Run: 2026-10-07-01M4AV9E6KDTC29TANFNZ9KKVA

Run Details

Duration:
3m 30s
Cost:
$0.027152
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the Soho pavement in sheets that turned the gutters into rapids. Detective Harlow Quinn pulled her collar tight, water streaming from the brim of her cap onto her salt-and-pepper hair cropped close to her skull. The green neon of the Raven's Nest flickered behind her, a dying pulse against the grey brick, casting long shadows that writhed like living things across the wet cobblestones. She had tracked Tomás Herrera for three hours, watching him through the bar's rain-streaked window while he nursed a whiskey he never touched, his fingers tapping the rim in a rhythm that matched her own heartbeat. When he stood, she followed. He moved with the urgency of a man who knew he was watched, his olive skin gleaming under the sodium streetlights, dark curly hair plastered flat against his head. The scar on his left forearm caught the light as he swung his arms—a pale, jagged line that ran from wrist to elbow, a souvenir from a knife attack that had left him for dead two years prior. He carried a battered leather medical bag, the kind paramedics used before the NHS standardized everything into sterile plastic, the bag bulging with supplies that smelled of antiseptic and something else, something organic and wrong. Quinn kept her distance, her boots splashing through puddles deep enough to swallow her ankles. The worn leather watch on her left wrist ticked with military precision, each second a hammer blow against her skull. She had lost fifteen pounds in the last month chasing leads that dissolved into smoke and rumour, her sharp jawline cutting a hard line beneath eyes that had not slept more than a mere four hours a night since the Morris case closed. "Police!" Her voice cracked against the brick walls. Tomás cut through Greek Street, boots skidding on slick granite. He did not glance behind him. Quinn accelerated, eighteen years of decorated service driving her legs through the downpour, her breath coming in sharp, controlled bursts. She caught the scent of iodine on him, the ghost of the paramedic he had been before his license vanished, before he had started stitching up creatures that should not exist. They crossed into Fitzrovia. The rain intensified, turning to sleet that stung Quinn's exposed cheeks and filled her boots with freezing water. Tomás turned onto a narrow service alley behind the Dominion Theatre, walls covered in peeling posters for plays that had closed decades ago and fresh graffiti tags in silver and arterial red. Quinn followed, shoulder-checking past a cluster of tourists huddled beneath a theatre marquee, umbrellas inverted by the wind. She lost sight of him for three seconds near the alley's mouth, her heart a drum against her ribs, then spotted the flash of his Saint Christopher medallion swinging against his chest as he vaulted over a rusted dumpster, landing with a grunt that spoke of old injuries. He emerged onto Charing Cross Road. Traffic roared, horns blaring in the deluge, headlights cutting through the mist in pale shafts. A black cab screeched past, missing him by inches, tires smoking on wet asphalt. Tomás leaped the central reservation, medical bag bouncing against his hip, and sprinted toward Leicester Square with a gait that betrayed panic. Quinn pushed through the crowd, elbows sharp, her brown eyes fixed on the sway of his shoulders, the desperate rhythm of his stride, her service weapon heavy and ready on her hip. "Stop!" The word ripped from her throat. "Metropolitan Police! Stop or I'll shoot!" He glanced over his shoulder. His warm brown eyes widened, pupils dilated with a terror that had nothing to do with arrest. Recognition. He knew her face from crime scene photos, from the whispered warnings that had started circulating through the city's underworld three months ago. He turned north, toward Camden, his breath coming in ragged white clouds that vanished into the rain. Quinn followed, her lungs burning, knees aching from old injuries that flared in the cold. They passed the British Museum, its columns looming like tombstones in the gloom, its steps slick with algae. The rain turned horizontal, driven by a wind that cut through her wool coat like a blade. Tomás slowed near the Regent's Canal, clutching his left side, the scar on his forearm darkening with blood. Had he taken a blade, or was that wound from long ago? He straightened and resumed his run, vanishing beneath the bridge at Camden Lock, his sneakers splashing through the murky water that lapped at the towpath. The abandoned Tube station waited at Mornington Crescent. Its entrance yawned in the brickwork, a black rectangle of rust and rot where the old ticket hall had crumbled into the earth. Iron gates hung open, twisted by decades of neglect and trespass, flapping in the wind like broken wings. Graffiti covered the walls—tags and sigils, some fresh and wet, others ancient and faded, symbols that hurt to look at directly. Quinn skidded to a halt at the top of the stairs, rain pouring down her neck and spine, her watch ticking loud in the sudden, heavy silence that fell over the street. Cold air rushed up from the depths, carrying the scent of stagnant water, ozone, and myrrh. The Veil Market. She had read the classified files, the ones kept in the basement of New Scotland Yard behind three locks. Confidential briefings marked with black X's, whispered about in the precinct's smoking area by officers who had seen things they could not explain. A supernatural black market that moved with the full moon, currently nestled in this abandoned station beneath Camden, selling enchanted goods to clientele that included vampires and skin-walkers, offering banned alchemical substances and information that could unmake reality. Tomás's footsteps echoed below, descending into the dark, quick and fading. A flicker of sickly green light appeared at the bottom of the stairwell—the market's bioluminescent lamps, casting shadows that danced and twisted against the tiled walls, shadows that did not match the shapes casting them. Quinn hesitated. Her fingers found the worn leather strap of her watch, the metal cold against her skin. Tick. Tick. Three years ago, DS Morris had died in an abandoned warehouse in Whitechapel. Quinn had found him there, three days after he had radioed in about a disturbance, about voices singing in languages that predated humanity. Blood on the ceiling. Blood on the walls, three feet above the floor, defying gravity. No exit wounds. No entry wounds. The coroner had ruled it a massive heart attack, a statistical impossibility for a man of Morris's health, but Quinn had seen the crime scene photographs. She had seen the way the blood had pooled on the ceiling, thick and dark and shining. She had seen the way Morris's eyes had been open, staring at something in the corner of the room, his face frozen in an expression of religious awe mixed with absolute terror. She had spent three years hunting the supernatural, pretending it was another case of human cruelty, of gang violence, of a killer with a flair for the theatrical. But the clique—Tomás's clique—they operated in the spaces between heartbeats, between streetlights, in the dark corners where the law did not reach. They healed monsters. They sold secrets to things that wore human skin like ill-fitting suits. And if Morris had stumbled onto their operations, if he had seen what they traded in, then— The stairs yawned before her, twenty feet of darkness descending into the earth. She did not have a bone token. The market required one for entry, a payment carved from the femur of the dead, traded for a glimpse into the world beneath the world. Without it, the things inside would make her prey, an intruder in a den of predators who did not recognize the authority of her badge. She could radio for backup, call in the fire brigade to seal the entrance, wait for the morning when the market would vanish, relocated to another abandoned tunnel somewhere in the sprawling dark of London. She could walk away, write a report, chalk it up to another dead end, and spend the rest of her miserable life wondering what Morris had seen in that warehouse, what had terrified him so completely. Or she could step into the dark and find out for herself. From the dark below came Tomás's voice, muffled and desperate, carrying the lilt of Seville. "Quinn! You don't understand what you're getting into! Turn back!" She did not wait to hear the rest. She did not turn back. Her jaw snapped shut, a sharp, decisive click. Quinn descended the stairs, her boots ringing on metal steps slick with condensation and something else, something that felt like oil. The air grew thick, heavy with the scent of old books and burning hair. The green light swelled as she reached the bottom, revealing a cavernous space that should not have fit inside the station's footprint—a bazaar of black silk and canvas tents, vendors with a jaw crowded with excessive teeth and eyes that reflected no light, goods that glowed with inner fire and hummed with trapped lightning. She stepped onto the tiled floor, water dripping from her salt-and-pepper hair onto her shoulders, her breath misting in the unnatural cold. The market noise crashed over her—haggling in tongues that twisted the tongue, the clink of coins that were not minted by any government, the wet drag of something heavy being pulled across stone by chains that rattled like bones. Quinn drew her service weapon, the metal cold and familiar in her palm, and walked forward into the crowd, her brown eyes scanning the masked faces, hunting for a man with a scar on his forearm and a Saint Christopher medallion, hunting the truth about the night Morris died, hunting the thing that had written its name on the ceiling in blood.
created_at"2026-10-07T09:32:07.77Z" 10/7/2026, 9:32:07 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1651
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1651
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"streaming"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"standardized"
count1
5
word"looming"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"depths"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"lilt"
count1
13
word"silk"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"streaming"
1"flickered"
2"pulse"
3"gleaming"
4"standardized"
5"looming"
6"gloom"
7"silence"
8"depths"
9"footsteps"
10"echoed"
11"flicker"
12"lilt"
13"silk"
14"familiar"
15"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
92.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1644
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1626
uniqueNames37
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Morris"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Raven1
Nest1
Tomás8
Herrera1
Morris7
Greek1
Street1
Fitzrovia1
Dominion1
Theatre1
Saint2
Christopher2
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
Leicester1
Square1
Camden3
British1
Museum1
Regent1
Canal1
Lock1
Tube1
Mornington1
Crescent1
Veil1
Market1
New1
Scotland1
Yard1
Whitechapel1
London1
Seville1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Tomás"
5"Herrera"
6"Morris"
7"Saint"
8"Christopher"
9"Canal"
10"Market"
places
0"Soho"
1"Greek"
2"Street"
3"Fitzrovia"
4"Charing"
5"Cross"
6"Road"
7"Leicester"
8"Camden"
9"Regent"
10"Mornington"
11"Crescent"
12"Scotland"
13"Whitechapel"
14"London"
15"Seville"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like oil"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1644
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"was that wound"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean82.2
std41.75
cv0.508
sampleLengths
0107
1102
278
38
467
5120
689
713
863
9105
10102
1199
1246
13152
1482
15141
1612
1725
18110
19123
92.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences85
matches
0"was watched"
1"been open"
2"being pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs252
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences87
ratio0.08
matches
0"The scar on his left forearm caught the light as he swung his arms—a pale, jagged line that ran from wrist to elbow, a souvenir from a knife attack that had left him for dead two years prior."
1"Graffiti covered the walls—tags and sigils, some fresh and wet, others ancient and faded, symbols that hurt to look at directly."
2"A flicker of sickly green light appeared at the bottom of the stairwell—the market's bioluminescent lamps, casting shadows that danced and twisted against the tiled walls, shadows that did not match the shapes casting them."
3"But the clique—Tomás's clique—they operated in the spaces between heartbeats, between streetlights, in the dark corners where the law did not reach."
4"And if Morris had stumbled onto their operations, if he had seen what they traded in, then—"
5"The green light swelled as she reached the bottom, revealing a cavernous space that should not have fit inside the station's footprint—a bazaar of black silk and canvas tents, vendors with a jaw crowded with excessive teeth and eyes that reflected no light, goods that glowed with inner fire and hummed with trapped lightning."
6"The market noise crashed over her—haggling in tongues that twisted the tongue, the clink of coins that were not minted by any government, the wet drag of something heavy being pulled across stone by chains that rattled like bones."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1641
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.01340645947592931
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0030469226081657527
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean18.9
std12.52
cv0.663
sampleLengths
013
124
229
336
45
529
638
735
815
920
1043
118
1210
136
1420
1531
164
1718
1832
1918
2048
216
2215
2314
2422
2532
267
276
285
2917
301
3123
3217
3315
3418
3517
3618
3712
3825
398
4023
4118
4221
4332
4416
453
4619
4723
4838
4911
49.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.367816091954023
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences81
matches
0"She had tracked Tomás Herrera"
1"He moved with the urgency"
2"He carried a battered leather"
3"She had lost fifteen pounds"
4"Her voice cracked against the"
5"He did not glance behind"
6"She caught the scent of"
7"They crossed into Fitzrovia."
8"She lost sight of him"
9"He emerged onto Charing Cross"
10"He glanced over his shoulder."
11"His warm brown eyes widened,"
12"He knew her face from"
13"He turned north, toward Camden,"
14"They passed the British Museum,"
15"He straightened and resumed his"
16"Its entrance yawned in the"
17"She had read the classified"
18"Her fingers found the worn"
19"She had seen the way"
ratio0.383
40.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences81
matches
0"Rain lashed the Soho pavement"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pulled her"
2"The green neon of the"
3"She had tracked Tomás Herrera"
4"He moved with the urgency"
5"The scar on his left"
6"He carried a battered leather"
7"Quinn kept her distance, her"
8"The worn leather watch on"
9"She had lost fifteen pounds"
10"Her voice cracked against the"
11"Tomás cut through Greek Street,"
12"He did not glance behind"
13"Quinn accelerated, eighteen years of"
14"She caught the scent of"
15"They crossed into Fitzrovia."
16"The rain intensified, turning to"
17"Tomás turned onto a narrow"
18"Quinn followed, shoulder-checking past a"
19"She lost sight of him"
ratio0.84
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount28
matches
0"Rain lashed the Soho pavement in sheets that turned the gutters into rapids."
1"She had tracked Tomás Herrera for three hours, watching him through the bar's rain-streaked window while he nursed a whiskey he never touched, his fingers tappi…"
2"He moved with the urgency of a man who knew he was watched, his olive skin gleaming under the sodium streetlights, dark curly hair plastered flat against his he…"
3"The scar on his left forearm caught the light as he swung his arms—a pale, jagged line that ran from wrist to elbow, a souvenir from a knife attack that had lef…"
4"He carried a battered leather medical bag, the kind paramedics used before the NHS standardized everything into sterile plastic, the bag bulging with supplies t…"
5"She had lost fifteen pounds in the last month chasing leads that dissolved into smoke and rumour, her sharp jawline cutting a hard line beneath eyes that had no…"
6"Quinn accelerated, eighteen years of decorated service driving her legs through the downpour, her breath coming in sharp, controlled bursts."
7"She caught the scent of iodine on him, the ghost of the paramedic he had been before his license vanished, before he had started stitching up creatures that sho…"
8"Tomás turned onto a narrow service alley behind the Dominion Theatre, walls covered in peeling posters for plays that had closed decades ago and fresh graffiti …"
9"She lost sight of him for three seconds near the alley's mouth, her heart a drum against her ribs, then spotted the flash of his Saint Christopher medallion swi…"
10"Tomás leaped the central reservation, medical bag bouncing against his hip, and sprinted toward Leicester Square with a gait that betrayed panic."
11"He knew her face from crime scene photos, from the whispered warnings that had started circulating through the city's underworld three months ago."
12"He turned north, toward Camden, his breath coming in ragged white clouds that vanished into the rain."
13"Quinn followed, her lungs burning, knees aching from old injuries that flared in the cold."
14"Tomás slowed near the Regent's Canal, clutching his left side, the scar on his forearm darkening with blood."
15"He straightened and resumed his run, vanishing beneath the bridge at Camden Lock, his sneakers splashing through the murky water that lapped at the towpath."
16"Graffiti covered the walls—tags and sigils, some fresh and wet, others ancient and faded, symbols that hurt to look at directly."
17"Quinn skidded to a halt at the top of the stairs, rain pouring down her neck and spine, her watch ticking loud in the sudden, heavy silence that fell over the s…"
18"Confidential briefings marked with black X's, whispered about in the precinct's smoking area by officers who had seen things they could not explain."
19"A supernatural black market that moved with the full moon, currently nestled in this abandoned station beneath Camden, selling enchanted goods to clientele that…"
20"A flicker of sickly green light appeared at the bottom of the stairwell—the market's bioluminescent lamps, casting shadows that danced and twisted against the t…"
21"They sold secrets to things that wore human skin like ill-fitting suits."
22"Without it, the things inside would make her prey, an intruder in a den of predators who did not recognize the authority of her badge."
23"Quinn descended the stairs, her boots ringing on metal steps slick with condensation and something else, something that felt like oil."
24"The green light swelled as she reached the bottom, revealing a cavernous space that should not have fit inside the station's footprint—a bazaar of black silk an…"
25"She stepped onto the tiled floor, water dripping from her salt-and-pepper hair onto her shoulders, her breath misting in the unnatural cold."
26"The market noise crashed over her—haggling in tongues that twisted the tongue, the clink of coins that were not minted by any government, the wet drag of someth…"
27"Quinn drew her service weapon, the metal cold and familiar in her palm, and walked forward into the crowd, her brown eyes scanning the masked faces, hunting for…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.6934%