Run: 2026-10-07-01M4ASRE5AHFWDJE6RKYBCPH9E

Run Details

Duration:
7m 51s
Cost:
$0.031996
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open. Rory's hand lingered on the brass handle, knuckles whitening against the wood. Through the peephole, she'd seen the charcoal suit, the platinum glint of hair under the streetlamp. She should have stayed silent. She should have pretended the flat was empty, let the knocking fade into the Brick Lane traffic. Instead, she yanked the chain, twisted the lock, and pulled the door inward with a violence that rattled the frame. Lucien stood on the landing, silhouetted against the orange glow of the curry house downstairs. He didn't smile. His cane tapped once against the warped floorboards—ivory handle, thin shaft—a sound like a metronome counting down to something inevitable. One eye caught the light amber, the other swallowed it, black as a Marseille night. He wore the charcoal suit she remembered, the one that fit him like a second skin, platinum hair slicked back from a forehead that held too many secrets. "Carter." He didn't use her first name. The way he used to, back when the syllables had fit between them like a shared secret. "You moved the bookshelves." Rory's fingers found the crescent scar on her left wrist, rubbing the pale tissue without thinking. The flat behind her smelled of old paper, Earl Grey, and Ptolemy's kibble. Stacks of scrolls teetered on every surface, research notes papering the walls in a chaotic mosaic of ink and coffee rings. "Eva rearranged the furniture. You're at the wrong flat, Moreau." "Brick Lane." A step forward. The landing was narrow, barely two feet wide; he filled it, broad shoulders blocking the escape route to the stairs. The scent of him drifted in—bergamot, smoke, and something darker, like ozone before a storm. "Third floor. Three deadbolts. Tabby cat that hisses at strangers. I checked." "Then you know I can see you." She didn't step back. The doorframe bit into her shoulder blades, hard and unyielding. She wore the delivery jacket from Golden Empress, sleeves rolled to her elbows, flour dusting her forearms. Her straight black hair fell past her shoulders, unwashed from the shift, bright blue eyes fixed on his chest instead of his face. "What do you want, Lucien?" The amber eye flickered. Hurt. Or the memory of it. "The same thing I wanted in Marseille. An explanation. A reason." "There isn't one." Her voice cracked on the last word. She hated that it cracked, hated that he could hear the fracture. She pulled her cardigan tighter, wool bunching under her fingers. "I left you a note." "You left a note that said you were going to Cardiff. You have a flat above Silas's bar in London." He reached into his jacket, withdrew a folded paper—train ticket, she recognised the crease pattern, the date stamped in red ink. "You took the 14:15 from Paddington three weeks ago. Then you vanished. No forwarding address. No message through the usual channels. No blood, no trace, nothing." He stepped closer, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in the amber eye, the small scar bisecting his left eyebrow. "You took a flat above Silas's bar in London. You changed your delivery route to avoid the docks. You told Yu-Fei you were sick when I asked about you at the restaurant." Rory stepped into the doorway, blocking him physically, forcing him to look at her. The space between them hummed, charged. Ptolemy yowled from the living room, a sharp tabby objection to the tension, tail puffed like a bottle brush. "I don't owe you an address." "No." He nodded, platinum hair catching the dim hallway light, and his hand moved to his cane. He set it against the wall—ivory gleaming, blade hidden—and pushed both hands through his hair, slicking the platinum back into place with a sharp, agitated gesture. "You owe me the truth. Or you owe me the lie you told me when you said you weren't running." The accusation landed. Rory felt it in her sternum, sharp and specific, a bruise blooming beneath her ribs. She had been running. From Evan, yes, from the hands that had left marks on her skin and fear in her marrow. But also from the life Lucien had offered—the one where she'd traded law books for blood contracts and midnight information drops, where she'd slept with a half-demon who knew the price of every secret in London. She'd told him she wanted normal. She'd told him she couldn't breathe in his world, that the air was too thin, too full of teeth. "I wasn't running from you." The lie tasted like copper, like the pennies she carried for tips. "Your world?" He tilted his head, heterochromatic eyes unblinking, predatory and wounded. "I offered you a door, Aurora. You walked through it. You let me touch you like you meant it. You told me Cardiff was a mistake, that you'd stay." He stepped closer, invading the narrow space, his thigh brushing hers through the denim of her jeans and the wool of his trousers. "Then you slammed the door behind you and pretended you'd never knocked. You pretended I was a dream you had in a hotel room in Marseille." The name—her real name, not Rory, not Carter—landed like a slap. She flinched, the scar on her wrist twisting under her sleeve. "You don't get to follow me here." Rory's hands curled into fists at her sides, the crescent scar pulling tight under the pressure of her nails. "You don't get to stand on Eva's landing and act like you own the air I breathe. I left because I needed to survive, Lucien. Your world eats people like me. It grinds them up and spits out the bones." "Your world?" He laughed, short and broken, the sound scraping against the peeling wallpaper. "You think I don't know what Evan did to you? I pulled his file, Aurora. I know about the hospital in Cardiff. I know about the bruises you hid under turtlenecks in August." He reached out, fingers hovering near her jaw, not touching, his hand trembling. "I offered to make him disappear. I offered to burn his life down. And you looked at me like I was the monster." Rory's breath hitched. She hadn't known he knew. She'd thought she'd hidden it, buried it under layers of normalcy and delivery routes and smiling at customers at Golden Empress. She'd thought she'd escaped clean. "I didn't want your violence." She whispered it. "I didn't want to owe you. I didn't want to be another thing you fixed." "Then what did you want?" His hand dropped, but his eyes burned. "You wanted to disappear. You wanted to be nobody's problem. But you looked back, Rory. You looked back at the door when you left Marseille. You looked back at me." The door stood open between them, the safety chain dangling, forgotten. Ptolemy padded into the hallway, rubbing against Lucien's ankle, purring loud enough to fill the silence. From the kitchen, Eva's voice drifted—humming something off-key, the clatter of a mug. "I'm not a project." Rory's voice steadied. "I'm not some case file you can close by finding me. I left because I needed to be safe. I needed to be—" She stopped. The words stuck in her throat. Human. Normal. Herself. "Safe?" Lucien's amber eye softened, stripped of all the broker's sharp edges, leaving the man. The one who had held her hand in the dark. The one who had kissed her scars in Marseille and told her she was worth more than the sum of her damage. "You think locking three deadbolts makes you safe? You think a flat above a bar keeps him away?" He stepped into the flat, shoulder brushing hers, and the door swung shut behind him with a click that sounded like a verdict, like a beginning. "Or we'll be loud. I don't care anymore. I just need you to look at me and tell me why you disappeared without a word. Tell me you didn't think about me every night in that flat above Silas's. Tell me you didn't check the locks three times because you were afraid I'd find you." The challenge hung in the air, thick as the curry spices drifting up from the kitchen downstairs—cumin and coriander and the scent of frying onions. Rory's throat closed. She thought of the way he'd looked at her in Marseille, before Evan, before London, before the bruises and the fear. She thought of the way his hand had fit in hers, demon heat against human skin, the cane tapping a rhythm against the cobblestones. She thought of the note she'd left, crumpled in her pocket for three days before she'd posted it, the ink blurring where her tears had fallen. "Eva's in the kitchen." Rory's voice shook, betraying her. "She'll hear. She'll come out and see you standing in her hallway holding my hand." "Then we'll be quiet." He didn't release her wrist, didn't release the space between them. He stepped into the flat, pulling her with him, and the door clicked shut behind them. The living room opened up, cramped and book-lined, Ptolemy winding between their legs. Lucien stood in her friend's flat, holding her hand, wearing his charcoal suit and his heart on his sleeve, the amber and black eyes fixed on her face with a hunger that had nothing to do with information and everything to do with want. "Look at me." She whispered it, and her bright blue eyes lifted to meet his, trembling, terrified, and wanting. He did.
created_at"2026-10-07T09:05:22.097Z" 10/7/2026, 9:05:22 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1598
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1598
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"mosaic"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"gleaming"
count1
8
word"normalcy"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"glint"
1"chaotic"
2"mosaic"
3"flickered"
4"eyebrow"
5"charged"
6"tension"
7"gleaming"
8"normalcy"
9"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1587
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1073
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Marseille3
Earl1
Grey1
Ptolemy4
Golden2
Empress2
Evan2
Lucien5
London2
Rory10
Carter1
Eva1
persons
0"Earl"
1"Grey"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Evan"
4"Lucien"
5"Rory"
6"Carter"
7"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Golden"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like copper, like the pennies she"
1"sounded like a verdict, like a beginning"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1587
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences120
matches
0"hated that it hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean22.04
std22.27
cv1.011
sampleLengths
054
120
281
31
423
54
650
710
82
938
1012
117
1254
135
1410
1511
163
1729
185
1920
2021
2126
2224
2332
2439
256
261
2742
2820
29101
305
3112
322
3310
3429
3523
3626
3722
387
3919
4040
412
4212
4333
4413
4523
4634
475
483
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs189
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences120
ratio0.075
matches
0"His cane tapped once against the warped floorboards—ivory handle, thin shaft—a sound like a metronome counting down to something inevitable."
1"The landing was narrow, barely two feet wide; he filled it, broad shoulders blocking the escape route to the stairs."
2"The scent of him drifted in—bergamot, smoke, and something darker, like ozone before a storm."
3"He reached into his jacket, withdrew a folded paper—train ticket, she recognised the crease pattern, the date stamped in red ink."
4"He set it against the wall—ivory gleaming, blade hidden—and pushed both hands through his hair, slicking the platinum back into place with a sharp, agitated gesture."
5"But also from the life Lucien had offered—the one where she'd traded law books for blood contracts and midnight information drops, where she'd slept with a half-demon who knew the price of every secret in London."
6"The name—her real name, not Rory, not Carter—landed like a slap."
7"From the kitchen, Eva's voice drifted—humming something off-key, the clatter of a mug."
8"The challenge hung in the air, thick as the curry spices drifting up from the kitchen downstairs—cumin and coriander and the scent of frying onions."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1087
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.019319227230910764
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0018399264029438822
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean13.23
std10.11
cv0.765
sampleLengths
04
112
216
35
417
520
615
73
820
915
1028
111
126
1317
144
1516
1613
1721
1810
192
203
2120
2215
2312
247
254
2610
2717
2823
295
304
311
325
3311
343
357
3612
3710
385
3920
4021
4126
4224
4332
4414
456
4619
476
481
4916
40.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.275
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners33
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Instead, she yanked the chain,"
ratio0.013
30.53% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences76
matches
0"She should have stayed silent."
1"She should have pretended the"
2"He didn't smile."
3"His cane tapped once against"
4"He wore the charcoal suit"
5"He didn't use her first"
6"She didn't step back."
7"She wore the delivery jacket"
8"Her straight black hair fell"
9"Her voice cracked on the"
10"She hated that it cracked,"
11"She pulled her cardigan tighter,"
12"He reached into his jacket,"
13"He stepped closer, close enough"
14"He nodded, platinum hair catching"
15"He set it against the"
16"She had been running."
17"She'd told him she wanted"
18"She'd told him she couldn't"
19"He tilted his head, heterochromatic"
ratio0.474
6.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences76
matches
0"The door swung open."
1"Rory's hand lingered on the"
2"She should have stayed silent."
3"She should have pretended the"
4"Lucien stood on the landing,"
5"He didn't smile."
6"His cane tapped once against"
7"He wore the charcoal suit"
8"He didn't use her first"
9"The way he used to,"
10"Rory's fingers found the crescent"
11"The flat behind her smelled"
12"Stacks of scrolls teetered on"
13"A step forward."
14"The landing was narrow, barely"
15"The scent of him drifted"
16"She didn't step back."
17"The doorframe bit into her"
18"She wore the delivery jacket"
19"Her straight black hair fell"
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"But also from the life Lucien had offered—the one where she'd traded law books for blood contracts and midnight information drops, where she'd slept with a half…"
1"Ptolemy padded into the hallway, rubbing against Lucien's ankle, purring loud enough to fill the silence."
2"Lucien stood in her friend's flat, holding her hand, wearing his charcoal suit and his heart on his sleeve, the amber and black eyes fixed on her face with a hu…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.8883%