Run: 2026-10-07-01M4ASTZ4EMJ4C99CKQMM6KB67

Run Details

Duration:
2m 35s
Cost:
$0.023793
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt retracted with a pneumatic hiss that vibrated through the doorframe. Rory's fingers tightened around the ceramic mug. Tea sloshed over the rim, scalding her thumb. She did not flinch. She watched the peephole, dark and unblinking, waiting for the knock that never came—only the silence of someone who knew exactly how many barriers stood between them and the world. The handle turned. Lucien Moreau filled the frame, backlit by the sodium glow of Brick Lane. Charcoal wool, expensive and rumpled at the elbows, swallowed the narrow hallway. His cane—ivory handle catching the light, black shaft tapping a slow, deliberate rhythm against the warped floorboards—rested against his thigh. Platinum hair slicked back from a forehead that creased when he smiled, sharp and devoid of warmth. The amber eye caught the streetlamp; the black one drank the darkness. "You moved." The rasp of Marseille layered beneath the English. "I did not." "Silas' bar. Above the off-licence now." He stepped inside without invitation, boots silent on the threadbare rug. The door clicked shut behind him, three deadbolts engaging with mechanical finality. "I checked. Tuesday. I watched you unlock the door from the street below." Rory set the mug down on the cluttered counter. The crescent scar on her wrist—pale, puckered from a childhood fall in Cardiff—itched beneath her skin. She tucked her hand into the pocket of her cardigan, hiding the tremor. "What do you want, Lucien?" "I want what I left on your kitchen table in March." "I did not leave anything." "You left." He crossed the cramped room, navigating the teetering towers of Eva's research—scrolls stacked to the ceiling, leather-bound books spilling across every surface, Ptolemy the tabby weaving between his ankles, claws scrabbling for purchase on the floorboards, hissing low and continuous. The flat smelled of cardamom and old paper, the curry house below bleeding its spices through the floorboards. "You left while I was cleaning the blood off my hands from the Voss job. You took the Yu-Fei delivery route. You vanished into the London fog and I—" He stopped at the kitchen doorway. His jaw tightened, a muscle jumping beneath the skin. "I looked for you." "For three months?" Rory's voice cracked on the last syllable. She hated the weakness, hated that he could still unravel her with a look. "You did not look, Luc. You waited. You waited for me to come crawling back to your underworld, your blood, your bargains." He reached toward her cheek, fingers moving close enough that she caught the scent of bergamot and ozone—demon-scent, electric, wrong, the smell of Avaros bleeding through his skin. "I could not. The Voss job went sideways. I was in protective custody with the Council for six weeks." The black eye flickered, pupil dilating to swallow the amber. "I came back. Your flat above Silas' was empty. The delivery depot said you'd quit. Eva said you'd fled to Cardiff." "I ran." The word tasted like ash. "From you. From what you showed me that night in your flat—horns curving from your temples, smoke curling from your nostrils, eyes lit from within. I thought... I thought you were a monster." "You were supposed to see the man underneath." His hand dropped to his side, but his gaze locked onto hers, bright blue meeting heterochromatic. "I came here to explain. To beg. Whatever it takes." The hurt hung between them, thick as the humidity rising from the street. She remembered Cardiff, the lectures she'd abandoned, the bruises Evan had given her that she'd hidden under long sleeves. She remembered Lucien finding her in the library, offering protection wrapped in danger, the way he'd looked at her like she was the only real thing in a world of smoke. She remembered March, the night everything shattered—the way he'd lied about the job, the way she'd walked in on him negotiating with a vampire while she thought they were building a life together, the way she'd grabbed her coat and ran before he could explain that her safety required the lie. "I cannot do this again," she whispered. "The lies. The danger. The half-demon fixer who thinks he can save me by owning me." "You never understood." He stepped closer, boots scuffing the floor. The cane leaned against the doorframe, ivory handle gleaming, forgotten. "I was not trying to own you, Aurora. I was trying to keep you alive. Evan was not the only threat. The supernatural world does not forgive debts, and you... you owed them something from before you were born." Rory's stomach dropped. "What?" "Malphora." He pulled a folded paper from his jacket—yellowed, ink-stained, edges soft with handling. "Eva's research. She's been digging through the archives, trying to find a way to sever demonic bindings permanently. She's close. Too close." He held out the paper, his hand steady despite the tremor in his voice. "She found references to a tether. A human anchor. She thinks it's a curse, a possession. But it's a choice. A bond formed in a past life, or a parallel one, or whatever Eva's occult theories suggest." He met her eyes, amber and black pleading. "I think you were meant for me. Not as a fling in Cardiff. Not as a distraction from my family. As..." He searched for the word, platinum hair falling across his forehead. "As home. As the only place I can breathe without burning." Rory stared at the paper. Her hand shook when she reached for it. The scar on her wrist burned, hot and insistent, as if reacting to the parchment. "I do not believe in destiny." "Then believe in this." He crossed the final distance, boots scuffing the floorboards. His mouth stopped inches from hers, smelling of smoke and starlight, of the four languages he spoke and the silence he kept. "Believe that I stood outside your door in Cardiff for six hours last week, afraid to knock, watching your window light flicker. Believe that I carried your photograph in my coat until the ink smeared and the paper tore. Believe that when you left, you took the only peace I've ever known, and I've been drowning in the dark ever since." The kiss, when it came, tasted like salt and forgiveness, like the end of a war neither of them had wanted to fight. Her fingers found the lapel of his charcoal suit, gripping the wool, anchoring herself. He made a sound—low, broken, desperate—and pulled her against him, the cane clattering to the floor behind them, forgotten. Ptolemy yowled from the bedroom doorway, arching his back, sensing the shift in the atmosphere, the supernatural weight pressing against the windows, rattling the glass. Rory pulled back, gasping, her forehead resting against his. "If you stay, it has to be different. No more secrets. No more running. No more half-truths about blood and bargains." Lucien's forehead pressed against hers, his breath hot against her lips. The black eye opened, ancient and terrified and hopeful. "Different." His thumb traced the scar on her wrist, gentle, reverent. "I'll try. For you. For us." Outside, the curry house kitchen clanged pots and pans, life continuing its mundane rhythm. Inside the cramped flat, surrounded by Eva's chaotic research and the smell of cardamom, two broken things held each other, the deadbolts forgotten, the past still heavy but no longer insurmountable.
created_at"2026-10-07T09:06:45.014Z" 10/7/2026, 9:06:45 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The word tasted like [like]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.059
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1233
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1233
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"mechanical"
count1
4
word"navigating"
count1
5
word"unravel"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"gleaming"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"traced"
count1
14
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"silence"
2"warmth"
3"mechanical"
4"navigating"
5"unravel"
6"electric"
7"flickered"
8"shattered"
9"gleaming"
10"stomach"
11"flicker"
12"weight"
13"traced"
14"chaotic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1220
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount767
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Marseille1
English1
Cardiff2
Eva2
Ptolemy2
Avaros1
Evan1
Lucien3
March1
Rory6
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Avaros"
4"Evan"
5"Lucien"
6"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reacting to the parchment"
1"tasted like salt and forgiveness, like th"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1220
matches(empty)
74.07% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"hated that he"
1"explain that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean45.19
std36.12
cv0.799
sampleLengths
013
149
23
362
412
510
63
742
843
911
105
11108
1246
1378
1440
1534
16114
1723
1859
194
20138
2134
2296
2381
2430
2537
2645
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs136
matches
0"were building"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences72
ratio0.125
matches
0"She watched the peephole, dark and unblinking, waiting for the knock that never came—only the silence of someone who knew exactly how many barriers stood between them and the world."
1"His cane—ivory handle catching the light, black shaft tapping a slow, deliberate rhythm against the warped floorboards—rested against his thigh."
2"The amber eye caught the streetlamp; the black one drank the darkness."
3"The crescent scar on her wrist—pale, puckered from a childhood fall in Cardiff—itched beneath her skin."
4"\"You left.\" He crossed the cramped room, navigating the teetering towers of Eva's research—scrolls stacked to the ceiling, leather-bound books spilling across every surface, Ptolemy the tabby weaving between his ankles, claws scrabbling for purchase on the floorboards, hissing low and continuous."
5"He reached toward her cheek, fingers moving close enough that she caught the scent of bergamot and ozone—demon-scent, electric, wrong, the smell of Avaros bleeding through his skin."
6"She remembered March, the night everything shattered—the way he'd lied about the job, the way she'd walked in on him negotiating with a vampire while she thought they were building a life together, the way she'd grabbed her coat and ran before he could explain that her safety required the lie."
7"\"Malphora.\" He pulled a folded paper from his jacket—yellowed, ink-stained, edges soft with handling."
8"He made a sound—low, broken, desperate—and pulled her against him, the cane clattering to the floor behind them, forgotten."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount781
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.020486555697823303
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0038412291933418692
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean16.94
std12.02
cv0.709
sampleLengths
013
17
28
34
430
53
613
712
820
917
1012
1110
123
1317
1412
1513
169
1716
1813
195
2011
215
2242
2318
2435
259
264
2710
2814
2922
3028
3129
3221
337
3433
3524
3610
3713
3819
3931
4051
417
4216
4310
4410
4539
463
471
4814
4936
51.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3611111111111111
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
31.32% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences53
matches
0"She did not flinch."
1"She watched the peephole, dark"
2"His cane—ivory handle catching the"
3"He stepped inside without invitation,"
4"She tucked her hand into"
5"He crossed the cramped room,"
6"He stopped at the kitchen"
7"His jaw tightened, a muscle"
8"She hated the weakness, hated"
9"He reached toward her cheek,"
10"His hand dropped to his"
11"She remembered Cardiff, the lectures"
12"She remembered Lucien finding her"
13"She remembered March, the night"
14"He stepped closer, boots scuffing"
15"He pulled a folded paper"
16"He held out the paper,"
17"He met her eyes, amber"
18"He searched for the word,"
19"Her hand shook when she"
ratio0.472
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences53
matches
0"The third deadbolt retracted with"
1"Rory's fingers tightened around the"
2"Tea sloshed over the rim,"
3"She did not flinch."
4"She watched the peephole, dark"
5"The handle turned."
6"Lucien Moreau filled the frame,"
7"Charcoal wool, expensive and rumpled"
8"His cane—ivory handle catching the"
9"Platinum hair slicked back from"
10"The amber eye caught the"
11"The rasp of Marseille layered"
12"He stepped inside without invitation,"
13"The door clicked shut behind"
14"Rory set the mug down"
15"The crescent scar on her"
16"She tucked her hand into"
17"He crossed the cramped room,"
18"The flat smelled of cardamom"
19"He stopped at the kitchen"
ratio0.962
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The third deadbolt retracted with a pneumatic hiss that vibrated through the doorframe."
1"She watched the peephole, dark and unblinking, waiting for the knock that never came—only the silence of someone who knew exactly how many barriers stood betwee…"
2"The scar on her wrist burned, hot and insistent, as if reacting to the parchment."
3"Ptolemy yowled from the bedroom doorway, arching his back, sensing the shift in the atmosphere, the supernatural weight pressing against the windows, rattling t…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"The black eye flickered, pupil dilating to swallow the amber"
1"His hand dropped, but his gaze locked onto hers, bright blue meeting heterochromatic"
2"He stepped, boots scuffing the floor"
3"He held out, his hand steady despite the tremor in his voice"
4"He crossed, boots scuffing the floorboards"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.059
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.059
72.5078%