Run: 2026-10-07-01M4ATNJ9GAWRP8CM2MZXV7FHM

Run Details

Duration:
4m 26s
Cost:
$0.038797
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid home with a pneumatic hiss. Rory's fingers lingered on the brass chain, knuckles white. Through the peephole, charcoal wool filled the frame, shoulders hunched against the Brick Lane rain. Platinum hair caught the corridor's fluorescent glow, slicked back severe and sharp. She pulled the chain. The door swung inward before the knock came. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, ivory cane tapping the floorboards once, twice, a metronome counting down. Rain dripped from his charcoal suit, darkening the wool to near-black. The amber eye fixed on her, predatory and bright; the black eye drank the dim hallway light, bottomless. He filled the doorway like a prophecy, tall and terrible and achingly familiar. "Evening, Rory." "This isn't your flat." Her voice came out rough, scraped raw from three months of silence. Her black hair fell loose, shoulder-length, framing a face she hadn't bothered to make up, bright blue eyes stark against the pallor of her skin. "I know." He stepped inside, invading the cramped space, boots scuffing the worn pine. The scent of bergamot and ozone washed over her, demon and man intertwined. "Eva let me in. She unlocked all three deadbolts. Said you were expecting trouble." "Eva shouldn't have." Rory's jaw tightened. She didn't step back. The flat shrank around her, every surface crowded with scrolls and legal textbooks, with the ghost of a life she'd abandoned. The curry spices from the restaurant downstairs seeped through the gap under the door, thick and cloying. "You can't—" "Show up?" A smile twitched at the corner of his mouth. "Unannounced? Uninvited?" He closed the distance in two strides, boots stopping millimeters from hers. The cane leaned against the doorframe, forgotten. "After Cardiff? After you packed your bags and left without a word?" The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light from the kitchen. Rory's hand twitched toward it, shame coiling tight in her chest. "I had to get away from Evan." "From Evan." Lucien tasted the name, bitter. "Or from me? From what we were?" "We weren't anything." The lie tasted like ash. She crossed her arms, hugging herself. "You were a job. A favor. A—" "A mistake?" His amber eye flickered, hurt flashing across his features before he masked it. "You looked at me in Marseille like I was the only solid thing in a world of smoke. You held my hand under the table at that café while your father ranted about barrister futures. You kissed me in the alley behind Golden Empress and said you'd never felt safe with anyone else." Rory's breath hitched. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed from the windowsill, tail puffed. She remembered that night, the press of his mouth against hers, the way he'd tasted like wine and secrets. "I was scared," she whispered. "Of what?" He reached out, thumb brushing her cheekbone. She flinched but didn't pull away. "Of this? Of me?" "Of us." Her voice cracked. "You're not human, Lucien. You don't age the same. You don't bleed the same. I watched you heal a broken rib in three days. I watched you speak to shadows. I'm twenty-five, I work deliveries, I have a scar on my wrist from falling off a bike when I was eight. I can't—I can't be what you need." "And what do I need?" He stepped closer, close enough that she felt the heat radiating from his skin, the unnatural chill of his demon heritage fighting the warmth of his blood. His other hand found her waist, pulling her against the hard planes of his body. "You think I need a human toy? Something fragile to protect?" "You left me." The accusation settled between them, heavy as a blade. "In Cardiff. You said you couldn't watch me destroy myself, that you had to go back to your... your underworld. You walked out of my life and didn't look back." "I looked back every day." His forehead dropped to hers, platinum hair brushing her temple. "For two years, Rory. I sent letters you never answered. I stood outside your father's chambers in Cardiff and watched you walk past without seeing me. I thought you hated me. I thought you'd chosen him, chosen that life, chosen to forget." Rory's eyes burned. She blinked, refusing to cry. "I was engaged to Evan. I had to survive. You weren't there. You couldn't be." "You had to survive." His hand slid up her neck, thumb tracing the pulse point, feeling her heart hammer against his skin. "You survived. And then you ran to London. To Eva. To this flat above a curry house with three deadbolts and a cat that hates me. You deliver packages for a restaurant that fronts for a trafficking ring. You carry messages in your delivery bag. You think because you're human, because you wear a uniform, they won't suspect you. But I see the bruises on your knuckles, Rory. I see the way you check the locks three times before you sleep. You're drowning, and you won't let me throw you a rope." "It's not about the cat." "It's never about the cat." He kissed her temple, soft, reverent. "I've been tracking you for three months. The smuggling ring, the supernatural black market, the things you're delivering for Yu-Fei Cheung without asking questions. I know why you're here, Aurora. I know what you're running from. And I know you're running out of places to hide." Rory went still. The scrolls on the walls seemed to lean closer, ink bleeding in the lamplight. "You don't know anything." "I know you flinch when someone touches your wrist." His fingers found the scar, tracing the crescent shape, gentle. "I know you take your tea with two sugars and you hate the rain but you never carry an umbrella. I know you talk to Ptolemy when you think no one is watching, and you apologize to the pavement when you stub your toe. I know you left a half-finished cup of tea on the counter three months ago, and Eva drank it because she thought you'd want her to." She gasped, exposed, naked in a way that had nothing to do with clothes. "You've been watching me." "I've been waiting." He pulled back, meeting her gaze, bright blue eyes reflecting the dim light, vulnerable and fierce. "Waiting for you to be ready. Waiting for you to stop running. And now you're here, behind three deadbolts, surrounded by books and scrolls and secrets, and I'm here, and you haven't thrown me out." The silence stretched, taut as a wire. Rory's fingers found the lapels of his jacket, gripping the charcoal wool. The cane clattered somewhere behind them, a punctuation mark. Outside, a siren wailed down Brick Lane, distant and irrelevant. "I don't know how to do this," she admitted. "Us. This... whatever it is." "Then don't." His thumb traced her lower lip, testing, asking. "Stand here. Let me look at you. That's all I asked for. That's all I ever asked." Ptolemy yowled from the bookshelf, knocking a stack of scrolls to the floor. They didn't move. Rory's free hand found his chest, feeling the steady beat of his heart, racing, impossibly human. "You're impossible." "I'm persistent." He smiled, real and devastating. "And I was yours, Rory. From Marseille. Though you pretended otherwise." The words broke something in her chest. Rory rose on her toes, closing the final distance, and kissed him. It tasted like rain and old magic and forgiveness, like surfacing from deep water. His hands cradled her face, thumbs brushing away tears she hadn't known she'd shed. Behind them, the door clicked. Eva stood in the frame, umbrella dripping onto the floorboards, eyes wide at the scene unfolding in her cramped living room. She wore a sari, rain caught in her dark hair. "Oh," Eva said, her voice neutral. "I can come back. I thought you might want company, Rory. Since Lucien has been camped outside for an hour waiting for you to answer the door." Lucien didn't pull away. Rory didn't let go. "Stay," Rory said to both of them, the word tasting like copper and sunlight.
created_at"2026-10-07T09:21:16.601Z" 10/7/2026, 9:21:16 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"The lie tasted like [like]"
1"He pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.469
leniency0.939
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.082
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1355
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1355
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count2
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"stark"
3"flickered"
4"chill"
5"warmth"
6"tracing"
7"pulse"
8"traced"
9"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen92
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1354
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.20% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount698
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
Moreau1
Rory11
Ptolemy2
Lucien3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.712
windowScore0.833
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like wine and secrets"
1"tasted like rain and old magic and forgiv"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1354
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"remembered that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean35.63
std24.18
cv0.679
sampleLengths
045
14
28
359
42
541
641
750
844
931
1014
1121
1268
1332
145
1519
1663
1758
1842
1957
2023
21114
225
2357
2421
2589
2618
2754
2838
2914
3027
3134
3218
3347
3436
3533
368
3714
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs125
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences94
ratio0.011
matches
0"The amber eye fixed on her, predatory and bright; the black eye drank the dim hallway light, bottomless."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount700
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.03142857142857143
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002857142857142857
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean14.4
std14.28
cv0.991
sampleLengths
09
19
215
312
44
58
617
711
818
913
102
1116
1225
1314
1413
1514
166
174
1821
1917
202
2111
2214
237
2412
2513
2611
277
287
297
308
316
327
3315
3453
353
3610
3719
385
399
406
414
425
4358
4432
4515
4611
4712
4830
4915
58.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.39361702127659576
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences66
matches
0"She pulled the chain."
1"He filled the doorway like"
2"Her voice came out rough,"
3"Her black hair fell loose,"
4"He stepped inside, invading the"
5"She didn't step back."
6"He closed the distance in"
7"She crossed her arms, hugging"
8"His amber eye flickered, hurt"
9"She remembered that night, the"
10"He reached out, thumb brushing"
11"She flinched but didn't pull"
12"Her voice cracked"
13"He stepped closer, close enough"
14"His other hand found her"
15"His forehead dropped to hers,"
16"She blinked, refusing to cry."
17"His hand slid up her"
18"He kissed her temple, soft,"
19"His fingers found the scar,"
ratio0.424
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences66
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid home"
1"Rory's fingers lingered on the"
2"Platinum hair caught the corridor's"
3"She pulled the chain."
4"The door swung inward before"
5"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
6"Rain dripped from his charcoal"
7"The amber eye fixed on"
8"He filled the doorway like"
9"Her voice came out rough,"
10"Her black hair fell loose,"
11"He stepped inside, invading the"
12"The scent of bergamot and"
13"Rory's jaw tightened"
14"She didn't step back."
15"The flat shrank around her,"
16"The curry spices from the"
17"A smile twitched at the"
18"He closed the distance in"
19"The cane leaned against the"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory's free hand found his chest, feeling the steady beat of his heart, racing, impossibly human."
38.04% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He closed, boots stopping millimeters from hers"
1"Lucien tasted, bitter"
2"He reached out, thumb brushing her cheekbone"
3"Eva said, her voice neutral"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.082
leniency0.163
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.082
80.7809%