Run: 2026-10-06-01M48W4EJ4HNNQ204929CEXZC0

Run Details

Duration:
1m 48s
Cost:
$0.004871
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked. Then the second. Rory counted the seconds between each one, her thumb pressed against the crescent scar on her wrist, the one she'd gotten falling off a climbing frame at seven. She didn't look at the peephole. She already knew who stood on the other side. The door swung open. Lucien Moreau filled the frame like he always did, all sharp angles and expensive charcoal wool, his platinum hair catching the corridor light from the stairwell. One amber eye, one black. He'd once told her the black one saw things the amber couldn't. She'd laughed and called him dramatic. That had been before. "Rory." He didn't smile. "You look terrible." "Thanks. You look—" She stopped. The suit was wrong. Too dark, too formal. He only wore black like that when something had gone wrong. "What are you doing here?" He stepped inside before she could answer, his cane tapping a rhythm against the floorboards she'd scrubbed raw herself last month. The flat smelled of Ptolemy's litter tray and the lavender spray Eva insisted on. Lucien's nose wrinkled. He always hated this place, all clutter and student poverty and the curry smell seeping up through the floorboards. "I need a place to stay." He said it flat, like he was ordering tea. "Three nights. Maybe four." Rory's hand found the doorframe. "You have a flat in Mayfair." "I have a flat in Mayfair that someone put a contract on." He moved past her, into the living room, his eyes scanning the towers of books and scrolls that covered every surface. "They know where I sleep. They know where I eat. They know—" He stopped. Turned. The amber eye caught the light. "They know about you." The words landed like a stone in still water. Rory felt her pulse jump in her throat. She hadn't seen him in eight months. Hadn't spoken to him in six. The last time, he'd walked out of her life without a word, leaving her to find his note on the kitchen table: *I can't be what you need. Don't look for me.* She'd looked anyway. For weeks. Then she'd stopped, because Eva had needed her, because the restaurant had needed her, because the flat above Silas' bar had needed her and she'd needed to keep moving or she'd drown in the silence of it. "Who?" she asked. Lucien set his cane against the sofa. The ivory handle gleamed. "Avaros. My father's people. They've finally decided I'm worth the trouble." A bitter laugh, stripped of its usual charm. "Turns out running information for half the supernatural underworld makes you a target. Who knew." Rory crossed her arms. The scar on her wrist itched. "You could go to the Council. They protect—" "The Council protects their own." He cut her off, and something in his voice made her flinch. "You know that. You've seen what they do to people like me. Half-breeds. Fixers. The ones who get their hands dirty so the pretty ones don't have to." She had seen. She'd seen him get his hands dirty, night after night, pulling strings and brokering deals and once—she still couldn't think about that once—dragging her out of a warehouse in Whitechapel with a demon's claws still smoking in the doorframe behind them. "You could stay with Eva," she said. "She'd—" "Eva's flat has three deadbolts and a cat that hates me." He said it without heat, just fact. "You have four. And a better lock on your bedroom door." "I don't—" Rory stopped. She did have four deadbolts. She'd installed the fourth herself, the week after Evan, when she'd realized that locks were the only thing that kept the world out. "Why me, Lucien? After everything—" "After everything?" He finally looked at her, really looked, and she saw the exhaustion there, the cracks in the perfect mask. "Rory, I left because I was dying. Literally. Avaros poison in my blood, working slow. I didn't want you to watch me—" He broke off, jaw tight. "I didn't want you to be the one to find me dead in your bed." The flat went quiet. Ptolemy yowled from somewhere in the bedroom, demanding attention. "I got better," Lucien said, quieter now. "Found a cure. Expensive, painful, stupid. But I got better." He reached into his jacket, withdrew a folded paper, tossed it onto the coffee table between them. "And then I found out they were coming for you too. Because of me. Because I told you things I shouldn't have, showed you things—" He laughed, hollow. "I'm sorry. I'm so sorry, Rory. I should have kept my mouth shut. Kept my distance. Kept—" "You should have told me." The words came out sharp, edged with eight months of hurt she'd buried under delivery shifts and late-night research and the careful, deliberate business of not thinking about him. "You should have let me decide. Let me help. Let me—" "Let you what?" His voice cracked. He stepped closer, close enough that she could smell him, bergamot and something darker, something that might have been ozone or old magic. "Let you watch me die? Let you fall for a man who was already half-gone?" He was shouting now, or nearly, and his hands were shaking. "I loved you, Rory. I loved you so much it terrified me. And I knew—I knew—that if I stayed, if I let you in, I'd take you down with me. I couldn't—I wouldn't—" The silence stretched between them, heavy and humming. Rory felt tears prick her eyes and hated herself for it. She turned away, busied herself with straightening a stack of Eva's research notes, anything to break the moment. "The sofa's yours. I'll take the floor." "Don't." Lucien's voice had gone rough, stripped of its performative edge. "Please. Don't do that. Don't push me out again." She didn't turn around. "I'm not pushing you out. I'm being practical. You need somewhere safe, I have a spare room that's—" She gestured vaguely. "It's got a bed. Barely. Eva uses it for storage when her cousins visit." "Then I'll sleep in the storage room." "Lucien—" "Rory." He said her name like a prayer, like a wound. "I can't do this again. The pretending. The distance. The—" He laughed, broken. "God, I missed you. I missed your stupid delivery stories and your terrible cooking and the way you hum when you're concentrating. I missed all of it, every fucking day, and I was too proud to come back and say I was sorry, I was scared, I was an idiot." Rory's hands curled into fists. She wanted to turn. She wanted to hit him. She wanted to do both at once and then kiss him until neither of them could breathe. Instead she said, "You left a note. You didn't say any of that." "I know." He was behind her now, close enough that she could feel the heat of him, the tremor in his breath. "I know. I was a coward. I'm still a coward. I'm standing in your flat right now, asking you to let me stay, knowing you have every right to throw me out—" "Stop." She turned. Faced him. His face was wrecked, she saw that now, the sleepless nights and the weight of whatever he'd been running from. "Stop talking. Just stop." He stopped. His mouth closed. His eyes—one amber, one black—held hers with a desperation that made her chest ache. "Stay," she said. "The sofa. Tonight. We'll figure out the rest tomorrow." Lucien stared at her. "That's it? No argument? No—" "No." She smiled, and it felt like breaking something open. "I've had eight months to argue with you in my head, Lucien. I'm tired of it. You can sleep on my sofa. You can eat my terrible cooking. You can hum along to my terrible music." She stepped closer, close enough to touch him, close enough to feel the wild hammer of his pulse against her palm when she pressed it to his chest. "But you don't get to leave again. Not without telling me why. Not without—" Her voice dropped. "Not without letting me in." He caught her wrist. His thumb found the crescent scar, traced it with a gentleness that made her breath catch. "I won't," he whispered. "I swear. I won't leave. Not this time." "Good." She didn't pull away. "Because I have a delivery shift at six, and I need sleep, and you're going to help me carry the heavy boxes up four flights of stairs, and then you're going to tell me everything. All of it. No more secrets." Lucien's mouth twitched, the ghost of his old smile. "You drive a hard bargain, Carter." "Always have." She finally stepped back, broke the contact, turned toward the kitchen. "Make yourself at home. There's tea in the cupboard. The good stuff, Eva's. Don't touch her research, don't feed Ptolemy anything he's not supposed to eat, and for God's sake, try not to bleed on my sofa. I just had it cleaned." She heard him laugh behind her, startled and real, and she let herself smile into the dark of the kitchen, her hand pressed against her heart, wondering if this was forgiveness or foolishness or something else entirely. She didn't let herself decide. Not yet.
created_at"2026-10-06T15:09:16.754Z" 10/6/2026, 3:09:16 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags34
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.54
leniency1
rawRatio0.029
effectiveRatio0.029
96.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1556
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1556
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"charm"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"charm"
4"perfect"
5"could feel"
6"weight"
7"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"decide"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords10
totalWords1549
ratio0.006
matches
0"I can't be what you need. Don't look for me."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount870
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Ptolemy2
Eva3
Rory7
Turned1
Lucien7
Whitechapel1
Evan1
Faced1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Turned"
5"Lucien"
6"Evan"
places
0"Whitechapel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like breaking something open"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1549
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences124
matches
0"scrolls that covered"
1"realized that locks"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean34.42
std23.87
cv0.693
sampleLengths
050
14
253
37
429
557
619
711
858
962
1042
113
1245
1318
1445
1544
168
1729
1837
1963
2013
2179
2245
2388
248
2536
2620
2739
287
291
3074
3131
3213
3354
3429
3519
3612
379
3896
3932
4046
4115
4255
4337
447
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"was wrecked"
77.30% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was ordering"
1"was shouting"
2"were shaking"
96.77% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences124
ratio0.016
matches
0"She'd seen him get his hands dirty, night after night, pulling strings and brokering deals and once—she still couldn't think about that once—dragging her out of a warehouse in Whitechapel with a demon's claws still smoking in the doorframe behind them."
1"His eyes—one amber, one black—held hers with a desperation that made her chest ache."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount830
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03975903614457831
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004819277108433735
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean12.49
std11.51
cv0.921
sampleLengths
04
13
228
36
49
54
626
75
812
96
104
114
123
135
144
154
1611
175
1821
1914
203
2119
2215
234
245
256
2633
2714
281
296
304
319
328
337
346
3528
364
373
382
3937
403
417
424
4319
4415
454
466
478
4817
4928
51.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3548387096774194
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences81
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Too dark, too formal."
2"Then she'd stopped, because Eva"
3"Instead she said,"
ratio0.049
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences81
matches
0"She didn't look at the"
1"She already knew who stood"
2"He'd once told her the"
3"She'd laughed and called him"
4"He didn't smile"
5"He only wore black like"
6"He stepped inside before she"
7"He always hated this place,"
8"He said it flat, like"
9"He moved past her, into"
10"She hadn't seen him in"
11"She'd looked anyway."
12"He cut her off, and"
13"She had seen."
14"She'd seen him get his"
15"He said it without heat,"
16"She did have four deadbolts."
17"She'd installed the fourth herself,"
18"He finally looked at her,"
19"He broke off, jaw tight"
ratio0.568
3.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences81
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked."
1"Rory counted the seconds between"
2"She didn't look at the"
3"She already knew who stood"
4"The door swung open."
5"Lucien Moreau filled the frame"
6"He'd once told her the"
7"She'd laughed and called him"
8"That had been before."
9"He didn't smile"
10"The suit was wrong."
11"He only wore black like"
12"He stepped inside before she"
13"The flat smelled of Ptolemy's"
14"Lucien's nose wrinkled."
15"He always hated this place,"
16"He said it flat, like"
17"Rory's hand found the doorframe."
18"He moved past her, into"
19"The amber eye caught the"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He stepped closer, close enough that she could smell him, bergamot and something darker, something that might have been ozone or old magic."
1"His eyes—one amber, one black—held hers with a desperation that made her chest ache."
2"His thumb found the crescent scar, traced it with a gentleness that made her breath catch."
80.88% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags34
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He broke, jaw tight"
1"He laughed, hollow"
2"He laughed, broken"
86.51% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
1"He was shouting now (be shout)"
2"He laughed (laugh)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.381
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.127
82.7007%