Run: 2026-10-07-01M4ASPQSQCDAZG9BEN7234SV1

Run Details

Duration:
20.5s
Cost:
$0.018684
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the window, a relentless staccato that matched the unease coiling in Rory’s stomach. She wiped her hands on her jeans, the scent of curry and cumin from the restaurant downstairs clinging to her skin. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound between her legs, his tail flicking against the stack of books precariously balanced on the coffee table. The knock came just as she reached for her tea. Three sharp raps, too deliberate to be Eva. Rory froze, the mug halfway to her lips. No one else knew she was here. No one except— Another knock. Insistent. She set the tea down, the porcelain clinking against the chipped wooden table. The flat’s three deadbolts gleamed under the dim lamplight as she approached the door. The peephole offered a distorted view: a figure in a charcoal suit, rain-slicked hair plastered to his forehead. Her breath hitched. “Open the door, Rory. I know you’re there.” Lucien’s voice, smooth as aged whisky, carried through the wood. She pressed her forehead against the door, the cool metal of the deadbolt digging into her palm. “Go away.” “Not until we talk.” She exhaled through her nose. The last time she’d seen him, his cane had been pressed against Evan’s throat, his heterochromatic eyes burning with something she couldn’t name. Then he’d vanished—no explanation, no goodbye. Just silence for six months. “Talk, then. Through the door.” A beat. Then the faint creak of leather—his cane shifting. “I need to see your face.” Her fingers trembled as she undid the locks, each click a tiny betrayal. The door swung open, and there he stood, rain dripping from his chin, his suit clinging to his frame like a second skin. The amber eye caught the light first, then the black one, dark as a starless sky. She blocked the doorway, arms crossed. “You’re dripping on Eva’s welcome mat.” He didn’t move. “Are you going to invite me in?” “Are you going to tell me why you’re here?” A smirk tugged at his lips. “I missed you.” The words landed like a punch. She stepped back, gesturing him inside with a sharp wave. “Five minutes. Then you’re out.” He stepped over the threshold, the scent of rain and bergamot filling the space between them. Ptolemy hissed and bolted under the sofa. Lucien’s cane tapped once against the floor as he straightened, his gaze sweeping over the flat—lingering on the books, the half-empty teacup, her. “Still running,” he observed. “Still an arsehole,” she shot back. His laugh was low, rich. “Fair.” She didn’t offer him a seat. Didn’t offer him tea. Just leaned against the wall, arms still crossed, as if that could shield her from the way his presence unravelled her. He moved to the window, the rain streaking the glass like tears. “Evan’s in London,” he said. Her stomach dropped. “What?” “He’s been asking about you.” The air left her lungs. She pushed off the wall, her fingers curling into fists. “And you didn’t think to lead with that?” He turned, the rainwater glistening on his jaw. “Would it have made a difference?” “Yes.” “You’d still be standing there glaring at me.” She wanted to deny it, but the words stuck in her throat. He was right. Six months of radio silence, and he waltzes in like no time had passed, dropping bombshells like they were pleasantries. “Why now, Lucien? Why warn me now?” His jaw tightened. “Because he’s not just asking. He’s looking.” A shiver ran down her spine. She knew what Evan was capable of—the bruises, the threats, the way he’d made her feel like a caged animal. And now he was here. In her city. She swallowed. “And what do you expect me to do?” “Let me help you.” The words hung between them, heavy with everything unsaid. His cane tapped again, a restless rhythm. She remembered the way he’d moved that night—fluid, lethal—like a shadow given form. The way he’d looked at her after, his eyes dark with something more than anger. “Why?” she asked, quieter now. He stepped closer, the space between them shrinking. “Because I can’t stand the thought of him touching you again.” Her breath caught. The air between them crackled, charged with something electric. She should’ve stepped back. Should’ve told him to leave. But she didn’t. “And what about you?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “What do you want, Lucien?” His gaze dropped to her lips, then back to her eyes. The black one burned. “You know what I want.” The memory of his mouth on hers, hot and demanding, flashed through her mind. The way his hands had gripped her waist, pulling her against him like he wanted to consume her. And then—nothing. He’d walked away. “You left,” she said, the words raw. “I had to.” “Bullshit.” His fingers twitched toward her, then curled into a fist. “There were things I needed to handle. Demons don’t take kindly to half-breeds meddling in their affairs.” She scoffed. “And I was just supposed to wait? Hope you’d come back?” “No.” His voice was rough. “You were supposed to be safe.” The admission hit her like a physical blow. She wanted to hate him for it. Wanted to slam the door in his face and pretend this conversation never happened. But the fear in her gut—Evan, London, the past clawing its way back—rooted her in place. “And now?” she asked. Now he was here. Now the past was a living thing between them, breathing, pulsing. Now his hand lifted, his fingers brushing a strand of hair from her face, tucking it behind her ear. His touch was fire, searing through her. “Now,” he murmured, “I’m not leaving again.” Her pulse roared in her ears. She should’ve pushed him away. Should’ve reminded him of the months of silence, the unanswered questions. But his thumb traced the line of her jaw, and all she could think about was the way his mouth had felt on hers, the way his body had pressed against hers like he was trying to memorise the shape of her. “You’re a bastard,” she whispered. “Oui,” he agreed, his breath warm against her skin. “But I’m your bastard.” And then his lips were on hers, hot and demanding, and she hated herself for the way her body responded—arching into him, her hands fisting in his damp shirt. The cane clattered to the floor. His arms wrapped around her, pulling her flush against him, and for a moment, the world narrowed to this: the heat of him, the taste of rain and sin on his tongue, the way her heart hammered against her ribs. Then she remembered. She shoved him back, her chest heaving. “No. Not like this.” His eyes were dark, his lips parted. “Rory—” “You don’t get to kiss me and make it all better. You don’t get to disappear and then waltz back in here like nothing happened.” He ran a hand through his hair, rainwater dripping onto the floor. “I know.” “Do you?” She wiped her mouth with the back of her hand, as if she could erase the feel of him. “Because it sure as hell doesn’t seem like it.” A muscle in his jaw twitched. “I made a mistake.” “Damn right you did.” Silence stretched between them, thick with everything they weren’t saying. The rain continued its relentless drumming against the window. Ptolemy peeked out from under the sofa, his ears flat. Lucien exhaled, long and slow. “I should’ve called. Should’ve written. Should’ve done a lot of things.” “Yeah. You should’ve.” He bent to retrieve his cane, his movements precise, controlled. When he straightened, his expression was unreadable. “But I’m here now. And Evan’s in London. So unless you’d rather face him alone—” She cut him off with a sharp laugh. “That’s low, even for you.” “It’s the truth.” She wanted to scream. Wanted to throw something. Wanted to kiss him again. Instead, she turned away, her fingers digging into the back of the sofa. “Fine,” she said at last. “You can stay. But only because of Evan.” His cane tapped once against the floor. “And the other reasons?” She didn’t look at him. “There are no other reasons.” A beat. Then, softly: “Liar.” Her grip tightened on the sofa. She could feel his gaze on her, heavy as a touch. “You’re pushing your luck, Frenchman.” “Am I?” She turned, ready to snap at him, but the look in his eyes stopped her. The amber one was warm, almost tender. The black one was a void, pulling her in. “What?” she demanded. He held her gaze. “Nothing.” But it wasn’t nothing. It was everything—the past, the present, the way her body still hummed from his kiss. The way her stupid, traitorous heart still raced when he looked at her like that. She broke first, glancing away. “You can sleep on the couch.” “Generous.” “Don’t test me.” A smirk played at his lips. “Wouldn’t dream of it.” She rolled her eyes, but the corner of her mouth twitched despite herself. Damn him. Damn the way he could make her want to laugh even when she wanted to strangle him. “There’s a spare blanket in the cupboard,” she said, gesturing to the narrow door beside the kitchenette. “And if you so much as think about sneaking into my bed—” “You’ll what?” His eyebrow quirked. “Kick me out?” “Worse.” “Intriguing.” She grabbed a pillow from the sofa and hurled it at him. He caught it one-handed, his smirk widening. “Sleep, Lucien.” “Yes, ma’am.” She stormed past him, heading for Eva’s bedroom, but not before she caught the way his gaze lingered on her. Not before she felt the weight of his presence, like a promise or a threat. The door clicked shut behind her, but she knew—this wasn’t over. Not by a long shot.
created_at"2026-10-07T09:04:26.431Z" 10/7/2026, 9:04:26 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences75
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1651
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1651
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"stomach"
count2
1
word"porcelain"
count1
2
word"silence"
count4
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"glistening"
count1
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"unreadable"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
14
word"raced"
count1
15
word"eyebrow"
count1
16
word"intriguing"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"porcelain"
2"silence"
3"trembled"
4"glistening"
5"down her spine"
6"charged"
7"electric"
8"whisper"
9"searing"
10"pulse"
11"traced"
12"unreadable"
13"could feel"
14"raced"
15"eyebrow"
16"intriguing"
17"weight"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
1
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"A shiver ran down her spine"
1"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences140
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences198
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1640
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount1279
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.23
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory2
Eva3
Evan3
London1
Ptolemy3
Lucien3
Wanted3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Evan"
3"London"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1640
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences198
matches
0"moved that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs99
mean16.57
std15.47
cv0.934
sampleLengths
059
110
226
33
445
53
68
727
82
94
1039
115
1216
1352
1412
1510
169
179
1821
1946
204
216
226
2343
245
254
265
2723
2814
291
308
3135
327
3310
3434
3510
364
3744
385
3919
4024
4117
4220
4337
447
453
461
4727
4813
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences140
matches
0"been pressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs236
matches
0"was trying"
1"weren’t saying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences198
ratio0.056
matches
0"No one except—"
1"Then he’d vanished—no explanation, no goodbye."
2"Then the faint creak of leather—his cane shifting."
3"Lucien’s cane tapped once against the floor as he straightened, his gaze sweeping over the flat—lingering on the books, the half-empty teacup, her."
4"She knew what Evan was capable of—the bruises, the threats, the way he’d made her feel like a caged animal."
5"She remembered the way he’d moved that night—fluid, lethal—like a shadow given form."
6"And then—nothing."
7"But the fear in her gut—Evan, London, the past clawing its way back—rooted her in place."
8"And then his lips were on hers, hot and demanding, and she hated herself for the way her body responded—arching into him, her hands fisting in his damp shirt."
9"It was everything—the past, the present, the way her body still hummed from his kiss."
10"The door clicked shut behind her, but she knew—this wasn’t over."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1293
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.02474864655839134
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002320185614849188
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences198
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences198
mean8.28
std6.49
cv0.783
sampleLengths
017
121
221
310
48
58
67
73
82
91
1013
1114
1218
133
148
1510
1617
172
184
195
2023
216
225
235
242
258
266
2713
2823
2916
306
316
323
337
349
356
363
376
3810
395
4016
417
4223
434
446
455
461
476
484
4921
45.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.30808080808080807
totalSentences198
uniqueOpeners61
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences125
matches
0"Then he’d vanished—no explanation, no"
1"Just silence for six months."
2"Then the faint creak of"
3"Just leaned against the wall,"
4"Then she remembered."
5"Instead, she turned away, her"
ratio0.048
24.80% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount61
totalSentences125
matches
0"She wiped her hands on"
1"She set the tea down,"
2"Her breath hitched."
3"She pressed her forehead against"
4"She exhaled through her nose."
5"Her fingers trembled as she"
6"She blocked the doorway, arms"
7"He didn’t move."
8"She stepped back, gesturing him"
9"He stepped over the threshold,"
10"she shot back"
11"His laugh was low, rich."
12"She didn’t offer him a"
13"He moved to the window,"
14"Her stomach dropped."
15"She pushed off the wall,"
16"He turned, the rainwater glistening"
17"She wanted to deny it,"
18"He was right."
19"His jaw tightened."
ratio0.488
80.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences125
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"She wiped her hands on"
2"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound between"
3"The knock came just as"
4"Rory froze, the mug halfway"
5"She set the tea down,"
6"The flat’s three deadbolts gleamed"
7"The peephole offered a distorted"
8"Her breath hitched."
9"Lucien’s voice, smooth as aged"
10"She pressed her forehead against"
11"She exhaled through her nose."
12"The last time she’d seen"
13"Her fingers trembled as she"
14"The door swung open, and"
15"The amber eye caught the"
16"She blocked the doorway, arms"
17"He didn’t move."
18"A smirk tugged at his"
19"The words landed like a"
ratio0.76
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences125
matches
0"Now he was here."
1"Now the past was a"
2"Now his hand lifted, his"
ratio0.024
86.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The rain hammered against the window, a relentless staccato that matched the unease coiling in Rory’s stomach."
1"The door swung open, and there he stood, rain dripping from his chin, his suit clinging to his frame like a second skin."
2"Now his hand lifted, his fingers brushing a strand of hair from her face, tucking it behind her ear."
3"And then his lips were on hers, hot and demanding, and she hated herself for the way her body responded—arching into him, her hands fisting in his damp shirt."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"he agreed, his breath warm against her skin"
2"She wiped, as if she could erase the feel of him"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"he agreed (agree)"
4"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences75
tagDensity0.16
leniency0.32
rawRatio0.417
effectiveRatio0.133
84.6581%