Run: 2026-10-06-01M48VNSMJNZRATGT5NNP6RM0J

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.004585
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign flickered above the door, casting a sickly glow across the wet pavement of Dean Street. Rory pushed through, shaking rain from her black hair, and the warmth of the Raven's Nest swallowed her whole. The scent of spilled ale and old wood polish. Maps yellowing on the walls. Somewhere, a record scratched through a jazz standard. She hadn't planned to come here. She'd planned to walk past, to keep walking, to reach her flat above the bar and climb the stairs without looking down. But her boots had carried her through the door before her mind caught up. "Rory." The voice came from the corner booth, low and familiar in a way that made her chest tighten. She turned. Silas Blackwood sat with his back to the wall, a half-empty glass of whisky in his right hand, the silver signet ring catching the dim light. He'd aged. The auburn in his hair had retreated to grey streaks, and the lines around his hazel eyes had deepened into something permanent. But he still held himself the way he always had—shoulders squared, chin lifted, as if the world owed him an explanation. "Silas." Her voice came out rough. "I didn't—" "Didn't expect to see me?" He set the glass down. The limp was worse than she remembered, or perhaps she'd simply forgotten how he'd always favoured that left leg. "Sit. Please. I'd rather not make a scene." She slid into the booth. The leather cracked beneath her. Through the window, rain streaked the glass in thin rivers. Inside, the bar hummed with low conversation, the clink of glasses, the murmur of three or four other patrons who didn't look up. "You've changed," she said. Silas smiled, and it didn't reach his eyes. "You've cut your hair." "Shoulder-length. It was past my waist." She touched it self-consciously. "You know. Practical." "Practical." He tasted the word. "When did you become practical, Rory?" She ordered a gin and tonic from the passing barmaid, something sharp to settle her nerves. When it arrived, she didn't touch it. "How long?" she asked. "Three years. Maybe four." He counted on his fingers, the signet ring glinting. "I heard you were in Cardiff. Then London. Then—" He stopped. "I stopped asking. After a while, you learn when to stop." The silence between them wasn't empty. It was full of everything they weren't saying. Rory had been twenty-two when she'd last seen him. A girl playing at being a woman, all sharp edges and borrowed confidence, fleeing Cardiff and an engagement she'd never wanted and a father who'd measured her worth in the size of her dowry. Silas had been her father's friend, a man who'd appeared at their door with whisky and stories of Prague and Budapest, who'd looked at her with something that wasn't quite paternal and made her skin prickle. He'd given her the number. A safe house in London. A name to ask for. *If you ever need to disappear.* She'd used it. She'd disappeared. And she'd never written, never called, never let him know she'd arrived, that she was safe, that she was grateful. "I worked for Yu-Fei Cheung," she said, because silence had become unbearable. "Golden Empress. Delivery. I live above the bar." She gestured vaguely upward. "Small flat. Quiet." "And the Pre-Law?" "Deferred." She laughed, a brittle sound. "Indefinitely." Silas studied her. His hazel eyes moved over her face with the same assessment she remembered from childhood, when he'd watched her across her father's dinner table, when he'd asked her questions that made her think, that made her *want* to think. "You were always too clever for your own good." "Still am." "Evidently." He reached for his whisky, then stopped. His hand hovered over the glass. "You know why I'm here." Rory's fingers found the crescent scar on her left wrist, the one from the bicycle accident when she was nine, the one she'd always touched when she was nervous. "No." "The man who hurt you. Evan." Silas said the name like a curse. "I found him. Two weeks ago. Croydon, working as a debt collector. Nasty business, that. Breaks fingers for a living." He paused. "I took care of it." Rory stared at him. The gin and tonic suddenly tasted of copper. "You what?" "I made sure he won't hurt anyone again." Silas met her eyes. "I made sure he won't walk properly for the rest of his life. Maybe won't walk at all." He shrugged, that old gesture, casual and terrible. "I'm not the man I was, Rory. I'm not the man you knew. But some things—" He tapped his chest. "Some things don't change." "You killed him?" "I crippled him." The word hung between them, heavy and final. "There's a difference. I'm still capable of differences." Rory thought of the flat above the bar, the delivery routes through London's back streets, the careful way she'd built a life that required no one, depended on no one, owed no one anything. She thought of Eva, who'd begged her to come to London, who'd promised friendship and safety and a fresh start. She thought of the years since, the careful distance she'd maintained from everyone, the terror that had kept her from reaching out, from letting anyone in, from becoming someone's responsibility. "You should have told me," she whispered. "I should have done many things." Silas's voice had gone quiet, stripped of its usual authority. "I should have written. I should have come looking. I told myself you didn't want to be found. That you'd built your walls and I'd only be another thing to tear down." He laughed, hollow. "I was a coward, Rory. I let you go because I was afraid of what you'd become. Afraid you'd look at me and see a man who'd failed you." "You didn't fail me." "You disappeared. That's not failure?" He shook his head. "I sat in this bar for three years waiting for you to walk through that door. I told myself it was sentiment. Nostalgia. But I wanted to see you. I wanted to know you were—" He stopped, his jaw tightening. "I wanted to know you were alive." The rain against the window had slowed to a whisper. Somewhere, the jazz record skipped and started again, the same cracked phrase repeating. "I'm alive," Rory said. "Yes." Silas reached across the table, his hand hovering near hers, not quite touching. The signet ring caught the light. "You are. And I'm—" He withdrew his hand. "I'm still here. If you want me to be. If you don't." He stood, suddenly, the limp more pronounced as he rose. "I won't ask again. I've asked enough in my life, haven't I? Questions I shouldn't have asked. People I shouldn't have let go." "Silas—" "Drink your gin, Rory. It's getting warm." He turned toward the door, his grey-streaked hair catching the green neon light. "The back room's still there, if you ever need it. The bookshelf still works. I haven't changed the combination." She watched him go, his tall frame moving through the bar with that familiar limp, the quiet authority that had never quite left him even now. He paused at the door, rain dripping from his shoulders, and looked back. "You were always too clever for your own good," he said again. "Don't let that stop you from being kind. To yourself. To—" He gestured vaguely, encompassing the bar, the years, everything between them. "To anyone who deserves it." Then he was gone, the green sign flickering once, twice, steady again. Rory sat alone in the booth. She touched the scar on her wrist, the crescent moon pale against her skin. She thought of Cardiff, of London, of all the years she'd spent running from one version of herself to another. She thought of the flat above the bar, the delivery routes, the careful solitude she'd mistaken for strength. She finished her gin. It was warm now, flat, tasting of nothing. Then she stood, pushed through the crowd, and walked out into the rain.
created_at"2026-10-06T15:00:24.004Z" 10/6/2026, 3:00:24 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He stood suddenly [suddenly]"
2"he said again [again]"
3"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.536
leniency1
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.133
92.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1345
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1345
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"standard"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"warmth"
2"standard"
3"familiar"
4"glinting"
5"silence"
6"measured"
7"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences86
matches
0"was grateful"
1"was nervous"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"know"
1"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords7
totalWords1344
ratio0.005
matches
0"If you ever need to disappear."
1"want"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount930
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Dean1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Blackwood1
Silas8
Cardiff2
Prague1
Budapest1
London4
Rory7
Eva1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"Eva"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
4"Budapest"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite touching"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1344
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"arrived, that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean28.6
std23.95
cv0.838
sampleLengths
060
142
21
320
471
58
637
743
84
912
1013
1111
1223
134
1435
1514
1679
1721
1825
1927
203
217
2251
232
2419
2530
2640
2714
2862
293
3019
3184
327
3380
344
3556
3623
374
3873
391
4039
4139
4239
4312
4458
4512
4613
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs171
matches
0"weren't saying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences112
ratio0.009
matches
0"But he still held himself the way he always had—shoulders squared, chin lifted, as if the world owed him an explanation."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount935
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.034224598930481284
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0074866310160427805
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean12
std9.31
cv0.776
sampleLengths
019
119
29
35
48
56
622
714
81
918
102
1126
122
1322
1421
156
162
1710
1819
198
205
215
2210
2323
244
258
264
2710
283
295
306
3116
327
334
3413
3511
3611
376
388
399
4034
4136
425
435
445
456
463
472
4820
4912
42.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3392857142857143
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences77
matches
0"Somewhere, a record scratched through"
1"Somewhere, the jazz record skipped"
2"Then he was gone, the"
3"Then she stood, pushed through"
ratio0.052
27.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences77
matches
0"She hadn't planned to come"
1"She'd planned to walk past,"
2"Her voice came out rough"
3"He set the glass down"
4"She slid into the booth."
5"She touched it self-consciously"
6"He tasted the word"
7"She ordered a gin and"
8"He counted on his fingers,"
9"It was full of everything"
10"He'd given her the number."
11"She'd used it."
12"she said, because silence had"
13"She gestured vaguely upward"
14"She laughed, a brittle sound"
15"His hazel eyes moved over"
16"He reached for his whisky,"
17"His hand hovered over the"
18"He shrugged, that old gesture,"
19"He tapped his chest"
ratio0.481
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences77
matches
0"The green neon sign flickered"
1"Rory pushed through, shaking rain"
2"The scent of spilled ale"
3"Maps yellowing on the walls."
4"She hadn't planned to come"
5"She'd planned to walk past,"
6"The voice came from the"
7"Silas Blackwood sat with his"
8"The auburn in his hair"
9"Her voice came out rough"
10"He set the glass down"
11"The limp was worse than"
12"She slid into the booth."
13"The leather cracked beneath her."
14"Silas smiled, and it didn't"
15"She touched it self-consciously"
16"He tasted the word"
17"She ordered a gin and"
18"He counted on his fingers,"
19"The silence between them wasn't"
ratio0.857
64.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"*If you ever need to"
ratio0.013
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"A girl playing at being a woman, all sharp edges and borrowed confidence, fleeing Cardiff and an engagement she'd never wanted and a father who'd measured her w…"
1"Silas had been her father's friend, a man who'd appeared at their door with whisky and stories of Prague and Budapest, who'd looked at her with something that w…"
2"His hazel eyes moved over her face with the same assessment she remembered from childhood, when he'd watched her across her father's dinner table, when he'd ask…"
3"She thought of the years since, the careful distance she'd maintained from everyone, the terror that had kept her from reaching out, from letting anyone in, fro…"
4"She watched him go, his tall frame moving through the bar with that familiar limp, the quiet authority that had never quite left him even now."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He counted on, the signet ring glinting"
1"He shrugged, that old gesture, casual and terrible"
2"He laughed, hollow"
3"He stopped, his jaw tightening"
4"Silas reached, his hand hovering near hers, not quite touching"
96.43% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"He laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.161
leniency0.321
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.107
85.0127%