| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His fingers tightened around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.19 | | leniency | 0.381 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |
| 92.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1399 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1399 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "glint" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "dancing" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "wavered" | | 11 | "racing" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "stark" | | 14 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 124 | | matches | | 0 | "d in terror" | | 1 | "d in panic" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 124 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 141 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1386 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 1252 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.96 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 12 | | Quinn | 1 | | London | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Herrera | 1 | | Hollow | 4 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Tomás | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Saint" | | 3 | "Christopher" | | 4 | "Herrera" | | 5 | "Hollow" | | 6 | "Raven" | | 7 | "Tomás" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Market" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 61.76% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite music" | | 1 | "as if testing its memory" | | 2 | "darkness that seemed to cling to the thing" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1386 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 30.13 | | std | 24.19 | | cv | 0.803 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 78 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 78 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 94 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 69 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 62 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 50 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 44 | | 34 | 54 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 51 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 30 | | 45 | 9 |
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| 99.60% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 210 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 141 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect—a wiry man in a dark hoodie—had been feeding her breadcrumbs all night, leading her deeper into the labyrinth of the city." | | 1 | "They were jagged, angular—like something carved by a hand that didn’t belong to this world." | | 2 | "She’d heard whispers of it in the underbelly of the city—a black market for things that didn’t exist." | | 3 | "The air hit her first—thick, spiced with incense and something metallic, like old blood." | | 4 | "The crowd was a mix of faces—some human, some not." | | 5 | "She’d seen his file—former paramedic, lost his license." | | 6 | "The suspect—her suspect—stood in the centre, his hood thrown back, his face twisted in terror." | | 7 | "The thing turned its head—if it had a head—towards her." | | 8 | "The Hollow lunged, its fingers—too many of them—scrabbling at the air." | | 9 | "A green neon sign flickered above a doorway—the Raven’s Nest." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1269 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.026004728132387706 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004728132387706856 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 141 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 141 | | mean | 9.83 | | std | 5.83 | | cv | 0.593 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 41.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.2765957446808511 | | totalSentences | 141 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 84.35% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "She rounded a corner, her" | | 1 | "He glanced back, his face" | | 2 | "He ducked into an alley," | | 3 | "She slowed, her hand resting" | | 4 | "She pushed through, the door" | | 5 | "She pulled her torch from" | | 6 | "They were jagged, angular—like something" | | 7 | "Her torch flickered as she" | | 8 | "She’d heard whispers of it" | | 9 | "She’d come this far." | | 10 | "She pushed it open." | | 11 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 12 | "She spun, her other hand" | | 13 | "He was tall, his olive" | | 14 | "She’d seen his file—former paramedic," | | 15 | "she said, her voice low" | | 16 | "His grip was firm, but" | | 17 | "His thumb pressed into the" | | 18 | "She yanked her arm free." | | 19 | "It had come from the" |
| | ratio | 0.339 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 108 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain came down in" | | 1 | "Neon signs bled into the" | | 2 | "Detective Harlow Quinn moved like" | | 3 | "The suspect—a wiry man in" | | 4 | "She rounded a corner, her" | | 5 | "The man was fast, but" | | 6 | "He glanced back, his face" | | 7 | "Fear made people sloppy." | | 8 | "He ducked into an alley," | | 9 | "The alley was narrow, the" | | 10 | "A fire escape sagged overhead," | | 11 | "The suspect’s footsteps echoed, then" | | 12 | "She slowed, her hand resting" | | 13 | "The alley dead-ended at a" | | 14 | "She pushed through, the door" | | 15 | "The space beyond was dark," | | 16 | "A staircase descended into blackness." | | 17 | "The suspect’s footsteps echoed from" | | 18 | "This wasn’t just a chase" | | 19 | "This was a descent." |
| | ratio | 0.939 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 96.77% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She rounded a corner, her boots splashing through a puddle that sent a cold spray up her trousers." | | 1 | "The space beyond was dark, the air thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something that prickled the hairs on the back of her neck." | | 2 | "Beyond it, the murmur of voices, the clink of glass, the low hum of something that wasn’t quite music." | | 3 | "The space was vast, a cavernous tunnel lit by flickering lanterns that cast long, dancing shadows." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice low" | | 1 | "His thumb pressed, as if testing its memory" | | 2 | "He wiped, his fingers lingering on the scar" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "His thumb pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.095 | | leniency | 0.19 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |