Run: 2026-10-07-01M4AV4A70BCW2KKZN8222PZ99

Run Details

Duration:
4m 59s
Cost:
$0.032217
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pushed through the door, the green neon sign buzzing overhead like a dying insect. The Golden Empress bags cut into her shoulders, heavy with dumplings and bok choy. The darkness pooled around her in the Raven's Nest—dim amber light, the smell of spilled ale and polished mahogany, walls papered with maps that curled at the corners, the ink bleeding into the plaster. Black-and-white photographs lined the shelves above the bar, strangers in fedoras and trench coats staring down at the room. She unloaded the containers with a sharp clatter, her straight black hair falling across her face as she bent, hiding her features from the patrons. A woman sat at the far end, nursing a whisky. Auburn hair pulled back in a clip that had slipped loose, tendrils escaping to frame a face that had gone slack with exhaustion. She wore a Cardiff University hoodie, the navy fabric faded to the colour of old bruises. Aurora's lungs locked. She straightened, squaring her shoulders, feeling the crescent scar on her left wrist tingle beneath her sleeve. Eva looked up. Her glass froze in mid-air, whisky sloshing against the rim. "You're not getting any taller." Eva's voice cracked on the last syllable. Aurora didn't smile. She wiped her hands on her jeans, the denim stiff with flour dust. Three years. Three years since the last time she'd heard her own name spoken without Evan's shadow attached to it. Rory. Cardiff. The flat on Albany Road where they'd shared cigarettes and cheap wine, planning futures that shattered against the pavement. "Rory." Eva set the glass down with a soft clink. "Christ. It's you." Aurora stepped closer. The floorboards creaked under her boots, worn smooth by decades of footsteps. She was thinner now, the bones of her wrist sharp beneath the pale scar, her bright blue eyes fixed on Eva's with the flat assessment of someone who had learned to measure threats in a glance. The girl who'd worn sundresses to lectures and laughed with her whole body had evaporated. What remained wore a padded delivery jacket two sizes too big and carried the weight of a life rebuilt from the wreckage. Eva stood. She reached out, then stopped, her hand hovering in the space between them, trembling. The air smelled of rain and diesel, the particular ozone scent of London streets that Aurora now breathed without thinking. "Three years," Eva whispered. "Three fucking years, Rory. I wrote letters. I called your mother. Nobody—" "I didn't want to be found." Aurora's voice cut through the bar noise, sharp as broken porcelain. She crossed her arms, the scar visible against her skin. "I left Cardiff for a reason, Eva. You know why." Eva's fingers curled into fists. The Cardiff hoodie wrinkled at her elbows. "I know. God, I know. I helped you pack that suitcase. I drove you to the station. I told you to run." She laughed, and the sound cracked in the middle. "I never thought you'd actually go. I thought you'd come back after a month. Everyone thought—" "Everyone was wrong." Aurora turned toward the bar, signaling with two fingers. Silas limped over from the corner, his grey-streaked auburn beard catching the dim light, the silver signet ring glinting on his right hand as he wiped the counter with a rag. "Whisky," Aurora ordered. "Two." Silas poured without asking. His hazel eyes flicked from Aurora to Eva, reading the tension that hummed between them, the unspoken history pressing against the air like humidity. He set the glasses down with a soft clink and retreated toward the back, leaving them alone with the maps and the photographs of the dead. Eva picked up her glass. Her hand shook, the amber liquid trembling. "You look—" "Different." Aurora finished the sentence for her. She touched the scar on her wrist, a nervous habit she couldn't break. "I work now. Deliveries. I live above the bar." "With him?" Eva's chin jerked toward the back room, toward the bookshelf that hid secrets. "With Silas, yes." Aurora sipped the whisky. It burned, clean and fierce. "He's... protective." Eva studied her, taking in the delivery stains on Aurora's jacket, the dark circles under her eyes, the way she held herself—coiled, ready to spring. The years hung between them, heavy as the framed photographs on the wall. "You were going to be a barrister. Remember? Your father's dreams. The moot court competitions. You used to argue with professors just to hear yourself speak. You wanted to change the world." "I remember." Aurora's jaw tightened, a muscle jumping beneath her skin. "I also remember Evan's fist. I remember the bruises I hid under blazers. I remember you driving me to the train station and telling me not to look back, and I remember thinking I'd never see you again." Eva flinched. The whisky glass pressed white lines into her palm. "I should have come with you." "You couldn't." Aurora's voice softened, losing its edge. She looked at her hands—delivery-rough, calloused, strong from carrying bags up four flights of stairs. "You had your mother. Your degree. Your whole life there. I had to disappear." "And you had nothing." Eva's eyes filled with tears, dark smudges forming beneath her lashes. "I stayed. I graduated. I got a job in Cardiff and I sat in that flat on Albany Road and I waited for you to call, and you never did, and I thought—I thought you were dead, Rory. I thought he killed you. I spent two years searching for a body that never turned up." The silence stretched, taut and vibrating. Outside, the green neon sign buzzed against the wet pavement. A car horn blared in the distance, muffled by the London rain. Aurora reached for Eva's hand. Her fingers were cold, the skin papery. Eva didn't pull away. The touch sent a shock up Aurora's arm, a recognition of warmth she had forgotten. "I couldn't call," Aurora whispered. "Not until I knew I was safe. Not until I knew I wouldn't drag you into it. He found my mother's number once. He called the house in Cardiff. I had to change everything." Eva's breath hitched. "Brendan? Jennifer?" "They didn't answer. I made sure of that." Aurora squeezed her friend's hand, feeling the bones, the fragility, the years of guilt pressing down. "I changed my name, Eva. Aurora. It's what he called me when he was gentle. Before." She stopped. The scar on her wrist throbbed, a pulse of memory. "It felt like a costume. Like armour. Something he couldn't touch." Eva turned her hand over, examining the crescent mark with her thumb. "From the radiator. You were eight. We were making toast in your kitchen, and you reached over the grill." "I remember." Aurora laughed, but it sounded like breaking glass. "You were supposed to watch it. You fell asleep reading Harry Potter, and the bread burned, and your mum shouted." "You always blamed me for that." "I still do." Aurora managed a smile, small and sad, the corners of her mouth pulling down. "It's the only thing that hasn't changed." Eva looked up. Her eyes were red-rimmed, mascara smudged at the corners. "I'm sorry. For not writing back. For not finding you. For staying in Cardiff while you were out there, alone, fighting." Aurora shook her head. The black hair fell across her face, hiding her expression. "You couldn't have found me. I was running. I didn't know how to stop." She glanced at the maps on the wall, the photographs of strangers, the life Silas had built here in the shadows, a front for things Aurora only half-understood. "I'm not the girl you knew, Eva. I'm not Rory anymore. I'm just... Aurora. She delivers noodles and she hides above a bar and she wakes up at 3 AM with her heart hammering, waiting for the door to break down." "But you're here." Eva's voice broke. "You're alive. You're sitting in front of me, and you're breathing, and you're angry and you're sharp and you're still you, underneath all of it, fighting to stay alive." Aurora looked at her hands again. The scar. The strength in her fingers, the calluses, the power. She thought of the Pre-Law books still boxed in her flat upstairs, the applications never sent, the future she'd traded for survival. She thought of Eva's wedding, maybe, or the funeral she'd missed, or the children she might have had, the normal life that had dissolved into the London rain, leaving only stains. "I don't know how to be her anymore," Aurora whispered, her voice low against the hum of the refrigerator. "The Rory who laughed. The Rory who planned weddings and argued about politics and believed the world was kind. She's gone. Evan took her. And then I ran, and I built this—" She gestured at the bar, the maps, the whisky, the green neon outside. "This shell. It's all I have. It's the only thing keeping me standing." Eva reached across the bar. Her fingers brushed Aurora's cheek, tentative, reverent, tracing the line of her jaw. "Then let me see her. Let me see what's underneath. Please, Rory. Please." Aurora closed her eyes. The scent of Eva's perfume—jasmine and bergamot, the same bottle from Cardiff—filled her nose, transporting her back to the kitchen on Albany Road, to safety and warmth and the future that had seemed inevitable. She leaned toward the touch, the weight of three years pressing down, the regret of absence, the miracle of presence. Outside, the green neon flickered against the dark, a beacon in the London night, steady and bright. "I don't know how," Aurora whispered. Eva held her hand, her thumb stroking the scar. "You just did."
created_at"2026-10-07T09:29:19.852Z" 10/7/2026, 9:29:19 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.449
leniency0.898
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1623
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1623
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"carried the weight"
count1
3
word"porcelain"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count2
10
word"throbbed"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"tracing"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"footsteps"
2"carried the weight"
3"porcelain"
4"glinting"
5"flicked"
6"tension"
7"unspoken"
8"silence"
9"warmth"
10"throbbed"
11"pulse"
12"tracing"
13"weight"
14"flickered"
15"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1616
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount1050
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.57
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Raven1
Nest1
Cardiff4
University1
Aurora27
Evan1
Albany2
Road2
Eva23
London4
Silas3
Pre-Law1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Evan"
2"Eva"
3"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"Cardiff"
2"Albany"
3"Road"
4"London"
globalScore0.214
windowScore0.167
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like breaking glass"
1"seemed inevitable"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1616
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean40.4
std26.6
cv0.658
sampleLengths
0107
169
213
312
457
513
688
736
816
937
1059
1147
1254
1314
1429
1515
1614
1770
1849
1917
2037
2170
2228
2331
2439
255
2663
2731
2830
296
3024
3133
3297
3335
3470
3577
3631
3775
386
3912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs169
matches(empty)
46.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences118
ratio0.034
matches
0"The darkness pooled around her in the Raven's Nest—dim amber light, the smell of spilled ale and polished mahogany, walls papered with maps that curled at the corners, the ink bleeding into the plaster."
1"Eva studied her, taking in the delivery stains on Aurora's jacket, the dark circles under her eyes, the way she held herself—coiled, ready to spring."
2"She looked at her hands—delivery-rough, calloused, strong from carrying bags up four flights of stairs."
3"The scent of Eva's perfume—jasmine and bergamot, the same bottle from Cardiff—filled her nose, transporting her back to the kitchen on Albany Road, to safety and warmth and the future that had seemed inevitable."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1063
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.00940733772342427
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0018814675446848542
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean13.69
std10.73
cv0.783
sampleLengths
015
114
234
319
425
510
623
716
83
917
103
1110
1212
133
1413
152
1618
171
181
1919
2010
213
223
2312
2436
2515
2622
272
2814
2920
304
3112
3217
3310
3410
355
367
3731
3816
3912
4031
413
421
434
4424
4526
465
477
482
497
42.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2796610169491525
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences81
matches
0"She unloaded the containers with"
1"She wore a Cardiff University"
2"She straightened, squaring her shoulders,"
3"Her glass froze in mid-air,"
4"She wiped her hands on"
5"She was thinner now, the"
6"She reached out, then stopped,"
7"She crossed her arms, the"
8"She laughed, and the sound"
9"His hazel eyes flicked from"
10"He set the glasses down"
11"Her hand shook, the amber"
12"She touched the scar on"
13"It burned, clean and fierce."
14"She looked at her hands—delivery—rough,"
15"Her fingers were cold, the"
16"Her eyes were red-rimmed, mascara"
17"She glanced at the maps"
18"She thought of the Pre-Law"
19"She thought of Eva's wedding,"
ratio0.284
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences81
matches
0"Aurora pushed through the door,"
1"The Golden Empress bags cut"
2"The darkness pooled around her"
3"She unloaded the containers with"
4"A woman sat at the"
5"Auburn hair pulled back in"
6"She wore a Cardiff University"
7"Aurora's lungs locked."
8"She straightened, squaring her shoulders,"
9"Eva looked up."
10"Her glass froze in mid-air,"
11"Eva's voice cracked on the"
12"Aurora didn't smile."
13"She wiped her hands on"
14"The flat on Albany Road"
15"Eva set the glass down"
16"Aurora stepped closer."
17"The floorboards creaked under her"
18"She was thinner now, the"
19"The girl who'd worn sundresses"
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The darkness pooled around her in the Raven's Nest—dim amber light, the smell of spilled ale and polished mahogany, walls papered with maps that curled at the c…"
1"She straightened, squaring her shoulders, feeling the crescent scar on her left wrist tingle beneath her sleeve."
2"The flat on Albany Road where they'd shared cigarettes and cheap wine, planning futures that shattered against the pavement."
3"She was thinner now, the bones of her wrist sharp beneath the pale scar, her bright blue eyes fixed on Eva's with the flat assessment of someone who had learned…"
4"His hazel eyes flicked from Aurora to Eva, reading the tension that hummed between them, the unspoken history pressing against the air like humidity."
5"She thought of Eva's wedding, maybe, or the funeral she'd missed, or the children she might have had, the normal life that had dissolved into the London rain, l…"
6"The scent of Eva's perfume—jasmine and bergamot, the same bottle from Cardiff—filled her nose, transporting her back to the kitchen on Albany Road, to safety an…"
56.82% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Aurora's jaw tightened, a muscle jumping beneath her skin"
1"Aurora whispered, her voice low against the hum of the refrigerator"
2"She gestured, the maps, the whisky, the green neon outside"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
2"Aurora ordered (order)"
3"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
4"Aurora laughed (laugh)"
5"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
6"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.286
73.5455%