Run: 2026-10-07-01M4AV99R02KG73D55J74VXVD7

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Duration:
16.1s
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$0.014289
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Mistral

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came just as Rory was wiping grease from her hands onto her already-stained jeans. Three sharp raps, then a pause, then two more. A rhythm. A code. Her fingers stilled. No one else knew that pattern. Ptolemy, the tabby, lifted his head from his perch on the windowsill, ears twitching. The flat was small enough that the sound carried, sharp and deliberate, cutting through the hum of the fridge and the distant chatter from the street below. Rory exhaled through her nose, tossed the rag onto the counter, and moved to the door. The deadbolts were still locked—she always kept them that way. Eva had drilled it into her. But the knock came again, insistent. She hesitated, then slid the first bolt free. The second. The third. The door swung inward before she could touch the handle. Lucien stood there, filling the frame. Charcoal suit immaculate, not a crease in sight, the platinum blond hair slicked back like always. The cane rested against his shoulder, idle. His eyes—one amber, one black—flickered over her, lingering on the grease stain, the scar on her wrist, the way her hair had come loose from its tie. "Took you long enough." Rory crossed her arms. "You’re early." "Not early. You’re late." A smirk tugged at his mouth. "Or did you forget?" She hadn’t. Two years, and she still remembered the way his voice had sounded the last time they’d spoken—cold, clipped, final. *Don’t call me again.* But here he was. Ptolemy chose that moment to slink between her legs, tail brushing her ankle. Lucien’s gaze dropped. "Still keeping that fleabag around?" "His name’s Ptolemy," she said, but the cat was already winding around Lucien’s polished shoes, purring. Traitor. Lucien stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, the scent of bergamot and something darker—gunpowder, maybe—following him. The flat was a mess. Books stacked on the sofa, takeout containers on the coffee table, a half-empty glass of whiskey she’d forgotten about. She hadn’t expected company. He took it in with a single glance, then shut the door behind him. The click of the deadbolts re-engaging was too loud. "You look like hell," he said. She bristled. "And you look like you’ve never eaten a meal that wasn’t served on china." That earned her a real smile, brief and sharp. "I’ve eaten street food, Rory. Just not by choice." She wanted to snap back, but the words stuck. Too much history in the way he said her name. Like he’d tasted it before and still remembered the flavour. He moved further in, the cane tapping lightly against the floorboards. "Eva’s not here, is she?" "She’s in Prague. Some conference on pre-Columbian artefacts." Rory leaned against the counter, arms folded. "Why?" Lucien’s fingers tightened around the cane’s handle. "I need her expertise." "Then you’ll have to wait." "I don’t have time to wait." She arched a brow. "Since when do you care about time?" His jaw tightened. The air between them thickened, charged with something older than the last two years. The last time they’d been in the same room, she’d thrown a glass at his head. He’d caught it, set it down, and walked out without a word. Now, he was back. Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the sofa, knocking a stack of books to the floor. The noise broke the tension, just a little. Lucien exhaled, low and controlled. "I wouldn’t be here if it wasn’t important." "Important enough to track me down?" "I knew where you were." Of course he did. Lucien knew everything. That was his job. She pushed off the counter. "Fine. Say what you came to say." He didn’t. Instead, he reached into his coat and pulled out a folded sheet of parchment, yellowed with age. The edges were singed. He held it out to her. She didn’t take it. "What’s that?" "A contract. Or what’s left of one." "Whose?" "Yours." Her stomach dropped. "Mine?" "You signed it. Five years ago." She had. The night she’d met him. The night she’d been desperate enough to believe in demons and deals. The night she’d traded a favour for a way out of Cardiff, out of Evan’s reach. She’d almost forgotten. Almost. Her fingers trembled as she took the parchment. The ink was faded, but the words were still there. *Aurora Carter, in exchange for safe passage and protection from Evan Griffiths, hereby owes Lucien Moreau one favour, to be called upon at his discretion.* At the bottom, her signature, shaky and young. She swallowed. "You never called it in." "I didn’t need to." "And now?" Now, his expression was unreadable. "Now, I do." She looked up at him, the parchment crumpling in her grip. "What do you want?" His gaze didn’t waver. "Your help." "With what?" "A job." She barked a laugh. "You? Need *my* help?" His mouth twitched. "Don’t flatter yourself. I need someone with your… particular skills." "Which are?" "You’re good at getting into places you shouldn’t be. And you’re better at getting out." She wanted to argue, but he wasn’t wrong. That was how she’d ended up working for Yu-Fei—delivering more than just food, sometimes. Packages that didn’t have labels. Envelopes that weren’t meant to be opened. But this was different. This was Lucien. And this was a debt. She tossed the parchment onto the counter. "Fine. What’s the job?" He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he reached into his coat again, this time pulling out a small, velvet pouch. He upended it into his palm, revealing a silver key, intricate and old. "Steal this," he said, holding it up. "From a man who shouldn’t have it." She stared at the key. It hummed, faintly, like a plucked string. Magic. Old magic. "Whose is it?" "A collector. Dangerous. He’s got things that don’t belong in this world." "And you want me to… what? Walk in and take it?" "You’ll have backup." "Yours?" He nodded. She should’ve said no. Should’ve told him to get out, to call in someone else’s favour. But the key pulsed, and the parchment burned in her peripheral vision, and the way he was looking at her—like she was the only person who could do this—made her chest tight. "When?" "Tonight." She scoffed. "You’re joking." "Do I look like I’m joking?" No. He didn’t. She rubbed her temples. "I have a shift at the restaurant." "Yu-Fei will understand." "Will he?" Lucien’s smile was razor-thin. "I’ll make sure of it." She wanted to refuse. Wanted to slam the door in his face and pretend this conversation never happened. But the debt was real. And so was the way her pulse jumped when he was near. "Fine," she said, snatching the key from his palm. It was warm. "But if I get caught, I’m taking you down with me." His laugh was low, rich. "I’d expect nothing less." She should’ve hated him. Should’ve resented the way he waltzed back into her life like no time had passed. But as he turned to leave, his cane tapping against the floor, all she could think was that the flat felt smaller now that he was in it. And colder when he was gone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.105
leniency0.211
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"charged"
2"tension"
3"stomach"
4"trembled"
5"unreadable"
6"velvet"
7"intricate"
8"pulsed"
9"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences115
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences166
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords30
totalWords1196
ratio0.025
matches
0"Don’t call me again."
1"Aurora Carter, in exchange for safe passage and protection from Evan Griffiths, hereby owes Lucien Moreau one favour, to be called upon at his discretion."
2"my"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount926
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory4
Lucien10
Traitor1
Cardiff1
Evan2
Carter1
Griffiths1
Moreau1
Yu-Fei-delivering1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Evan"
3"Carter"
4"Griffiths"
5"Moreau"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.96
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1196
matches(empty)
86.35% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences166
matches
0"knew that pattern"
1"chose that moment"
2"chose that moment"
3"was that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean14.59
std13.71
cv0.94
sampleLengths
038
141
238
322
456
54
66
714
829
921
1017
1145
1223
136
1416
1518
1629
1716
1816
1911
205
216
2211
2345
244
2525
2613
276
285
2911
3012
3129
326
337
341
351
364
376
3835
393
401
4143
428
437
444
452
468
4715
486
492
99.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences115
matches
0"were singed"
1"was gone"
90.11% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs182
matches
0"was wiping"
1"was already winding"
2"was looking"
56.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences166
ratio0.03
matches
0"The deadbolts were still locked—she always kept them that way."
1"His eyes—one amber, one black—flickered over her, lingering on the grease stain, the scar on her wrist, the way her hair had come loose from its tie."
2"Two years, and she still remembered the way his voice had sounded the last time they’d spoken—cold, clipped, final."
3"Lucien stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, the scent of bergamot and something darker—gunpowder, maybe—following him."
4"But the key pulsed, and the parchment burned in her peripheral vision, and the way he was looking at her—like she was the only person who could do this—made her chest tight."
93.96% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount938
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.046908315565031986
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0031982942430703624
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences166
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences166
mean7.2
std5.81
cv0.807
sampleLengths
016
19
22
32
43
56
614
727
816
910
106
116
128
132
142
1510
166
1716
187
1927
204
214
222
2310
244
252
2619
278
2813
293
305
3116
321
3317
345
3519
364
3714
389
396
402
4114
429
439
449
4510
4610
4711
485
4915
57.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3674698795180723
totalSentences166
uniqueOpeners61
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences97
matches
0"Too much history in the"
1"Of course he did."
2"Instead, he reached into his"
3"Instead, he reached into his"
ratio0.041
75.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences97
matches
0"Her fingers stilled."
1"She hesitated, then slid the"
2"His eyes—one amber, one black—flickered"
3"she said, but the cat"
4"She hadn’t expected company."
5"He took it in with"
6"She wanted to snap back,"
7"He moved further in, the"
8"She arched a brow."
9"His jaw tightened."
10"He’d caught it, set it"
11"She pushed off the counter."
12"He held it out to"
13"She didn’t take it."
14"Her stomach dropped."
15"She’d almost forgotten."
16"Her fingers trembled as she"
17"She looked up at him,"
18"His gaze didn’t waver."
19"She barked a laugh."
ratio0.361
78.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences97
matches
0"The knock came just as"
1"Her fingers stilled."
2"Ptolemy, the tabby, lifted his"
3"The flat was small enough"
4"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
5"The deadbolts were still locked—she"
6"Eva had drilled it into"
7"She hesitated, then slid the"
8"The door swung inward before"
9"Lucien stood there, filling the"
10"Charcoal suit immaculate, not a"
11"The cane rested against his"
12"His eyes—one amber, one black—flickered"
13"Rory crossed her arms."
14"A smirk tugged at his"
15"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
16"Lucien’s gaze dropped."
17"she said, but the cat"
18"Lucien stepped inside without waiting"
19"The flat was a mess."
ratio0.763
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"Now, he was back."
1"Now, his expression was unreadable."
ratio0.021
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"But the key pulsed, and the parchment burned in her peripheral vision, and the way he was looking at her—like she was the only person who could do this—made her…"
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, but the cat was already winding around Lucien’s polished shoes, purring"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.07
leniency0.14
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.9859%