Run: 2026-10-07-01M4AV7M637978YRDWJMVJ1W3X

Run Details

Duration:
12.3s
Cost:
$0.010807
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered as Rory pushed through the door, the hinge groaning under the weight of the evening’s damp. She shook the rain from her jacket, fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist—a habit she’d never quite shaken. The bar smelled of aged wood and something sharper, the kind of scent that clung to places where secrets were traded like currency. Silas looked up from polishing a glass, his hazel eyes catching hers in the dim light. A slow nod, no words. He didn’t need them. The Nest was his domain, and he knew every face that belonged in it. Rory wasn’t a regular, but she wasn’t a stranger either. She slid onto a stool near the far end, where the light pooled just enough to read the labels on the bottles. The bar was quiet tonight, the usual hum of Soho’s nightlife muted by the rain. Then the door opened again. A gust of wind sent a shiver through the room, and Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. She didn’t turn. Didn’t need to. The way the air shifted, the way Silas’ gaze flicked past her—she knew. “Well, I’ll be damned.” The voice was rougher than she remembered, but unmistakable. Rory exhaled, then turned. Eva stood in the doorway, her coat dripping onto the worn floorboards. She was taller than Rory recalled, or maybe it was just the way she carried herself now—shoulders squared, jaw set. The years had carved lines around her mouth, but her eyes were the same: sharp, restless. “Rory Carter,” Eva said, stepping forward. “Or are you still going by Laila these days?” Rory’s throat tightened. That name hadn’t been hers in years. Not since she’d left Cardiff, not since she’d run. “Just Rory now.” Eva smirked, but it didn’t reach her eyes. “Funny. I always thought you’d outgrow the nicknames.” Silas set a glass in front of Eva without a word, his signet ring glinting as he poured. The amber liquid caught the light, swirling like old memories. Eva took the drink, her fingers lingering on the glass. “You look… different.” Rory touched her hair—straight, black, cut just past her shoulders. “Dyed it.” “Suits you.” Eva took a sip, her gaze flicking over Rory’s face, the scar on her wrist, the way she held herself like she was ready to bolt. “Heard you were in London. Never thought I’d find you in a place like this.” “Why not?” Rory asked, though she knew. Eva had always been the one with the grand plans, the one who’d dragged her out of Cardiff with promises of something bigger. Rory had followed, but not all the way. Not like Eva. Eva laughed, but it was a dry sound. “Because you always hated bars. Said they were just places for people to pretend they were someone else.” Rory’s fingers traced the rim of her glass. “People change.” “Yeah.” Eva’s voice softened. “They do.” A silence settled between them, thick with everything unsaid. The rain pattered against the windows, the only sound in the bar besides the occasional clink of Silas’ glass. Eva leaned in, her voice dropping. “You ever think about him?” Rory’s breath hitched. Evan. The name was a ghost between them. She shook her head, but the lie tasted bitter. Eva’s eyes darkened. “You should’ve let me handle it.” “It wasn’t your fight.” “It wasn’t yours either.” Eva’s fingers tightened around her glass. “But you ran. And I stayed.” Rory looked away. The walls of the Nest were lined with old maps, the edges frayed, the ink faded. Places Silas had been. Places he’d never talk about. “You always were the brave one.” Eva scoffed. “Brave? Or just stupid?” The words hung there, raw and unfiltered. Rory studied Eva’s face—the new hardness in her jaw, the way her eyes didn’t quite meet hers. “You’re not the same.” “Neither are you.” Eva’s voice was quiet. “But here we are.” Silas moved down the bar, his limp barely noticeable, and set a fresh glass in front of Rory. She hadn’t asked for it, but she took it anyway. Eva watched him, then turned back to Rory. “You trust him?” Rory glanced at Silas. His back was to them, but she knew he was listening. “He’s got his own ghosts.” Eva’s mouth twisted. “Don’t we all.” The rain eased, the patter against the windows slowing to a drizzle. Eva drained her glass and set it down with a sharp click. “I should go.” Rory didn’t stop her. She watched as Eva pulled her coat back on, the fabric still damp. At the door, Eva paused, her hand on the frame. “You ever get tired of running, Rory?” Rory didn’t answer. The door swung shut behind Eva, leaving only the quiet hum of the bar and the weight of the past pressing down like a storm cloud. Silas finally spoke, his voice low. “Old friend?” Rory stared at the door. “Something like that.” He wiped the counter, the cloth swishing against the wood. “Some debts don’t fade with time.” She knew he wasn’t just talking about Eva. But she didn’t ask. Some things were better left in the dark. The neon sign buzzed overhead, casting a green glow over the empty stool where Eva had sat. Rory lifted her glass, the whiskey catching the light. The past was a shadow, long and unshakable. But the night was still young.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva’s fingers tightened around [around]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.219
leniency0.438
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.063
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount911
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount911
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"flicked"
3"glinting"
4"traced"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords906
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount747
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity3.21
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest3
Rory21
Soho1
Cardiff2
Eva24
Silas6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite meet hers"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount906
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean22.1
std14.65
cv0.663
sampleLengths
068
149
237
35
436
54
613
748
815
922
1016
1128
1213
1312
1443
1541
1626
1710
186
1928
2011
2120
229
234
2416
2534
266
2728
2811
2928
3011
3120
326
3327
3434
3529
368
378
3816
3920
4040
96.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"were traded"
1"were lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was listening"
1"wasn’t just talking"
31.90% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences103
ratio0.039
matches
0"She shook the rain from her jacket, fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist—a habit she’d never quite shaken."
1"She was taller than Rory recalled, or maybe it was just the way she carried herself now—shoulders squared, jaw set."
2"Rory touched her hair—straight, black, cut just past her shoulders."
3"Rory studied Eva’s face—the new hardness in her jaw, the way her eyes didn’t quite meet hers."
90.94% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount278
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.050359712230215826
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean8.8
std6.16
cv0.7
sampleLengths
025
120
223
316
45
54
614
710
822
915
105
1117
123
133
1413
154
169
174
1812
1920
2016
216
229
233
247
259
263
278
288
2918
3010
3110
323
3310
342
3528
3615
377
3823
398
403
418
4218
438
442
454
462
479
4819
496
57.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3592233009708738
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners37
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Then the door opened again."
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences75
matches
0"She shook the rain from"
1"He didn’t need them."
2"She slid onto a stool"
3"She didn’t turn."
4"She was taller than Rory"
5"She shook her head, but"
6"She hadn’t asked for it,"
7"His back was to them,"
8"She watched as Eva pulled"
9"He wiped the counter, the"
10"She knew he wasn’t just"
ratio0.147
6.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences75
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"She shook the rain from"
2"The bar smelled of aged"
3"Silas looked up from polishing"
4"A slow nod, no words."
5"He didn’t need them."
6"The Nest was his domain,"
7"Rory wasn’t a regular, but"
8"She slid onto a stool"
9"The bar was quiet tonight,"
10"A gust of wind sent"
11"She didn’t turn."
12"The way the air shifted,"
13"The voice was rougher than"
14"Rory exhaled, then turned."
15"Eva stood in the doorway,"
16"She was taller than Rory"
17"The years had carved lines"
18"Eva said, stepping forward"
19"Rory’s throat tightened."
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The Nest was his domain, and he knew every face that belonged in it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.9868%