Run: 2026-10-07-01M4ATXAT8Q4W63YY3GBW6PGQ0

Run Details

Duration:
5m 22s
Cost:
$0.026097
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest smelled of spilled stout and the particular mustiness of old paper. Maps sagged against the dark wood panels, their edges browned and curling like dead leaves. Black-and-white photographs of men in fedoras and women in cloche hats lined the shelves behind the bar, their glass eyes watching the room with permanent judgment. Aurora wiped the mahogany counter with a rag, her left wrist turning as the crescent scar caught the dim amber light from the pendant lamps. She wore a faded Golden Empress apron over a charcoal sweater, the sleeves pushed up to her elbows. Her black hair was pulled back in a loose knot, strands escaping to frame her face. Outside, the green neon sign above the door buzzed against the rain, casting a sickly pulse through the front window. The bell above the door chimed. Aurora looked up, the rag freezing in her hand. The woman filling the doorway did not match the memory Aurora carried. Eva had been all sharp elbows and chaotic laughter, auburn curls tumbling over her shoulders, always dragging Rory toward the Cardiff waterfront at midnight to steal chips from the twenty-four-hour chippy. This woman wore a charcoal wool coat that cost more than Aurora's monthly rent, the collar popped high against the damp. Her hair was hacked short, jet black, severe as a blade. She carried a leather portfolio under one arm and moved with the careful precision of someone calculating exits, her heels clicking a staccato rhythm against the floorboards. "Rory?" The voice emerged stripped of its familiar lilt, lower, rougher at the edges. Aurora set the rag down on the counter. The scar on her wrist burned. "Eva." Silence stretched between them, thick as the cigar smoke that used to hang in this room before the ban. Eva stepped inside, her coat dripping rain onto the Persian rug. She did not smile. Her eyes, once hazel and perpetually laughing, scanned the space with a detachment that felt surgical—the maps, the photographs, the bottles lined up like soldiers, the bookshelf in the corner that hid Silas's back room. Eva's jaw tightened. "You still live above this place." Aurora's fingers tightened around the edge of the bar. "Yeah. You still know how to find me." Eva tasted the word, her tongue pressing it against her teeth. "Busy." She turned, leaning one hip against the mahogany, close enough that Aurora caught the scent of her perfume—something dark and resinous, patchouli and smoke, nothing like the vanilla body spray Eva used to drench herself in before sixth form. "You were busy working doubles at that Chinese restaurant. You were busy avoiding my calls. You were busy becoming someone I don't recognize." Aurora's hands curled into fists beneath the counter. The scar tissue pulled tight, white against her skin. "And you? You vanished. Poof. Cardiff rang, said you'd cleared out your flat on City Road. No forwarding address. No note. Gone." Eva's voice cracked, a hairline fracture in the polished surface. She smoothed her coat sleeve with one hand, the wool whispering. "I had to leave. You know why. You were there." Aurora's voice stayed flat, controlled, the way she kept it when Evan used to stand too close. "I know you told me to run. I know you packed my bags while he was at the warehouse. I know you stood in that doorway with your arms crossed and told me I was worth more than his fists. I remember, Eva. I remember every single thing." The confession hung in the air, heavy and unmovable. Eva's throat worked. She looked away, her gaze sliding across the maps, the frozen faces in the photographs, the green neon glow pulsing through the window. "And then?" Aurora laughed, a sharp, broken sound that startled a pigeon outside the window. "Then I ran. I ran so far I ended up here. Delivering dumplings for a man named Yu-Fei. Sleeping above a bar owned by a retired intelligence officer. Hiding in plain sight." She gestured at the room, at the hidden bookshelf, at the dim corners where shadows pooled like spilled ink. "This is my life now. Small. Quiet. Predictable. No one hitting me. No one screaming. No one breaking my things." Eva's fingers drummed the leather portfolio. The sound was too loud in the sudden quiet. "You never said thank you." The words landed between them like stones dropped into deep water. Aurora felt the impact in her sternum, a bruise forming beneath her ribs. "I was twenty-two. I was terrified. I didn't know how to say it without crying, and crying felt like weakness, and you..." She stopped. Her breath fogged the air. The neon sign outside flickered, casting a green pulse across Eva's angular cheekbones, emphasizing the hollows beneath them, the new sharpness of her face. "You looked so sure. So certain. I thought you'd be fine without me. I thought you'd move on. I thought that was the deal." Eva's voice dropped to a whisper. She stepped closer, invading the space Aurora guarded, close enough that Aurora could count the fine lines at the corners of her eyes, see the exhaustion etched there. "I wasn't fine. I waited in Cardiff for six months. I thought you'd come back. I thought we'd figure it out together, like we always did. But you built walls, Rory. You built them high and thick and you never let me over. Not once." Aurora looked at her hands. The scar was visible, pale and crescent-shaped, a souvenir from a childhood accident at the lake. "I didn't know how to be anything but grateful. And gratitude felt like debt, and debt felt like another kind of trap. Like I owed you my whole life." Eva reached out, her hand hovering near Aurora's cheek, then falling back to her side. Her jaw worked, the muscle jumping. "I changed, Rory. I changed everything. I moved to Edinburgh. I took a job with a private security firm. The kind that does... things. Dangerous things. I cut my hair because I needed to look like someone else. Someone harder. Someone who doesn't flinch." She tapped the portfolio against her thigh. "I'm not the girl who used to steal chips from the chippy on St. Mary Street. I'm not the girl who cried during every episode of Doctor Who. I'm not her anymore. I had to become someone else to survive." Aurora pushed off the counter. She walked to the window, her reflection ghosting over the dark glass. Rain streaked the panes in silver lines. The green neon sign hummed its electric song. "Neither am I. I'm not the girl who followed you into every stupid adventure. I'm not the girl who thought Cardiff was the whole world. I survive now. That's all I do. I deliver noodles. I pay rent. I don't let anyone close enough to hurt me." "Surviving isn't living." Aurora turned from the window. Her eyes were bright, blue, unblinking in the dim light. "It's enough. It's enough for me. It has to be." Eva picked up her portfolio. The leather creaked, a dry, brittle sound. She slung the strap over her shoulder, the weight settling against her hip. "I came to London on business. I saw the sign outside—The Raven's Nest. Green neon. I thought you'd still be here." She shook her head, a sharp, decisive movement. "I was wrong." Aurora stepped forward, blocking the doorway, not touching Eva, standing there, her body a barrier. "No. You weren't wrong. You just came too late. Or I left too soon. I don't know which it is, and I don't know if it matters anymore." Eva's breath came faster, visible in the cold air. Her eyes glistened, but she did not blink. "We could fix it. We could start over. I could—" Aurora's voice shook, a crack in the control. "Could what? Go back to Cardiff? Pretend Evan never happened? Pretend you didn't disappear for three years without a single word? I can't, Eva. I can't be that girl again. She's gone. She died in a doorway in Cardiff, and I buried her somewhere between here and London." Eva stared at her, taking in the black hair, the delivery apron, the scar, the tired eyes that had seen too much. "I missed you." The simple words cracked something open in Aurora's chest. She felt the fracture, sharp and clean. "I know." Eva nodded, once, a small, broken movement. She turned toward the door. The bell chimed as she pulled it open, letting in a gust of cold night air and the smell of rain on pavement. She paused on the threshold, her back to Aurora, shoulders rigid beneath the charcoal coat. "The scar. On your wrist. I gave you that, didn't I? At the lake. When we were twelve." Aurora touched her left wrist. The crescent mark, pale and permanent. "Yeah. You pushed me. Into the deep end." Eva's voice carried over the rain. "I pushed you into the water. You were afraid of the deep end. I thought if I scared you enough, you'd learn to swim." The door closed. The bell's echo faded into the night.
created_at"2026-10-07T09:25:31.092Z" 10/7/2026, 9:25:31 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1530
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1530
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"calculating"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"predictable"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"chaotic"
2"calculating"
3"familiar"
4"lilt"
5"silence"
6"scanned"
7"predictable"
8"flickered"
9"whisper"
10"etched"
11"electric"
12"weight"
13"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1527
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
30.30% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount919
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.39
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Aurora22
Rory1
Cardiff1
Persian1
Silas1
Eva17
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
6"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.303
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1527
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean43.63
std34.29
cv0.786
sampleLengths
0134
16
29
3102
41
513
615
769
89
917
1012
1162
1239
1331
1465
1537
1684
1720
18101
1979
2050
21112
2279
233
2425
2557
2643
2727
2856
2925
3018
3168
3219
3330
3410
95.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"was pulled"
1"was hacked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
87.38% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences103
ratio0.019
matches
0"Her eyes, once hazel and perpetually laughing, scanned the space with a detachment that felt surgical—the maps, the photographs, the bottles lined up like soldiers, the bookshelf in the corner that hid Silas's back room."
1"She turned, leaning one hip against the mahogany, close enough that Aurora caught the scent of her perfume—something dark and resinous, patchouli and smoke, nothing like the vanilla body spray Eva used to drench herself in before sixth form."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount926
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"tight, white against her"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02267818574514039
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0032397408207343412
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean14.83
std12.03
cv0.811
sampleLengths
014
115
226
325
418
516
620
76
89
912
1031
1121
1211
1327
141
1513
168
176
181
1919
2011
214
2235
233
246
259
268
2711
281
2939
3023
318
329
3322
3410
3511
3610
3717
3848
399
403
4123
422
4313
4451
4520
466
479
485
4911
47.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.23300970873786409
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences74
matches
0"She wore a faded Golden"
1"Her black hair was pulled"
2"Her hair was hacked short,"
3"She carried a leather portfolio"
4"She did not smile."
5"Her eyes, once hazel and"
6"She turned, leaning one hip"
7"She smoothed her coat sleeve"
8"She looked away, her gaze"
9"She gestured at the room,"
10"Her breath fogged the air."
11"She stepped closer, invading the"
12"Her jaw worked, the muscle"
13"She tapped the portfolio against"
14"She walked to the window,"
15"Her eyes were bright, blue,"
16"She slung the strap over"
17"She shook her head, a"
18"Her eyes glistened, but she"
19"She felt the fracture, sharp"
ratio0.297
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences74
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled of"
1"Maps sagged against the dark"
2"Aurora wiped the mahogany counter"
3"She wore a faded Golden"
4"Her black hair was pulled"
5"The bell above the door"
6"Aurora looked up, the rag"
7"The woman filling the doorway"
8"Eva had been all sharp"
9"This woman wore a charcoal"
10"Her hair was hacked short,"
11"She carried a leather portfolio"
12"The voice emerged stripped of"
13"Aurora set the rag down"
14"The scar on her wrist"
15"Silence stretched between them, thick"
16"Eva stepped inside, her coat"
17"She did not smile."
18"Her eyes, once hazel and"
19"Eva's jaw tightened."
ratio0.973
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"This woman wore a charcoal wool coat that cost more than Aurora's monthly rent, the collar popped high against the damp."
1"She carried a leather portfolio under one arm and moved with the careful precision of someone calculating exits, her heels clicking a staccato rhythm against th…"
2"Her eyes, once hazel and perpetually laughing, scanned the space with a detachment that felt surgical—the maps, the photographs, the bottles lined up like soldi…"
3"She looked away, her gaze sliding across the maps, the frozen faces in the photographs, the green neon glow pulsing through the window."
4"Eva reached out, her hand hovering near Aurora's cheek, then falling back to her side."
5"Eva stared at her, taking in the black hair, the delivery apron, the scar, the tired eyes that had seen too much."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.9822%