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Run: 2026-10-07-01M4ASY598W82MMAW5A3ATMFVD
Run Details
Model:
Mistral Large 4.0 (Reasoning)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
3m 3s
Cost:
$0.027376
Provider:
Mistral
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
41.43%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
62.18%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
37.28%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
3.21%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
95.24%
Technical jargon density
(details)
53.57%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
83.0974%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
AI
The deadbolt scraped back.
Aurora's fingers tightened around the
doorframe. Through the gap, she saw the charcoal wool of his shoulders, the
glint
of platinum hair against the dim hallway bulb. "Move," she said. Lucien didn't. He stood at the threshold, the ivory handle of his cane tapping a slow rhythm against his thigh.
The amber eye winked at
her, the black one drinking in every detail: her tousled black hair, the faded denim, the crescent scar she'd always touched when she lied, when she
was afraid
. "You look terrible," he said. "And you look like you need a shave."
She didn't step back
. "Who told you where I live?" "The deadbolts."
He smiled, and it didn't
reach either eye. "They're charming. Eva installed them." Aurora's jaw tightened. She pushed the door wider.
The scent of rain and
bergamot drifted in with him, expensive cologne clashing with the stale beer smell seeping up from Silas' bar downstairs. Three floors of bass thumped through the floorboards, some Morrissey track she didn't recognise, the drums rattling the single window. Her flat was small, cramped, cluttered with abandoned law textbooks and canvas delivery bags from the Golden Empress stacked by the door, takeaway containers crowding the coffee table. "Get out, Lucien." "Luc."
He stepped inside, and the
space shrank immediately. At five-eleven, he towered over her, all sharp angles and tailored menace.
The charcoal suit fit him
like a second skin, expensive, dangerous, the ivory cane
stark
against the dark wool. "I'm not leaving, Rory." She slammed the door. It bounced on its hinges, a dull thud that barely cut through the music below. "You don't get to call me that." "What do I get to call you?" He leaned against her door, crossing his arms.
The fabric of his suit
strained across his shoulders. "Laila? Malphora? Or just Aurora, the girl who vanished from Marseille without a word?"
The name Malphora twisted in
her gut. She'd worn it like armour, back when she thought she could outrun what he'd shown her, what his father had wanted her to be. The demon bride. The sacrifice.
She'd run until her lungs
burned, straight into Evan's arms, thinking any human cage was better than a supernatural one.
She'd run from the life
he'd offered, the protection, the truth that her blood wasn't just Welsh and Irish but something older, something hungry. "I didn't vanish. I escaped." "Same difference."
His amber eye caught the
light from the kitchen. The black one stayed dark, bottomless, inhuman. "I've been looking for three months." "Congratulations." She walked to the counter, poured whiskey into a glass she didn't drink from. The bottle sweated in her palm, condensation dripping onto the laminate.
Her left wrist brushed the
scar, a nervous habit she'd never shaken. The crescent moon mark, white against her skin, a childhood accident she'd always touched when her heart hammered too hard, when the memories came. "You found me. Now leave before Silas hears you and calls the police." "Silas knows I'm here." Lucien followed her, close enough that she felt the heat radiating from his skin, unnatural and wrong, like standing too near a furnace. Half-demon. The memory coiled around her spine, scales and smoke and his father's laughter
echoing
from the realm of Avaros. "He owes me a favour from nineteen." Aurora set the glass down. It clinked against the wood, too loud in the sudden
silence
between the bass notes. "You brought a demon debt to my doorstep?" "I brought you a warning."
He stopped inches away, invading
her space, his breath warm against her cheek.
She could smell the cedar
and cloves on him, the scent of the underworld clinging to his skin, old magic and older sins. "Something's hunting the Malphora lineage. You're next." Her breath hitched. Three months of safety, of pretending she was just a delivery girl for Yu-Fei Cheung's restaurant, of pretending she hadn't woken up screaming with his name on her lips. Of pretending she hadn't stood in the rain outside his club in Marseille, watching the lights go out, too proud to knock, too terrified to beg. "You don't care about my lineage, Luc. You care about the debt my father owes yours." The amber eye narrowed, a slit of molten gold. "Your father's dead, Aurora." "Not my problem."
She stepped back, putting the
counter between them, needing the barrier, the wood and the whiskey. "Get out." "I'm not asking." He reached into his jacket, withdrew a photograph, slid it across the surface. It landed face-up with a soft slap. A woman, bleeding from the eyes, throat cut, tongue removed. Her neighbour, Mrs. Higgins from 3B, who'd brought her scones last Tuesday, who'd asked about her law exams. "This was in your building last night. Third floor. She knew your real name." Aurora's
stomach
dropped. She snatched the photo. Her hands shook, the image blurring. Blood, so much blood, crimson on cream carpet, spreading like a Rorschach test. "Eva?" "No." Lucien's voice dropped to a
whisper
that
vibrated
in her chest, intimate and terrifying. "Your neighbour. The one who brings you tea. The one who thinks you're just a student working part-time." The floor tilted. She gripped the counter, knuckles white. Eva was her friend, her
sanctuary
, the only person who'd believed her when she fled Evan's fists and Cardiff's expectations. Eva, who'd helped her pack the bags, who'd driven her to the station at dawn, who'd kissed her forehead and said "Be safe, Rory." "You're lying." "Check your hallway." He turned toward the door, then paused. His hand found her wrist, the one with the scar. His thumb
traced
the pale crescent, gentle, possessive, claiming. The heat of his touch spread up her arm, branding her. "I came back because I can't lose you again, Rory. Not to them. Not to this." She yanked her arm free. The touch burned. "You lost me when you walked out of that hotel in Nice. You told me the room was bugged, that your father's people were listening, that I had to run. You said I'd burn if I stayed. You don't get to come back and play the hero now." "I left because staying meant you'd burn." His
black eye blazed, pupils dilating, inhuman, ancient, filled with centuries of loneliness
. "And I'd rather you hate me than be ash. I'd rather you live hating me than die for me. I've spent three months in Avaros begging, bargaining, bleeding for a way to find you. You think I came here for a debt, Aurora?" Outside, a car door slammed. Footsteps on the stairs, heavy, multiple, unhurried, predatory. Lucien's head snapped toward the door. His hand closed around his cane, ivory
gleaming
, the blade whispering free with a sound like a sigh, like a promise. "They're here." Aurora's blood turned to ice. "Who?" "The ones who killed Mrs. Higgins." He stepped in front of her, shielding her with his body, the cane rising, tip angled toward the door. His charcoal suit
seemed to
absorb the light, make him bigger, darker, a wall between her and the dark. "Don't move." The knock came, polite and terrible. Three raps. Then
silence
. "Miss Carter?" A woman's voice, soft as
silk
over steel, cultured and cold, speaking
perfect
English with a Parisian
lilt
. "We know you're in there. We know what you are. Open the door." Lucien's jaw tightened. He looked down at her, and in his heterochromatic gaze, she saw the choice he
was making
. Protect her. Fight. Die. The amber eye held her, pleading, golden. The black one promised violence, ancient and absolute. "Open the door,"
he said quietly, his voice rough
. "Or I break your necks on the stairs." Aurora stared at him, at the demon in the tailored suit, at the monster who'd loved her enough to leave and come back, who'd crossed realms and oceans to stand in her cramped flat above a bar. Her fingers found his sleeve, cloth rough under her palm. "Luc," she started. "Stay behind me." The door handle rattled. The lock clicked. And then the wood splintered, a gunshot crack
echoing
through the flat above Silas' bar, splinters raining down like snow.
created_at
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10/7/2026, 9:08:30 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
21
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"She stepped back [back]"
1
"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences
47
tagDensity
0.447
leniency
0.894
rawRatio
0.095
effectiveRatio
0.085
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1366
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
41.43%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1366
totalAiIsms
16
found
0
word
"glint"
count
1
1
word
"stark"
count
1
2
word
"echoing"
count
2
3
word
"silence"
count
2
4
word
"stomach"
count
1
5
word
"whisper"
count
1
6
word
"vibrated"
count
1
7
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
8
word
"traced"
count
1
9
word
"footsteps"
count
1
10
word
"gleaming"
count
1
11
word
"silk"
count
1
12
word
"perfect"
count
1
13
word
"lilt"
count
1
highlights
0
"glint"
1
"stark"
2
"echoing"
3
"silence"
4
"stomach"
5
"whisper"
6
"vibrated"
7
"sanctuary"
8
"traced"
9
"footsteps"
10
"gleaming"
11
"silk"
12
"perfect"
13
"lilt"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"stomach dropped/sank"
count
1
highlights
0
"stomach dropped"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
92
matches
0
"was afraid"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
92
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
119
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
48
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1366
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
15
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
33
wordCount
1012
uniqueNames
21
maxNameDensity
0.59
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
1
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien
5
Aurora
6
Three
3
Morrissey
1
Golden
1
Empress
1
Malphora
1
Evan
2
Welsh
1
Irish
1
Half-demon
1
Avaros
1
Yu-Fei
1
Cheung
1
Marseille
1
Mrs
1
Tuesday
1
Rorschach
1
Cardiff
1
English
1
Parisian
1
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Aurora"
2
"Morrissey"
3
"Empress"
4
"Malphora"
5
"Evan"
6
"Cheung"
7
"Mrs"
places
0
"Three"
1
"Golden"
2
"Marseille"
3
"Cardiff"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
62
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1366
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
119
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
38
mean
35.95
std
23.02
cv
0.64
sampleLengths
0
31
1
3
2
53
3
5
4
18
5
15
6
83
7
44
8
26
9
38
10
85
11
24
12
75
13
54
14
28
15
48
16
74
17
13
18
21
19
65
20
27
21
33
22
55
23
56
24
56
25
63
26
13
27
29
28
6
29
46
30
10
31
33
32
39
33
17
34
50
35
3
36
7
37
20
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
92
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
167
matches
0
"was making"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
119
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
371
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
9
adverbRatio
0.02425876010781671
lyAdverbCount
0
lyAdverbRatio
0
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
119
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
119
mean
11.48
std
9.21
cv
0.803
sampleLengths
0
4
1
6
2
21
3
3
4
2
5
18
6
33
7
5
8
12
9
6
10
10
11
5
12
3
13
5
14
24
15
20
16
28
17
3
18
9
19
12
20
19
21
4
22
4
23
15
24
7
25
15
26
9
27
14
28
7
29
24
30
3
31
2
32
20
33
24
34
5
35
11
36
7
37
6
38
15
39
11
40
12
41
24
42
13
43
27
44
1
45
19
46
7
47
5
48
15
49
8
62.18%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.40336134453781514
totalSentences
119
uniqueOpeners
48
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
81
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
37.28%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
37
totalSentences
81
matches
0
"He stood at the threshold,"
1
"She didn't step back"
2
"He smiled, and it didn't"
3
"She pushed the door wider."
4
"Her flat was small, cramped,"
5
"He stepped inside, and the"
6
"She slammed the door."
7
"It bounced on its hinges,"
8
"He leaned against her door,"
9
"She'd worn it like armour,"
10
"She'd run until her lungs"
11
"She'd run from the life"
12
"His amber eye caught the"
13
"She walked to the counter,"
14
"Her left wrist brushed the"
15
"It clinked against the wood,"
16
"He stopped inches away, invading"
17
"She could smell the cedar"
18
"Her breath hitched."
19
"She stepped back, putting the"
ratio
0.457
3.21%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
74
totalSentences
81
matches
0
"The deadbolt scraped back."
1
"Aurora's fingers tightened around the"
2
"He stood at the threshold,"
3
"The amber eye winked at"
4
"She didn't step back"
5
"He smiled, and it didn't"
6
"Aurora's jaw tightened."
7
"She pushed the door wider."
8
"The scent of rain and"
9
"Her flat was small, cramped,"
10
"He stepped inside, and the"
11
"The charcoal suit fit him"
12
"She slammed the door."
13
"It bounced on its hinges,"
14
"He leaned against her door,"
15
"The fabric of his suit"
16
"The name Malphora twisted in"
17
"She'd worn it like armour,"
18
"The demon bride."
19
"She'd run until her lungs"
ratio
0.914
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
81
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
95.24%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
30
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"Higgins from 3B, who'd brought her scones last Tuesday, who'd asked about her law exams."
1
"Eva was her friend, her sanctuary, the only person who'd believed her when she fled Evan's fists and Cardiff's expectations."
53.57%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
21
uselessAdditionCount
3
matches
0
"He stepped, and the space shrank immediately"
1
"black eye blazed, pupils dilating, inhuman, ancient, filled with centuries of loneliness"
2
"he said quietly, his voice rough"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
3
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
47
tagDensity
0.064
leniency
0.128
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
83.0974%