picked at a patch of dried flour on one bag handle. Yu-Fei had packed the last order herself, pressing an extra carton into Rory’s hand for supper. Upstairs, rice and aubergine waited on the kitchen counter. “You can ask for things, Nia. You don’t have to wait until I’ve asked first.” Nia gripped the edge of her coat. “I’d like another glass of wine.” Rory turned towards the bar. “Silas?” He lifted the bottle. “I heard.” “And a packet of crisps.” “Salted?” Rory looked across the table. Nia wiped beneath one eye with her knuckle. “Salt and vinegar. If he’s got them.” “He’s got them.” Silas brought the wine and set the crisps between their glasses. Rory pulled the packet open, splitting it down the seam so they could both reach. Nia took one from the edge. “You used to hate these.” “I still do.” Rory brushed salt from her fingers onto the open packet. “Tell me about Manchester.”
created_at"2026-10-05T15:36:17.01Z" 10/5/2026, 3:36:17 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1948
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
94.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1948
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences115
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences286
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1948
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions83
wordCount1125
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.2
worstName"Nia"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Nia"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas7
Price1
Baltic1
Rory34
Nia36
Evan2
persons
0"Silas"
1"Price"
2"Rory"
3"Nia"
4"Evan"
places
0"Raven"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1948
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences286
matches
0"insisting that a"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs237
mean8.22
std10.16
cv1.236
sampleLengths
049
14
29
33
47
53
639
76
86
919
108
111
1248
131
1456
159
163
1711
185
1918
204
215
222
231
247
254
263
272
2831
296
302
3130
327
332
348
355
367
373
382
3935
408
413
4211
432
442
454
469
475
4810
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs186
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences286
ratio0.003
matches
0"His left knee caught as he turned towards the sink; he shifted his weight without touching the counter."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1126
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.018650088809946713
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences286
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences286
mean6.81
std5.46
cv0.802
sampleLengths
018
18
223
34
49
53
67
73
85
914
109
1111
126
136
147
1512
168
171
187
1913
2028
211
2213
2321
249
2513
265
274
283
2911
305
3118
324
335
342
351
367
374
383
392
405
4118
428
436
442
455
4625
477
482
498
46.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.23776223776223776
totalSentences286
uniqueOpeners68
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences112
matches
0"His silver signet ring held"
1"She knew the voice before"
2"Her hair, once a red"
3"She wore a charcoal suit"
4"Her mouth made the old"
5"He took down two glasses."
6"His left knee caught as"
7"They stood with the empty"
8"They chose opposite chairs, as"
9"She had wrapped a belt"
10"She pressed her lips together,"
11"She remembered sitting on their"
12"She could hear where the"
13"Her coat slid from the"
14"He set each one on"
15"She had rehearsed arguments for"
16"She wanted some visible remnant"
17"Her jacket stuck to the"
18"He gave up and carried"
19"He lifted the bottle."
ratio0.179
0.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences112
matches
0"Rory carried the empty delivery"
1"Rain had darkened the shoulders"
2"Rory pushed the door with"
3"The woman followed her inside."
4"Rory heard the click of"
5"His silver signet ring held"
6"Rory lifted the bags onto"
7"Water slid from her cuff"
8"She knew the voice before"
9"The second syllable lifted, as"
10"Nia Price stood beside a"
11"Her hair, once a red"
12"She wore a charcoal suit"
13"A pale band marked the"
14"Rory looked at her shoes."
15"Nia followed her glance."
16"Her mouth made the old"
17"Silas closed the ledger."
18"Nia looked at the bottles"
19"He took down two glasses."
ratio0.92
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Six years before, that voice had travelled through thin bedroom walls, shouted over boiling kettles, demanded a second verse from musicians who had begun packin…"
1"She had rehearsed arguments for this admission while walking to lectures, while washing plates, while sitting beside Evan on the bus with his hand gripping her …"
2"Rory looked at the woman opposite her: the clipped hair, the good coat with a frayed buttonhole, the hands that had once hauled a violin case and now lay flat o…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.5351%