Run: 2026-10-07-01M4ASVA1R4W9F0XNMK31BX8V5

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Duration:
19.0s
Cost:
$0.019365
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Mistral

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shifted the moment they crossed the threshold. A hush fell over the group as if the world itself had taken a breath. Rory’s boots sank slightly into the moss, thick and velvety beneath her feet. The scent of damp earth and something sweeter—like crushed petals and honey—filled her lungs. She glanced back. The standing stones of the Grove’s entrance loomed behind them, their ancient oak surfaces carved with spirals that seemed to writhe in the dim light. Nyx materialised beside her, their form rippling like smoke caught in a breeze. “This place remembers,” they murmured, voice a whisper that curled around the edges of hearing. “The trees listen.” Rory flexed her fingers, the crescent scar on her wrist catching the faint glow of the Heartstone pendant tucked beneath her collar. It pulsed once, warm against her skin. She didn’t mention it. Some things were better left unspoken, at least for now. Ahead, the grove unfolded in impossible hues. Wildflowers bloomed in clusters of deep violet and gold, their petals shimmering as if dusted with starlight. The trees stood sentinel, their trunks wide and gnarled, bark etched with symbols that made Rory’s eyes ache if she stared too long. The canopy above was a lattice of silver and emerald, leaves shifting without wind, their edges gilded in light that wasn’t quite sunlight. Isolde moved with eerie grace, her silver hair trailing behind her like a river of liquid metal. She didn’t walk so much as glide, her bare feet never disturbing the moss. “Mind your step,” she said, though her lips curved in something that wasn’t quite a smile. “The Grove has a sense of humour.” Rory arched a brow. “What kind of humour?” Isolde’s lavender eyes gleamed. “The kind that leaves you lost in your own memories.” A rustle in the undergrowth. Rory’s hand went to the Fae-forged blade at her hip. The moonsilver was cold, always cold, but it hummed against her palm like a living thing. The bushes parted. Not a beast, not a threat—just the grove itself, shifting, breathing. A path revealed itself, winding between the trees, lined with stones that looked like they’d been placed by careful hands centuries ago. Nyx drifted forward, their shadow stretching long and thin before snapping back into their shape. “No footprints,” they observed. Isolde chuckled, the sound like wind chimes. “Of course not. The Grove doesn’t like to be tracked.” Rory exhaled through her nose. She’d dealt with enough strange in the past year to know when to keep her questions to herself. Instead, she followed the path, her gaze flicking between the towering trees and the flowers that seemed to lean toward her as she passed. The air hummed, a low vibration in her bones, like the moment before a storm broke. Then the trees thinned. The clearing opened before them, vast and impossible. In its centre stood a pool, its surface so still it might have been glass. The water wasn’t blue, nor green, nor any colour Rory had a name for. It shimmered, shifting between hues like oil on water, reflecting nothing above it. Around the pool, stones were arranged in a perfect circle, each one carved with the same spiralling patterns as the entrance. Nyx’s form flickered. “That’s not just water.” Isolde tilted her head. “No. It’s a mirror. Or a door. Depending on who’s looking.” Rory crouched at the pool’s edge, hesitant. The water—if it was water—didn’t ripple at her approach. She extended a hand, palm down, not quite touching. A faint warmth radiated from it, like the breath of something alive. “What’s it for?” Isolde’s voice was soft, almost reverent. “For seeing what was. What is. What could be.” Nyx’s whisper sharpened. “Or what shouldn’t be.” Rory’s fingers twitched. She’d had enough of riddles and half-truths to last a lifetime. But the Grove pulled at her, a quiet insistence in the air, in the way the light danced, in the way her pendant pulsed again, stronger this time. She swallowed. “And if someone looks?” Isolde’s gaze was distant. “Then they see.” Rory straightened. The Grove was beautiful, yes, but beauty had a way of hiding teeth. She turned her back on the pool, scanning the clearing. The trees here were older, their trunks wider, their bark darker. Some of them bore scars—deep gouges that looked like claw marks, or perhaps the work of a blade. Old wounds. The grove had seen battles. A sound. A melody, faint and haunting, woven through the air. It came from nowhere and everywhere, a song without a singer. Rory’s skin prickled. “What is that?” Nyx’s silhouette shivered. “The Grove singing to itself.” Isolde closed her eyes, as if savouring the notes. “The music of the in-between. It’s been a long time since I heard it so clearly.” Rory’s jaw tightened. She didn’t like not understanding. Didn’t like the way the hair on her arms stood on end, the way her pulse thrummed in her throat. But the Grove wasn’t a place for liking or disliking. It simply was. She took a step forward. The moss gave way to something softer, like walking on a carpet of fallen petals. The song grew louder, or perhaps it was just that she was listening harder now. The trees seemed to lean in, their branches intertwining above like fingers laced together. Then she saw it. A figure, half-hidden behind a tree. Tall, slender, with hair the colour of moonlight. It moved—no, it *danced*, barefoot and fluid, as if the very air guided its steps. Rory froze. The figure didn’t seem to notice them. Or perhaps it did, and simply didn’t care. Nyx’s voice was a thread of smoke. “Fae.” Isolde’s eyes snapped open. “Not just any Fae.” The dancer spun, and for a heartbeat, Rory saw its face. Sharp features, eyes like polished obsidian, a smile that was all teeth. Then it was gone, dissolving into the trees as if it had never been there at all. Rory’s breath came faster. “What the hell was that?” Isolde’s expression was unreadable. “A warning. Or an invitation.” Nyx materialised beside Rory, their form solidifying. “Or a test.” Rory’s grip on the Fae blade tightened. She’d had enough tests to last a lifetime. But the Grove wasn’t done with them yet. The path ahead split, one way leading deeper into the trees, the other curving back toward the pool. The air smelled different here—sweeter, heavier, like the moment before a summer storm. She glanced at Isolde. “Which way?” Isolde’s lips curled. “The Grove chooses the path, not the walker.” Rory clenched her teeth. She hated riddles. Hated not knowing. But the Heartstone pulsed again, warm and insistent against her skin. She looked down at the pendant, then at the paths. The left one seemed darker, the trees thicker. The right one was bathed in that strange, shifting light. She chose left. The moment she stepped onto the path, the song changed. The melody twisted, became something sharper, more urgent. The trees here were closer together, their branches forming a tunnel overhead. The light dimmed, the air growing cooler. Rory’s fingers traced the bark of one tree as she passed. It was smooth, almost warm, like living flesh. Nyx’s form flickered. “This part of the Grove doesn’t like visitors.” Isolde’s voice was quiet. “Few do.” The path sloped downward, the moss giving way to smooth stone. The song faded, replaced by a new sound—a low, rhythmic thrum, like a heartbeat. Rory’s own pulse synced with it, her breath coming in time with the unseen rhythm. The stone beneath her feet was worn, as if by centuries of footsteps. Then the path opened into another clearing. This one was smaller, more intimate. In its centre stood a single tree, ancient and gnarled, its trunk split down the middle as if struck by lightning. But the split wasn’t empty. Inside the trunk, nestled in the heartwood, was a glow—a soft, golden light, pulsing like a second heart. Rory’s breath caught. The Heartstone pendant burned against her skin. Isolde’s voice was barely a whisper. “The Heart of the Grove.” Nyx’s form rippled. “Or its wound.” Rory took a step forward. The light in the tree pulsed brighter, as if in response. She reached out, then hesitated. The air here was thick, charged, like the moment before a spark ignited. She could feel it in her bones, in the way her skin tingled. She touched the tree. The bark was warm, almost feverish. The light flared, and for a heartbeat, Rory saw— A forest. A battle. A woman with silver hair, standing against a tide of shadow. A blade, flashing in the dark. A scream, torn from a throat that wasn’t hers. Then it was gone. Rory jerked her hand back. The vision—if that’s what it was—lingered behind her eyes, sharp and vivid. She stumbled, her boot catching on a root. Nyx’s shadow solidified beneath her, steadying her. “Careful,” they murmured. “Some doors shouldn’t be opened.” Isolde’s gaze was fixed on the tree, her expression unreadable. “Some doors *must* be opened.” Rory’s heart pounded. She flexed her fingers, the memory of the vision still fresh. The woman—Isolde?—the blade, the shadows. It felt like a warning. Or a premonition. She looked down at the Heartstone pendant. It glowed faintly, its crimson light pulsing in time with the light in the tree. She didn’t know what it meant. Didn’t know what the Grove wanted from her. But she knew one thing. They weren’t alone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1597
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1597
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count3
2
word"pulsed"
count4
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"sentinel"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"sense of"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count2
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count2
13
word"unreadable"
count2
14
word"traced"
count1
15
word"rhythmic"
count1
16
word"footsteps"
count1
17
word"charged"
count1
18
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"whisper"
2"pulsed"
3"unspoken"
4"sentinel"
5"etched"
6"sense of"
7"shimmered"
8"perfect"
9"flickered"
10"warmth"
11"scanning"
12"pulse"
13"unreadable"
14"traced"
15"rhythmic"
16"footsteps"
17"charged"
18"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences157
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences185
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1584
ratio0.001
matches
0"danced"
1"must"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
62.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1423
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove6
Rory25
Heartstone4
Fae-forged1
Isolde15
Fae2
Nyx10
persons
0"Grove"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Heartstone"
1"Fae-forged"
2"Fae"
globalScore0.622
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"spirals that seemed to writhe in the dim light"
1"quite sunlight"
2"quite a smile"
3"looked like they’d been placed by careful"
4"flowers that seemed to lean toward her as she passed"
5"not quite touching"
6"looked like claw marks, or perhaps the wo"
7"as if savouring the notes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1584
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences185
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean26.85
std21.9
cv0.816
sampleLengths
079
131
243
370
454
58
614
767
819
917
1063
114
1271
137
1415
1540
1615
177
1848
197
2061
2128
228
2325
2441
2549
264
2746
288
298
3040
319
329
3310
3454
356
3611
3749
383
3956
4011
416
4253
437
4450
4510
4611
476
4847
494
89.62% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences157
matches
0"been placed"
1"were arranged"
2"was gone"
3"was bathed"
4"was gone"
5"was—lingered"
6"was fixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs255
matches
0"was listening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences185
ratio0.059
matches
0"The scent of damp earth and something sweeter—like crushed petals and honey—filled her lungs."
1"Not a beast, not a threat—just the grove itself, shifting, breathing."
2"The water—if it was water—didn’t ripple at her approach."
3"Some of them bore scars—deep gouges that looked like claw marks, or perhaps the work of a blade."
4"It moved—no, it *danced*, barefoot and fluid, as if the very air guided its steps."
5"The air smelled different here—sweeter, heavier, like the moment before a summer storm."
6"The song faded, replaced by a new sound—a low, rhythmic thrum, like a heartbeat."
7"Inside the trunk, nestled in the heartwood, was a glow—a soft, golden light, pulsing like a second heart."
8"The light flared, and for a heartbeat, Rory saw—"
9"The vision—if that’s what it was—lingered behind her eyes, sharp and vivid."
10"The woman—Isolde?—the blade, the shadows."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1439
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.035441278665740095
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0034746351633078527
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences185
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences185
mean8.56
std5.56
cv0.649
sampleLengths
09
115
213
314
43
525
613
715
83
922
107
114
1210
137
1417
1523
1623
1717
1814
1916
207
214
224
234
2410
255
2610
2716
283
2911
3022
3115
324
337
3410
355
3618
3724
3816
394
408
4115
4214
4313
4421
453
464
474
4811
497
40.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.1945945945945946
totalSentences185
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences148
matches
0"Instead, she followed the path,"
1"Then the trees thinned."
2"Then she saw it."
3"Then it was gone, dissolving"
4"Then the path opened into"
5"Then it was gone."
ratio0.041
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences148
matches
0"She glanced back."
1"they murmured, voice a whisper"
2"It pulsed once, warm against"
3"She didn’t mention it."
4"She didn’t walk so much"
5"she said, though her lips"
6"She’d dealt with enough strange"
7"It shimmered, shifting between hues"
8"She extended a hand, palm"
9"She’d had enough of riddles"
10"She turned her back on"
11"It came from nowhere and"
12"She didn’t like not understanding."
13"It simply was."
14"She took a step forward."
15"It moved—no, it *danced*, barefoot"
16"She’d had enough tests to"
17"She glanced at Isolde."
18"She hated riddles."
19"She looked down at the"
ratio0.216
44.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences148
matches
0"The air shifted the moment"
1"A hush fell over the"
2"Rory’s boots sank slightly into"
3"The scent of damp earth"
4"She glanced back."
5"The standing stones of the"
6"Nyx materialised beside her, their"
7"they murmured, voice a whisper"
8"Rory flexed her fingers, the"
9"It pulsed once, warm against"
10"She didn’t mention it."
11"Some things were better left"
12"Wildflowers bloomed in clusters of"
13"The trees stood sentinel, their"
14"The canopy above was a"
15"Isolde moved with eerie grace,"
16"She didn’t walk so much"
17"she said, though her lips"
18"Rory arched a brow."
19"Isolde’s lavender eyes gleamed."
ratio0.831
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The standing stones of the Grove’s entrance loomed behind them, their ancient oak surfaces carved with spirals that seemed to writhe in the dim light."
1"Wildflowers bloomed in clusters of deep violet and gold, their petals shimmering as if dusted with starlight."
2"The trees stood sentinel, their trunks wide and gnarled, bark etched with symbols that made Rory’s eyes ache if she stared too long."
3"Sharp features, eyes like polished obsidian, a smile that was all teeth."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, though her lips curved in something that wasn’t quite a smile"
56.25% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"they observed (observe)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.188
76.6905%