Run: 2026-10-07-01M4AT3T1J9G4G8MSMB6J271GA

Run Details

Duration:
14.8s
Cost:
$0.013320
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered as Rory pushed through the door, the hinge groaning under the weight of the evening’s damp air. She shook the rain from her jacket, fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist—a habit she’d never quite shaken. The bar was quiet, the usual hum of conversation muted by the weather. Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with slow, deliberate strokes. His signet ring caught the low light as he glanced up. “Took you long enough.” Rory smirked. “Traffic was a nightmare. Some idiot in a Mini decided the pavement was a shortcut.” Silas chuckled, setting the glass down. “Sounds like London.” She slid onto a stool, the wood smooth under her palms. The bar smelled of aged whiskey and old paper, the walls lined with maps and photographs that had seen better decades. She’d always liked it here—no pretences, no questions. Just the quiet understanding of a man who’d seen too much to judge. Then the door swung open again. A gust of wind sent a shiver through the room. Rory didn’t turn, but Silas’ gaze flicked past her, his expression shifting just enough to make her glance over her shoulder. The man in the doorway hesitated, water dripping from his coat onto the worn floorboards. Tall, broad-shouldered, with a face that had once been all sharp angles and easy grins. Now, the edges had softened, or maybe just worn down. His hair was darker than she remembered, streaked with silver at the temples. He looked like a man who’d carried things he couldn’t put down. Her breath caught. “Evan.” The name slipped out before she could stop it. His head snapped up, eyes locking onto hers. For a second, neither moved. The air between them thickened, heavy with years and things left unsaid. Then he stepped forward, the faintest limp in his stride. “Rory.” Silas’ voice cut through the tension, low and steady. “You know him?” She swallowed. “Used to.” Evan reached the bar, his fingers curling around the edge like he needed something solid to hold onto. “Didn’t expect to see you here.” “Funny. I was about to say the same.” Silas slid a glass toward Evan without a word, his hazel eyes flicking between them. He knew better than to ask. Evan exhaled, a sound that might’ve been a laugh if it hadn’t been so tired. “You look… the same.” She arched a brow. “Liar.” He rubbed his jaw, the stubble there more salt than pepper now. “Okay. Older. But the same.” “You, on the other hand…” She let the words hang. He’d filled out, the leanness of his youth replaced by something heavier, something that spoke of long nights and longer regrets. His hands—once quick, always restless—were still now, as if he’d learned the hard way that some things weren’t meant to be grabbed. Silas poured a whiskey, neat, and pushed it toward Evan. “You’re dripping on my floor.” Evan blinked, then glanced down at the puddle forming around his boots. “Right. Sorry.” He shrugged off his coat, revealing a shoulder holster beneath his jacket. Rory’s fingers twitched. Silas didn’t react. Just wiped the counter with a rag that had seen better days. Evan caught her staring. “It’s not what you think.” “Isn’t it?” He sighed, running a hand through his hair. “I’m not with them anymore.” “Since when?” “Since Prague.” The word hung between them, sharp as broken glass. Rory’s stomach twisted. Prague. The last place she’d seen him before everything went to hell. Before the bruises, the late-night calls, the way he’d look at her like she was the only thing keeping him from drowning. Before she’d packed a bag and left in the middle of the night, a note on the pillow and a one-way ticket to London in her pocket. Silas’ limp was more pronounced as he moved to the far end of the bar, giving them the illusion of privacy. The signet ring glinted as he adjusted a stack of glasses. Evan’s voice dropped. “I looked for you. After.” “Didn’t look hard enough.” “I went to Cardiff. Your parents—” “Wouldn’t tell you where I’d gone. I know.” He flinched. Just a little. “I should’ve tried harder.” She wrapped her fingers around her untouched drink, the glass cold against her skin. “Why now, Evan? Why walk into *this* bar, tonight of all nights?” He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he took a slow sip of his whiskey, the amber liquid catching the light. “I heard you were in London. Took me a while to track you down.” “And?” “And I needed to see you.” Rory laughed, but there was no humour in it. “That’s it? After all this time, that’s all you’ve got?” Evan’s jaw tightened. “What do you want me to say, Rory? That I’m sorry? That I was an arsehole? That I should’ve let you go the second I realised I was dragging you down with me?” The words hit like a punch to the gut. She’d spent years telling herself she didn’t care, that she’d moved on, that the fear and the anger had long since faded. But here he was, standing in front of her, and it was like no time had passed at all. Silas cleared his throat, breaking the silence. “You two need a table?” Evan shook his head. “We’re fine.” Rory didn’t answer. She wasn’t sure they were fine. She wasn’t sure of anything right now. Evan leaned in, his voice barely above a whisper. “I’m not the same man I was, Rory. I swear.” She wanted to believe him. God, she wanted to. But the ghost of his hands around her wrist, the echo of his voice raised in anger, the way she’d flinched at sudden movements for months after—those things didn’t just disappear. “People don’t change that much.” “No?” He gestured to himself. “Look at me. Look at *you*.” She did. And she saw the girl she’d been—scared, trapped, desperate for a way out. But she also saw the woman she’d become. The one who’d built a life here, who delivered food and paid her rent and didn’t jump at shadows anymore. Silas set a bowl of peanuts between them, his movements deliberate. “Eat. You’re making my customers nervous.” Evan managed a small smile. “Still the same, Silas.” The older man grunted. “And you’re still an idiot.” Rory picked at the label on her glass. “What do you want, Evan?” He met her gaze, steady and sure in a way he hadn’t been in years. “A second chance. Not to go back. Just… to start over.” The weight of his words settled between them. She wanted to say yes. She wanted to say no. She wanted to scream, to cry, to pretend this conversation had never happened. But all she did was take a slow sip of her drink and say, “That’s not how it works.”
created_at"2026-10-07T09:11:34.712Z" 10/7/2026, 9:11:34 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.116
leniency0.233
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1160
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1160
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"flicked"
3"tension"
4"stomach"
5"silence"
6"whisper"
7"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"The weight of his words"
1"sent a shiver through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences85
matches
0"d in anger"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1154
ratio0.002
matches
0"this"
1"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount858
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory8
Evan11
London1
Silas7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.859
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a man who’d carried things he"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1154
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences126
matches
0"care, that she’don, that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean19.9
std18.29
cv0.919
sampleLengths
082
14
217
39
453
56
631
765
83
91
1034
1111
1212
134
1424
158
1621
1719
185
1917
2053
2115
2229
2315
249
252
2613
272
282
2973
3032
318
324
336
348
359
3626
3734
381
396
4019
4136
4250
4312
446
4516
4619
4740
485
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"been—scared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs162
matches
0"was, standing"
29.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences126
ratio0.04
matches
0"She shook the rain from her jacket, fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist—a habit she’d never quite shaken."
1"She’d always liked it here—no pretences, no questions."
2"His hands—once quick, always restless—were still now, as if he’d learned the hard way that some things weren’t meant to be grabbed."
3"But the ghost of his hands around her wrist, the echo of his voice raised in anger, the way she’d flinched at sudden movements for months after—those things didn’t just disappear."
4"And she saw the girl she’d been—scared, trapped, desperate for a way out."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount317
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.028391167192429023
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean9.16
std6.61
cv0.721
sampleLengths
026
120
213
312
411
54
62
715
86
93
1011
1121
128
1313
146
1510
1621
1715
1815
1910
2013
2112
223
231
249
258
265
2712
2810
291
309
313
322
332
3418
356
368
3715
386
3915
404
414
421
4312
445
4510
4621
4722
4810
495
53.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3492063492063492
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences80
matches
0"Just the quiet understanding of"
1"Then the door swung open"
2"Then he stepped forward, the"
3"Just wiped the counter with"
4"Just a little."
5"Instead, he took a slow"
ratio0.075
85.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences80
matches
0"She shook the rain from"
1"His signet ring caught the"
2"She slid onto a stool,"
3"She’d always liked it here—no"
4"His hair was darker than"
5"He looked like a man"
6"Her breath caught."
7"His head snapped up, eyes"
8"He knew better than to"
9"She arched a brow."
10"He rubbed his jaw, the"
11"She let the words hang"
12"He’d filled out, the leanness"
13"His hands—once quick, always restless—were"
14"He shrugged off his coat,"
15"He sighed, running a hand"
16"She wrapped her fingers around"
17"He didn’t answer right away."
18"She’d spent years telling herself"
19"She wasn’t sure they were"
ratio0.338
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences80
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"She shook the rain from"
2"The bar was quiet, the"
3"Silas stood behind the counter,"
4"His signet ring caught the"
5"Silas chuckled, setting the glass"
6"She slid onto a stool,"
7"The bar smelled of aged"
8"She’d always liked it here—no"
9"A gust of wind sent"
10"Rory didn’t turn, but"
11"The man in the doorway"
12"His hair was darker than"
13"He looked like a man"
14"Her breath caught."
15"The name slipped out before"
16"His head snapped up, eyes"
17"The air between them thickened,"
18"Evan reached the bar, his"
19"Silas slid a glass toward"
ratio0.8
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"Now, the edges had softened,"
1"Before the bruises, the late-night"
2"Before she’d packed a bag"
ratio0.038
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Tall, broad-shouldered, with a face that had once been all sharp angles and easy grins."
1"He’d filled out, the leanness of his youth replaced by something heavier, something that spoke of long nights and longer regrets."
2"His hands—once quick, always restless—were still now, as if he’d learned the hard way that some things weren’t meant to be grabbed."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory didn’t, but Silas’ gaze flicked past her, his expression shifting just enough to make her glance over her shoulder"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"all she did (do)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.047
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.047
88.8131%