Run: 2026-10-05-01M46BGP309A0GQKRM7K5MQMCE

Run Details

Duration:
1m 40s
Cost:
$0.029334
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory had spread the delivery receipts across the bar in four rows when a woman put a wet umbrella down on the last one. “Sorry. I thought that was rubbish.” “It’s most of my wages.” The woman lifted the umbrella. Water had softened the thermal paper, turning the printed total into a grey thumbprint. Rory drew the receipt towards her and flattened it against the wood. “Seventeen pounds forty, if you’re offering to replace it.” “Rory?” She looked up. The woman wore a charcoal coat with a collar that stood clear of her neck. Her black hair stopped at her jaw, cut to expose the small gold rings in her ears. Rory recognised the left ear first: the notch near the top, where a safety pin had caught during a party in their first year. “Nia?” Nia’s mouth opened, then drew into a smile that seemed to require permission from the rest of her face. “God. Your hair.” “You’ve got less of yours.” “I paid a hundred and twenty pounds for that observation.” Rory laughed. The sound came out too loud in the nearly empty bar. Behind Nia, rain gathered on the front window beneath the green neon lettering. A man in a delivery jacket stood outside, turning his phone under the shelter of his sleeve. Rory had done the same thing twenty minutes earlier. She still wore the Golden Empress fleece, its embroidered dragon losing threads along one wing. Nia looked at it. “You work here?” “No. Silas tolerates me here.” At the far end of the counter, Silas raised his head from a ledger. His silver signet ring held down a curling page. “Within limits.” “This is Nia. We were at university together.” “Then you’ve earned a drink.” Nia glanced towards the bottles, then at the clock above them. “White wine, please.” “Anything more specific?” “Cold.” Silas closed the ledger. His left leg stiffened as he crossed behind the bar, and Nia moved her bag from the stool beside Rory without being asked. Rory watched her hang it from the brass hook beneath the counter. The bag had corners. Nia’s old bags had been canvas sacks that carried books, loose tobacco, oranges, a fork stolen from a café. Once, a wet swimming costume had stayed in one for a week. “What are you doing in Soho?” “Meeting. I came out at the wrong end of the street and it started raining.” “You used to object to umbrellas.” “I used to object to quite a lot.” Silas set down her glass. “And for you, Rory?” “Tea, if there’s any left.” “There’s a kettle. We remain a thriving concern.” He took the chipped mug from beneath the counter. Rory had broken its handle in November and kept using it, her palm cupped around the place where the glaze had roughened. Nia unbuttoned her coat but did not take it off. “How long have you been in London?” “Three years.” “Three?” “Nearly four.” “I thought you were still in Cardiff.” Rory moved one receipt into another row. “I wasn’t.” Outside, the delivery rider gave up on his phone and walked his bicycle into the rain. “I messaged you.” “I changed numbers.” “Facebook.” “I stopped using it.” “Email.” Rory pressed the wet receipt with her thumbnail. A small crescent scar on her wrist blanched against the edge of the counter. “I saw the emails.” Nia drank some wine. She set the glass down in the centre of its paper coaster, then turned it until the printed raven faced away from her. “Right.” Silas brought the tea. He placed it beside Rory’s elbow and carried his ledger to a table beneath an old map of the Thames. Neither woman watched him go. “How’s your mum?” Rory asked. “She’s in Penarth now.” “She left the house?” “Last year.” “What happened to the wall?” “Which wall?” “The kitchen. All the pencil marks.” Nia’s hand stopped on the glass stem. “She painted over them before the viewing.” Rory remembered standing with her back against that wall while Nia’s mother held a cereal box level with her head. Nia had insisted that everyone needed a mark, even visitors. Beside Rory’s height, she had written CARTER, FULLY GROWN, DO NOT WATER. “She could have kept that bit.” “The estate agent wanted neutral.” Nia pulled a packet of tissues from her bag and wiped rain from the umbrella handle. She folded the used tissue into a square. “You look the same.” “No, I don’t.” “Your face does.” “That’s worse.” “I didn’t mean—” “I know.” Rory took off the fleece. Her T-shirt caught at the waistband of her jeans, and she tugged it down. She regretted taking the fleece off at all. Nia glanced at the receipts again. “Do you still write?” “Shopping lists.” “You used to fill whole notebooks.” “Most of it was complaints.” “No. There was that piece about the woman who cleaned the lecture theatres.” “Mrs Price.” “You gave her all the best lines.” “She had them.” “You never let me read the ending.” “I didn’t write one.” Nia smiled into her glass. “That sounds like you.” Rory gathered the dry receipts and tapped their edges against the counter. “What was your meeting?” “A client.” “You qualified, then.” “Four years ago.” “I knew you would.” Nia looked at her. “You told me I’d walk out during the first week of the training contract.” “You threatened to.” “I threatened to do a lot of things.” The coat slipped open as she reached for her wine. Beneath it she wore a cream blouse with narrow cuffs. No ink on her fingers. No bitten skin beside her nails. Rory remembered Nia sitting cross-legged on a library table, boots on a stack of property law textbooks, arguing that a house should stop belonging to someone after they left it empty for a year. Rory had taken the books from beneath her boots. She had worried about mud, about fines, about any mark that might attach itself to her name. “What sort of law?” “Property. Some development work.” “Empty houses?” “Among other things.” Nia lifted her chin. “You can ask without doing that.” “Doing what?” “Making it a test.” Rory set the receipts down. “I wasn’t.” “You had the same face in seminars. Just before you asked someone whether they understood their own argument.” “That was usually you.” “Yes.” Nia’s smile held for a moment, then disappeared. “I’m good at it, Rory.” “I didn’t say you weren’t.” “I know what I used to say. I remember all of it. You don’t have to fetch it out.” A taxi stopped beyond the window. Its red tail lights lay across the wet pavement. The passenger stayed inside while the driver got out to open the boot. Rory wrapped both hands around her mug. “My dad would be delighted with you.” “Is he still practising?” “Yes.” “And you?” “I deliver food.” “That wasn’t what I—” “It was a fair question.” Nia ran one finger down the side of her glass, clearing a stripe through the condensation. “I heard you left the course.” “From who?” “Bethan. Years ago.” “I finished the year. I just didn’t come back.” “Because of Evan?” Rory’s tea touched her lip. She lowered it without drinking. Nia looked towards Silas’s table, then back. “I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have put it like that.” “How should you have put it?” “I don’t know.” “You always used to know.” “Yes. Well.” Nia reached for her bag, unfastened it, then left her hand inside without taking anything out. “You rang me once. After I moved to Bristol.” Rory looked at the old photograph hanging above the bottles: four men outside a shop, all their hats casting the same dark shape over their eyes. “I don’t remember.” “At half past eleven.” “A lot of people rang you at half past eleven.” “You asked if you could come for the weekend.” Rory remembered the bathroom tile against her bare feet. She remembered lowering her voice because Evan had turned down the television in the next room. “You had something on.” “An assessment. On the Monday.” “It mattered.” “I told you to come the following week.” “Yes.” “You didn’t.” “No.” Nia took her hand out of the bag. “I used to think you were angry because I’d chosen an exam over you.” “Were you?” “What?” “Thinking that. Or hoping that was all it was.” Nia looked down. Her wine had left a pale ring inside the bowl. “I could have asked why you wanted to come.” Rory loosened her grip on the mug. The heat had reddened her palms. “I could have told you.” “You said everything was fine.” “I’d practised.” For a while the only voices came from the table near the door. Two men argued over which station they needed. One kept enlarging a map on his phone; the other pointed down a street the screen did not show. Nia took off her coat. She folded it over the empty stool rather than hanging it up. “I got your Christmas card.” “Which one?” “The one with the robin. You’d drawn glasses on it.” “I sent that to everyone.” “You wrote that you were glad I’d got out.” “I was.” “I read it as a complaint.” Rory looked at her. “I had a job, a room without mould, people who knew what a pension was. I thought you were taking the piss.” “The robin was taking the piss.” Nia gave a short laugh and rubbed beneath one eye with the side of her finger, careful not to disturb the rest of her face. “I kept it for ages.” “I thought you’d thrown it out.” “Why?” “You never answered.” “No.” Rory pulled the ruined receipt away from the others. The ink had spread beyond recovery. “Silas, have you got a pen?” He looked up from his ledger and reached into his jacket. When she went to fetch it, he held it out by the barrel. “Your usual one’s beside the till.” “I know.” She returned to her stool. Nia had taken a clean napkin from the holder and put it where the wet receipt had been. “What do you need to write?” “The amount. Before I forget.” “Seventeen forty.” “You remembered.” “It was an expensive introduction.” Rory wrote the figure at the top of the napkin, then the restaurant’s name. Nia watched her form the letters. “You still do your capital E like that.” “Like what?” “As if it’s got somewhere to sit.” Rory looked down at the long bottom stroke. Nia drew the napkin towards herself. “Can I?” Rory passed her the pen. Nia wrote a number beneath the amount, crossed out one digit, and wrote the whole thing again on a fresh line. “Personal mobile. Not work.” “I’ve still got the old one somewhere.” “That one belonged to the firm.” Rory took the napkin back. Nia’s handwriting had lost its loops, but she still pressed hard enough to leave marks in the paper beneath. Rory traced the indentation with her thumb. “Do you still have the card?” “No.” Nia turned the pen between her fingers. “I threw it out when I moved.” “The robin?” “The whole thing.” Rory nodded and placed the napkin beneath her mug, leaving the number clear of the base. Nia looked at the blank space below it. “I never knew what to write back.” “You could have put that.” “I know that now.” Rory reached for the pen. Nia handed it over, and Rory wrote her number underneath.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences159
tagDensity0.013
leniency0.025
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1915
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
97.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1915
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences263
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1915
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
2.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions77
wordCount1150
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.96
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Nia33
Golden1
Empress1
Silas5
Rory34
November1
Thames1
Evan1
persons
0"Nia"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
places
0"November"
1"Thames"
globalScore0.022
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smile that seemed to require permission from the rest of her face"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1915
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences263
matches
0"insisted that everyone"
1"arguing that a"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs219
mean8.74
std9.91
cv1.133
sampleLengths
024
16
25
331
49
51
63
756
81
919
103
115
1210
1313
1454
154
163
175
1823
192
208
215
2211
233
243
251
2627
2747
286
2915
306
318
325
334
345
358
3631
3710
387
392
401
412
427
437
442
4516
463
473
481
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs185
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences263
ratio0.004
matches
0"One kept enlarging a map on his phone; the other pointed down a street the screen did not show."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1151
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.01998262380538662
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0026064291920069507
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences263
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences263
mean7.28
std5.63
cv0.773
sampleLengths
024
16
25
35
414
512
69
71
83
915
1017
1124
121
1319
143
155
1610
172
1811
1913
2017
219
2215
234
243
255
2614
279
282
298
305
3111
323
333
341
354
3623
3712
384
3919
4012
416
4215
436
448
455
464
475
488
499
45.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.2813688212927757
totalSentences263
uniqueOpeners74
32.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"Once, a wet swimming costume"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences104
matches
0"She looked up."
1"Her black hair stopped at"
2"She still wore the Golden"
3"His silver signet ring held"
4"His left leg stiffened as"
5"He took the chipped mug"
6"She set the glass down"
7"He placed it beside Rory’s"
8"She folded the used tissue"
9"Her T-shirt caught at the"
10"She regretted taking the fleece"
11"She had worried about mud,"
12"Its red tail lights lay"
13"She lowered it without drinking."
14"She remembered lowering her voice"
15"Her wine had left a"
16"She folded it over the"
17"He looked up from his"
18"She returned to her stool."
ratio0.183
17.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences104
matches
0"Rory had spread the delivery"
1"The woman lifted the umbrella."
2"Water had softened the thermal"
3"Rory drew the receipt towards"
4"She looked up."
5"The woman wore a charcoal"
6"Her black hair stopped at"
7"Rory recognised the left ear"
8"Nia’s mouth opened, then drew"
9"The sound came out too"
10"A man in a delivery"
11"Rory had done the same"
12"She still wore the Golden"
13"Nia looked at it."
14"His silver signet ring held"
15"Nia glanced towards the bottles,"
16"Silas closed the ledger."
17"His left leg stiffened as"
18"Rory watched her hang it"
19"The bag had corners."
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Nia’s old bags had been canvas sacks that carried books, loose tobacco, oranges, a fork stolen from a café."
1"She had worried about mud, about fines, about any mark that might attach itself to her name."
2"Rory looked at the old photograph hanging above the bottles: four men outside a shop, all their hats casting the same dark shape over their eyes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences159
tagDensity0.006
leniency0.013
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.4788%