Run: 2026-10-06-01M48VXFC8WM2JAPXNHYP3HPAE

Run Details

Duration:
44.1s
Cost:
$0.005354
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets that turned the streetlights into smeared halos. Detective Harlow Quinn pulled her collar up and watched the green neon of the Raven's Nest flicker through the downpour, its reflection fracturing across the wet cobblestones. She'd been tracking Tomás Herrera for three hours, ever since the tip came through about a meeting at Silas' bar. Three hours of watching him slip through alleys, of losing him twice and finding him again, of wondering if she was chasing a ghost or a man. She'd lost her partner chasing ghosts. DS Morris had followed something into the dark three years ago, and the department had found his body in the Thames with no water in his lungs. Quinn still woke at 3 AM seeing the look on his face in those final moments, whatever he'd seen. Herrera had emerged from the Nest twenty minutes ago, glancing over his shoulder like a man who knew he was being watched. He'd moved fast, purposeful, his olive skin gleaming under the streetlamps despite the rain. The scar on his left forearm had caught the light when he'd pushed through a door, a pale crescent against the dark. Quinn followed. He cut through Soho's backstreets, past shuttered restaurants and the occasional drunk stumbling out of a pub, past the theatre district where the marquees blazed their false promises into the night. She kept her distance, close enough to track him, far enough that he wouldn't spot her salt-and-pepper hair or the military bearing she couldn't shake even in civilian clothes. Herrera ducked into an alley between a shuttered betting shop and a closed-down travel agency. Quinn rounded the corner and found him standing at a rusted iron door, fumbling with something in his pocket. A bone token, pale and curved, caught the light from a distant window. The door opened. Herrera slipped inside. Quinn reached the threshold and stopped. The Veil Market. She'd heard the whispers. Every detective in London knew about the underground markets, the places where the city's hidden population traded in things that didn't exist in any statute book. The Camden station, abandoned since the 1920s, supposedly hosted one of the largest. The entrance required a token, something only the initiated possessed. The market moved every full moon, and tonight was close enough that Quinn could feel it in her bones, a pressure behind her eyes like the storm was inside her skull. Herrera was inside. She'd followed him this far. The question was whether she followed him further. Quinn's hand found the worn leather of her watch. 11:47. She had time. The market wouldn't close for hours. She stepped through the door. The stairwell beyond smelled of rust and something else, something organic and wrong, like meat left too long in summer heat. The walls sweated moisture that wasn't water. Quinn descended, her shoes finding purchase on steps worn smooth by generations of feet, and counted forty-seven before the tunnel opened into the station. Camden Town station had been grand once. Now the vaulted ceiling sagged with damp, the original tiles cracked and black with mold. Gas lamps flickered along the platforms, casting everything in shades of amber and shadow. And everywhere, people. Hundreds of them, moving through the space with the easy familiarity of regulars. A woman with too many joints in her fingers sold vials of liquid that shifted colors in the light. A man with no reflection in the mirrors that lined one wall offered maps that showed streets that didn't exist. Children ran between stalls, their laughter too high, too many notes at once. Quinn kept her head down. She'd seen enough of the Met's files on the supernatural fringe to know that attention was currency here, and she had none to spend. Her hand rested near her pocket, where her warrant sat useless against whatever laws governed this place. She found Herrera near the far platform, arguing with a vendor whose face was hidden behind a porcelain mask. The detective hung back, watching the exchange. Herrera's hands moved constantly, gesturing, pleading. The masked vendor shook its head, twice, three times. Then Herrera reached into his jacket and produced something that made Quinn's breath catch. A photograph. She couldn't see the image, but she saw Herrera's face change, saw the desperation that had driven him through the rain-soaked streets, through the door she'd followed him through. The vendor took the photograph. Studied it. Reached beneath the stall and produced a small glass sphere, no larger than a marble, filled with swirling silver mist. Herrera paid. Coins that weren't coins, Quinn realized, watching them change hands. Something that caught the gaslight and threw it back wrong, bent and hungry. He turned. Walked directly toward her. Quinn didn't run. Running would draw every eye in the station, every predator who'd smelled her outsider status the moment she'd descended the stairs. She stood still, let him approach, let him see her face in the amber light. "Detective Quinn." His voice carried the accent of Seville, softened by years in London. "I wondered when you'd find your way down." "You know I'm here." "I know you've been following me for three hours." He smiled, and it didn't reach his warm brown eyes. "Impressive, for someone who doesn't believe any of this is real." "I believe my partner died chasing something like this. Three years ago. Body in the Thames, no water in his lungs." Quinn stepped closer, close enough to smell the antiseptic on his hands, the faint copper underneath. "I believe whatever you're selling, whatever you're buying, it killed him. I believe you know something about it." Herrera's smile faded. He glanced at the silver sphere in his palm, then back at her. "DS Morris. Yes. I treated him, once. Before I lost my license." He laughed, a short, broken sound. "Before I learned what I was treating." "What did you see?" "What I see every day." Herrera tucked the sphere into his jacket, near his heart, where the Saint Christopher medallion hung. "The veil between what is and what was. It's thin here, Detective. Thinner than the Met wants to admit." He leaned closer, close enough that Quinn could see the scar on his forearm, the pale crescent that ran from wrist to elbow. "Your partner saw something through it. Something that saw him back. That's all I know." "That's not enough." "No." Herrera straightened, the military bearing in his posture a ghost of his paramedic training. "It's never enough. But it's what I have." He turned to leave, then paused. "The sphere I just bought. It shows the way through. To wherever your partner went. To whatever took him." He looked at her, really looked, and Quinn saw the exhaustion there, the weight of years spent stitching wounds that shouldn't exist. "I can sell it to you. Or I can use it myself, tonight, and find out what happened to him. What happens to all of us who look too closely." Quinn thought of Morris's face in those final moments. The thing he'd seen. The thing that had drowned him without water. She thought of the stairwell behind her, the rain-soaked streets above, the life she'd built on not looking too closely. "How much?" Herrera named a price. Quinn didn't have it. She'd never have it, not in any currency the Met recognized. But she had her badge. Her gun. Eighteen years of decorated service and a partner's death she'd never explained, never closed. She reached into her pocket and found the worn leather of her watch. 11:58. The market would move soon, at midnight, and she'd be trapped here or forced to climb back to a world that didn't want what she'd seen. "I don't have money," she said. "I have this." She pulled out her warrant card, her service weapon, laid them on the vendor's stall between them. "I have my name. My record. I have the promise that whatever I find down here, I bring back to the light. That's worth more than coins to someone who needs to disappear, Mr. Herrera. That's worth more than your life to someone who wants to know what killed DS Morris." Herrera studied the badge. The gun. Her face. "My sister is in witness protection," he said finally. "In a town in Yorkshire. The Met thinks she's dead. If anything happens to me, if I don't check in by Friday, they find her. They kill her." He met Quinn's eyes. "You want to follow me through the veil? You do it my way. You protect her. You find out what happened to your partner. And you don't come back here looking for me, not until you know what you're hunting." Quinn picked up her weapon. Felt its weight, familiar and strange. "You're asking me to trust a man who sells secrets to monsters." "I'm asking you to trust a paramedic who couldn't save everyone he tried to help." Herrera turned, started walking toward the far end of the platform, where the tunnel curved into darkness. "The sphere shows the way. But it only works once. And whatever's on the other side, Detective—" He glanced back, and for a moment Quinn saw not the smooth face of a criminal, but a man who'd watched too many people die. "—whatever's on the other side, it doesn't care about your badge. It doesn't care about your eighteen years. It only cares if you look at it." Quinn followed. The tunnel beyond the platform had no gas lamps, no vendors, no other people. Only darkness and the sound of her own breathing, too loud, too fast. Herrera walked ahead, his footsteps echoing wrong, as if the tunnel was longer than it should be, as if they were walking through something that wasn't quite space. She thought of the rain above. The green neon of the Raven's Nest. The life she'd built on solid ground, on cases that closed and criminals who went to prison and a world that made sense. Herrera stopped. Held up his hand, and in it the silver sphere pulsed once, twice, like a heartbeat. "Through there," he said, and pushed open a door that hadn't been there, that opened onto a stairwell that descended into a dark Quinn couldn't see the bottom of. She stepped forward. The door closed behind her. And Harlow Quinn, who had spent eighteen years bringing criminals to light, descended into the dark to find out what had killed her partner, what had looked back at DS Morris in his final moments, what waited in the spaces between the world she knew and the world she'd only ever suspected. The rain fell above her, on streets she might never see again, and Detective Quinn followed the man with the scar and the medallion into the veil, where the market moved and the dead didn't stay buried and the truth cost more than she had to pay.
created_at"2026-10-06T15:04:35.468Z" 10/6/2026, 3:04:35 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"He glanced back [back]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
97.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1827
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1827
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"porcelain"
count1
5
word"marble"
count1
6
word"predator"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"gleaming"
2"could feel"
3"flickered"
4"porcelain"
5"marble"
6"predator"
7"weight"
8"familiar"
9"footsteps"
10"echoing"
11"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
93.17% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences115
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
2"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1826
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
67.07% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount1447
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow2
Quinn24
Raven2
Nest3
Tomás1
Herrera18
Three1
Morris3
Thames1
Soho1
Veil1
Market1
London2
Camden2
Town1
Met2
Seville1
Saint1
Christopher1
Detective2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Morris"
6"Market"
7"Met"
8"Saint"
9"Christopher"
10"Detective"
places
0"Nest"
1"Three"
2"Thames"
3"Soho"
4"Veil"
5"London"
6"Camden"
7"Town"
8"Seville"
globalScore0.671
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite space"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.548
wordCount1826
matches
0"not the smooth face of a criminal, but a man who'd watched too many people die"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"know that attention"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean36.52
std27.01
cv0.74
sampleLengths
087
152
258
32
460
547
612
73
884
916
1019
115
1252
1352
1452
1546
1641
1745
1827
1925
206
2139
2222
234
2430
2555
2641
274
2878
293
30100
3121
3220
332
3419
3521
3640
3777
388
3981
4023
41100
422
4355
4436
4518
4629
478
4852
4947
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs253
matches
0"was chasing"
1"was being"
2"were walking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences128
ratio0.008
matches
0"\"—whatever's on the other side, it doesn't care about your badge. It doesn't care about your eighteen years. It only cares if you look at it.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount622
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.028938906752411574
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.00482315112540193
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean14.27
std11.55
cv0.809
sampleLengths
013
127
220
327
46
527
619
722
814
922
102
1131
1229
1315
1419
1513
163
173
186
193
204
2126
2213
2310
2431
253
265
278
289
291
303
316
325
3321
347
3524
367
3715
3814
393
4013
4119
4220
4313
445
4524
4617
4719
487
496
48.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3412698412698413
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners43
65.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"Then Herrera reached into his"
1"Only darkness and the sound"
ratio0.02
98.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences102
matches
0"She'd been tracking Tomás Herrera"
1"She'd lost her partner chasing"
2"He'd moved fast, purposeful, his"
3"He cut through Soho's backstreets,"
4"She kept her distance, close"
5"She'd heard the whispers."
6"She'd followed him this far."
7"She had time."
8"She stepped through the door."
9"She'd seen enough of the"
10"Her hand rested near her"
11"She found Herrera near the"
12"She couldn't see the image,"
13"She stood still, let him"
14"His voice carried the accent"
15"He smiled, and it didn't"
16"He glanced at the silver"
17"He laughed, a short, broken"
18"He leaned closer, close enough"
19"He turned to leave, then"
ratio0.304
18.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences102
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pulled her"
2"She'd been tracking Tomás Herrera"
3"She'd lost her partner chasing"
4"DS Morris had followed something"
5"Quinn still woke at 3" 3/1/2001, 12:00:00 AM
6"Herrera had emerged from the"
7"He'd moved fast, purposeful, his"
8"The scar on his left"
9"He cut through Soho's backstreets,"
10"She kept her distance, close"
11"Herrera ducked into an alley"
12"Quinn rounded the corner and"
13"A bone token, pale and"
14"The door opened."
15"Herrera slipped inside."
16"Quinn reached the threshold and"
17"The Veil Market."
18"She'd heard the whispers."
19"Every detective in London knew"
ratio0.882
49.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"Now the vaulted ceiling sagged"
ratio0.01
8.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Herrera had emerged from the Nest twenty minutes ago, glancing over his shoulder like a man who knew he was being watched."
1"A woman with too many joints in her fingers sold vials of liquid that shifted colors in the light."
2"Then Herrera reached into his jacket and produced something that made Quinn's breath catch."
3"She couldn't see the image, but she saw Herrera's face change, saw the desperation that had driven him through the rain-soaked streets, through the door she'd f…"
4"Coins that weren't coins, Quinn realized, watching them change hands."
5"Something that caught the gaslight and threw it back wrong, bent and hungry."
6"Running would draw every eye in the station, every predator who'd smelled her outsider status the moment she'd descended the stairs."
7"Herrera walked ahead, his footsteps echoing wrong, as if the tunnel was longer than it should be, as if they were walking through something that wasn't quite sp…"
8"And Harlow Quinn, who had spent eighteen years bringing criminals to light, descended into the dark to find out what had killed her partner, what had looked bac…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.067
86.6772%