Run: 2026-10-05-01M46BNSG760NA0XJ4ZAVQCPBP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 31s
Cost:
$0.029528
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bone token stuck in the turnstile. Quinn pulled it back, examined the notch along its edge, and turned it over. Behind her, Sergeant Malik held up his torch. “Other way round. The teeth go down.” “They’re not teeth.” “Tell that to the man who let us in.” The gate released with a sound like someone cracking a knuckle. Quinn pocketed the token and stepped through. Camden’s traffic had faded halfway down the stairs. Here, beneath a station entrance hidden behind a boarded-up furniture shop, she heard water dripping into something metal. Her torch picked out cream tiles, a torn Underground map, and lengths of electrical cable running towards the platform. Someone had painted over the station name. Someone else had scratched it out. “Who owns this place?” “Transport for London denied it existed, then asked us not to touch the wiring.” Malik ducked beneath a string of unlit bulbs. His coat brushed a hanging bundle of feathers. Quinn stopped it swinging with two fingers. “Has anyone checked those for prints?” “We’ve barely checked the body.” The platform held rows of market stalls built from doors, trestles and scavenged shelving. Glass jars crowded one counter. At another, lengths of pale fabric hung from hooks beside a handwritten sign: NO REFUNDS AFTER DREAMING. Most of the traders had gone. Their abandoned cups stood beside open cash boxes. A kettle clicked on and off behind a curtain. Three uniformed officers occupied the far end of the platform. None looked comfortable turning their backs on the tunnel. “Who cleared the market?” “It cleared itself when someone shouted police.” Malik lifted a cord strung with small bones and let Quinn pass beneath it. “We kept six people upstairs. Names, addresses, the usual. Half the addresses don’t exist.” “And the deceased?” “Gideon Rusk. According to the woman who called it in, he sold antiques.” Quinn glanced at a tray of finger-sized glass bottles. Something inside one pressed against the stopper. “An expansive category.” Rusk’s stall occupied an old staff room beyond the platform. A uniformed officer guarded its open door. Inside, a man lay on his side between a desk and a filing cabinet, one leg bent beneath him. Blood darkened the close-cropped hair above his right ear. A portable heater stood beside his shoulder. Its lead ran across the floor to a socket above the skirting board. Quinn remained at the threshold. “Who went in?” “The caller. PC Bell. Ambulance crew.” Malik consulted his notebook. “Nobody moved him.” “Did the caller touch him?” “She checked for a pulse.” “With which hand?” Malik looked up. “Ask her.” Quinn crouched. Her worn watch strap caught on the cuff of her coat; she freed it without looking away from the floor. Dust lay beneath the desk in a grey sheet. Beside the body, a crescent of clean concrete marked where something had stood. “The heater was there?” “Bell moved it to reach him.” “Was it switched on?” “Plugged in. Switch up. There’s water underneath him.” Malik pointed his pen towards a dark patch beneath Rusk’s coat. “Old wiring, wet floor, metal heater. He got a shock, hit his head on the cabinet. The caller heard a bang.” “The electricity?” “Off now. Bell pulled the plug.” Quinn examined the filing cabinet. Its nearest corner stood level with her knee. A thin brown smear marked the chipped paint. “Could fit.” Malik folded his notebook shut. “I’ve asked for an electrical inspection.” “Keep that request.” “You don’t sound convinced.” “His shoes.” Rusk wore brown lace-ups with heavy, ribbed soles. Quinn angled her torch beneath the uppermost foot. Dust filled the grooves. No wet shine, no cleared patches. “He was standing here when he fell?” she asked. “That’s the assumption.” “Then he stepped over the water.” “Or it spilled after he went down.” “From what?” Malik scanned the desk. An enamel cup stood beside a ledger. The cup held cold tea, its surface unbroken except for a floating strand of milk. “Someone took the container.” “Someone took a container from an electrical accident?” He opened his notebook again. Quinn stood and looked across the room. Rusk’s chair had rolled beneath the desk. A brass lamp illuminated neat columns in the open ledger. Beside it lay three coins, a lens and a square of black velvet with a circular depression in its pile. A young woman sat on a wooden crate just outside the door. She had drawn her knees together and gripped a leather satchel between her shoes. Curly red hair escaped its tie around her round glasses. Quinn had noticed her on arrival. She had also noticed that the woman watched the desk rather than the body. “You made the call?” The woman tucked a curl behind her left ear. “Eva Kowalski.” “Detective Quinn. What did you touch?” “His wrist. Then his neck. I didn’t move him.” “Which wrist?” “Left.” “With which hand?” “My right. I put two fingers here.” She demonstrated against her own throat. “And the heater?” “No.” “What brought you here?” “A purchase.” “Which one?” Eva looked at the velvet square. “A compass.” Malik drew a clear evidence bag from his coat pocket. A small brass compass rested inside, its casing mottled green. Symbols crowded the face where Quinn expected degrees and cardinal points. “Bell found this in her satchel.” Eva’s fingers tightened around the leather strap. “I showed it to him. That isn’t the same as finding it.” “Did you buy it from Rusk?” “Yes.” “When?” “Tonight. About twenty minutes before I found him.” “How much?” “Eighty pounds.” Quinn glanced at the three coins on the desk. “Cash?” “Banknotes. He put them in the drawer.” “Did he give you a receipt?” Eva’s mouth compressed. “No.” “Then we’ll keep it until we establish ownership.” “You should keep it level.” Malik held the bag higher. “Why?” “Because you won’t get a useful reading like that.” “What does it read?” Eva pushed her glasses up by the bridge. “It’s called a Veil Compass.” Quinn waited. “It points towards a rift. An opening.” “An opening in what?” Eva looked past her at the room. “I work in the British Museum’s restricted archives. My field is ancient history. I can give you references, but they won’t help with the floor.” “Then help me with the floor.” Eva bent over her satchel and took out a notebook, stopping when Malik raised his hand. “It’s paper.” “Leave it closed.” Quinn turned back to the body. The dark patch beneath the coat had a pale fringe. She lowered herself until the torch beam skimmed the concrete. Not water alone. Grains glinted at its edge. “Has anyone salted this floor?” Malik shook his head. Quinn traced the patch with the light. It extended beneath Rusk’s chest and stopped short of his shoes. Near his shoulder, a single broad impression crossed the wet area. Its edges had sunk; its centre held a crosshatched pattern. She looked at Rusk’s soles again. Parallel ribs. “Bell’s boots.” Malik called the constable over. Bell lifted one foot at the threshold. Square blocks, each divided by a diagonal groove. The impression on the floor had no diagonal grooves. “Ambulance?” “I’ll get photographs of their footwear.” “Do that. Nobody else crosses this doorway.” Quinn rose. Her knees objected after the stairs and the concrete. “The heater’s clean.” “Bell handled it.” “I mean underneath. There’s dust on the feet. If it stood in that patch, the dust would have turned to paste.” Malik looked from the heater to the crescent beneath the desk. “So it came from there.” “After the liquid reached the floor.” “The caller could have moved it before Bell arrived.” Eva lifted her head. “I didn’t.” Quinn studied her. Freckles, a red mark beneath one spectacle arm, ink on the side of her middle finger. No wet cuffs. No stains on the satchel. “What was the bang?” “A metal clang. I was at the next stall.” “What happened between your purchase and that sound?” “I went to find a book dealer. He hadn’t arrived. I waited.” “Did you see anyone come out of this room?” “No.” “Were you watching the door?” “Not the whole time.” Quinn stepped round the edge of the wet patch. Behind the filing cabinet, three dusty footprints led to a blank tiled wall. Each print overlapped the next at the heel, as though someone had taken short steps carrying a weight. “Malik.” He came to the threshold. “There.” He leaned in. “Maintenance recess behind the cabinet?” Quinn shone her torch along the wall. The tiles continued without a seam. Mortar filled the joints. No handle, hinge or scrape marked the surface. “Not one they opened tonight.” She examined the cabinet again. The smear on its corner had dried to a flat brown skin. Beneath it, dust remained caught in a chip in the enamel. Blood deposited over dust. That could have happened during a fall. But the smear sat on the side facing the wall, not the exposed corner beside the body. “He didn’t hit this from where he’s lying.” Malik moved his torch. “His head could have turned.” “His shoulder would have struck first. Look at the gap. Eight inches between the cabinet and the wall. He couldn’t get his head in there without moving it.” “And it hasn’t moved?” Quinn lit the cabinet’s feet. Four dark squares anchored them within an undisturbed border of dust. “No.” Malik scratched a line through something in his notebook. Quinn looked at the compass bag in his other hand. “Put that on the desk. Flat.” He laid it beside the ledger. The needle swung towards the filing cabinet and held. “Magnetic interference,” he remarked. Quinn slid the bag to the far end of the desk. The needle turned a few degrees, still aimed at the same stretch of tiled wall. Eva rose from the crate. “Don’t open it.” “I wasn’t going to.” “There are protective marks on the face. Whoever made it—” “Stay outside the room, Ms Kowalski.” Eva stopped at the threshold. Quinn moved the compass once more. The needle followed the wall rather than the cabinet. She set down her torch and examined the ledger. Rusk’s final entry occupied half a line. A price. No description. The pen lay on the floor beneath the desk, beyond his outstretched hand. “Photograph this before anyone turns a page.” Malik called for the scene examiner. Quinn crouched beside Rusk’s left hand. His nails held black grit. Across the base of his fingers ran a curved bruise, with a small straight cut at one end. She looked at the compass casing. A raised hinge interrupted its circular edge. “He was holding this.” “I handed it back for him to show me the catch.” Eva kept her hands on the doorframe. “Then he gave it to me.” Quinn studied the black velvet. A thin line of green powder marked the circular depression. “The clasp?” “It stuck. He opened it with his thumb.” “Was anyone else here?” Eva’s hand slipped from the frame. “A man came to the door. Rusk put the compass down.” “What man?” “A grey coat. Gloves. He asked whether the room was ready.” Malik turned a fresh page. “You didn’t mention him.” “You asked who came out.” Quinn brought her torch back to the broad print in the wet patch. Then to the cramped steps behind the cabinet. “The room wasn’t where Rusk fell.” She pointed to the heater’s dusty feet. “Someone arranged an electrical accident after he was on the floor.” Malik followed the beam to the wall. “And carried him from there?” “The prints support that. Get samples of the liquid and the grit under his nails. Separate bags.” Quinn left the compass level beside the ledger, its needle fixed on the tiles. “Ms Kowalski. Start with the man’s gloves.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences129
tagDensity0.054
leniency0.109
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1964
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1964
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"comfortable"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count3
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"magnetic"
count1
highlights
0"comfortable"
1"pulse"
2"scanned"
3"velvet"
4"traced"
5"weight"
6"magnetic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences148
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences270
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1964
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
35.99% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1228
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.28
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Sergeant1
Malik19
Underground1
Quinn28
Rusk8
Eva11
persons
0"Sergeant"
1"Malik"
2"Quinn"
3"Rusk"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.36
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1964
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences270
matches
0"noticed that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs198
mean9.92
std9.57
cv0.964
sampleLengths
07
122
27
33
49
518
645
713
84
914
1016
117
126
135
1436
1523
1619
174
1835
193
2013
2116
223
2345
2420
255
263
2713
285
295
303
313
322
3322
3422
354
366
374
388
3911
4021
412
426
4321
4413
453
464
472
4826
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs192
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences270
ratio0.007
matches
0"Her worn watch strap caught on the cuff of her coat; she freed it without looking away from the floor."
1"Its edges had sunk; its centre held a crosshatched pattern."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1232
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.012987012987012988
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008116883116883117
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences270
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences270
mean7.27
std4.64
cv0.638
sampleLengths
07
114
28
37
43
59
611
77
88
918
1019
117
126
134
1414
158
168
177
186
195
2014
215
2217
236
248
259
2610
279
284
2921
3014
313
3213
339
347
353
3610
377
3819
399
407
4113
425
433
4410
453
465
475
483
493
58.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3592592592592593
totalSentences270
uniqueOpeners97
23.81% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences140
matches
0"Then to the cramped steps"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences140
matches
0"Her torch picked out cream"
1"His coat brushed a hanging"
2"Their abandoned cups stood beside"
3"Its lead ran across the"
4"Her worn watch strap caught"
5"Its nearest corner stood level"
6"He opened his notebook again."
7"She had drawn her knees"
8"She had also noticed that"
9"She demonstrated against her own"
10"She lowered herself until the"
11"It extended beneath Rusk’s chest"
12"Its edges had sunk; its"
13"She looked at Rusk’s soles"
14"Her knees objected after the"
15"He came to the threshold."
16"He leaned in."
17"She examined the cabinet again."
18"He laid it beside the"
19"She set down her torch"
ratio0.164
35.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount119
totalSentences140
matches
0"The bone token stuck in"
1"Quinn pulled it back, examined"
2"The gate released with a"
3"Quinn pocketed the token and"
4"Camden’s traffic had faded halfway"
5"Here, beneath a station entrance"
6"Her torch picked out cream"
7"Someone had painted over the"
8"Someone else had scratched it"
9"Malik ducked beneath a string"
10"His coat brushed a hanging"
11"Quinn stopped it swinging with"
12"The platform held rows of"
13"Glass jars crowded one counter."
14"Their abandoned cups stood beside"
15"A kettle clicked on and"
16"None looked comfortable turning their"
17"Malik lifted a cord strung"
18"Quinn glanced at a tray"
19"Something inside one pressed against"
ratio0.85
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Each print overlapped the next at the heel, as though someone had taken short steps carrying a weight."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences129
tagDensity0.008
leniency0.016
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.6638%