Run: 2026-10-05-01M46BF5CX4KNWQKMKM42RHHAD

Run Details

Duration:
1m 31s
Cost:
$0.025348
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The man outside the chemist spotted Quinn’s warrant card before she cleared the kerb. He shoved his phone into his coat and ran. “Tomás Herrera. Police. Stop.” A bus swept between them, dragging brown water over her trousers. Quinn caught the rear handrail, held herself clear of the wheels, then dropped back onto the road. Herrera had reached the corner. His medical bag struck his hip with each stride. She had watched him carry that bag out of The Raven’s Nest two hours earlier, beneath the green neon that stained his face. In Soho, he had checked shop windows for reflections. Here in Camden, he had stopped checking. “Control, Quinn. Suspect running north from the chemist on Camden High Street. Dark coat, grey medical bag.” Her earpiece crackled. “Units approaching. Do not pursue into premises without support.” Herrera slipped between two people sheltering beneath a restaurant awning. Quinn followed, knocked a chair against a table and caught her balance on the wet brickwork. “Which premises?” No answer came through the static. Ahead, Herrera pulled something from his pocket. Not a weapon. A small white piece, hooked at one end, which he closed inside his fist. Quinn put on speed. A delivery cyclist cut across his path. Herrera caught the handlebars before they struck him, swung the front wheel aside and released it. “Police behind me. Get off the road.” The cyclist planted one foot in the gutter. “What?” Quinn passed close enough to smell hot oil from the takeaway box. “Stay there.” Herrera turned into a narrow service lane. The traffic noise thinned behind its mouth, leaving rain drumming on extractor hoods and the slap of their shoes through puddles. He reached a locked mesh gate and climbed. Quinn caught the back of his coat. For a second his weight hung from her hand. His collar dragged down, exposing a silver medallion on a chain. Saint Christopher. His left sleeve tore at the elbow, revealing the long scar she had seen in his personnel photograph. “Herrera. Put your feet down.” He twisted towards her, one hand clenched around the wire. “There’s a child waiting for what’s in this bag.” “Then tell me where.” “You won’t get through the door.” He shrugged out of the coat. The empty cloth dropped into Quinn’s hands. Herrera swung a leg over the gate, fell onto the other side and struck the ground on one knee. He gripped the bag against his chest before he got up. Quinn discarded the coat. “Control, he’s entered a service passage east of the High Street. I need officers at both ends.” “Quinn, your transmission is breaking up. Confirm—” She hooked her boot into the mesh and hauled herself up. The top wire caught her palm. She felt it open the skin, then swung over and landed hard enough to jar her teeth. Herrera had gained twenty yards. He glanced back. “You cut yourself?” “Stop and have a look.” “Keep pressure on it.” He turned left. She pressed her palm against her jacket as she ran. Rain thinned the blood between her fingers. The passage opened into a yard behind shuttered shops. A skip blocked half the exit. Herrera climbed across sacks of plaster and a broken door, his bag held high. Quinn took the narrow gap beside it and scraped her shoulder along corrugated metal. On the next street, headlights washed over them. An unmarked car braked across Herrera’s path. He planted a hand on its bonnet and changed direction before the passenger door opened. “Police!” A constable stepped out with his baton still clipped to his vest. Herrera ducked beneath his arm. Quinn reached the car. “Stay with him!” The constable ran three strides, slipped on a painted parking bay and hit one knee. Quinn passed him. Herrera had lost the rhythm of his stride. He favoured the knee he had landed on behind the gate. She could close the gap if he kept to open pavement. He didn’t. He crossed beneath a railway bridge, where water fell through the brickwork in thick ropes, and pushed through a narrow door set between a boarded shop and a wall plastered with gig posters. Quinn reached it before it shut. The edge struck her shoulder. She forced her boot into the gap. “Herrera.” His face appeared on the other side. Rain clung to his short curls. He braced the door with his forearm, and she could see the old knife scar whiten under the pressure. “Look in the bag. Then let me go.” “Open the door.” “Move your hand. I’m opening it.” She stepped back, keeping her boot against the threshold. He pulled the door wide. A stairway dropped beneath a bare bulb. Beyond the first landing, darkness swallowed the steps. Warm air rose past her face, carrying bleach, hot metal and the sour smell of crowded bodies. Herrera backed down three steps and unzipped his bag. Glass vials lay in fitted foam beside a blood-pressure cuff, gauze and a compact oxygen cylinder. At the bottom sat a sealed evidence pouch. Quinn recognised the red tape before she read the number. “Put that down.” Herrera followed her gaze. “This?” “That pouch came from a police property store.” “I bought it.” “From whom?” “Someone who charged more because of the seal.” “Put the bag on the step.” He zipped it shut. “No.” Quinn took out her handcuffs. Herrera’s eyes moved from the cuffs to her bleeding palm. “If I go with you, the child gets nothing. He’s been bleeding since six. His mother brought him to me because a hospital would call someone.” “A hospital would treat him.” “Mine didn’t.” He retreated another step. She knew what his former employer had recorded: unauthorised treatment, missing compounds, patients entered under false names. His licence had gone before any prosecution reached court. “What did you give them?” “What they needed.” “That’s not an answer.” “It was when they could breathe again.” A bell rang below them. One clear strike. Herrera looked down the stairwell. Quinn advanced. He turned and ran. “Stop!” Her voice battered the tiled walls. She followed him down past a landing where someone had painted over an old station name. Water leaked through the ceiling and ran into a drain clogged with cigarette ends. The street door slammed above her. She stopped long enough to key her radio. “Underground premises. Entrance beneath the railway bridge, black door beside boarded retail frontage. Suspect has stolen police evidence.” Static scraped her ear. “Control?” A fragment of speech broke through. “—stay—” She checked her phone. No signal. Below, Herrera’s footsteps stopped. Quinn descended with one hand against the wall. Her worn leather watch caught on a broken tile. She freed it and kept going, counting the turns. Two flights. One landing. A corridor sloping towards an iron gate. A man sat beside the gate beneath a lamp with a red glass shade. He wore a butcher’s apron over a suit. A shallow dish rested on his knees. Herrera pressed the white object into his hand. The man inspected it, scraped its hooked end against his thumbnail and dropped it into the dish. Quinn reached the bottom step. “Don’t let him through.” The man pushed the gate open. Herrera slipped past him. Quinn closed the distance, but the gate struck its frame before she reached it. She seized a bar. The metal burned cold against her cut. Beyond it, light stretched along a disused platform. Stalls stood between tiled pillars. Copper pans hung above one counter; stoppered bottles filled another, each wrapped in wire. A woman weighed black powder on a brass scale. Beside her, a customer lifted his sleeve and paid with a narrow strip cut from his own shadow. Quinn tightened her grip on the bar. The strip moved between the woman’s fingers. The customer’s arm cast no shadow beneath the stall lamp. Herrera stood several yards inside, speaking to a girl in a plastic rain poncho. She took his hand and pulled him towards a curtained alcove. “Police.” Quinn held up her warrant card. “Open this gate.” The seated man glanced at the photograph. “Bone token.” “I’m investigating a crime.” “Bone token.” “What is this place?” He lifted the dish. Pale fragments clicked against one another. “Veil Market.” A vendor looked up at the name. Another pulled a cloth over his wares. Quinn searched for Herrera between the pillars. “Does everyone here buy stolen evidence?” The man lowered the dish. “Some buy answers.” “Then give me one.” “You’ve got no token.” Inside the gate, Herrera stopped at the curtain. The girl disappeared through it, leaving him with one hand on the fabric. “Quinn. Go back up. Bring people if you have to.” “Bring the pouch here.” “I need what’s inside it.” “What’s inside it belonged to my partner.” His hand dropped. Quinn had spent three years looking at photographs from Morris’s last scene. Broken tiles. Water on the floor. A sealed pouch holding six white fragments recovered beside his body. Nobody had explained the fragments. Nobody had explained why the property log showed them signed out yesterday by a detective dead for three years. Herrera looked at the gatekeeper. “She’s with me.” “One token. One entry.” “Take my return.” The gatekeeper reached into the dish and lifted Herrera’s hooked piece. “You understood that?” “I understood. Open it.” The man stood. He turned a key in the lock, then held the gate a hand’s width from its frame. Quinn looked back along the corridor. The stairs lay beyond two turns. Her radio gave her nothing. The constable had seen the chase but not the door. She had no warrant for this place, no working contact with the street, and no account of what she had watched the woman cut from a shadow. Herrera lifted the curtain. A child coughed behind it, a wet, tearing sound. “Come or don’t. I have to work.” Quinn unclipped her torch and wedged it into a broken bracket beside the gate, its beam pointing back towards the stairs. She pulled a notebook from her pocket, tore out a page and wrote the time, the entrance and her collar number. She fixed it beneath the torch clip. Then she pushed the gate wide enough to pass. “Keep that pouch where I can see it.” Herrera set his medical bag on the floor beside the curtain. Quinn stepped onto the platform.
created_at"2026-10-05T15:38:41.503Z" 10/5/2026, 3:38:41 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.016
leniency0.031
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1733
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1733
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"charged"
2"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences158
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences221
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1733
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
61.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1407
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.78
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn25
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Camden1
Herrera25
Christopher1
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Herrera"
3"Christopher"
4"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Camden"
globalScore0.612
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences113
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1733
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences221
matches
0"carry that bag"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs156
mean11.11
std11.47
cv1.033
sampleLengths
014
19
24
342
439
517
63
79
826
92
106
1124
124
1323
147
158
161
1712
182
1928
208
217
2240
235
2410
259
264
276
286
2937
304
3117
327
3334
345
353
363
375
384
393
4017
4143
428
4322
441
4512
465
474
483
4918
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs244
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences221
ratio0.005
matches
0"Copper pans hung above one counter; stoppered bottles filled another, each wrapped in wire."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1408
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.013494318181818182
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences221
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences221
mean7.84
std5.34
cv0.682
sampleLengths
014
19
24
311
417
55
69
723
89
97
1017
113
129
1310
1416
152
166
177
183
1914
204
217
2216
237
248
251
2612
272
287
2921
308
317
329
3311
342
3518
365
3710
389
394
406
416
427
4319
4411
454
4617
477
4811
496
48.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3076923076923077
totalSentences221
uniqueOpeners68
22.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences151
matches
0"Then she pushed the gate"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences151
matches
0"He shoved his phone into"
1"His medical bag struck his"
2"She had watched him carry"
3"Her earpiece crackled."
4"He reached a locked mesh"
5"His collar dragged down, exposing"
6"His left sleeve tore at"
7"He twisted towards her, one"
8"He shrugged out of the"
9"He gripped the bag against"
10"She hooked her boot into"
11"She felt it open the"
12"He glanced back."
13"He turned left."
14"She pressed her palm against"
15"He planted a hand on"
16"He favoured the knee he"
17"She could close the gap"
18"He crossed beneath a railway"
19"She forced her boot into"
ratio0.298
12.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount135
totalSentences151
matches
0"The man outside the chemist"
1"He shoved his phone into"
2"A bus swept between them,"
3"Quinn caught the rear handrail,"
4"Herrera had reached the corner."
5"His medical bag struck his"
6"She had watched him carry"
7"Here in Camden, he had"
8"Her earpiece crackled."
9"Herrera slipped between two people"
10"Quinn followed, knocked a chair"
11"A small white piece, hooked"
12"Quinn put on speed."
13"A delivery cyclist cut across"
14"Herrera caught the handlebars before"
15"The cyclist planted one foot"
16"Quinn passed close enough to"
17"Herrera turned into a narrow"
18"The traffic noise thinned behind"
19"He reached a locked mesh"
ratio0.894
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The traffic noise thinned behind its mouth, leaving rain drumming on extractor hoods and the slap of their shoes through puddles."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.8708%