| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.636 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1166 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.97% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1166 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "trembled" | | 2 | "flicked" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "echoing" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "porcelain" | | 8 | "resonated" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "depths" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "stomach dropped" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 135 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1151 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory? You okay? I’m worried. Haven’t heard from you." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1075 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.3 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | North | 1 | | Circular | 1 | | October | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Flat | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Flat" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.849 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if recoiling from something buried beneath the moss" |
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| 26.24% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.738 | | wordCount | 1151 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the dull ache of weather, but a sharp, pulling sensation, like a thread tugging beneath th" | | 1 | "not at Rory but at the air beside her" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 28.07 | | std | 15.11 | | cv | 0.538 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 68 | | 26 | 48 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 51 | | 34 | 41 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 32 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 135 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "The Golden Empress delivery bag—red nylon, logo faded—bounced against her hip." | | 1 | "No wind stirred the air, yet the wildflowers—bluebells, foxgloves, winter roses that should have died in October—trembled." | | 2 | "The battery icon showed 87%, but the numbers flickered, counting down—86, 85, 84—while the seconds hand on her watch crawled forward in slow, heavy ticks." | | 3 | "The gem pulsed in a rhythm that matched the sliding thing’s approach—thump-thump, thump-thump—a heartbeat that wasn’t hers." | | 4 | "The voice didn’t come from a mouth—there was no mouth—but resonated in Rory’s skull, in the pendant, in the marrow of her bones." | | 5 | "The sleeve was too long, empty, but the hand that emerged—fingers too numerous, joints reversed—pointed not at Rory but at the air beside her." | | 6 | "Not fast—gliding, joints folding like a paper doll, covering distance in impossible strides that tore the moss from the earth." | | 7 | "She didn’t stop until she hit the tree line, until the sounds of London—a siren, a fox screaming, the hum of a bus—crashed over her like a wave." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 81 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 2 | | adverbRatio | 0.024691358024691357 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 135 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 135 | | mean | 8.53 | | std | 6.75 | | cv | 0.792 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 58.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.41044776119402987 | | totalSentences | 134 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 65.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Just enough time to confirm" | | 1 | "Then it spoke." |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d filled it on impulse" | | 1 | "She stepped into the clearing." | | 2 | "Their stems bent away from" | | 3 | "She checked her watch." | | 4 | "She’d promised herself ten minutes." | | 5 | "It came from the east," | | 6 | "Her voice cracked" | | 7 | "She fumbled for her phone." | | 8 | "She thumbed the screen awake" | | 9 | "She gripped the torch tighter," | | 10 | "It wore a coat, dark" | | 11 | "She yanked it free." | | 12 | "Her voice steadied." | | 13 | "Her watch read 11:52." | | 14 | "Her knees buckled." | | 15 | "She looked at the tear" | | 16 | "Her voice sounded distant, as" | | 17 | "It simply was closer when" | | 18 | "She didn’t stop until she" | | 19 | "She collapsed against an oak," |
| | ratio | 0.235 | |
| 62.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pushed through the final" | | 1 | "The Golden Empress delivery bag—red" | | 2 | "She’d filled it on impulse" | | 3 | "She stepped into the clearing." | | 4 | "The Fae Grove swallowed sound." | | 5 | "Here, silence pressed against her" | | 6 | "Moonlight pooled at their bases" | | 7 | "Their stems bent away from" | | 8 | "Rory flicked on the torch." | | 9 | "The beam cut a pale" | | 10 | "The pendant pulsed." | | 11 | "A warm throb against her" | | 12 | "She checked her watch." | | 13 | "She’d promised herself ten minutes." | | 14 | "A sound split the silence." | | 15 | "A wet, tearing noise, fabric" | | 16 | "It came from the east," | | 17 | "The torch beam swept the" | | 18 | "Shadows that stretched too long," | | 19 | "Her voice cracked" |
| | ratio | 0.794 | |
| 49.02% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Seven standing stones ringed the space, grey granite mottled with lichen, older than the oaks that crowded the perimeter." | | 1 | "No wind stirred the air, yet the wildflowers—bluebells, foxgloves, winter roses that should have died in October—trembled." | | 2 | "Their stems bent away from the centre of the circle, as if recoiling from something buried beneath the moss." | | 3 | "The beam cut a pale cone through the dark, illuminating motes of dust that hung motionless, suspended in air that refused to circulate." | | 4 | "The gem pulsed in a rhythm that matched the sliding thing’s approach—thump-thump, thump-thump—a heartbeat that wasn’t hers." | | 5 | "The wildflowers nearest it blackened, curling into ash that drifted upward against gravity." | | 6 | "The sleeve was too long, empty, but the hand that emerged—fingers too numerous, joints reversed—pointed not at Rory but at the air beside her." | | 7 | "A jagged seam in reality, dark water visible behind it, waves that moved without wind, shapes swimming in the depths that had too many limbs." | | 8 | "She looked at the tear in the air, at the dark water, at the smooth-faced thing that smiled with a mouth that wasn’t there." | | 9 | "Not fast—gliding, joints folding like a paper doll, covering distance in impossible strides that tore the moss from the earth." | | 10 | "Now it sat on the inside of her elbow, fresh and red, weeping clear fluid that smelled of copper and winter roses." | | 11 | "They turned their blooms toward her, bluebells nodding in a language she was beginning to understand." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d, a flask of cold tea, matches" |
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| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the creature whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |