| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.158 | | leniency | 0.316 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1518 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1518 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "lilt" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "gleaming" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "mosaic" | | 15 | "intensity" | | 16 | "could feel" | | 17 | "pulsed" | | 18 | "echo" | | 19 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 165 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1501 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "\"For the road ahead,\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.05% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 67 | | wordCount | 1349 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.78 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 17 | | Rory | 24 | | December | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Nyx | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "December" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.61 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 95.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like glass" | | 1 | "smelled like summer" |
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| 66.76% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.332 | | wordCount | 1501 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a voice, but a sound like wind through reeds" | | 1 | "not the sky above, but a swirling void of stars" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 165 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 62 | | mean | 24.21 | | std | 17.93 | | cv | 0.741 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 74 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 44 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 46 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 46 | | 46 | 35 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 46 |
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| 99.99% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "was fixed" | | 1 | "was carved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 247 | | matches | | 0 | "was starting" | | 1 | "was like standing" | | 2 | "was falling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 165 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d heard the stories—how the Fae Grove existed in a pocket between worlds, how time here didn’t behave." | | 1 | "The air smelled of honey and something sharper—ozone, maybe, or the metallic tang of magic." | | 2 | "The light here wasn’t sunlight—it was softer, diffused, as if filtered through layers of silk." | | 3 | "Then—a whisper." | | 4 | "She hadn’t wanted to take it at first—gifts from the Fae were never without strings—but Isolde had insisted." | | 5 | "She looked around—the trees, the flowers, the impossible sky." | | 6 | "Then—a flicker of movement." | | 7 | "For a moment, Rory saw it—a creature no bigger than a fox, its fur a shifting mosaic of colours, its eyes like polished obsidian." | | 8 | "The path twisted, the trees growing thicker, their branches laden with fruits Rory had never seen before—glowing orbs, some pulsing with light, others dripping with nectar that smelled like summer." | | 9 | "The branches vanished into the canopy, but she could feel it—the tree’s presence, its age, its power." | | 10 | "A memory that wasn’t hers—laughter in a sunlit glade, the taste of wine on her tongue, the press of a hand that wasn’t there." | | 11 | "The memory—if that’s what it was—had already faded, leaving only the echo of warmth." | | 12 | "In the centre stood a throne of woven branches, empty but for a single object—a silver circlet, its surface etched with the same spiralling symbols." | | 13 | "They were the same as the ones on the tree, the same as the ones she’d seen in her dreams—the ones that had led her here." | | 14 | "She could feel it—the pull, the promise." | | 15 | "A gasp tore from her throat as the world tilted—" | | 16 | "—and then she was falling." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1372 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.03134110787172012 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00510204081632653 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 165 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 165 | | mean | 9.1 | | std | 6.17 | | cv | 0.679 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 43.94% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.2606060606060606 | | totalSentences | 165 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 28.01% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "Then—a flicker of movement." |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "Its faint pulse had guided" | | 1 | "Her voice carried the lilt" | | 2 | "Their petals shimmered faintly, as" | | 3 | "She took a step forward." | | 4 | "She’d heard the stories—how the" | | 5 | "She reached out, brushing her" | | 6 | "It wound between the trees," | | 7 | "It vibrated in her bones." | | 8 | "She adjusted the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 9 | "She hadn’t wanted to take" | | 10 | "Its surface reflected not the" | | 11 | "She wiped her hand on" | | 12 | "She looked around—the trees, the" | | 13 | "It was too much." | | 14 | "It froze, staring at them" | | 15 | "She reached out, plucking one" | | 16 | "Its trunk was carved with" | | 17 | "It was like standing at" | | 18 | "She took a step forward," | | 19 | "She jerked back." |
| | ratio | 0.218 | |
| 6.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 108 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "Its faint pulse had guided" | | 3 | "Nyx shifted beside her, their" | | 4 | "Rory glanced at them." | | 5 | "A breeze stirred the silver" | | 6 | "Her voice carried the lilt" | | 7 | "Rory exhaled, watching her breath" | | 8 | "The trees here were older" | | 9 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 10 | "Their petals shimmered faintly, as" | | 11 | "She took a step forward." | | 12 | "The air thickened, pressing against" | | 13 | "The Heartstone’s glow intensified, casting" | | 14 | "Nyx’s form solidified, their violet" | | 15 | "Isolde smiled, though it didn’t" | | 16 | "She’d heard the stories—how the" | | 17 | "The colours were too vivid," | | 18 | "A bird sang in the" | | 19 | "She reached out, brushing her" |
| | ratio | 0.908 | |
| 42.02% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "—and then she was falling." |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 67.10% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath her boots was soft, carpeted with wildflowers that shouldn’t have been in bloom in December." | | 1 | "When she pulled her hand back, droplets clung to her fingertips, glowing faintly before dripping back into the pool." | | 2 | "The path twisted, the trees growing thicker, their branches laden with fruits Rory had never seen before—glowing orbs, some pulsing with light, others dripping …" | | 3 | "Each step sent a vibration through her bones, a low, resonant hum that filled her skull." | | 4 | "A memory that wasn’t hers—laughter in a sunlit glade, the taste of wine on her tongue, the press of a hand that wasn’t there." | | 5 | "The air shimmered, the trees below shrinking as if seen through the wrong end of a telescope." | | 6 | "It was the same feeling she’d had when she’d first touched the Heartstone, the same certainty that had led her to Isolde’s doorstep." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.053 | | leniency | 0.105 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |