Run: 2026-10-05-01M46BCRGCNPNRXYSEHDJ6QQFR

Run Details

Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.026118
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The man outside the pharmacy looked straight at Quinn’s unmarked car, dropped his cigarette into the gutter, and ran. She shoved her door against a passing cyclist’s handlebars. “Police. Leave it.” The cyclist swore. Quinn cleared the door and caught sight of the man’s grey jacket between two buses. Rain struck the road hard enough to lift a white haze from the tarmac. He slipped through the stationary traffic with a canvas medical bag clamped beneath one arm. “Tomás Herrera. Stop.” He glanced back. Light from a takeaway window caught his short curls and the silver medallion bouncing against his throat. “Then stop following me.” He mounted the pavement and knocked a sandwich board into her path. Quinn jumped its wooden frame. Her left shoe struck the edge, wrenching her ankle, but she kept her feet. Herrera had given her six hours of closed doors, disconnected numbers and witnesses who stopped speaking when she showed them his photograph. She wasn’t losing him to a lunch menu. She pressed the radio clipped inside her coat. “Suspect on foot, heading north on Camden High Street. Grey jacket, dark trousers, medical bag. Request assistance.” Static scraped through the speaker. “Repeat location.” A bus engine swallowed her answer. She rounded its bonnet and found Herrera turning into a side street beside a shuttered betting shop. “Camden High Street. Northbound. He’s turning east.” Her coat dragged against her knees. She gathered it with one hand and ran. Herrera shoved past two people sharing an umbrella. One stumbled into a bin; the other grabbed his sleeve. He pulled free, leaving a strip of grey fabric in the stranger’s fist. “Oi!” Quinn flashed her warrant card without breaking stride. “Move.” The side street narrowed between brick buildings. Water poured from a broken gutter onto a pile of flattened cardboard. Herrera vaulted it, landed against a parked scooter and caught himself on the handlebars. His bag struck the seat with a clink. Quinn gained three yards. “Put the bag down.” “Not on the pavement.” “Then stop and hand it to me.” He ducked beneath a delivery van’s raised tailgate. Quinn went around it. The extra steps cost her. At the next corner, Herrera caught a railing and swung himself into an alley. A security lamp lit his exposed left forearm. The scar matched the photograph in her file: a pale, uneven line from wrist to elbow. No doubt now. “Tomás. I need to ask you about Daniel Voss.” His foot slid on the wet paving. He struck the wall with his shoulder, then pushed off. “That took you long enough.” Quinn entered the alley. “What did?” “Asking about him instead of his friends.” He kicked a plastic crate behind him. Bottles burst beneath her shoes. She caught the wall, felt brick scrape her palm and drove through the broken glass. Voss had died thirty-six hours earlier in a locked flat. Someone had opened his chest with enough precision to preserve every major vessel, then removed something the pathologist refused to identify over the telephone. Herrera’s number had appeared eleven times in Voss’s call history. The last call had lasted eight seconds. “You were there.” Herrera reached a chain-link gate and rattled its latch. “Get off the street, Detective.” “Hands where I can see them.” He shoved his right hand into his jacket. Quinn stopped and drew her baton. “Take that hand out. Empty.” He produced something white between two fingers. A small disc. Not a blade. He pressed it against the padlock. The lock dropped open. Quinn heard the metal strike the ground. Herrera slipped through the gate and pulled it behind him. She caught the mesh before the latch seated, rammed it open with her shoulder and entered a service yard. No lamps. Rain ticked against corrugated steel. A narrow staircase descended behind a concrete wall at the far end. Herrera stood at its head. For the first time, he wasn’t running. “Don’t come down here.” Quinn advanced with the baton beside her leg. “Step away from the stairs.” He adjusted the bag’s strap. His chest rose beneath the torn jacket. “There’s someone waiting for this.” “Who?” “A boy.” “What’s in the bag?” “What he needs.” “You can explain that at the station.” Herrera looked towards the gate behind her. “Your station can’t help him.” Quinn brought the radio to her mouth. “Suspect contained in a service yard off—” A burst of interference cut through her words. Under it, she heard what sounded like a woman laughing, three short notes repeated without a pause. She released the transmit button. The laughter continued. Herrera’s gaze dropped to the radio. “Turn it off.” “Keep your hands visible.” “They can hear that.” “Who can?” He backed onto the first step. Quinn lunged. Her fingers closed on his jacket above the elbow. He twisted, not against her grip but into it, forcing her wrist across the bag strap. She felt his medallion scrape her knuckles. “Let go.” “On your knees.” He tore his arm free. The damaged sleeve split to the shoulder. Quinn caught a fistful of wet cloth and nothing else. Herrera descended. She followed to the top of the stairs. A weak yellow light shone beneath the street, revealing tiled walls and an iron handrail. Water flowed over the steps in shallow sheets. From below came voices, the scrape of something heavy across stone, a bell. Quinn checked the yard behind her, then took the stairs. At the first landing, a red station sign lay face down against the wall. Someone had chipped the name from the tiles above it. A maintenance door stood open at the bottom, its hinges furred with rust. Herrera passed through. “Police. Stop where you are.” Her voice struck the stairwell walls and returned in pieces. She reached the door and saw a ticket hall. Old barriers divided the floor. Copper cable hung from the ceiling, gathered into thick knots around lamps that burned without shades. Beyond the barriers, stalls crowded the mouth of a passage leading towards the platforms. People moved between them. A woman in a butcher’s apron weighed a handful of teeth on a brass scale. A man held a glass jar against a buyer’s ear; something inside tapped back. Bottles filled with black liquid stood beside bundles of dried roots and watch straps stitched from pale leather. A handwritten board hung over the passage. VEIL MARKET. NO CREDIT. NO RECORDINGS. NO OPEN FLAMES. Quinn stopped inside the maintenance doorway. Herrera crossed the ticket hall towards a turnstile guarded by a broad man in a blue overcoat. He handed over the white disc. The man rubbed it between thumb and forefinger, then nodded towards the passage. “Who’s behind you?” “Police.” Several conversations stopped. The guard looked at Quinn. Herrera put a hand on the turnstile. “Don’t make this worse.” “Leave your bag here, then.” “I wasn’t talking to you.” He pushed through. The guard caught the turnstile before it completed its rotation and locked it with a bar. Quinn approached, keeping three feet between them. “Move aside.” The man’s coat hung open over a knitted waistcoat. Rainwater glistened on the floor around his shoes, though his clothes looked dry. “Token.” She showed her warrant card. “This gives me access.” “Not here.” “Tomás Herrera is wanted for questioning in connection with a death. You’ve just watched him evade me.” The guard leaned forward to inspect the card. He read her name without moving his lips. “Harlow Quinn.” “Open the barrier.” “Bone token.” She looked at his hands. Broad nails. Scarred knuckles. No weapon she could see. “Was that what he gave you?” He closed his fist. “Your card won’t purchase one.” Beyond him, Herrera spoke to a woman carrying a tray of narrow glass tubes. Quinn shifted to keep him in view. He saw her watching and moved towards the left-hand passage. “Tomás.” He halted beside a stall draped in stained linen. “Daniel called you before he died.” Herrera gripped the strap across his chest. “I know.” “What did he say?” “Not here.” “You’ve had the whole of Camden to answer me.” “And you’ve had the whole of Camden to arrest me.” A trader between them lowered the lid of a wooden box. Inside, Quinn glimpsed a row of human fingertips, each wearing a different ring. She tightened her grip on the baton. Herrera followed her glance. “That’s why I told you to stay upstairs.” “Who killed Daniel?” He looked towards the passage behind him. Two figures had stopped beside its entrance. One wore a dark veil. The other held a folded newspaper against his chest. “Put that away.” Quinn didn’t lower the baton. “Answer me.” “You keep waving a weapon around, someone will answer for you.” The guard tapped the turnstile bar. “No drawn weapons past this point.” Quinn looked from him to Herrera. The market had resumed its business, but customers left a clear strip of floor between the stalls and the barrier. No one crossed it. Her radio hissed. “Quinn?” She lifted it. “Underground premises. Access through a service yard. I need officers at the—” “DS Morris.” The voice came from the stall beside the guard. Quinn turned. An old woman sat behind a spread of photographs. She pinned one beneath a finger and slid it across the table. “Morris. You had him.” Quinn saw a police cordon, a white van and her former partner standing beside an open passenger door. The photograph showed the shirt he had worn on the night he died. “Where did you get that?” The woman lifted her finger. “Token first.” Quinn stepped towards the table. The woman drew the photograph back. Herrera’s shoes scraped the floor. “Don’t buy anything.” He moved into the passage. The crowd closed across its entrance, leaving Quinn with a glimpse of his grey jacket between two shoulders. The guard extended his open hand. The white disc lay on his palm, yellowed at its edges. A hole pierced its centre. “Your phone stayed here. Radio too. Baton closed.” Quinn looked at the staircase. Twelve steps to the landing. Another flight to the yard. She could withdraw, find a signal, bring uniforms and force the gate. She looked back at the photograph. The woman covered Morris’s face with her hand. Quinn collapsed the baton against her palm and holstered it. She switched off her radio, then her phone, and set both on the guard’s table. “Those stayed untouched.” He put the disc into her hand. She pressed it against the turnstile’s metal housing where Herrera had pressed his. The bar lifted. Quinn pushed through and entered the market.
created_at"2026-10-05T15:37:21.682Z" 10/5/2026, 3:37:21 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1768
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1768
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences170
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences170
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences243
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1768
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Beyond him, Herrera spoke to a woman carrying a tray of narrow glass tubes."
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1438
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn28
Herrera21
Voss2
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Herrera"
2"Voss"
3"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.526
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences116
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a woman laughing, three short"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.566
wordCount1768
matches
0"not against her grip but into it, forcing her wrist across the bag strap"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences243
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs170
mean10.4
std10.69
cv1.027
sampleLengths
019
19
23
347
43
520
64
712
849
98
1017
115
122
1323
147
1514
1631
171
188
191
2041
214
224
234
247
2531
2624
273
289
2917
305
314
322
337
3427
3544
367
373
389
395
406
418
426
435
447
456
4610
477
4829
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences170
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs247
matches
0"wasn’t losing"
1"wasn’t running"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences243
ratio0.008
matches
0"One stumbled into a bin; the other grabbed his sleeve."
1"A man held a glass jar against a buyer’s ear; something inside tapped back."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1441
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.006939625260235947
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences243
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences243
mean7.28
std4.64
cv0.637
sampleLengths
019
19
23
33
415
514
615
73
83
917
104
1112
125
1314
1422
158
168
1717
185
192
206
2117
227
236
248
258
2610
2713
281
298
301
317
3212
3314
348
354
364
374
387
398
404
415
4214
438
4416
453
469
477
4810
495
50.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.32098765432098764
totalSentences243
uniqueOpeners78
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences161
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences161
matches
0"She shoved her door against"
1"He slipped through the stationary"
2"He glanced back."
3"He mounted the pavement and"
4"Her left shoe struck the"
5"She wasn’t losing him to"
6"She pressed the radio clipped"
7"She rounded its bonnet and"
8"Her coat dragged against her"
9"She gathered it with one"
10"He pulled free, leaving a"
11"His bag struck the seat"
12"He ducked beneath a delivery"
13"His foot slid on the"
14"He struck the wall with"
15"He kicked a plastic crate"
16"She caught the wall, felt"
17"He shoved his right hand"
18"He produced something white between"
19"He pressed it against the"
ratio0.317
19.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount142
totalSentences161
matches
0"The man outside the pharmacy"
1"She shoved her door against"
2"The cyclist swore."
3"Quinn cleared the door and"
4"Rain struck the road hard"
5"He slipped through the stationary"
6"He glanced back."
7"He mounted the pavement and"
8"Quinn jumped its wooden frame."
9"Her left shoe struck the"
10"Herrera had given her six"
11"She wasn’t losing him to"
12"She pressed the radio clipped"
13"Static scraped through the speaker."
14"A bus engine swallowed her"
15"She rounded its bonnet and"
16"Her coat dragged against her"
17"She gathered it with one"
18"Herrera shoved past two people"
19"He pulled free, leaving a"
ratio0.882
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences161
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Herrera had given her six hours of closed doors, disconnected numbers and witnesses who stopped speaking when she showed them his photograph."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.0835%