| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The word tasted like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.471 | | leniency | 0.941 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1233 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1233 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "vibrated" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "mechanical" | | 4 | "navigating" | | 5 | "unravel" | | 6 | "electric" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "shattered" | | 9 | "gleaming" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "traced" | | 14 | "chaotic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 61 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1220 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 767 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.78 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | English | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Avaros | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Lucien | 3 | | March | 1 | | Rory | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Avaros" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Lucien" | | 6 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Marseille" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 45.83% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if reacting to the parchment" | | 1 | "tasted like salt and forgiveness, like th" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1220 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.07% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "hated that he" | | 1 | "explain that her" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 45.19 | | std | 36.12 | | cv | 0.799 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 108 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 78 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 114 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 138 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 96 | | 23 | 81 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 136 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.125 | | matches | | 0 | "She watched the peephole, dark and unblinking, waiting for the knock that never came—only the silence of someone who knew exactly how many barriers stood between them and the world." | | 1 | "His cane—ivory handle catching the light, black shaft tapping a slow, deliberate rhythm against the warped floorboards—rested against his thigh." | | 2 | "The amber eye caught the streetlamp; the black one drank the darkness." | | 3 | "The crescent scar on her wrist—pale, puckered from a childhood fall in Cardiff—itched beneath her skin." | | 4 | "\"You left.\" He crossed the cramped room, navigating the teetering towers of Eva's research—scrolls stacked to the ceiling, leather-bound books spilling across every surface, Ptolemy the tabby weaving between his ankles, claws scrabbling for purchase on the floorboards, hissing low and continuous." | | 5 | "He reached toward her cheek, fingers moving close enough that she caught the scent of bergamot and ozone—demon-scent, electric, wrong, the smell of Avaros bleeding through his skin." | | 6 | "She remembered March, the night everything shattered—the way he'd lied about the job, the way she'd walked in on him negotiating with a vampire while she thought they were building a life together, the way she'd grabbed her coat and ran before he could explain that her safety required the lie." | | 7 | "\"Malphora.\" He pulled a folded paper from his jacket—yellowed, ink-stained, edges soft with handling." | | 8 | "He made a sound—low, broken, desperate—and pulled her against him, the cane clattering to the floor behind them, forgotten." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 781 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.020486555697823303 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0038412291933418692 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 16.94 | | std | 12.02 | | cv | 0.709 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 51 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 39 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 36 |
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| 51.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3611111111111111 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 31.32% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "She did not flinch." | | 1 | "She watched the peephole, dark" | | 2 | "His cane—ivory handle catching the" | | 3 | "He stepped inside without invitation," | | 4 | "She tucked her hand into" | | 5 | "He crossed the cramped room," | | 6 | "He stopped at the kitchen" | | 7 | "His jaw tightened, a muscle" | | 8 | "She hated the weakness, hated" | | 9 | "He reached toward her cheek," | | 10 | "His hand dropped to his" | | 11 | "She remembered Cardiff, the lectures" | | 12 | "She remembered Lucien finding her" | | 13 | "She remembered March, the night" | | 14 | "He stepped closer, boots scuffing" | | 15 | "He pulled a folded paper" | | 16 | "He held out the paper," | | 17 | "He met her eyes, amber" | | 18 | "He searched for the word," | | 19 | "Her hand shook when she" |
| | ratio | 0.472 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt retracted with" | | 1 | "Rory's fingers tightened around the" | | 2 | "Tea sloshed over the rim," | | 3 | "She did not flinch." | | 4 | "She watched the peephole, dark" | | 5 | "The handle turned." | | 6 | "Lucien Moreau filled the frame," | | 7 | "Charcoal wool, expensive and rumpled" | | 8 | "His cane—ivory handle catching the" | | 9 | "Platinum hair slicked back from" | | 10 | "The amber eye caught the" | | 11 | "The rasp of Marseille layered" | | 12 | "He stepped inside without invitation," | | 13 | "The door clicked shut behind" | | 14 | "Rory set the mug down" | | 15 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 16 | "She tucked her hand into" | | 17 | "He crossed the cramped room," | | 18 | "The flat smelled of cardamom" | | 19 | "He stopped at the kitchen" |
| | ratio | 0.962 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 37.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt retracted with a pneumatic hiss that vibrated through the doorframe." | | 1 | "She watched the peephole, dark and unblinking, waiting for the knock that never came—only the silence of someone who knew exactly how many barriers stood betwee…" | | 2 | "The scar on her wrist burned, hot and insistent, as if reacting to the parchment." | | 3 | "Ptolemy yowled from the bedroom doorway, arching his back, sensing the shift in the atmosphere, the supernatural weight pressing against the windows, rattling t…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The black eye flickered, pupil dilating to swallow the amber" | | 1 | "His hand dropped, but his gaze locked onto hers, bright blue meeting heterochromatic" | | 2 | "He stepped, boots scuffing the floor" | | 3 | "He held out, his hand steady despite the tremor in his voice" | | 4 | "He crossed, boots scuffing the floorboards" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.029 | | leniency | 0.059 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |