Run: 2026-10-07-01M4ATH5B7KZN7TYEBV27J6WZD

Run Details

Duration:
3m 34s
Cost:
$0.026194
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at 9:47 PM. Three sharp raps, pause, two more. Aurora didn't look up from the scroll spread across her knees. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, kneaded her thighs, claws snagging the denim of her jeans. She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist, the skin pale and tender. Below them, the curry house fried garlic and chilies until the scent seeped through the floorboards, thick and greasy. She stood. The flat smelled of old paper, ink, and desperation. Books teetered on the windowsill overlooking Brick Lane, stacked on the kitchen counter next to cold tea, piled on the armchair where Eva slept when her spine flared. Scrolls unfurled across every surface like dead things. Aurora crossed the room, her boots scuffing the hardwood. Her fingers found the deadbolts—three of them, iron and stubborn, installed after the last time she'd needed protection. She slid the top bolt back. Metal groaned. The middle one resisted, then gave. The bottom one grated against the frame, a scream of metal on metal. She yanked the door open. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway. Charcoal wool draped his shoulders, tailored sharp enough to slice glass. His platinum hair caught the hallway light, slicked back from a forehead carved from marble. One eye burned amber like a lantern in fog; the other swallowed the light whole, black and bottomless. He held his ivory cane in his right hand, the thin blade inside catching the dim glow from the stairwell, a glint of silver. He didn't smile. His mouth stayed in a line that suggested he'd rehearsed this moment a thousand times and still didn't know the words. Aurora's hand tightened on the doorframe. The wood dug into her palm. "You moved." "I moved cities. Continents." His voice was gravel and honey, four languages layered underneath the English. He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his boots clicking on the floorboards. The door swung shut behind him—not the deadbolts, just the latch—but the sound landed heavy in the silence. Ptolemy hissed from the floor, fur puffing to twice its size. Lucien looked down at the cat, then up at her. His gaze dropped to her wrist, to the scar she kept touching, the pale crescent etched into her skin. "You're doing that." "I'm breathing, too." She stepped back, letting him enter. The flat closed around them, cramped and suffocating with the weight of eight months of silence. Books pressed against her back, spines digging into her shoulder blades. "What do you want, Lucien? Eva left for her sister's place in Brighton this morning. You missed the tea." The amber eye flickered. The black one stayed fixed on her face, mapping the dark circles under her blue eyes, the tension in her jaw, the way her black hair hung loose around her shoulders. "I didn't come for Eva." "Then why?" She crossed her arms. The movement pulled her sleeve up, exposing the scar, the childhood wound that had nothing to do with Evan and everything to do with the night Lucien first walked into her life. "You disappeared. Eight months. No letters, no signals, no—" She stopped. Her voice cracked. "Nothing." "I know." He set the cane against the door. It didn't fall, balanced on its ivory handle, a silent sentinel. "I know what I did. What I didn't do." "You left." "I left because you asked me to." He took a step forward. The space between them narrowed to nothing. The air smelled of cedar and something darker, ozone and old magic, the scent of Avaros clinging to his skin. "You looked at me in Marseille like I was a demon. Like I was going to hurt you. Like I was halfway there." Her chest tightened. The scar on her wrist throbbed, a phantom pain. "You were. You are. You work for monsters, Lucien. You traffic in secrets and blood and—" She gestured at the scrolls, at the maps of ley lines spread across the table, the research Eva did on the supernatural underworld. "This. This is your world. Not mine." "I came for you." The words dropped between them, heavy and irreversible. He reached out, his hand hovering near her cheek, close. She felt the heat radiating from his skin. His fingers trembled. "I came because I couldn't stop thinking about the way you looked at me that night. The way you looked at me when I left London, standing in your doorway with your suitcase, like I was the thing keeping you from drowning." "Don't." Her voice came out rough. She turned away, busying herself with a stack of scrolls on the table. Her fingers brushed parchment, brittle and dry, covered in Eva's spidery handwriting. "Don't do this. Don't come here and talk about drowning when you're the one who pulled me under." "I never let go." He leaned in, his thigh brushing hers. The cane leaned against the door, forgotten. "You think Evan found you by accident? You think those bruises stopped when you moved from Cardiff to London?" He laughed, low, a sound like breaking glass. "I made him forget. Three times. I sat in his car outside your old flat and I made him forget your name. I made him forget your face. I made him forget that you existed." Aurora's breath hitched. The scrolls slipped from her fingers, scattering across the floor. The parchment whispered like dry leaves. "You shouldn't have." "Shouldn't have what? Loved you? Left you? Stayed?" He closed the gap, invading her space. She smelled the bergamot in his cologne, the smoke that clung to his suit. "I left because you looked at me like I was a monster, Aurora. Because you were right, and I couldn't bear it. I am a monster. Half of me crawls out of Avaros every night, hungry and cold and angry. But the other half—" His hand touched her face, thumb brushing her cheekbone, gentle as a bruise. "The other half wanted to stay. Wanted to fight. Wanted to be the thing that kept Evan away instead of the thing you were afraid of." She didn't pull away. Her pulse hammered in her throat, visible in the hollow of her neck. The amber eye caught the light, reflecting her face back at her, distorted and golden. "You hurt me." "I know." "And you left me alone." "I know." The words hung between them, heavy as the books crowding the shelves, dense as the curry smoke rising from below. Ptolemy meowed from the corner, a plaintive, lonely sound. Lucien's thumb traced the line of her jaw, down to her chin, lingering at the corner of her mouth. "I should have fought harder. I should have stayed and let you hate me instead of leaving and letting you forget." "Forget?" She caught his wrist. Her fingers found the scar on her own wrist, then moved to his hand, solid and warm and trembling. The skin there was calloused, scarred from a thousand grips on that ivory cane. "I didn't forget. I remembered every night. I remembered your eyes. The way they changed in the dark, amber and black, like you were two people fighting for the same body." His breath shuddered out against her lips. So close. The black eye widened, reflecting her terror and her hope. "Then let me back in." The door behind them rattled. A gust from the stairwell, Brick Lane wind funneling up from the street. The cane wobbled, caught itself against the frame. Aurora didn't move. She stood in the center of the cluttered room, surrounded by Eva's research and the ghost of a demon's touch, and felt the past pressing against her chest like a fist, squeezing out the air. The scar on her wrist burned. The amber eye waited. "I don't know how," she whispered. Lucien leaned his forehead against hers. The platinum hair brushed her temple, soft as silk, sharp as wire. "Then we'll figure it out. Together." The words struck her chest, fragile and fierce. Outside, a siren wailed down Brick Lane, fading into the curry-scented dark, leaving only the sound of her heartbeat, loud in her ears, matching the rhythm of his breath against her mouth.
created_at"2026-10-07T09:18:52.271Z" 10/7/2026, 9:18:52 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.811
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.054
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"marble"
count1
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"sentinel"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"marble"
2"glint"
3"silence"
4"etched"
5"weight"
6"flickered"
7"tension"
8"sentinel"
9"throbbed"
10"trembled"
11"pulse"
12"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
97.24% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount1
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0.009
matches
0"\"I made him forget. Three times. I sat in his car outside your old flat and I made him forget your name. I made him forget your face. I made him forget that you existed.\""
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1365
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount967
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Brick"
discoveredNames
Brick3
Lane3
Eva4
Moreau1
English1
Evan1
Lucien5
Avaros1
Aurora5
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Avaros"
5"Aurora"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1365
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean39
std26.52
cv0.68
sampleLengths
070
174
227
35
473
524
614
748
811
932
1055
1140
1253
1329
142
1562
1658
1775
1849
1980
2022
21112
2235
232
245
252
2629
2740
2869
2924
3026
3148
326
3324
3440
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"was calloused"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs161
matches(empty)
65.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences111
ratio0.027
matches
0"Her fingers found the deadbolts—three of them, iron and stubborn, installed after the last time she'd needed protection."
1"One eye burned amber like a lantern in fog; the other swallowed the light whole, black and bottomless."
2"The door swung shut behind him—not the deadbolts, just the latch—but the sound landed heavy in the silence."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount971
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.017507723995880537
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0020597322348094747
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean12.3
std9.83
cv0.8
sampleLengths
06
16
211
314
414
519
62
79
828
98
109
1118
126
132
146
1513
165
175
1811
1915
2018
2124
223
2321
246
256
262
2716
2814
2918
3011
3110
3219
333
349
3516
3611
3719
384
3931
405
416
4232
4311
443
451
469
4711
489
492
44.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.26126126126126126
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences84
matches
0"She traced the crescent scar"
1"Her fingers found the deadbolts—three"
2"She slid the top bolt"
3"She yanked the door open."
4"His platinum hair caught the"
5"He held his ivory cane"
6"He didn't smile."
7"His mouth stayed in a"
8"His voice was gravel and"
9"He stepped inside without waiting"
10"His gaze dropped to her"
11"She stepped back, letting him"
12"She crossed her arms"
13"Her voice cracked."
14"He set the cane against"
15"It didn't fall, balanced on"
16"He took a step forward"
17"Her chest tightened."
18"She gestured at the scrolls,"
19"He reached out, his hand"
ratio0.429
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences84
matches
0"The knock came at 9:47"
1"Aurora didn't look up from"
2"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, kneaded"
3"She traced the crescent scar"
4"The flat smelled of old"
5"Books teetered on the windowsill"
6"Scrolls unfurled across every surface"
7"Aurora crossed the room, her"
8"Her fingers found the deadbolts—three"
9"She slid the top bolt"
10"The middle one resisted, then"
11"The bottom one grated against"
12"She yanked the door open."
13"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway."
14"Charcoal wool draped his shoulders,"
15"His platinum hair caught the"
16"He held his ivory cane"
17"He didn't smile."
18"His mouth stayed in a"
19"Aurora's hand tightened on the"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his boots clicking on the floorboards."
1"She smelled the bergamot in his cologne, the smoke that clung to his suit."
2"Outside, a siren wailed down Brick Lane, fading into the curry-scented dark, leaving only the sound of her heartbeat, loud in her ears, matching the rhythm of h…"
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He leaned in, his thigh brushing hers"
1"His hand touched, thumb brushing her cheekbone, gentle as a bruise"
95.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.054
leniency0.108
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.108
81.4468%