| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.405 | | leniency | 0.811 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.054 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1368 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1368 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "marble" | | 2 | "glint" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "sentinel" | | 9 | "throbbed" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "silk" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 97.24% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 1 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 57 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "\"I made him forget. Three times. I sat in his car outside your old flat and I made him forget your name. I made him forget your face. I made him forget that you existed.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1365 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 967 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.52 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Brick" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 3 | | Lane | 3 | | Eva | 4 | | Moreau | 1 | | English | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Lucien | 5 | | Avaros | 1 | | Aurora | 5 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Avaros" | | 5 | "Aurora" | | 6 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1365 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 39 | | std | 26.52 | | cv | 0.68 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 74 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 73 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 75 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 80 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 112 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 69 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 40 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 161 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.64% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.027 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers found the deadbolts—three of them, iron and stubborn, installed after the last time she'd needed protection." | | 1 | "One eye burned amber like a lantern in fog; the other swallowed the light whole, black and bottomless." | | 2 | "The door swung shut behind him—not the deadbolts, just the latch—but the sound landed heavy in the silence." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 971 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.017507723995880537 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0020597322348094747 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 12.3 | | std | 9.83 | | cv | 0.8 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 44.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.26126126126126126 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 48.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She traced the crescent scar" | | 1 | "Her fingers found the deadbolts—three" | | 2 | "She slid the top bolt" | | 3 | "She yanked the door open." | | 4 | "His platinum hair caught the" | | 5 | "He held his ivory cane" | | 6 | "He didn't smile." | | 7 | "His mouth stayed in a" | | 8 | "His voice was gravel and" | | 9 | "He stepped inside without waiting" | | 10 | "His gaze dropped to her" | | 11 | "She stepped back, letting him" | | 12 | "She crossed her arms" | | 13 | "Her voice cracked." | | 14 | "He set the cane against" | | 15 | "It didn't fall, balanced on" | | 16 | "He took a step forward" | | 17 | "Her chest tightened." | | 18 | "She gestured at the scrolls," | | 19 | "He reached out, his hand" |
| | ratio | 0.429 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at 9:47" | | 1 | "Aurora didn't look up from" | | 2 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, kneaded" | | 3 | "She traced the crescent scar" | | 4 | "The flat smelled of old" | | 5 | "Books teetered on the windowsill" | | 6 | "Scrolls unfurled across every surface" | | 7 | "Aurora crossed the room, her" | | 8 | "Her fingers found the deadbolts—three" | | 9 | "She slid the top bolt" | | 10 | "The middle one resisted, then" | | 11 | "The bottom one grated against" | | 12 | "She yanked the door open." | | 13 | "Lucien Moreau filled the doorway." | | 14 | "Charcoal wool draped his shoulders," | | 15 | "His platinum hair caught the" | | 16 | "He held his ivory cane" | | 17 | "He didn't smile." | | 18 | "His mouth stayed in a" | | 19 | "Aurora's hand tightened on the" |
| | ratio | 0.952 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 87.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his boots clicking on the floorboards." | | 1 | "She smelled the bergamot in his cologne, the smoke that clung to his suit." | | 2 | "Outside, a siren wailed down Brick Lane, fading into the curry-scented dark, leaving only the sound of her heartbeat, loud in her ears, matching the rhythm of h…" |
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| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned in, his thigh brushing hers" | | 1 | "His hand touched, thumb brushing her cheekbone, gentle as a bruise" |
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| 95.95% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "He laughed (laugh)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.054 | | leniency | 0.108 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.108 | |