Run: 2026-10-05-01M46BMW9YVSF0ZBPHS05T5ZTP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 21s
Cost:
$0.026044
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened against the toe of Lucien Moreau’s polished shoe. Rory kept her hand on the third deadbolt. “No.” Lucien withdrew his foot. Rain silvered the shoulders of his charcoal suit and gathered along the ivory handle of his cane. His platinum hair had lost its smooth arrangement; a strand lay across his forehead. “Eva?” “Edinburgh.” His amber eye moved to the strip of light beside her. The black one stayed on her face. “She told me Thursday.” “It is Thursday.” “Next Thursday.” “Take it up with her.” Rory pushed the door. He caught its edge, then flinched and let go. Blood marked the paint beneath his fingers. She looked at his hand. His sleeve covered most of it, but a dark line ran from his cuff to his smallest finger. “What happened?” “A disagreement.” “Did the other person bring a knife to the discussion?” “A bottle.” “And you brought your charming personality?” “I see you kept your copy.” She should have shut the door. She had spent six weeks rehearsing that movement: a flat palm against wood, three bolts, no conversation through the letterbox. Instead, she looked down the narrow staircase. Curry-house heat rose through the stairwell, carrying cumin, fried onions and the clatter of dishes. Lucien stood between her and the landing rail with one shoulder held at an angle she recognised from delivery cyclists who insisted they hadn’t broken anything. “Are you bleeding anywhere else?” “No.” “Is that an honest no or one of yours?” He loosened his grip on the cane. “My hand. My forearm. Nothing else.” Rory stepped back. “Come in before Mrs Rahman sees you. She’ll get the good towels.” He crossed the threshold without brushing against her. That small courtesy irritated her more than contact would have. She slid the deadbolts home. Ptolemy emerged from beneath a chair, inspected Lucien’s wet trouser leg, then pressed his striped head against it. “Traitor.” The cat ignored her. Lucien looked around Eva’s flat. Books occupied the sofa, scrolls stood in a chipped umbrella holder, and research notes covered the table beneath three mugs and a bowl of keys. Rory had cleared a rectangle of floor for her overnight bag. “You’re staying here?” “Her boiler leaked. Someone had to let the plumber in and stop Ptolemy eating the invoices.” “How long?” She held out her hand. “Coat.” He started to shrug it off. His jaw tightened. “Stop.” Rory moved behind him and eased the wet wool down his uninjured arm first. The lining caught at his other wrist. He drew a breath through his teeth. “Bottle?” “Broken bottle.” “That distinction would have helped on the doorstep.” Blood had soaked the shirt beneath his jacket. Rory hung the coat over the bathroom door and fetched Eva’s first-aid box from under the sink. “Kitchen.” “There’s no room.” “There’s a stool. Move the Latin dictionaries.” “They’re Greek.” “Bleed in Greek, then.” He stacked the books on the floor and sat. His cane leaned against the cupboard beside his knee. Rory set scissors, gauze and antiseptic on the counter. She reached for his cuff, then stopped. “Can you undo that?” He worked the button with his left hand. It slipped twice. The last time she had unbuttoned his shirt, he had stood in her doorway above Silas’ bar, one hand cupping the back of her neck. She had laughed against his mouth because he’d knocked a takeaway menu off the wall. Before morning, she had found the folded receipt in his jacket. Evan’s name. Lucien’s signature. A sum she could not have paid with a year of deliveries. She took the scissors. “I’ll cut it.” “It’s a good shirt.” “It’s having a poor evening.” He held still while she slit the sleeve from wrist to elbow. A shallow cut ran along his forearm. The wound across his palm gaped when he moved his fingers. Rory put down the scissors. “That needs stitches.” “It needs pressure.” “It needs someone who knows what they’re doing.” “I’ve had worse.” “So have badly maintained staircases. Hold this.” She pressed folded gauze into his palm. He obeyed, his long fingers closing around it. “Why did you come here?” “Eva has something that closes wounds.” “Of course she does.” “Blue tin. Red writing.” Rory glanced at the shelves over the kettle. Between a jar of tea and a fossilised lemon sat a blue tin labelled NOT BISCUITS. She took it down. “Will this do something unpleasant to humans?” “Only if they eat it.” “Eva needs better labels.” “She believes that one is sufficient.” Rory opened the tin. The ointment inside smelled of cloves and hot metal. Lucien watched her scoop a little onto a clean piece of gauze. “You don’t have to do this.” “You’ve bled on her dictionaries. I’m limiting the damage.” “Rory.” She paused at the sound of her name. Not Aurora, delivered with that careful French precision he used when other people watched them. Rory, low in the cramped kitchen, with his knee inches from hers. “Don’t.” “All right.” She wiped the cut on his forearm. The edges drew together beneath the ointment, leaving a pink seam. She kept her eyes on it. “Why didn’t you go home?” “My supply had dried out.” “You could have called.” “You blocked my number.” “You own four phones.” “Five.” “There it is.” “I didn’t use them.” Her hand stopped. He looked down at the gauze pressed between his fingers. “You told me not to contact you. I thought using another number would defeat the purpose.” “You thought paying my ex without asking me was fine.” “No.” “You thought it at the time.” “Yes.” The answer landed without any of the polish she had prepared to fight. Rory turned to the sink and rinsed blood from her fingers. Water knocked against the stainless steel. Behind her, his shoe scraped the floor, then stopped. “Don’t get up.” “I wasn’t leaving.” “That wasn’t what I meant.” She shut off the tap. A droplet hung from her wrist, beside the small crescent scar. “He called it a debt, Lucien.” “I know.” “No, you read a document. I know what he called it when he stood outside my work. I know what he called it when he wanted a reason to get me alone.” Lucien’s uninjured hand flattened against his thigh. “I should have brought it to you.” “You bought it.” “Yes.” “As if the problem was who owned it.” His gaze lifted to hers. “There was no valid debt. I paid him to sign a release and give up the papers he’d been using.” “And then you kept the release.” “I put it in my jacket to bring to you.” “You had dinner with me first.” “Yes.” “You kissed me first.” His mouth tightened. “Yes.” Rory gripped the edge of the counter. She remembered his hands on either side of her plate, his smile when she stole the last piece of bread. He had known throughout that meal. Every time she had leaned towards him, he had known. “I kept wondering whether you looked at me and saw another job.” “No.” “You don’t get to make that word do all the work.” He glanced at the kitchen table. Eva’s notes crowded its surface, dense with arrows and cramped handwriting. “I saw a way to stop him reaching you. I took it before anyone could interfere.” “Anyone meaning me.” “Yes.” The flat seemed to shrink around that answer. Rory could hear Ptolemy scratching at a closed cupboard, and someone downstairs laughing over the restaurant till. She pulled the empty stool closer and sat. “Give me your hand.” Lucien extended it, palm up. She removed the blood-soaked gauze. He had a faint scar beneath his thumb that she hadn’t noticed before. His hand dwarfed the dressing she held. “This will hurt?” “A little.” “That’s not a useful measurement from you.” “It will sting.” She applied the ointment. His fingers curled, then opened under hers. Rory rested her other hand beneath his wrist to keep it steady. Heat passed through the thin skin there. His pulse struck against her thumb. “I didn’t need you to leave me helpless so you could rescue me.” “I know.” “Do you?” He leaned forward, stopping before his knee touched hers. “I’ve sent the original release to your solicitor. I kept no copy. Eva has the confirmation, if you want it from someone other than me.” “When?” “The Monday after you found it.” “Six weeks ago.” “Yes.” “And you didn’t tell me?” “You told me to leave. I left.” She examined the closing wound. A bead of blood remained in the crease of his palm; she caught it with the corner of the gauze. For six weeks, she had expected a message clever enough to make her doubt herself. Flowers downstairs. A favour she couldn’t refuse. Lucien turning the machinery of his life towards getting her back. He had done none of those things. She hated that she had mistaken the silence for indifference. “You could have told Eva to tell me.” “I asked her to give you the papers. Not a message.” Rory set the gauze aside, but his wrist stayed in her hand. Lucien looked at the place where she held him. He didn’t move. “You should have trusted me.” “I should have.” “I would have been frightened.” “I know.” “I might have shouted at you.” “One of the possibilities I robbed myself of.” A laugh escaped her, short and unwelcome. She pressed her lips together. “Don’t make me laugh when I’m angry.” He bowed his head, but she caught the change in his mouth. “Understood.” The cut had closed. She traced its edge with her thumb, checking for any gap, and felt his fingers shift beneath hers. “Does that hurt?” “No.” She looked up. Neither of them reached across the remaining distance. Rory kept hold of his hand. “What were you going to tell me that night, before I found the receipt?” Lucien drew his stool an inch closer. It rasped against the kitchen tiles. “That I wanted to stay. And that I didn’t know how to ask without making it sound as though I’d already decided.” “You had your overnight bag in the car?” “Yes.” She looked at his rain-dark collar, the ruined sleeve, the face she had refused to let herself miss. “Then start with the question.”
created_at"2026-10-05T15:41:47.717Z" 10/5/2026, 3:41:47 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences122
tagDensity0.008
leniency0.016
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1724
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1724
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silence"
2"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences118
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences240
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1724
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
70.11% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1064
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien12
Moreau1
Eva3
Aurora1
French1
Ptolemy2
Rory17
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.701
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1724
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences240
matches
0"rehearsing that movement"
1"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs188
mean9.17
std9.43
cv1.028
sampleLengths
011
18
21
335
41
51
618
74
83
92
105
1113
127
1323
142
152
1610
172
186
196
2026
2148
225
231
249
257
266
273
2812
2918
305
3118
321
334
3441
353
3616
372
385
391
409
411
4228
431
442
458
4625
471
483
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs183
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences240
ratio0.008
matches
0"His platinum hair had lost its smooth arrangement; a strand lay across his forehead."
1"A bead of blood remained in the crease of his palm; she caught it with the corner of the gauze."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount767
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.014341590612777053
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002607561929595828
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences240
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences240
mean7.18
std5.39
cv0.75
sampleLengths
011
18
21
34
417
514
61
71
811
97
104
113
122
135
144
159
167
175
1818
192
202
2110
222
236
246
256
2620
277
2815
2926
305
311
329
337
346
353
3612
378
3810
395
4018
411
424
435
4425
4511
463
4716
482
495
45.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.30416666666666664
totalSentences240
uniqueOpeners73
28.99% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"Instead, she looked down the"
ratio0.009
32.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences115
matches
0"His platinum hair had lost"
1"His amber eye moved to"
2"He caught its edge, then"
3"She looked at his hand."
4"His sleeve covered most of"
5"She should have shut the"
6"She had spent six weeks"
7"He loosened his grip on"
8"He crossed the threshold without"
9"She slid the deadbolts home."
10"She held out her hand."
11"He started to shrug it"
12"His jaw tightened."
13"He drew a breath through"
14"He stacked the books on"
15"His cane leaned against the"
16"She reached for his cuff,"
17"He worked the button with"
18"It slipped twice."
19"She had laughed against his"
ratio0.47
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount109
totalSentences115
matches
0"The door opened against the"
1"Rory kept her hand on"
2"Lucien withdrew his foot."
3"Rain silvered the shoulders of"
4"His platinum hair had lost"
5"His amber eye moved to"
6"The black one stayed on"
7"Rory pushed the door."
8"He caught its edge, then"
9"Blood marked the paint beneath"
10"She looked at his hand."
11"His sleeve covered most of"
12"She should have shut the"
13"She had spent six weeks"
14"Curry-house heat rose through the"
15"Lucien stood between her and"
16"He loosened his grip on"
17"Rory stepped back."
18"He crossed the threshold without"
19"That small courtesy irritated her"
ratio0.948
43.48% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"Before morning, she had found"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien stood between her and the landing rail with one shoulder held at an angle she recognised from delivery cyclists who insisted they hadn’t broken anything."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.0581%