| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1416 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1416 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "mosaic" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "unreadable" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "echoes" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "depths" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "oppressive" | | 13 | "familiar" | | 14 | "enigmatic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | | |
| 93.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 146 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1407 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "aware" | | 1 | "could be" | | 2 | "couldn’t" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 8.78% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 69 | | wordCount | 1133 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.82 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 32 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 15 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Herself | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Half-Fae" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae-forged" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.088 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 48.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if recognizing the strangeness of this place" | | 1 | "felt like a natural law rather than a q" | | 2 | "as if plucking at invisible threads" |
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| 57.85% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.421 | | wordCount | 1407 | | matches | | 0 | "not green but a shifting mosaic of colors" | | 1 | "not what is, but what *could be*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 31.27 | | std | 22.15 | | cv | 0.708 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 90 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 65 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 75 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 62 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 50 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 56 | | 35 | 50 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 41 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 146 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt it first—a shift in pressure, like the world itself had taken a breath." | | 1 | "The leaves above were not green but a shifting mosaic of colors—gold, violet, deep indigo—shifting as if the foliage itself were alive, breathing." | | 2 | "She was suddenly hyper-aware of her own humanity—the beat of her heart, the rasp of her breath, the weight of her bones." | | 3 | "The colors bled together—purple into gold into a shade of green so deep it was nearly black." | | 4 | "The water was black, depthless, reflecting nothing—not the sky, not the trees, not even Rory’s face when she leaned over it." | | 5 | "Now it shimmered, and in its depths, she saw—" | | 6 | "And in her hand—" | | 7 | "The sounds of Richmond Park—distant traffic, the rustle of normal trees, the chatter of squirrels—rushed back in." | | 8 | "But the image of the blade in her hand, the blood on the ground—it clung to her like a second skin." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1145 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.02794759825327511 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005240174672489083 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 146 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 146 | | mean | 9.64 | | std | 6.31 | | cv | 0.655 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 42.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3013698630136986 | | totalSentences | 146 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 32.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she turned away from" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "It was warm against her" | | 1 | "She exhaled, watching her breath" | | 2 | "She didn’t need to." | | 3 | "She left no footprints, her" | | 4 | "Their caps glowed faintly, a" | | 5 | "It was velvety, warm." | | 6 | "She stood, wiping her palm" | | 7 | "She was suddenly hyper-aware of" | | 8 | "She reached for the Heartstone" | | 9 | "She tossed a pebble in." | | 10 | "It vanished without a ripple." | | 11 | "Her black hair streaked with" | | 12 | "She stood in a ruined" | | 13 | "His throat was slit, his" | | 14 | "She clenched them into fists." | | 15 | "She wiped her palms on" | | 16 | "They flowed back the way" | | 17 | "She didn’t want to know" | | 18 | "She didn’t want to see" | | 19 | "It had cooled, its pulse" |
| | ratio | 0.216 | |
| 4.12% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed the moment" | | 1 | "Rory felt it first—a shift" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed behind" | | 3 | "The grove beyond was a" | | 4 | "The grass beneath Rory’s boots" | | 5 | "Nyx flowed ahead, their form" | | 6 | "The violet glow of their" | | 7 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 8 | "It was warm against her" | | 9 | "She exhaled, watching her breath" | | 10 | "Isolde didn’t answer." | | 11 | "She didn’t need to." | | 12 | "The Half-Fae moved ahead, her" | | 13 | "She left no footprints, her" | | 14 | "Rory had seen it before," | | 15 | "The trees were ancient, their" | | 16 | "The leaves above were not" | | 17 | "The air smelled of honey" | | 18 | "A rustle in the undergrowth" | | 19 | "The cold of its hilt" |
| | ratio | 0.912 | |
| 49.02% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it shimmered, and in" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 28.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove beyond was a riot of color and scent, wildflowers blooming in impossible hues, their petals shimmering as if dusted with crushed gemstones." | | 1 | "It was warm against her skin, pulsing faintly, as if recognizing the strangeness of this place." | | 2 | "The trees were ancient, their trunks wide as houses, their bark etched with symbols that made Rory’s eyes ache if she stared too long." | | 3 | "The leaves above were not green but a shifting mosaic of colors—gold, violet, deep indigo—shifting as if the foliage itself were alive, breathing." | | 4 | "When she pulled her hand back, the moss seemed to sigh, its tendrils curling inward as if disappointed by her withdrawal." | | 5 | "Isolde turned, her lips curling in a smile that was more mystery than warmth." | | 6 | "The seer’s expression was unreadable, but her fingers twitched at her sides, as if plucking at invisible threads." | | 7 | "The crimson gem pulsed, its inner glow brightening as if in response to the grove’s magic." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde had (have)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.111 | | leniency | 0.222 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |