| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.476 | | leniency | 0.952 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |
| 96.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1373 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.73% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1373 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footfall" | | 1 | "measured" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "surreal" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "electric" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 23.81% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1361 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.87% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1094 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.46 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 16 | | Camden | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Compass | 1 | | Morris | 3 | | Eva | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Market" | | 2 | "Kowalski" | | 3 | "Compass" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.769 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sheen that seemed to move against the light" | | 1 | "something like ecstasy, or perhaps terror th" | | 2 | "patterns that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the eye" |
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| 53.05% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.47 | | wordCount | 1361 | | matches | | 0 | "not in pain but in something like ecstasy" | | 1 | "not down, but forward, into the black" |
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| 86.35% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "tucking that wayward" | | 1 | "be, that it" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 54.44 | | std | 32.77 | | cv | 0.602 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 93 | | 1 | 92 | | 2 | 78 | | 3 | 77 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 72 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 100 | | 9 | 73 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 99 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 66 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 126 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 61 |
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| 80.90% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "were curled" | | 1 | "were etched" | | 2 | "been returned" | | 3 | "were dilated" | | 4 | "been found" |
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| 18.84% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | | 0 | "was kneeling" | | 1 | "wasn't spinning" | | 2 | "was hunting" | | 3 | "was already moving" | | 4 | "was beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "The leather strap of her watch—a battered thing she'd worn since her first day on the force—dug into her left wrist as she descended deeper into the earth beneath Camden." | | 1 | "Quinn had passed the bone token to the gatekeeper at the entrance—a jagged thing that had cost her three weeks of favors and a case file she'd rather not remember—and now she stood among the stalls, where vendors sold enchanted goods under flickering gaslight and bioluminescent moss." | | 2 | "Inside the perimeter, a body slumped against a stall draped in midnight-blue velvet, the vendor's wares—vials of mercury-silver liquid, cages containing things that chirped in frequencies that made Quinn's teeth ache—arranged with disturbing neatness around the corpse." | | 3 | "Protective sigils were etched into the face—geometric patterns that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the eye." | | 4 | "And on the man's wrist—his left wrist—there was a bruise, a dark handprint, five fingers pressed into the skin with enough force to rupture capillaries." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1117 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same star-shaped pupils," |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.021486123545210387 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008057296329453895 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 16.4 | | std | 9.97 | | cv | 0.608 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 43 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 51.81% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3614457831325301 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 49.75% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Just that slack, surprised expression," |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 58.81% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She was forty-one, five-foot-nine of" | | 1 | "She found the scene forty" | | 2 | "She was smaller than Quinn" | | 3 | "Her left hand moved to" | | 4 | "Her voice was careful, measured." | | 5 | "She held up a small" | | 6 | "She circled the body, her" | | 7 | "His face was slack, mouth" | | 8 | "It looked, she thought with" | | 9 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 10 | "She didn't need to check" | | 11 | "She could see the truth" | | 12 | "She kept her hand near" | | 13 | "She reached into her coat" | | 14 | "It was small, no bigger" | | 15 | "She'd acquired it three weeks" | | 16 | "It wasn't spinning randomly." | | 17 | "It was hunting, jerking toward" | | 18 | "She moved to the corner," | | 19 | "She peered into the darkness," |
| | ratio | 0.403 | |
| 57.01% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn's boots struck a" | | 1 | "She was forty-one, five-foot-nine of" | | 2 | "The leather strap of her" | | 3 | "The Veil Market occupied what" | | 4 | "Quinn had passed the bone" | | 5 | "The air tasted of copper" | | 6 | "She found the scene forty" | | 7 | "Eva Kowalski was kneeling beside" | | 8 | "She was smaller than Quinn" | | 9 | "Her left hand moved to" | | 10 | "Eva said, not looking up" | | 11 | "Her voice was careful, measured." | | 12 | "She held up a small" | | 13 | "Quinn didn't answer." | | 14 | "She circled the body, her" | | 15 | "The victim was a man," | | 16 | "His face was slack, mouth" | | 17 | "Quinn crouched, her knees popping" | | 18 | "The man's skin had a" | | 19 | "It looked, she thought with" |
| | ratio | 0.806 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "The Veil Market occupied what had once been an abandoned Tube station, a skeletal husk of tile and iron that breathed with a damp, fungal chill." | | 1 | "Quinn had passed the bone token to the gatekeeper at the entrance—a jagged thing that had cost her three weeks of favors and a case file she'd rather not rememb…" | | 2 | "The air tasted of copper and ozone, thick with the hum of transactions that had no business being legal." | | 3 | "She found the scene forty meters in, cordoned off with yellow tape that looked absurdly official against the surreal backdrop." | | 4 | "Two uniformed constables stood guard, looking uncomfortable in the supernatural gloom, their hands resting on holsters that would be useless here." | | 5 | "Inside the perimeter, a body slumped against a stall draped in midnight-blue velvet, the vendor's wares—vials of mercury-silver liquid, cages containing things …" | | 6 | "She held up a small glass vial, half-empty, the liquid inside swirling with a pearlescent sheen that seemed to move against the light." | | 7 | "Just that slack, surprised expression, as if he'd simply stopped breathing mid-thought." | | 8 | "The man's skin had a grayish undertone, a pallor that didn't match simple asphyxiation or cardiac arrest." | | 9 | "It was small, no bigger than a pocket watch, the brass casing mottled with verdigris that spoke of age and use." | | 10 | "Protective sigils were etched into the face—geometric patterns that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the eye." | | 11 | "Beneath it, the concrete was scorched black, radiating outward in a pattern that looked almost like cracks in glass." | | 12 | "They were jagged, star-shaped, as if something had burned its way out from the inside." | | 13 | "She stood, brushing the dust from her knees, her sharp jaw set with the determination that had made her a detective and would probably get her killed." | | 14 | "She looked down at the body one last time, at the handprint bruise that matched the sigil on her compass, and felt the cold weight of recognition." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva said, not looking up" | | 1 | "Quinn said, her voice hard as flint" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.476 | | leniency | 0.952 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |