Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
140
gibberishSentences
1
adjustedGibberishSentences
1
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
1
maxSentenceWordsSeen
76
ratio
0.007
matches
0
"The Grove opened its arms, and the flowers bloomed in colours that had no names, and time moved wrong, and Rory Carter, who was also Rory, who was also Laila, who was also Aurora, …"
"Wildflowers lined the way—bluebells in October, foxgloves she'd never seen this far north, their spotted throats nodding in a wind that touched nothing else."
1
"She checked her phone—no signal, the screen frozen at 2:47 AM."
2
"Not glass—something darker, a pool of mercury held in a frame of woven branches."
3
"It pulsed once, urgent, and she understood—finally understood—why it had brought her here."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
45
technicalSentenceCount
9
matches
0
"Tonight, it pulsed in a rhythm that matched her heartbeat, faster now, insistent."
1
"Every instinct she'd developed in twenty-five years of London streets, of Evan's apartment with its locked doors and his voice rising through the walls, screame…"
2
"The standing stones rose from earth that hadn't existed a moment before, ancient oak dark as bog water, carved with spirals that seemed to turn when she wasn't …"
3
"The grass parted beneath her boots, and she saw what the Grove had grown for her: a path of packed earth leading deeper, between trees that leaned away from it …"
4
"The reflection tilted its head, studying her with eyes that had seen centuries."
5
"The flowers were gone, replaced by something that grew low and grey, fungal and fleshy, spreading across the earth in patterns that hurt to follow with her eyes…"
6
"The path she'd run as a child, the bench where she'd eaten sandwiches with Jennifer, the hill that sloped down to the Thames, visible now as a silver thread thr…"
7
"She stepped forward, into the Grove, and the reflection smiled with her mouth and her eyes and something else, something that had been waiting in the dark betwe…"
8
"The Grove opened its arms, and the flowers bloomed in colours that had no names, and time moved wrong, and Rory Carter, who was also Rory, who was also Laila, w…"
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
6
uselessAdditionCount
2
matches
0
"it said, and its voice was hers, layered with something older, something that had worn her face before"
1
"the reflection called, but the mirror was gone, replaced by a stone identical to the others, and its voice came from everywhere, from the fungal growth, from the dark between the trees, from inside her own skull where the pendant pulsed cold and warning"