Run: 2026-10-07-01M4ATVRMBFJA39YM7XE7YWYKG

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Duration:
19.7s
Cost:
$0.018187
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shifted before they even stepped through. A breath of warmth, thick with the scent of overripe fruit and something darker, earthier—like damp soil after rain. Rory hesitated at the threshold, her fingers tightening around the Heartstone pendant. It pulsed once, a slow, steady thrum against her palm. Nyx didn’t hesitate. Their form rippled, shadows stretching long and thin before snapping back into the shape of a man—tall, indistinct, but solid enough to brush past her. The moment they crossed, the world folded. Rory followed. The first thing that hit her was the light. Amber, golden, like the last hour of sunset stretched into eternity. It bathed everything in a honeyed glow, turning the leaves of the towering vines into gilded lace. The trees here were monstrous things, their trunks wide as houses, their branches heavy with fruit that glowed faintly from within—pears like molten gold, apples that shimmered like rubies. The air hummed, thick with the buzz of unseen insects and the distant, rhythmic clatter of something like pots and pans. “This is Dymas,” Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper that seemed to come from everywhere at once. “Gluttony’s domain.” Rory’s boots sank slightly into the ground. The earth was soft, almost spongy, as if the soil itself were saturated with something rich and sweet. She crouched, pressing her fingers into it. The dirt clung to her skin, warm and damp. When she brought her hand to her nose, the scent was intoxicating—cinnamon, cloves, something fermented and deep. “Don’t eat anything,” Nyx said, though their tone lacked urgency. “Not unless you fancy being here forever.” Rory stood, wiping her hand on her jeans. “Noted.” A path wound ahead, paved with smooth, dark stones that looked almost like polished obsidian. It cut through the orchards, leading toward a distant structure—something vast and sprawling, its roofline jagged with spires and chimneys. Smoke curled from a dozen vents, carrying the sharp, savoury tang of roasting meat. The deeper they walked, the more the air thickened. Not just with scent, but with sound. Laughter, now—deep, rolling chuckles and high, trilling giggles. The clink of glasses. The sizzle of fat hitting flame. Rory’s stomach growled, traitorous, and she clenched her jaw. “Hungry?” Nyx’s silhouette flickered, their edges blurring as if the light itself couldn’t decide how to touch them. “No,” she lied. The path opened into a clearing, and Rory stopped dead. A feast stretched before them, laid out on a table that groaned under its own weight. Whole roasted boars, their skin crackling and golden. Towers of pastries, their layers flaking like the pages of an old book. Bowls of stew so thick the spoons stood upright in them. And the colours—vibrant, almost painful in their intensity. The reds of the berries were deeper than any she’d seen, the greens of the herbs so bright they seemed to vibrate. But it wasn’t just the food. The people—or what had once been people—milled around the table, their movements sluggish, their faces slack with satisfaction. Some were human, or had been. Others were… less so. A man with the antlers of a stag lifted a goblet to his lips, the liquid inside shimmering like liquid silver. A woman with skin like bark tore into a leg of lamb with her teeth, juice dripping down her chin. Rory’s throat went dry. “They’re not prisoners,” Nyx said, as if reading her thoughts. “They chose this.” “Chose to be… what, exactly?” “Full. Forever.” A figure detached from the crowd—a man, or the shape of one, his belly round as a barrel, his cheeks flushed with wine. He wore an apron stained with grease and what looked like berry juice. His eyes, when they landed on Rory, were sharp, assessing. “Ah,” he boomed, his voice rich as butter. “Newcomers.” Nyx’s form shifted, their edges sharpening into something more defined. “We’re passing through.” The man’s grin widened. “Passing through? In Dymas? My dear shadow, once you taste, you’ll never want to leave.” Rory’s hand went to the Fae blade at her belt. The cold of the moonsilver seeped through the fabric of her shirt, a grounding contrast to the heat pressing in around her. The chef’s gaze flicked to the movement. “Ah, a guest with manners. Or perhaps just good sense.” He wiped his hands on his apron. “I am Chef Orlan. And you are?” “Not hungry,” Rory said. Orlan laughed, the sound rolling through the clearing like a wave. “Everyone’s hungry here, girl. It’s just a matter of what they’re willing to eat.” Nyx stepped between them, their voice dropping to a whisper that carried like a blade. “We’re not here for your hospitality.” Orlan’s smile didn’t waver, but his eyes darkened, just for a second. “Pity. The prince would be most interested to meet fresh faces.” Rory’s pulse spiked. “Prince?” “The ruler of this fine realm.” Orlan gestured grandly toward the distant structure—the palace, Rory realised now, its windows glowing like embers. “Prince Belphegor. A most… generous host.” Nyx’s form rippled, their edges bleeding into the shadows at their feet. “We’ll take our chances with the path.” Orlan shrugged, his jowls wobbling. “Suit yourselves. But the forest has teeth, little shadow. And the prince does so love to feed his guests.” Rory didn’t wait for more. She turned, her boots crunching on the obsidian path as she strode away from the feast, from the laughter, from the weight of eyes on her back. The air grew cooler the farther they walked, the scent of food fading into something greener, sharper. The trees here were different. Their bark was dark, almost black, and their leaves were broad and waxy, catching the amber light like stained glass. The fruit hanging from their branches was less inviting now—some of it split open, revealing pulp that writhed with maggots the size of her thumb. The buzzing of insects grew louder, more insistent. Nyx materialised beside her, their form solid once more. “This way.” They veered off the path, cutting through the undergrowth. The plants here were lush, almost aggressive, their vines curling around her ankles like greedy fingers. Rory slashed at them with the Fae blade, the moonsilver parting the foliage with ease. The blade hummed faintly, as if pleased. A sound cut through the rustling—a wet, tearing noise, followed by a low, guttural groan. Rory froze. Nyx’s head tilted, their violet eyes narrowing. “Not alone out here.” She didn’t breathe. Didn’t move. The groan came again, closer this time, and then the snap of a branch. Something was moving toward them, slow and heavy. Then she saw it. A figure emerged from the trees, its body a grotesque parody of human. Its stomach was distended, the skin stretched so thin she could see the pulse of something moving beneath. Its mouth was a lipless gash, dripping with saliva, and its eyes— Its eyes were hollow. It lurched forward, its arms outstretched, fingers ending in blackened, curved claws. The stench hit her next—rotting meat and something sickly sweet, like spoiled wine. Rory’s grip tightened on the blade. “What the hell is that?” “A glutton,” Nyx said, their voice eerily calm. “One who ate too much of the wrong thing.” The creature let out a wet, rattling breath and lunged. Rory moved on instinct. She sidestepped, the Fae blade flashing in the amber light. It sliced through the creature’s arm like it was nothing, the limb hitting the ground with a wet thud. Black ichor sprayed, sizzling where it touched the leaves. The glutton didn’t seem to notice. It kept coming, its remaining arm swiping at her. She ducked, rolling to the side, and came up slashing. The blade bit deep into its side, and this time, the creature screamed—a sound like tearing fabric. Nyx didn’t watch. Their form dissolved into shadow, reforming behind the glutton. A tendril of darkness lashed out, wrapping around its throat. The creature thrashed, its claws tearing at the shadow, but Nyx yanked hard. The glutton’s neck snapped with a sound like a rotten branch breaking. It collapsed, its body twitching once before going still. Rory didn’t lower the blade. Her breath came fast, her heart hammering. The ichor on the ground hissed, eating into the earth like acid. Nyx’s form solidified beside her. “There’ll be more.” She swallowed. “Lovely.” The trees ahead thinned, revealing a river—wide and slow-moving, its surface the colour of dark honey. A bridge arched over it, constructed from what looked like bone, its surface smooth and yellowed with age. And beyond it, the palace loomed, its spires clawing at the amber sky. Rory exhaled, her grip on the blade steady. “Let’s keep moving.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Orlan gestured grandly [grandly]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.294
leniency0.588
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.059
96.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1456
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1456
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"structure"
count2
6
word"stomach"
count2
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"flicked"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count2
12
word"lurched"
count1
13
word"constructed"
count1
14
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"shimmered"
3"rhythmic"
4"whisper"
5"structure"
6"stomach"
7"flickered"
8"weight"
9"intensity"
10"flicked"
11"pulse"
12"lurched"
13"constructed"
14"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences118
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences142
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1441
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1272
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Rory19
Nyx14
Fae3
Orlan4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Orlan"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore0.753
windowScore0.667
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"something like pots and pans"
1"whisper that seemed to come from everywhere at once"
2"as if reading her thoughts"
3"looked like berry juice"
4"looked like bone, its surface smooth and"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.694
wordCount1441
matches
0"Not just with scent, but with sound"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean24.84
std20.45
cv0.823
sampleLengths
049
135
22
387
419
558
617
79
849
943
1018
113
1210
1378
1475
154
1613
175
182
1946
209
2113
2219
2332
2431
254
2625
2721
2823
294
3028
3119
3224
3349
3458
3511
3647
3715
382
3911
4027
414
4243
434
4425
4511
4617
4710
4842
4942
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"was distended"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs220
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences142
ratio0.113
matches
0"A breath of warmth, thick with the scent of overripe fruit and something darker, earthier—like damp soil after rain."
1"Their form rippled, shadows stretching long and thin before snapping back into the shape of a man—tall, indistinct, but solid enough to brush past her."
2"The trees here were monstrous things, their trunks wide as houses, their branches heavy with fruit that glowed faintly from within—pears like molten gold, apples that shimmered like rubies."
3"When she brought her hand to her nose, the scent was intoxicating—cinnamon, cloves, something fermented and deep."
4"It cut through the orchards, leading toward a distant structure—something vast and sprawling, its roofline jagged with spires and chimneys."
5"Laughter, now—deep, rolling chuckles and high, trilling giggles."
6"And the colours—vibrant, almost painful in their intensity."
7"The people—or what had once been people—milled around the table, their movements sluggish, their faces slack with satisfaction."
8"A figure detached from the crowd—a man, or the shape of one, his belly round as a barrel, his cheeks flushed with wine."
9"“The ruler of this fine realm.” Orlan gestured grandly toward the distant structure—the palace, Rory realised now, its windows glowing like embers."
10"The fruit hanging from their branches was less inviting now—some of it split open, revealing pulp that writhed with maggots the size of her thumb."
11"A sound cut through the rustling—a wet, tearing noise, followed by a low, guttural groan."
12"Its mouth was a lipless gash, dripping with saliva, and its eyes—"
13"The stench hit her next—rotting meat and something sickly sweet, like spoiled wine."
14"The blade bit deep into its side, and this time, the creature screamed—a sound like tearing fabric."
15"The trees ahead thinned, revealing a river—wide and slow-moving, its surface the colour of dark honey."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1288
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.03571428571428571
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005434782608695652
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences142
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences142
mean10.15
std6.24
cv0.615
sampleLengths
08
119
212
310
43
525
67
72
89
911
1017
1129
1221
1317
142
157
1618
177
189
1917
2010
217
228
231
2415
2520
2614
279
287
298
304
316
329
3318
343
3510
3616
378
3813
3911
408
4122
426
4318
446
452
462
4721
4820
494
53.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.36619718309859156
totalSentences142
uniqueOpeners52
30.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"Then she saw it."
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences110
matches
0"It pulsed once, a slow,"
1"Their form rippled, shadows stretching"
2"It bathed everything in a"
3"She crouched, pressing her fingers"
4"It cut through the orchards,"
5"He wore an apron stained"
6"His eyes, when they landed"
7"he boomed, his voice rich"
8"He wiped his hands on"
9"She turned, her boots crunching"
10"Their bark was dark, almost"
11"They veered off the path,"
12"She didn’t breathe."
13"Its stomach was distended, the"
14"Its mouth was a lipless"
15"Its eyes were hollow."
16"It lurched forward, its arms"
17"She sidestepped, the Fae blade"
18"It sliced through the creature’s"
19"It kept coming, its remaining"
ratio0.218
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences110
matches
0"The air shifted before they"
1"A breath of warmth, thick"
2"Rory hesitated at the threshold,"
3"It pulsed once, a slow,"
4"Nyx didn’t hesitate."
5"Their form rippled, shadows stretching"
6"The moment they crossed, the"
7"The first thing that hit"
8"Amber, golden, like the last"
9"It bathed everything in a"
10"The trees here were monstrous"
11"The air hummed, thick with"
12"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
13"Rory’s boots sank slightly into"
14"The earth was soft, almost"
15"She crouched, pressing her fingers"
16"The dirt clung to her"
17"Nyx said, though their tone"
18"Rory stood, wiping her hand"
19"A path wound ahead, paved"
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The trees here were monstrous things, their trunks wide as houses, their branches heavy with fruit that glowed faintly from within—pears like molten gold, apple…"
1"The earth was soft, almost spongy, as if the soil itself were saturated with something rich and sweet."
2"A path wound ahead, paved with smooth, dark stones that looked almost like polished obsidian."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Nyx said, though their tone lacked urgency"
1"Nyx said, as if reading her thoughts"
2"he boomed, his voice rich as butter"
3"Nyx said, their voice eerily calm"
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"she lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.118
76.2814%