Run: 2026-10-06-01M48VQ6PG22YZPGX065K781EV

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Duration:
20.0s
Cost:
$0.004230
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Camden Town Tube station smelled of rust and stagnant water. Detective Harlow Quinn crouched beside the body, her leather watch catching the beam of her torch, the second hand ticking through the silence. Eighteen years on the force, and she still counted the seconds at every scene. Habit. Ritual. The only things that kept the dead from becoming ghosts. "Third one this month," said DC Yates, her colleague, from somewhere behind Quinn's left shoulder. "Same MO. Same—" He gestured vaguely. "Same nothing." Quinn didn't look up. The victim lay on his back, a young man in a thrifted velvet jacket, his throat opened with surgical precision. No blood. That was the nothing. That was the part that didn't add up. "The cut's clean," Quinn said. "No hesitation. No struggle marks on the wrists." She finally turned, her salt-and-pepper hair catching the torchlight, her brown eyes narrowing. "He let them do it." "Or he was already dead." Yates squatted beside her, his knees popping. "No defensive wounds. No lividity pooling wrong. He's been moved here, Harlow. Post-mortem." Quinn stood, her sharp jaw set. She walked the perimeter, boots crunching on broken tile. The station's original platform stretched into darkness, the old Northern Line signage still hanging, faded and peeling. Someone had dragged the body across fifty metres of filthy concrete. No drag marks. No blood trail. Nothing. "Check the pockets," she said. Yates produced a leather wallet, empty. A phone, dead. A single bone token, carved from what looked like human femur, etched with a spiral that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the eye. "Veil Market," Yates said, reading the token's reverse side. "They're not supposed to operate in daylight. Not above ground." "They're not operating above ground." Quinn took the token, turned it in her fingers. The spiral moved. "This was placed. A message." She found the second anomaly near the body's right hand, half-hidden beneath a collapsed advertising poster from 1987. A brass compass, no bigger than a pocket watch, its casing green with verdigris. The needle spun slowly, then locked, pointing not north but downward, into the floor. "What is that?" Yates asked. Quinn lifted it by the chain. The face was etched with sigils she didn't recognise, protective markings that made her skin prickle. "A compass that points to something else." She pocketed it without asking permission. Evidence didn't wait for paperwork. "Call it in. Tell them we've got a Market connection. And Yates?" "Yeah?" "Don't touch anything else. Especially not the floor." She walked to where the compass had pointed, her boots finding a seam in the concrete that shouldn't have been there. A maintenance hatch, rusted shut, with fresh scratches around the edges. Someone had opened it recently. Someone had gone down. The hatch gave with a shriek of metal. Quinn descended, Yates following, his torch cutting through absolute dark. The tunnel below wasn't on any map. The walls were brick, older than the station above, and they were wet. Not with water. "Smell that?" Yates whispered. Quinn had already smelled it. Copper and something else, something sweet and wrong, like flowers left too long in a sealed room. She followed the tunnel as it curved, her hand on the brick, feeling vibrations beneath her palm. A rhythm. Almost a heartbeat. They found the second body twenty metres in. This one was different. A woman, middle-aged, dressed in a nurse's uniform from a hospital that had closed in 1962. She sat against the wall, her eyes open, her expression peaceful. Her throat was intact. Her chest was intact. But her hands were pressed flat against the brick, palms down, fingers splayed, as if she'd been pushing against something invisible. The brick behind her hands was blackened, burned from the inside out. "Harlow." Yates's voice had gone strange. "Her hands. Look at her hands." The fingernails were gone. Not torn. Not bitten. Dissolved, as if something had eaten them down to the quick, leaving smooth, raw flesh that glistened in the torchlight. Quinn knelt. She didn't touch the body. She looked at the floor in front of it, where the tunnel continued into darkness, and she saw footprints. Dozens of them. Bare feet, small, child-sized, leading away from the body, deeper into the dark. And coming back. Overlapping. Dozens of trips. Hundreds. "She was carrying something," Quinn said. "Back and forth. Like a—" She stopped. The word wouldn't come. "Like a courier." "For what?" Quinn stood. The compass in her pocket grew warm, its needle twitching toward the darkness ahead. "For the Market. Someone's been running supplies down here. And the first victim—" She thought of the bone token, the spiral that moved. "He wasn't a victim. He was a delivery that went wrong." Yates laughed, a short, broken sound. "You're talking about fairy tales, Harlow. Underground markets. Supernatural—" "Three years ago," Quinn said, not looking at him. "DS Morris. The warehouse fire in Bermondsey. You were there. You saw the body." Yates went quiet. "The report said he died of smoke inhalation. Burns over ninety percent of his body." Quinn's voice didn't rise. It didn't need to. "But his watch was intact. His badge was intact. And his eyes, Yates. His eyes were open. He was looking at something when he died. Not at the flames. At something else." She turned to face him, her brown eyes flat and knowing. "I've been looking for that something for three years. And I think I just found the door." The tunnel ahead breathed. The walls pulsed, that almost-heartbeat rhythm growing stronger, and Quinn heard it now beneath the rhythm: a sound like pages turning, like a book being read aloud in a language that predated human speech. The compass in her pocket burned against her thigh, its needle spinning wildly, pointing everywhere and nowhere. "There's something down here," she said. "Something that's been waiting. And it's been hungry." Yates reached for his radio. Static answered him, a voice like breaking glass. He tried again. Nothing. The tunnel had swallowed their connection, their lifeline, their proof that the world above still existed. "Harlow." He gripped her arm, his fingers digging in. "We need to go back. Now. Whatever this is, whatever's down here, it's not a case. It's not police work. It's—" "It's exactly police work," Quinn said, shaking him off. She walked toward the darkness, her torch beam cutting through the breathing dark, and she didn't look back to see if he followed. "Someone's been murdered. Someone's been running an illegal operation. And someone's been getting away with it because nobody looks down here. Nobody looks where the light doesn't reach." The footprints continued. The breathing grew louder. And somewhere ahead, in the dark that had no bottom, something turned its head and listened for her footsteps, and smiled with teeth that had never known sunlight. Quinn walked to meet it, her hand on her service weapon, her other hand finding the compass in her pocket, feeling its warmth, its hunger, its terrible, beautiful promise that the world was larger than the city above, stranger than any case file, and that the truth was always waiting in the places they were afraid to look.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.513
leniency1
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.05
95.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"velvet"
2"etched"
3"pulsed"
4"footsteps"
5"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1203
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.66% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount901
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Town1
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn17
Yates11
Northern1
Line1
Evidence1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Yates"
3"Evidence"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"Tube"
globalScore0.557
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"spiral that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the eye"
1"looked like human femur, etched with a sp"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.831
wordCount1203
matches
0"not north but downward, into the floor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean30.85
std19.36
cv0.628
sampleLengths
061
123
238
331
425
550
65
736
819
922
1046
115
1252
131
148
1541
1641
174
1844
198
2072
2112
2228
2350
2420
252
2650
2715
2823
293
3055
3128
3255
3314
3433
3530
3660
3735
3858
95.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences103
matches
0"was etched"
1"was blackened"
2"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs159
matches
0"was always waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences122
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount907
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02866593164277839
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007717750826901874
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean9.86
std8.51
cv0.863
sampleLengths
012
123
214
31
41
510
615
76
82
94
1020
112
124
138
145
1521
165
1712
1813
196
209
2117
2211
233
243
251
265
276
283
2927
309
3110
3214
333
345
3518
3614
3714
385
396
4016
4113
425
4312
441
458
4621
4711
485
494
59.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.4180327868852459
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners51
39.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Almost a heartbeat."
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences84
matches
0"He gestured vaguely"
1"She finally turned, her salt-and-pepper"
2"She walked the perimeter, boots"
3"She found the second anomaly"
4"She pocketed it without asking"
5"She walked to where the"
6"She followed the tunnel as"
7"They found the second body"
8"She sat against the wall,"
9"Her throat was intact."
10"Her chest was intact."
11"She didn't touch the body."
12"She looked at the floor"
13"She thought of the bone"
14"It didn't need to."
15"She turned to face him,"
16"He tried again."
17"He gripped her arm, his"
18"She walked toward the darkness,"
ratio0.226
25.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences84
matches
0"The abandoned Camden Town Tube"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn crouched beside"
2"The only things that kept"
3"He gestured vaguely"
4"Quinn didn't look up."
5"The victim lay on his"
6"That was the nothing."
7"That was the part that"
8"She finally turned, her salt-and-pepper"
9"Yates squatted beside her, his"
10"Quinn stood, her sharp jaw"
11"She walked the perimeter, boots"
12"The station's original platform stretched"
13"Someone had dragged the body"
14"Yates produced a leather wallet,"
15"A phone, dead."
16"A single bone token, carved"
17"Yates said, reading the token's"
18"Quinn took the token, turned"
19"The spiral moved."
ratio0.869
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The face was etched with sigils she didn't recognise, protective markings that made her skin prickle."
1"Quinn descended, Yates following, his torch cutting through absolute dark."
2"A woman, middle-aged, dressed in a nurse's uniform from a hospital that had closed in 1962."
3"But her hands were pressed flat against the brick, palms down, fingers splayed, as if she'd been pushing against something invisible."
4"Dissolved, as if something had eaten them down to the quick, leaving smooth, raw flesh that glistened in the torchlight."
5"The compass in her pocket burned against her thigh, its needle spinning wildly, pointing everywhere and nowhere."
6"And somewhere ahead, in the dark that had no bottom, something turned its head and listened for her footsteps, and smiled with teeth that had never known sunlig…"
7"Quinn walked to meet it, her hand on her service weapon, her other hand finding the compass in her pocket, feeling its warmth, its hunger, its terrible, beautif…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"pepper hair catching, her brown eyes narrowing"
1"Yates squatted, his knees popping"
2"Quinn said, not looking at him"
3"He gripped, his fingers digging in"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Yates whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.256
leniency0.513
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.051
82.2210%