Run: 2026-10-05-01M46BEV13MFAEC9WS6YT036CV

Run Details

Duration:
1m 28s
Cost:
$0.026194
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened against Lucien’s shoe. Rory looked down at the polished black leather, then up at the man who owned it. Rain marked the shoulders of his charcoal suit. He held his cane in one hand and a paper bag in the other. “Move your foot.” He did. She kept the door open the width of her forearm. Behind her, Ptolemy dragged a claw down the side of a cardboard box. “Eva isn’t here.” “I came to see you.” “That makes one of us.” Lucien lowered the bag. Water dripped from its folded bottom onto the landing. “I brought dinner.” “I work in a restaurant.” “I remember.” “Then you’ll remember I can get dinner without you.” His mouth tightened. Three weeks ago, she would have touched the crease at its corner. She gripped the door instead. From downstairs came the clang of a pan and a burst of laughter. Someone opened the curry house’s back door, letting garlic and hot oil into the stairwell. Lucien stood among those ordinary smells with his ivory-handled cane and his mismatched eyes, a man who could purchase someone’s silence before the kettle boiled. “How did you find me?” “Silas told me you were staying here.” “Did you pay him?” “No.” “Threaten him?” “No.” “See, that should have been an easy question. You’ve made it a list.” He shifted his cane away from the threshold. “You’re right.” Rory had prepared for an explanation. She had prepared for that careful French voice to lay out circumstances, mitigating factors, the reasons she should overlook what he had done. Agreement left her with a door in her hand and no place to put her anger. Ptolemy squeezed past her ankle. “Oh, for—” Lucien crouched before the cat reached the stairs. He caught Ptolemy under the belly, receiving a hiss and a hooked claw through his cuff. “Your reputation precedes you.” “Don’t charm the cat. He has no standards.” She took Ptolemy from him. The tabby braced his paws against her chest, then climbed onto her shoulder with the determination of a mountaineer. Rory stepped back to dislodge him, and Lucien stayed on the landing. Blood welled above his cuff. “You’re dripping on Eva’s floor.” “I haven’t entered Eva’s flat.” “Come in, then. I’d hate to spoil the distinction.” He crossed the threshold. She shut the door and slid all three deadbolts home. Lucien watched the last bolt settle. “Her choice?” “Mine.” He turned away from the locks. Rory released Ptolemy onto a chair piled with journals. He crushed a paper titled FUNERARY PRACTICES OF THE LOWER REALMS and began washing his paw. The flat offered no graceful place for a reunion. Books occupied the sofa. Scrolls filled the fruit bowl. Eva had left a drying rack of underwear beside a diagram of a seven-pointed summoning circle. Rory moved two mugs from the kitchen table and stacked a bundle of notes on a stool. “Put the food there.” Lucien obeyed. “And the cane by the door.” His fingers tightened around the ivory handle. She met his gaze. “Fine.” He propped it against the wall and removed his coat. Beneath it, his left sleeve carried a dark patch near the elbow. Rory pointed. “Ptolemy didn’t reach that high.” “No.” “What happened?” “A disagreement.” “Use nouns, Lucien.” “A collector named Vey wanted to retain a document that belonged to you.” The kettle clicked beneath her hand. She hadn’t decided to make tea. Her hands had remembered guests before the rest of her caught up. “You’ve come here bleeding with another contract.” “No contract.” “Show me.” He drew a folded sheet from his inside pocket and placed it on the table. Rory recognised the heavy cream paper. She had watched him sign its lower edge while she stood outside a locked office, separated from him by glass and a spell she couldn’t break. Her name occupied the first line. Aurora Carter. Below it, the collector’s seal had split into brittle red fragments. She didn’t touch it. “Is it cancelled?” “Yes.” “Don’t give me the answer you think I need.” “Vey surrendered his claim. The registry struck your name. No debt, no service, no lien on your life.” “What did it cost?” His gaze dropped to the paper. Rory folded her arms. “There it is.” “A client list. Two accounts. An introduction I had spent six years earning.” “Any part of you?” “No.” “Your name?” “No.” “Your mother?” His head lifted. “No.” She let her arms fall. The kettle hissed against the silence between them. “You should have asked me before signing it.” “Yes.” “You should have let me into that room.” “Yes.” “And when I told you I didn’t want to see you, that didn’t mean you could arrange my life from a comfortable distance.” “I know.” Rory snatched the kettle off its base before it finished boiling. “You keep agreeing. It’s infuriating.” “What would you like me to dispute?” “That you were a complete bastard.” “I can’t help you with that.” A laugh caught against her teeth. She held it there. Lucien’s shoulders eased a fraction, then stopped when she looked at him. “Don’t.” “I wasn’t going to.” “You were going to look relieved.” “I’m not relieved.” His injured arm hung beside him. Blood reached his knuckles and gathered along the edge of his wedding finger, bare as it had been the night she had kissed his hand in the back of a taxi. Rory opened a drawer. “Sit down.” “Rory—” “Your elbow. Sit.” He moved a stack of journals to the floor and took the chair. She found Eva’s first-aid tin beneath a packet of batteries, then set it beside the ruined contract. “Jacket off.” He slipped it from his shoulders. His shirt clung to the wound. “Can you roll the sleeve?” “I can.” He reached across himself. His breath snagged. “Excellent demonstration.” She took the scissors from the tin. “This shirt costs more than my rent, doesn’t it?” “Not more than London rent.” She cut from cuff to elbow. The cloth parted around a narrow slice in his upper forearm. “No stitches,” she murmured. “I thought the same.” “I wasn’t inviting a medical opinion from a man who used a takeaway bag as camouflage.” He looked at the bag. “The food is getting cold.” “Then it’ll match the reception.” She pressed gauze to his arm. Lucien’s hand closed around the chair seat. Rory reduced the pressure. “Too much?” “No. Your hands are cold.” She remembered his coat around her shoulders outside Silas’ bar. His fingers had lingered at her collar, and she had caught his wrist before he could withdraw. Neither of them had spoken for a full minute. She reached for the antiseptic. “This will sting.” “It did last time.” Last time, he had sat on her bed while she cleaned a cut beneath his ribs. She had teased him about his collection of unsuitable hobbies. He had caught her chin between two fingers and asked whether she counted herself among them. She poured too much antiseptic onto the gauze. Lucien inhaled through his nose. “Sorry.” “You needn’t—” “I can apologise for hurting you without forgiving you. Hold still.” He did. She cleaned the wound, laid a dressing over it, and wound the bandage around his arm. His skin warmed her fingertips. At his wrist, his pulse beat against the crescent scar on hers. “Why didn’t you call?” she asked. “You told me not to.” “You’ve developed an impressive talent for following the instructions that let you avoid a conversation.” He watched her secure the bandage. “I wrote six messages.” “And?” “Every one asked you to make me feel better.” Her fingers stopped. Lucien rested his free hand on the table, palm open. “The first said I had no choice. That wasn’t true. The next explained why I made the choice. You knew why. The others—” “What?” “Asked whether you missed me.” The flat seemed to shrink around the table. Rory put the tape back in the tin. “I did.” He didn’t reach for her. “That wasn’t permission.” “I understood.” “I missed you while I was furious with you. I’d see something stupid on a delivery—a man carrying a chandelier on the bus—and I’d take out my phone.” She pushed the scissors into their slot. “Then I’d remember I couldn’t trust you with anything more important than a joke.” Lucien rubbed his thumb against the edge of the table. A splinter caught his skin. “I don’t know how to repair that tonight.” “You don’t.” He nodded. She had wanted him to argue. Some part of her had wanted a grand enough mistake to make the decision simple. Instead, he sat in Eva’s kitchen with one ruined sleeve and let her words land. Rory pulled the paper towards her. “Is there anything here that will ignite if I tear it?” “No.” “Anything that screams?” “No.” She ripped it across her name. The sound made Ptolemy lift his head. She tore the halves again, then dropped the pieces into the bin beneath the sink. When she turned, Lucien had opened the takeaway bag. Two cartons sat between them. “You still like the aubergine?” “Yes.” “I didn’t know whether that had changed.” “My dinner preferences weren’t involved.” He slid a carton towards her. She took it, along with the fork he offered, and leaned against the counter. Lucien remained seated. “Did you eat?” she asked. “Not yet.” “Then eat. I’m not having you faint into Eva’s research.” He opened the second carton. For a few minutes they ate to the scrape of forks and the thump of someone moving chairs downstairs. His knee brushed hers when she reached past him for salt. He drew it back. Rory set the salt down. “You can touch me without making a decision on my behalf.” His fork stopped halfway to the carton. “I wanted to be certain.” “Ask.” He placed the fork beside his food. “May I hold your hand?” She looked at his open palm. She knew the small callus left by his cane, the neat half-moons of his nails. She also knew how that hand had looked through glass, signing away her right to choose. “Not because you’ve brought my freedom back like a forgotten umbrella.” “No.” “And not because I patched you up.” “No.” She put her hand in his. He closed his fingers around hers without drawing her closer. The chair creaked as she leaned against the table beside him. “Those six messages,” she asked. “Did you keep them?” “Yes.” “Show me the last one.” Lucien took his phone from his pocket with his bandaged hand. He unlocked it and opened a draft, then laid the screen beside their joined hands. Rory bent to read.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences123
tagDensity0.049
leniency0.098
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1788
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1788
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"charm"
count1
2
word"comfortable"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"charm"
2"comfortable"
3"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences133
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences251
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1786
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1166
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien15
Ptolemy6
French1
Carter1
Eva3
Rory15
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Carter"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.857
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1786
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences251
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs197
mean9.07
std10.8
cv1.191
sampleLengths
06
138
23
32
423
53
65
75
813
93
105
112
129
1320
1453
155
167
174
181
192
201
2113
228
232
2445
255
262
2724
284
298
3036
315
325
335
349
3514
366
372
381
396
4025
4151
424
432
446
457
464
471
4822
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs203
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences251
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount894
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.0145413870246085
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011185682326621924
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences251
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences251
mean7.12
std5.58
cv0.784
sampleLengths
06
116
28
314
43
52
610
713
83
95
105
114
129
133
145
152
169
173
1812
195
2013
2115
2225
235
247
254
261
272
281
2913
308
312
326
3323
3416
355
362
378
3816
394
408
415
4219
4312
445
455
465
479
484
4910
47.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.29880478087649404
totalSentences251
uniqueOpeners75
27.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences123
matches
0"Instead, he sat in Eva’s"
ratio0.008
11.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount64
totalSentences123
matches
0"He held his cane in"
1"She kept the door open"
2"His mouth tightened."
3"She gripped the door instead."
4"He shifted his cane away"
5"She had prepared for that"
6"He caught Ptolemy under the"
7"She took Ptolemy from him."
8"He crossed the threshold."
9"She shut the door and"
10"He turned away from the"
11"He crushed a paper titled"
12"His fingers tightened around the"
13"She met his gaze."
14"He propped it against the"
15"She hadn’t decided to make"
16"Her hands had remembered guests"
17"He drew a folded sheet"
18"She had watched him sign"
19"Her name occupied the first"
ratio0.52
8.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount111
totalSentences123
matches
0"The door opened against Lucien’s"
1"Rory looked down at the"
2"He held his cane in"
3"She kept the door open"
4"Lucien lowered the bag."
5"Water dripped from its folded"
6"His mouth tightened."
7"She gripped the door instead."
8"Someone opened the curry house’s"
9"Lucien stood among those ordinary"
10"He shifted his cane away"
11"Rory had prepared for an"
12"She had prepared for that"
13"Agreement left her with a"
14"Ptolemy squeezed past her ankle."
15"Lucien crouched before the cat"
16"He caught Ptolemy under the"
17"She took Ptolemy from him."
18"The tabby braced his paws"
19"Rory stepped back to dislodge"
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien stood among those ordinary smells with his ivory-handled cane and his mismatched eyes, a man who could purchase someone’s silence before the kettle boile…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences123
tagDensity0.033
leniency0.065
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.016
85.4771%