Run: 2026-10-06-01M48VQ6BDXMP49Q57XXXH4PSX

Run Details

Duration:
59.7s
Cost:
$0.004744
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt clicked. Then another. Then the third, each one a small explosion in the hallway's silence. Rory's hand froze on her teabag, still dripping Earl Grey into the mug on her counter. She didn't turn around. She knew that particular rhythm of hesitation at the door, the way someone paused before committing to a knock that had already happened three times in the space of ten seconds. The flat smelled of cardamom and old paper. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, yowled from somewhere in the bedroom and went quiet again. "Rory." She set the teabag down. The string swung, dripping amber onto the counter. "I know you're in there." She turned. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway like he always did, too tall for the frame, charcoal suit immaculate despite the November rain darkening his shoulders. Platinum hair slicked back, wet at the edges. One amber eye catching the kitchen light, the other black as a held breath. The ivory cane hooked over his forearm, the blade inside it catching the same light, winking. He'd come to Brick Lane. He'd found her. "You're not Eva," he said, and stepped inside before she could answer. The door clicked shut behind him, three deadbolts engaging in sequence. "I checked. She's in Prague. Researching something about—" He stopped. His jaw tightened. "Doesn't matter." Rory leaned against the counter, arms crossed. The crescent scar on her wrist caught the light when she shifted her weight. "You can't just walk in, Luc." "I can. I do." He moved into the flat like he owned it, past the tower of books on the small table, past the scrolls unrolled across every surface, past the research notes pinned to walls that had run out of space weeks ago. "You left London without saying goodbye." "I left London because I needed to." She pushed off the counter, stepped into the narrow space between them. Close enough to smell him—bergamot and something darker, something that made her skin remember. "You know why." Lucien's amber eye flickered. The black one didn't move, didn't blink. "I know you were hurt." "Was I?" She laughed, sharp and broken at the edges. "You don't get to ask that, Lucien. You don't get to stand there in your perfect suit and ask if I was hurt when you—" She stopped. Swallowed. The words had been building for three months, ever since she'd fled Cardiff, ever since she'd let Eva drag her to this flat and this life and this careful distance from everything that had come before. He reached for her. His hand stopped halfway, hovering near her cheek, not touching. "You think I don't know?" His voice dropped, rough in a way that didn't match the polished fixer she'd known. "You think I don't lie awake wondering if you're still wearing that stupid bracelet I gave you? The one with the—" He gestured vaguely. "The silver thing. You hated it. Said it looked like handcuffs." "It did look like handcuffs." "It looked like mine." The words came out flat, stripped of everything. "I wanted you to have something of mine. Something that would remind you—" He stopped again. When he spoke, his voice had gone quiet. "I'm not him, Rory. I'm not Evan. I never was." She felt it then, the crack in her armor, the place where three months of careful distance had worn thin. "You don't get to say that. Not after—" "After what?" He finally touched her, fingers brushing her jaw, her throat, the pulse hammering there. "After I asked you to run with me? After I told you I'd find you no matter where you went?" His thumb traced her collarbone, slow, deliberate. "I found you. I'm here. That's not the behaviour of a man who doesn't care." Rory caught his wrist. Her fingers found the scar on her own wrist, pressed there without thinking, a talisman against what came next. "You were supposed to be in Marseille. The Avaros business—" "Is handled." He turned her hand, pressed a kiss to her palm, to the crescent scar she'd never explained to him. "I told you I'd come. You didn't believe me." "I didn't." She pulled her hand back, but didn't step away. "I didn't believe you'd leave everything for me. For us." The words hung between them, heavier than she'd intended. "We weren't anything, Luc. We were—" She searched for the word. "A distraction. A favour. You fixed things for me, and I let you, and I told myself it didn't mean—" "It meant everything." He stepped closer, close enough that she felt the heat of him through the wool of his coat, close enough to see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the way his black eye reflected her face like a mirror she couldn't look away from. "Every night in that flat in Clerkenwell, every time I walked past your restaurant and told myself I wouldn't go in, every time I had to remind myself that you were safe and I wasn't the one keeping you safe—" His hand came up, tucked a strand of black hair behind her ear, the gesture so gentle it broke something open in her chest. "I'm still not. I can't be. Not the way you need." Rory's breath hitched. She reached up, fingers finding the lapel of his coat, the warmth of his throat beneath. "Then what are you?" "Someone who should have fought harder." He covered her hand with his own, pressed it flat against his chest, over the place where his heart beat too fast, too hard. "Someone who let you go because I thought—" He laughed, broken. "I thought if I loved you enough, you'd come back on your own. I thought I was being noble. I was being a coward." The kitchen light flickered. Ptolemy yowled again, somewhere in the dark of the bedroom, and was silent. Rory looked up at him, really looked, and saw the exhaustion there, the three months of searching in the hollows beneath his eyes, the way his perfect composure had cracked somewhere along the way. She saw the man beneath the fixer, the demon beneath the man, the desperate, stupid, wonderful thing that had looked at her across a crowded room in Cardiff and seen something worth crossing worlds for. "I was scared," she whispered. "I know." "I thought if I stayed, if I let you—" She shook her head. "I thought I'd lose myself. I'd already lost so much. Evan, and Cardiff, and the person I was supposed to be." She touched his face, traced the line of his jaw, the stubble that had grown since she'd last seen him. "I didn't know how to be yours. I didn't know how to be anyone's." Lucien caught her hand again, brought it to his mouth, kissed each knuckle with a tenderness that undid her. "You don't have to be mine. You just have to be here. With me. Let me—" He stopped, searched her face. "Let me try again. Properly. No more running, no more hiding. Just—" He gestured between them, helpless, open. "Us. Whatever that looks like." Rory felt the tears before she could stop them, hot and traitorous, tracking down her cheeks. She didn't wipe them away. Let him see. Let him see all of it, the mess and the fear and the desperate hope she'd been carrying since she'd fled. "You're an idiot," she said, and kissed him. His hands came up immediately, cradling her face, and the kiss was everything she'd denied herself—desperate and slow and achingly sweet. His mouth was warm, his taste familiar, the press of his lips against hers a language they'd both been speaking in their sleep. She tasted rain and bergamot and the salt of her own tears, and she didn't pull away. When they finally broke apart, foreheads touching, breathing the same air, Lucien rested his thumb against her cheekbone. "Stay," he said. Not a question. Rory nodded, once, small and certain. "Stay." He smiled then, the first real smile she'd seen from him in months, and it transformed his face, softened the sharp edges, made him look younger and more vulnerable than she'd ever seen him. He kissed her again, softer this time, and she felt the click of something settling into place, the door opening on a room she'd been afraid to enter. Outside, the rain fell harder on Brick Lane, washing the streets clean. Inside, on a cramped flat above a curry house, surrounded by books and scrolls and the ghosts of research half-finished, two people who had parted on complicated terms began again.
created_at"2026-10-06T15:01:09.622Z" 10/6/2026, 3:01:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He stopped again [again]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.551
leniency1
rawRatio0.074
effectiveRatio0.074
96.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1438
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1438
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"perfect"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"traced"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"tenderness"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"flickered"
3"perfect"
4"pulse"
5"traced"
6"warmth"
7"tenderness"
8"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
89.29% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"see"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1436
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1003
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Earl1
Grey1
Eva2
Moreau1
November1
Brick2
Lane2
Close1
Swallowed1
Cardiff2
Rory7
Lucien4
persons
0"Earl"
1"Grey"
2"Eva"
3"Moreau"
4"Rory"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1436
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean35.9
std26.78
cv0.746
sampleLengths
017
151
221
31
413
55
664
78
838
927
1050
1136
1216
1374
1414
1555
165
1746
1828
1958
2033
2130
2261
23124
2423
2565
2617
2769
285
292
3068
3163
3245
338
3461
3518
366
377
3862
3942
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs184
matches(empty)
86.83% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences102
ratio0.02
matches
0"Close enough to smell him—bergamot and something darker, something that made her skin remember."
1"His hands came up immediately, cradling her face, and the kiss was everything she'd denied herself—desperate and slow and achingly sweet."
90.73% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1006
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"desperate, stupid, wonderful thing"
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.0437375745526839
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005964214711729622
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean14.08
std11.4
cv0.809
sampleLengths
03
12
212
316
44
531
68
713
81
95
108
115
122
1324
148
1514
1616
175
183
1912
2011
2110
223
232
247
2514
266
2744
286
2919
3014
313
324
337
345
3510
3627
371
3836
394
4010
4120
4224
4311
445
4512
4616
478
4810
4920
34.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.30392156862745096
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners31
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Then the third, each one"
ratio0.014
6.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences73
matches
0"She didn't turn around."
1"She knew that particular rhythm"
2"She set the teabag down."
3"He'd come to Brick Lane."
4"He'd found her."
5"he said, and stepped inside"
6"His jaw tightened."
7"He moved into the flat"
8"She pushed off the counter,"
9"She laughed, sharp and broken"
10"He reached for her."
11"His hand stopped halfway, hovering"
12"His voice dropped, rough in"
13"He gestured vaguely"
14"He stopped again"
15"She felt it then, the"
16"He finally touched her, fingers"
17"His thumb traced her collarbone,"
18"Her fingers found the scar"
19"He turned her hand, pressed"
ratio0.534
28.49% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences73
matches
0"The deadbolt clicked."
1"Rory's hand froze on her"
2"She didn't turn around."
3"She knew that particular rhythm"
4"The flat smelled of cardamom"
5"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, yowled from"
6"She set the teabag down."
7"The string swung, dripping amber"
8"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway"
9"Platinum hair slicked back, wet"
10"The ivory cane hooked over"
11"He'd come to Brick Lane."
12"He'd found her."
13"he said, and stepped inside"
14"The door clicked shut behind"
15"His jaw tightened."
16"Rory leaned against the counter,"
17"The crescent scar on her"
18"He moved into the flat"
19"She pushed off the counter,"
ratio0.863
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
19.70% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She knew that particular rhythm of hesitation at the door, the way someone paused before committing to a knock that had already happened three times in the spac…"
1"The words had been building for three months, ever since she'd fled Cardiff, ever since she'd let Eva drag her to this flat and this life and this careful dista…"
2"She saw the man beneath the fixer, the demon beneath the man, the desperate, stupid, wonderful thing that had looked at her across a crowded room in Cardiff and…"
3"Lucien caught her hand again, brought it to his mouth, kissed each knuckle with a tenderness that undid her."
4"Inside, on a cramped flat above a curry house, surrounded by books and scrolls and the ghosts of research half-finished, two people who had parted on complicate…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He laughed, broken"
88.78% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"He laughed (laugh)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.122
leniency0.245
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.122
81.5184%