Run: 2026-10-07-01M4AT46APV7XKTKZJSV0XX6B2

Run Details

Duration:
15.5s
Cost:
$0.014948
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered as Rory pushed through the door, the hinge groaning under the weight of the evening’s damp. She shook the rain from her jacket, fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist—a habit she’d never quite shaken. The bar smelled of aged wood and something sharper, the kind of scent that clung to places where secrets were traded like currency. Silas looked up from polishing a glass, his hazel eyes catching hers in the dim light. A nod, nothing more. She returned it, sliding onto a stool near the end of the counter where the light pooled just enough to read the labels on the bottles. The door swung open again, letting in a gust that sent the candle flames on the tables dancing. Rory didn’t turn, but the shift in the air—colder, heavier—made the hairs on her neck rise. “Christ, it’s like walking into a tomb in here.” The voice was familiar, but the edge to it wasn’t. Rory’s fingers tightened around her pint. Silas set down his cloth. “Evan. Didn’t peg you for a Soho man.” She didn’t need to look to know the man who’d just walked in. The way her pulse spiked was proof enough. “Silas Blackwood. Still playing bartender, I see.” Evan’s boots thudded against the floorboards as he approached. “Or is this just another front?” “Some habits die hard.” Silas’ voice was smooth, unruffled. “What’ll it be?” “Whisky. Neat.” Rory exhaled through her nose, staring into her beer. The amber liquid swirled, catching the light. She could leave. The stool beside her was empty, the bar long enough to put distance between them. But her legs stayed rooted. Evan took the seat two down from her, close enough that she could see the shadow of his profile in the mirror behind the bottles. His jaw was sharper than she remembered, his hair cropped short where it had once been wild. The years had carved him into something leaner, harder. Silas slid the whisky across the counter. “Haven’t seen you since…” “Since I was an idiot.” Evan’s laugh was dry. “Or so I’ve been told.” Rory’s thumb traced the rim of her glass. The condensation beaded, ran down the side like tears. “You’re a long way from Cardiff,” Silas said. “Life’s got a way of pulling you where you least expect.” Evan took a slow sip, eyes flicking to the mirror. Their gazes met in the reflection—hers steady, his flickering with something like recognition. “Rory?” She didn’t answer. Didn’t need to. The name hung between them, thick as the smoke from the stubbed-out cigarettes in the ashtray. Evan turned on his stool, full-body now, as if the sight of her was something he needed to confirm with more than just his eyes. “Jesus. It *is* you.” She lifted her chin, just enough. “In the flesh.” He let out a breath, half-laugh, half-something else. “You look…” “Older?” she supplied. “Different.” “So do you.” A beat. The ice in his glass clinked as he swirled it. “I heard you left. After…” “After what?” She arched a brow. “After I wised up?” His jaw tightened. “After I messed up.” Silas wiped down the counter between them, a silent referee. The cloth made a soft, rhythmic sound against the wood. Evan leaned in, elbows on the bar. “I looked for you, you know. After you vanished.” “Didn’t look hard enough.” “I went to your flat. Your mum’s. Even that bloody uni library you used to hide in.” Rory took a long pull of her beer, the bitterness grounding her. “Funny. I don’t remember you being that thorough when it mattered.” He flinched. Just once. But she saw it. “Fair.” His voice was rough. “I was a prick. But I *did* try. After.” “After the bruises faded, you mean.” The words landed like a punch. Evan’s fingers whitened around his glass. “I never meant—” “No. You just *did*.” Silas cleared his throat, breaking the tension like a snapped string. “You two need a minute, or should I fetch the boxing gloves?” Evan ignored him. “I changed, Rory. After you left, I…” He trailed off, rubbing his temple. “I got help. Therapy. Sobriety. The whole bloody self-improvement package.” She studied him—the clear eyes, the steady hands. No tremors, no scent of alcohol beyond the glass in front of him. “Good for you.” “That’s it?” His voice cracked. “No ‘well done’? No ‘I’m proud of you’?” She swivelled to face him fully, the stool creaking under her. “What do you want from me, Evan? Absolution? A medal?” “I want *you* to see it.” His voice dropped, raw. “I want you to see *me*.” The air between them was thick, charged. She could feel the weight of the years pressing down, all the things unsaid, undone. Silas set a fresh pint in front of her, unprompted. “On the house. You look like you need it.” She managed a small smile. “Cheers, Si.” Evan’s gaze flicked between them. “You two know each other?” “Rory’s a regular,” Silas said. “And a tenant.” Evan’s eyebrows shot up. “You live *here*?” “Above the bar.” She nodded toward the ceiling. “Cozy. Cheap. And Silas doesn’t ask too many questions.” Evan’s expression darkened. “Right. Of course.” He drained his whisky, signalled for another. “So this is your life now? Delivering takeout and hiding out in Soho?” She bristled. “It’s a living.” “It’s not *you*.” “You don’t know what’s *me* anymore.” “Don’t I?” He leaned closer, voice low. “I remember the girl who used to stay up all night reading law books because she *wanted* to. The one who argued just for the hell of it. The one who—” “Who what?” she snapped. “Who let you walk all over her? Who was too stupid to see what you were until it was too late?” His face paled. “I’m not that man anymore.” “No,” she said softly. “But I’m not that girl.” The silence that followed was heavy, suffocating. The hum of the fridge, the distant clink of glasses, the muffled laughter from a table in the corner—all of it faded into the background. Evan’s fingers tapped against his glass, a restless rhythm. “I’m in London for work. Corporate law. Ironically enough.” A bitter chuckle. “Funny how life turns out.” “Funny,” she echoed. He hesitated, then: “I’d like to take you to dinner. Catch up properly.” She almost laughed. “You think this is a *date*?” “I think I owe you a conversation. A real one.” She looked at him—the lines around his eyes, the way his shoulders carried the weight of something she couldn’t name. Maybe regret. Maybe just time. “One dinner,” she said finally. “But I pick the place.” A slow nod. “Deal.” Silas caught her eye, his expression unreadable. She gave a tiny shrug. *What the hell.* Evan pulled out his phone. “Give me your number.” She rattled it off, watching as he typed it in. His thumb hovered over the call button. “Don’t test me,” she warned. He pocketed the phone. “Wouldn’t dream of it.” The stool scraped as he stood, finishing his drink in one last swallow. “Tomorrow. Seven?” She nodded. He hesitated at the door, looking back. “It’s good to see you, Rory.” She didn’t answer. The door swung shut behind him, leaving only the ghost of his presence—and the quiet understanding that some wounds, no matter how much time passed, never quite closed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences75
tagDensity0.24
leniency0.48
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.053
95.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1244
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1244
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"charged"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"flicked"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"carried the weight"
count1
14
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"dancing"
3"familiar"
4"pulse"
5"traced"
6"rhythmic"
7"tension"
8"charged"
9"could feel"
10"flicked"
11"silence"
12"echoed"
13"carried the weight"
14"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords13
totalWords1236
ratio0.011
matches
0"is"
1"did"
2"did"
3"you"
4"me"
5"here"
6"you"
7"me"
8"wanted"
9"date"
10"What the hell."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount803
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory6
Evan13
Silas9
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.691
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like recognition"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1236
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean16.26
std12.15
cv0.747
sampleLengths
068
146
234
39
416
513
621
722
812
92
1039
1151
1211
1314
1417
158
1635
1722
1829
199
2010
213
221
233
2417
2510
267
2720
2816
294
3017
3123
328
3314
346
3515
364
3723
3826
3924
4013
4121
4216
4322
4419
457
4610
478
487
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"were traded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs152
matches(empty)
11.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences152
ratio0.046
matches
0"She shook the rain from her jacket, fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist—a habit she’d never quite shaken."
1"Rory didn’t turn, but the shift in the air—colder, heavier—made the hairs on her neck rise."
2"Their gazes met in the reflection—hers steady, his flickering with something like recognition."
3"She studied him—the clear eyes, the steady hands."
4"The hum of the fridge, the distant clink of glasses, the muffled laughter from a table in the corner—all of it faded into the background."
5"She looked at him—the lines around his eyes, the way his shoulders carried the weight of something she couldn’t name."
6"The door swung shut behind him, leaving only the ghost of his presence—and the quiet understanding that some wounds, no matter how much time passed, never quite closed."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount582
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03436426116838488
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006872852233676976
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean8.13
std6.12
cv0.753
sampleLengths
025
120
223
316
44
526
618
716
89
910
106
115
128
1313
148
1516
166
179
183
192
209
217
223
2315
245
2525
2617
279
287
294
309
315
328
339
348
3521
3613
371
383
393
4016
4125
424
436
443
458
462
473
481
493
47.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3157894736842105
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners48
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Maybe just time."
ratio0.012
61.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences86
matches
0"She shook the rain from"
1"She returned it, sliding onto"
2"She didn’t need to look"
3"She could leave."
4"His jaw was sharper than"
5"Their gazes met in the"
6"She didn’t answer."
7"She lifted her chin, just"
8"He let out a breath,"
9"She arched a brow"
10"His jaw tightened."
11"His voice was rough"
12"He trailed off, rubbing his"
13"She studied him—the clear eyes,"
14"His voice cracked"
15"She swivelled to face him"
16"His voice dropped, raw"
17"She could feel the weight"
18"She managed a small smile."
19"She nodded toward the ceiling"
ratio0.395
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences86
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"She shook the rain from"
2"The bar smelled of aged"
3"Silas looked up from polishing"
4"A nod, nothing more."
5"She returned it, sliding onto"
6"The door swung open again,"
7"Rory didn’t turn, but the"
8"The voice was familiar, but"
9"Rory’s fingers tightened around her"
10"Silas set down his cloth."
11"She didn’t need to look"
12"The way her pulse spiked"
13"Evan’s boots thudded against the"
14"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
15"The amber liquid swirled, catching"
16"She could leave."
17"The stool beside her was"
18"Evan took the seat two"
19"His jaw was sharper than"
ratio0.93
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Evan turned on his stool, full-body now, as if the sight of her was something he needed to confirm with more than just his eyes."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Evan took, eyes flicking to the mirror"
1"His voice dropped, raw"
2"He leaned, voice low"
3"He hesitated, then:"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"she warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences75
tagDensity0.08
leniency0.16
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.053
79.0498%