Run: 2026-10-06-01M48VPZQ5VDQF0CXDC4NBSMGZ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.005484
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell hard enough to sting. Detective Harlow Quinn pulled her collar up and kept her eyes on the gap between two buildings where Tomás Herrera had vanished. Her boots splashed through a puddle that tasted of oil and old pennies. Three blocks back, she'd lost him in the crowd outside a kebab shop. Now she found his Saint Christopher medallion glinting in a gutter, the chain snapped clean through. She pocketed it. Quinn checked her watch. 2:47 AM. Her phone buzzed. A text from an unknown number: *You shouldn't be here, Detective.* She'd traced the message to a burner. Of course. Eighteen years on the force, and she still walked into traps with her eyes open. The alley opened onto a service entrance behind a shuttered travel agency. Green neon flickered above it, spelling out a raven with wings spread wide. The Raven's Nest. Quinn had heard whispers about this place from informants who'd gone quiet, from case files that didn't add up, from the way certain evidence simply evaporated from her desk when she got too close to the clique. She drew her service weapon. Checked the magazine. Sixteen rounds. The door gave way without a fight. Inside, the air hit her thick with cigarette smoke and something else, something metallic and wrong, like blood mixed with ozone. Old maps covered the walls. Black-and-white photographs of faces she didn't recognize, all of them smiling, all of them dead as far as she could tell. The bartender, a woman with silver hair pulled back in a severe bun, didn't look up from polishing glasses. "Members and guests only," the woman said. "Metropolitan Police. Warrant's in the car." The woman laughed, a dry sound like paper tearing. "You think that matters down here? You think the law reaches this far?" Quinn moved deeper, past a cluster of leather jackets and tailored suits, past a man with too many teeth who watched her with eyes that reflected the dim light wrong. She found the bookshelf in the back, oak and mahogany, crammed with first editions that smelled of mildew and old money. One shelf wobbled when she touched it. The books slid aside with a pneumatic hiss, revealing a staircase spiraling down into darkness. Her radio crackled. "Detective Quinn, respond. We've got a situation at your last known—" She killed the radio. The stairs were concrete, damp, smelling of rust and something sweeter, like rotting flowers. Quinn counted forty-seven steps before her boots found a landing. The air down here was colder, thick enough to taste. She flicked on her torch. The beam caught graffiti in languages she didn't recognize, symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them. A sound ahead. Footsteps, quick and light. Herrera. She followed. The tunnel opened into a cavern that shouldn't exist beneath London. Quinn had walked these streets for eighteen years. She knew the Tube map by heart, knew which stations connected to which, knew where the old cholera cemeteries lay and where the Blitz had punched holes in the city's foundations. She had never heard of this place. No survey mentioned it. No geological record accounted for a space this large, this deep, this wrong. Stalls lined the cavern's edges, lit by bioluminescent fungi in glass jars and candles that burned blue. Vendors called out in voices that harmonized without meaning. Quinn saw a woman selling eyes in a jar, still blinking. A man with no shadow offering maps that showed streets that didn't exist. A child, no older than eight, weighing something that weighed nothing on a scale made of bone. She kept her torch low. Kept her weapon ready. Herrera moved through the crowd like he belonged here, like he'd been born in this dark. He wore a different jacket now, charcoal wool, and his medallion hung visible again, new chain, fresh shine. He stopped at a stall selling antique surgical instruments and picked up a scalpel, turning it in his hands like he was checking the edge. Quinn closed the distance. Twenty feet. Fifteen. He didn't look up. "You followed me, Detective. I wondered how long it would take." "You're wanted for questioning. Three counts of—" "Of what? Healing people? Saving lives?" He set the scalpel down. His warm brown eyes met hers, and she saw something there she couldn't name. Pity, maybe. Or hunger. "You don't understand what you're walking into, Harlow. You lost Morris three years ago. You think that was an accident?" Quinn's finger tightened on the trigger. "Don't say his name." "David Morris. Good man. Brave man. He found something down here, didn't he? Something that shouldn't exist. And they made sure he never told anyone what he saw." Herrera leaned forward, his voice dropping to something almost gentle. "I can show you. I can show you what really happened to your partner. But you have to choose, Detective. You can walk back up those stairs, file your report, pretend you never saw me. Or you can come deeper. See what the clique really is. What they really do." The cavern seemed to hold its breath. Somewhere, water dripped. Somewhere else, something that might have been singing stopped. Quinn thought of Morris's body, or what they'd found of it. The official report said heart attack, stress-related, case closed. But she'd seen the photographs. The way his eyes had been open, staring at something on the ceiling of his flat. The way his hands had been clenched so tight his fingernails had drawn blood. The way the coroner had refused to meet her eyes when she asked about the bruising on his wrists, the ligature marks that didn't match any explanation. She thought of the text on her phone. *You shouldn't be here, Detective.* "I want to see the back room," Quinn said. "The one behind the bookshelf at the Nest. I want to know what you do there." Herrera smiled, and for a moment he looked young, scared, the boy from Seville who'd come to London to help people and found monsters instead. "That's not what you want. That's what you think you want." He turned, moving deeper into the cavern, and Quinn followed, because the alternative was walking back up into a city that had lied to her for three years, into a life that had stopped making sense the night Morris died. The crowd parted for him. For her. She didn't know which frightened her more. They passed a stall where a woman was buying memories in vials, the labels handwritten in ink that moved. They passed a cage containing something that screamed in frequencies that made Quinn's teeth ache. They passed a mirror that showed her not as she was, but as she might be, older, harder, with Morris standing behind her shoulder and blood on her hands. Herrera stopped at a door made of something that looked like wood but felt like teeth. He knocked three times. A slot opened in the center, and a single eye blinked into view, yellow and vertical and utterly inhuman. "Tomás Herrera," he said. "Plus one. The detective wants to see." The eye withdrew. The door opened. Beyond it, the air changed again, warmer now, smelling of herbs and antiseptic and something else, something that made Quinn think of hospitals and emergency rooms and the particular silence of a room where someone had just stopped breathing. She stepped through, and Herrera was already moving down a corridor lined with doors, each one numbered, each one bearing a small brass plate with a name she didn't recognize. "Room 7," Herrera said, not looking back. "That's where they keep the ones who ask too many questions. The ones who get close to the truth." He stopped at a door marked with a symbol that hurt to look at, a spiral that seemed to turn inward forever. "Morris was in there for six days. Six days before they let him go. He walked out of here and he walked into the Thames, Detective. He walked into the Thames because he couldn't live with what they showed him." Quinn's hand found the door handle. Cold metal. She thought of her service weapon, still heavy in its holster. She thought of her pension, her years of service, the life she'd built on the belief that the law meant something, that justice was possible, that the world made sense if you looked at it the right way. She thought of Morris's open eyes, staring at a ceiling. The door opened. Inside, the room was small, concrete, with a single cot and a drain in the floor and walls covered in photographs. Hundreds of them. Thousands. Faces Quinn recognized from missing persons posters, from news reports, from her own case files. And in the center of it all, pinned to the wall with a knife that still had blood on it, a photograph of herself. Taken yesterday. Taken from her bedroom window. Herrera stood in the doorway, and for the first time, he looked afraid. "You see now," he said. "You see why they can't let you leave. Why they can't let anyone leave who knows what this place really is." He reached into his jacket, and Quinn tensed, but he only produced a bone token, white and carved with symbols that made her eyes water. "The Veil Market moves on the full moon. Three nights from now. If you want to find out what happened to Morris, what happens to everyone who gets too close, you need to be ready. You need to know where to go, and you need to know who to trust." He pressed the token into her hand. It was warm, almost alive. "But Detective," he said, and his voice had changed, lost its warmth, gained something harder, more certain. "You need to understand something. I'm not your friend. I'm not your ally. I'm a man who's trying to survive in a world that eats people like me. And if you follow me deeper, if you come with me to the Market, you'll become part of that world too. You'll become something else. Something that isn't human anymore." Rain still fell above, though Quinn couldn't hear it down here. She looked at the token in her hand, at the photographs on the wall, at the man who had led her into this place and would lead her deeper still. "Show me," she said, "what they did to Morris." Herrera nodded, once, and turned to lead her further down the corridor, into the dark.
created_at"2026-10-06T15:01:02.835Z" 10/6/2026, 3:01:02 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.48
leniency0.96
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1759
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count4
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1759
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"almost alive"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"traced"
2"flickered"
3"flicked"
4"footsteps"
5"silence"
6"almost alive"
7"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences121
matches
0"looked afraid"
83.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences121
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords10
totalWords1759
ratio0.006
matches
0"You shouldn't be here, Detective."
1"You shouldn't be here, Detective."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1354
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn18
Tomás1
Herrera10
Saint1
Christopher1
Raven1
Nest1
London2
Tube1
Blitz1
Morris4
Seville1
Rain1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Raven"
7"Blitz"
8"Morris"
9"Rain"
places
0"London"
1"Seville"
globalScore0.835
windowScore0.833
47.26% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them"
1"looked like wood but felt like teeth"
2"felt like teeth"
3"spiral that seemed to turn inward forever"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.569
wordCount1759
matches
0"not as she was, but as she might be, older, harder, with Morris standing behind"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean35.9
std30.28
cv0.844
sampleLengths
071
13
220
324
465
510
673
77
86
922
1073
1114
124
1360
148
152
1674
1767
189
1959
207
2115
227
2349
2410
2588
2619
2782
2813
2925
3076
3114
3263
3339
3411
356
3669
3788
3857
3910
403
4171
4213
43101
4412
4575
4641
479
4815
99.46% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences121
matches
0"been open"
1"been clenched"
65.59% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs248
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"was checking"
2"was walking"
3"was buying"
4"was already moving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences134
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1358
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.029455081001472753
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0029455081001472753
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean13.13
std11.92
cv0.908
sampleLengths
07
122
213
313
416
53
64
72
83
911
107
112
1215
1312
1413
153
1637
175
183
192
207
2121
225
2321
2419
257
266
279
2813
2930
3021
317
3215
333
3411
354
3614
3710
3810
395
4021
413
424
431
442
4511
468
4731
487
494
57.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.41044776119402987
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners55
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences104
matches
0"Somewhere, water dripped."
1"Somewhere else, something that might"
ratio0.019
85.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences104
matches
0"Her boots splashed through a"
1"She pocketed it."
2"Her phone buzzed."
3"She'd traced the message to"
4"She drew her service weapon."
5"She found the bookshelf in"
6"Her radio crackled."
7"She killed the radio."
8"She flicked on her torch."
9"She knew the Tube map"
10"She had never heard of"
11"She kept her torch low."
12"He wore a different jacket"
13"He stopped at a stall"
14"He didn't look up."
15"He set the scalpel down"
16"His warm brown eyes met"
17"She thought of the text"
18"*You shouldn't be here, Detective.*"
19"He turned, moving deeper into"
ratio0.337
56.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences104
matches
0"The rain fell hard enough"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pulled her"
2"Her boots splashed through a"
3"She pocketed it."
4"Quinn checked her watch."
5"Her phone buzzed."
6"A text from an unknown"
7"She'd traced the message to"
8"The alley opened onto a"
9"The Raven's Nest."
10"Quinn had heard whispers about"
11"She drew her service weapon."
12"The door gave way without"
13"The bartender, a woman with"
14"the woman said"
15"The woman laughed, a dry"
16"Quinn moved deeper, past a"
17"She found the bookshelf in"
18"The books slid aside with"
19"Her radio crackled."
ratio0.808
48.08% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"Now she found his Saint"
ratio0.01
75.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Quinn had heard whispers about this place from informants who'd gone quiet, from case files that didn't add up, from the way certain evidence simply evaporated …"
1"Quinn moved deeper, past a cluster of leather jackets and tailored suits, past a man with too many teeth who watched her with eyes that reflected the dim light …"
2"They passed a cage containing something that screamed in frequencies that made Quinn's teeth ache."
3"They passed a mirror that showed her not as she was, but as she might be, older, harder, with Morris standing behind her shoulder and blood on her hands."
4"Beyond it, the air changed again, warmer now, smelling of herbs and antiseptic and something else, something that made Quinn think of hospitals and emergency ro…"
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Herrera leaned, his voice dropping to something almost gentle"
1"Herrera said, not looking back"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.28
leniency0.56
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.6864%