Run: 2026-10-07-01M4ASXXAP8241CWDV338QN7QN

Run Details

Duration:
16.9s
Cost:
$0.016449
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came just as Rory was wiping grease from her hands onto her already-stained jeans. Three sharp raps, then a pause, then two more. A rhythm she knew. She froze. The cloth slipped from her fingers. Ptolemy, the tabby, lifted his head from the pile of books he’d been napping on, ears twitching. The flat was too quiet, the kind of quiet that made the hum of the fridge sound like a roar. Another knock. Rory exhaled through her nose, rolled her shoulders back, and moved to the door. The three deadbolts gleamed under the dim hallway light as she undid them one by one, slow, deliberate. The last one clicked open with a sigh. The door swung inward before she could pull it all the way. Lucien stood there, filling the frame in a charcoal suit that looked too crisp for the damp London evening. His platinum hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, but his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—held the kind of storm that didn’t belong in a man so composed. “You’re still alive, then,” she said. A smirk tugged at his lips, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “Disappointed?” She didn’t answer. Just leaned against the doorframe, arms crossed. The scent of rain and expensive cologne clung to him, familiar in a way that made her chest tighten. “Can I come in?” he asked. Ptolemy chose that moment to slink between her legs, tail flicking against her ankle. She didn’t move. “Depends. You here to finish what you started last time?” His jaw tightened. The cane in his hand—ivory handle, polished to a sheen—twitched. “I’m here because we both know this isn’t over.” She stepped aside, a silent invitation. He didn’t hesitate, brushing past her, the fabric of his suit whispering against her bare arm. The contact sent a jolt through her, sharp and unwanted. The flat was a mess—books stacked in precarious towers, takeaway containers littering the coffee table, a half-empty bottle of wine breathing on the counter. Lucien’s gaze flicked over it all, lingering on the scar on her left wrist before he turned to face her. “You’ve been busy,” he said. “You’ve been absent.” He inclined his head, acknowledging the hit. “Circumstances beyond my control.” “Right. Because you’re always at the mercy of circumstances.” A muscle in his cheek twitched. “You think I wanted to leave things the way I did?” “Doesn’t matter what I think, does it?” She crossed her arms tighter. “You made your choice.” He set the cane against the wall, the blade inside it hidden, forgotten for now. “And you made yours.” The air between them was thick, charged. She could feel the weight of every unsaid word, every glance they’d stolen when they thought the other wasn’t looking. “Why now, Lucien?” He reached into his coat, pulled out a folded slip of paper. Held it out. “Because this was delivered to my door this morning.” She didn’t take it. “And?” “And it’s addressed to you.” Her pulse spiked. She snatched the paper, unfolded it. The handwriting was neat, precise. *For Aurora Carter. Urgent.* “Where’d it come from?” “A courier. No return address. No sender.” She flipped it over. Blank. “You open it?” “No.” She exhaled, rubbed her temples. “You could’ve just left it at the bar.” “And miss the look on your face?” His voice was light, but his eyes were dark. “Besides, I needed to see for myself that you were still in one piece.” She crushed the paper in her fist. “I’m fine.” “You’re lying.” The words hung there, heavy. She wanted to deny it, but the truth was a bitter taste in her mouth. She wasn’t fine. Hadn’t been since the last time she’d seen him, standing in the rain outside Silas’ bar, his voice low and rough as he told her they couldn’t do this anymore. “What do you want from me, Luc?” He stepped closer, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the way his black eye seemed to swallow the light. “I want you to stop pretending you don’t care.” She laughed, sharp and humourless. “That’s rich, coming from you.” His hand lifted, hovered near her cheek but didn’t touch. “I cared. That’s why I left.” “Bullshit.” “You think I enjoyed walking away?” His voice dropped, rough. “You think I wanted to leave you standing there, looking at me like I’d just ripped your heart out?” She swallowed. “You did.” His fingers curled into a fist, then relaxed. “Because if I hadn’t, you’d be dead now.” The words hit like a punch. She staggered back, her hip bumping the edge of the table. “What?” He didn’t answer, just watched her, his expression unreadable. “Lucien.” Her voice was a whip-crack. “What the hell are you talking about?” He reached for her, but she flinched away. His hand fell to his side. “The people I was working with—they weren’t just after information. They were after *you*.” A cold sweat prickled at the back of her neck. “Me? Why?” “Because of what you are. What you can do.” She shook her head. “I don’t—” “You don’t know?” He scoffed. “Rory, you’ve been running from this your whole life. But it doesn’t work like that. The past doesn’t stay buried forever.” She turned away, her fingers digging into the edge of the table. The flat suddenly felt too small, the walls pressing in. “You’re talking in riddles.” “Am I?” He moved behind her, his voice a low murmur against her ear. “Then explain why every supernatural faction in London has your name on their lips.” She spun around. “That’s not—” “It is.” His gaze was relentless. “And you know it.” She wanted to argue, to deny it, but the words died in her throat. Because she *did* know. Had felt it for months—the whispers, the looks, the way certain people’s eyes lingered a little too long when they thought she wasn’t looking. “So what?” she snapped. “You think that gives you the right to waltz back into my life like nothing happened?” “I think,” he said, his voice dangerously soft, “that I’m the only one who can keep you alive.” She barked out a laugh. “Oh, that’s great. That’s *real* great. So now I’m supposed to just fall in line, trust you, because you say so?” “No.” His hand shot out, gripped her wrist—not hard, but firm. His thumb brushed the crescent-shaped scar there, the one she’d had since she was a child. “You’re supposed to trust me because you *know* me.” Her breath hitched. She yanked her arm back, but he didn’t let go. “I don’t know you. Not really.” “Liar.” She wanted to hit him. Wanted to kiss him. Wanted to scream. Instead, she just stood there, her heart hammering against her ribs like it wanted out. He released her, finally, and stepped back. “Open the damn letter, Rory.” She unfolded it again, her hands shaking. The paper was thick, expensive. The kind of thing you didn’t send unless you meant business. *Miss Carter,* *We need to talk. Midnight. The old docks by the Thames. Come alone.* No signature. No further explanation. She looked up at Lucien. “You think this is about them? The people you were working with?” “I think,” he said, “that if you go there alone, you won’t come back.” A shiver ran down her spine. “So what, you’re my bodyguard now?” “I’m whatever you need me to be.” The words hung between them, heavy with promise. With history. With all the things they’d never said. She crumpled the letter in her fist. “Fine. But we do this my way.” A slow smile spread across his face, the kind that made her stomach flip. “Wouldn’t have it any other way.” She turned away before he could see the effect he had on her, before she could let herself believe, even for a second, that this was anything more than survival. “You’re sleeping on the couch,” she said. His chuckle was low, dark. “Wouldn’t dream of anywhere else.” Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the table, knocking over a stack of books with a clatter. The tension in the room didn’t break, but it shifted, just enough for her to breathe. She glanced at the clock. 10:47 PM. “We’ve got time. You want a drink?” Lucien’s smile faded, but his eyes didn’t leave hers. “I want a lot of things, Rory.” She held his gaze, unflinching. “Yeah. Well. We both know you don’t always get what you want.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.186
leniency0.371
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"flicked"
2"charged"
3"could feel"
4"weight"
5"pulse"
6"unreadable"
7"down her spine"
8"stomach"
9"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"A shiver ran down her spine"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences115
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences170
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords23
totalWords1428
ratio0.016
matches
0"For Aurora Carter. Urgent."
1"you"
2"did"
3"real"
4"know"
5"Miss Carter,"
6"We need to talk. Midnight. The old docks by the Thames. Come alone."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount963
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.42
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory2
London1
Ptolemy3
Aurora1
Carter2
Thames1
Lucien4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Thames"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
59.94% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.401
wordCount1428
matches
0"not a strand out of place, but his heterochromatic eyes"
1"not hard, but firm"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences170
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs84
mean17
std12.4
cv0.729
sampleLengths
029
18
237
32
440
562
66
713
829
96
1017
1110
1222
1332
1444
155
163
1711
189
1917
2016
2119
2227
233
2424
255
265
2718
284
297
308
311
3213
3330
349
352
3653
377
3836
3910
4016
411
4229
434
4416
4518
469
4713
4828
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"was slicked"
94.74% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs190
matches
0"was wiping"
1"wasn’t looking"
2"wasn’t looking"
58.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences170
ratio0.029
matches
0"His platinum hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, but his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—held the kind of storm that didn’t belong in a man so composed."
1"The cane in his hand—ivory handle, polished to a sheen—twitched."
2"The flat was a mess—books stacked in precarious towers, takeaway containers littering the coffee table, a half-empty bottle of wine breathing on the counter."
3"Had felt it for months—the whispers, the looks, the way certain people’s eyes lingered a little too long when they thought she wasn’t looking."
4"“No.” His hand shot out, gripped her wrist—not hard, but firm."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount722
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.029085872576177285
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0013850415512465374
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences170
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences170
mean8.4
std6.26
cv0.745
sampleLengths
016
19
24
32
46
517
620
72
814
918
108
1112
1219
1331
146
1512
161
173
187
1919
206
2114
223
2310
243
2510
269
276
2816
2910
3024
3120
325
333
347
354
369
376
3811
3912
404
4115
424
437
4420
453
4612
473
489
494
46.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3176470588235294
totalSentences170
uniqueOpeners54
68.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"Just leaned against the doorframe,"
1"Instead, she just stood there,"
ratio0.021
5.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences97
matches
0"His platinum hair was slicked"
1"She didn’t answer."
2"She didn’t move."
3"His jaw tightened."
4"She stepped aside, a silent"
5"He didn’t hesitate, brushing past"
6"He inclined his head, acknowledging"
7"She crossed her arms tighter"
8"He set the cane against"
9"She could feel the weight"
10"He reached into his coat,"
11"She didn’t take it."
12"Her pulse spiked."
13"She snatched the paper, unfolded"
14"She flipped it over."
15"She exhaled, rubbed her temples."
16"His voice was light, but"
17"She crushed the paper in"
18"She wanted to deny it,"
19"She wasn’t fine."
ratio0.536
21.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences97
matches
0"The knock came just as"
1"A rhythm she knew."
2"The cloth slipped from her"
3"Ptolemy, the tabby, lifted his"
4"The flat was too quiet,"
5"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
6"The three deadbolts gleamed under"
7"The last one clicked open"
8"The door swung inward before"
9"Lucien stood there, filling the"
10"His platinum hair was slicked"
11"A smirk tugged at his"
12"She didn’t answer."
13"The scent of rain and"
14"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
15"She didn’t move."
16"His jaw tightened."
17"The cane in his hand—ivory"
18"She stepped aside, a silent"
19"He didn’t hesitate, brushing past"
ratio0.876
51.55% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"Because she *did* know."
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A slow smile spread across his face, the kind that made her stomach flip."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"His voice dropped, rough"
1"He moved, his voice a low murmur against her ear"
2"he said, his voice dangerously soft,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.029
82.5168%