| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx's shadow wrapped around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.36 | | leniency | 0.72 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1178 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.84% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1178 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "maw" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "mechanical" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "throbbed" | | 11 | "marble" | | 12 | "dancing" | | 13 | "velvet" | | 14 | "beacon" | | 15 | "gloom" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1175 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.57% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 940 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.81 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Rory | 17 | | Fae | 4 | | Latin | 1 | | Norman | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Sunday | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Norman" | | 5 | "Shade" | | 6 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.596 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 63.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like regret" | | 1 | "as if speaking from the bottom of a well" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.851 | | wordCount | 1175 | | matches | | 0 | "not the amber sky but a starless void" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 39.17 | | std | 20.58 | | cv | 0.526 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 89 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 91 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 70 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 70 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 53 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | |
| 6.80% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "Helbound souls moved between stations—translucent figures with chef's whites stained crimson, their faces slack and dreamy as they chopped ingredients that glowed and shifted form." | | 1 | "A woman with hollow eyes tossed something into a cauldron; it screamed as it dissolved, a sound that vibrated in Rory's teeth." | | 2 | "Helbound chefs faced off at stations of black marble, flames dancing blue and green from enchanted hearths, creating dishes that defied physics—soufflés that floated three feet above their plates, sauces that painted moving pictures in mid-air, garnishes that sang in harmony." | | 3 | "A dish landed on a platter before her—a morsel of meat that breathed, expanding and contracting, eyes opening in its surface and blinking at her." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 946 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "humid, pressing against Rory's" |
| | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.013742071881606765 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0021141649048625794 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 13.99 | | std | 7.39 | | cv | 0.528 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 57.94% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.36904761904761907 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "She gasped, tasting copper and" | | 1 | "She left no prints in" | | 2 | "They reached out and touched" | | 3 | "It burst, spraying nectar that" | | 4 | "She turned a corner of" | | 5 | "She backed against the stone" | | 6 | "They moved deeper." | | 7 | "Their whisper tasted of ash" | | 8 | "It throbbed, warm and insistent," | | 9 | "They emerged into a clearing" | | 10 | "It smelled of her mother's" | | 11 | "Their violet eyes glowed brighter." | | 12 | "She swung the Fae blade," | | 13 | "They reached the stone door." | | 14 | "It stood ajar, darkness beyond," | | 15 | "She reached for the threshold." |
| | ratio | 0.235 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The Veil tore like wet" | | 1 | "Rory stumbled forward, her trainers" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant blazed against" | | 3 | "She gasped, tasting copper and" | | 4 | "Isolde stood at the threshold," | | 5 | "She left no prints in" | | 6 | "Isolde stepped forward" | | 7 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 8 | "The Fae blade at her" | | 9 | "Isolde's lavender eyes reflected the" | | 10 | "The amber sky pressed down," | | 11 | "Towers of woven wicker and" | | 12 | "Vines as thick as Rory's" | | 13 | "The air hung thick, humid," | | 14 | "Nyx drifted beside them, a" | | 15 | "The Shade's form flickered between" | | 16 | "They reached out and touched" | | 17 | "It burst, spraying nectar that" | | 18 | "The shade hissed too, pulling" | | 19 | "Nyx's voice carried on a" |
| | ratio | 0.971 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 17 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant blazed against her ribs, a furnace pulse that fought the chill seeping from Nyx's shadow-form." | | 1 | "She left no prints in the loam, her bare feet crushing luminescent fungi that burst into silent sparks of violet light." | | 2 | "The amber sky pressed down, heavy and luminous, casting long shadows that moved against the wind." | | 3 | "The air hung thick, humid, tasting of roasting meat and cinnamon, of caramelised sugar and something darker, something that smelled like regret." | | 4 | "Nyx drifted beside them, a silhouette of living darkness that drank the ambient glow." | | 5 | "The shade hissed too, pulling back, their form rippling like disturbed water." | | 6 | "A kitchen sprawled before them, open to the sky, built from the ribcages of impossible beasts that arched overhead like a cathedral of bone." | | 7 | "Helbound souls moved between stations—translucent figures with chef's whites stained crimson, their faces slack and dreamy as they chopped ingredients that glow…" | | 8 | "The air grew more humid, pressing against Rory's skin like a wet cloth, heavy with spores that glittered in the light." | | 9 | "A stream cut through the scene, its waters running silver and thick as mercury, reflecting not the amber sky but a starless void that hurt to look at." | | 10 | "Helbound chefs faced off at stations of black marble, flames dancing blue and green from enchanted hearths, creating dishes that defied physics—soufflés that fl…" | | 11 | "The judges were figures of smoke and velvet, their forms shifting, their hunger a vacuum that pulled at Rory's sanity." | | 12 | "A dish landed on a platter before her—a morsel of meat that breathed, expanding and contracting, eyes opening in its surface and blinking at her." | | 13 | "Isolde appeared at her elbow, smelling of ozone and wildflowers that bloomed year-round." | | 14 | "She swung the Fae blade, and the moonsilver cut through the organic matter, cold light flashing, severing tendrils that bled sap the colour of wine." | | 15 | "It stood ajar, darkness beyond, a void that smelled of earth and safety." | | 16 | "Nyx held it open, their form flickering between solid and void, straining against the realm's pull." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.04 | | leniency | 0.08 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |