| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her laugh cracked like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.38 | | leniency | 0.76 | | rawRatio | 0.053 | | effectiveRatio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1531 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1531 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "vibrated" | | 1 | "lilt" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pumping" | | 4 | "navigating" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "predator" | | 7 | "sanctuary" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 121 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1516 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.75% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Outside, London roared with traffic and rain, indifferent." |
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| 98.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 974 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.03 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Moreau | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Lucien | 10 | | Avaros | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Marseille" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.987 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1516 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "recognised that silhouette" | | 1 | "carried that Marseille" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 29.73 | | std | 19.79 | | cv | 0.666 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 62 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 65 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 63 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 54 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 63 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 52 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 33 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 55 | | 43 | 69 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 41 | | 48 | 39 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 121 | | ratio | 0.107 | | matches | | 0 | "She recognised that silhouette—too tall, too still, shoulders squared beneath a charcoal suit that cost more than her monthly rent." | | 1 | "His cane—the ivory-handled one with the thin blade concealed inside—tapped once against the floorboards." | | 2 | "One eye caught the light amber, predatory and warm; the other stayed black as a demon's pupil." | | 3 | "He studied her—black hair falling past her shoulders, bright blue eyes narrowed to slits, flour still dusting her left cheek from the flatbread she'd been kneading." | | 4 | "The motion was fluid, practised—the grace of a man who made his living navigating danger." | | 5 | "The photo's corner dug into her palm—her face turned three-quarters away, unaware, black hair tumbling over her shoulder as she'd laughed at something the bookseller said." | | 6 | "The space shrank around them—books stacked to the ceiling, scrolls unfurled across every surface, research notes papering the walls." | | 7 | "His breath came warm against her face, smelling of bergamot and something darker—ozone, stone, the realm of Avaros that she'd only read about in the margins of Eva's journals." | | 8 | "Brick Lane bustled below—tourists with cameras, the neon of curry houses, the permanent stink of diesel and frying oil." | | 9 | "The locks clicked behind him as he secured the door—one, two, three—the sound final as a coffin nail." | | 10 | "She could feel his heart hammering beneath—too fast, too hard, a trapped bird against her palms." | | 11 | "\"I don't want you to be a secret.\" He caught her wrist, pressing a kiss to the crescent scar—gentle, reverent, his lips warm against her pulse point." | | 12 | "The wall she'd built—brick by brick, deadbolt by deadbolt—developed hairline cracks, light seeping through." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 994 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.02716297786720322 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004024144869215292 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 121 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 121 | | mean | 12.53 | | std | 8.59 | | cv | 0.686 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 49.31% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.35537190082644626 | | totalSentences | 121 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the flat, Ptolemy" | | 1 | "Just let the words hang," | | 2 | "Just a fraction." |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 67.62% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't check again." | | 1 | "She recognised that silhouette—too tall," | | 2 | "She undid the chain, the" | | 3 | "His cane—the ivory-handled one with" | | 4 | "His voice carried that Marseille" | | 5 | "He studied her—black hair falling" | | 6 | "His voice flat" | | 7 | "She touched her wrist, the" | | 8 | "He stepped across the threshold" | | 9 | "She'd forgotten she still carried" | | 10 | "He crossed the small living" | | 11 | "His breath came warm against" | | 12 | "He didn't raise his voice" | | 13 | "His thumb brushed her jaw," | | 14 | "His voice dropped to a" | | 15 | "He laughed, sharp and humourless" | | 16 | "She turned away, staring at" | | 17 | "Her voice cracked" | | 18 | "She felt the heat radiating" | | 19 | "His hand settled on her" |
| | ratio | 0.381 | |
| 25.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt slid home" | | 1 | "Rory wiped her hands on" | | 2 | "She didn't check again." | | 3 | "She recognised that silhouette—too tall," | | 4 | "Rory's fingers found the crescent" | | 5 | "She undid the chain, the" | | 6 | "The bottom lock stayed engaged" | | 7 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 8 | "His cane—the ivory-handled one with" | | 9 | "Platinum hair slicked back, dark" | | 10 | "His voice carried that Marseille" | | 11 | "Rory gripped the doorframe, knuckles" | | 12 | "The fryer downstairs hissed, pumping" | | 13 | "Lucien didn't move." | | 14 | "He studied her—black hair falling" | | 15 | "His voice flat" | | 16 | "She touched her wrist, the" | | 17 | "He stepped across the threshold" | | 18 | "The motion was fluid, practised—the" | | 19 | "The admission slipped out before" |
| | ratio | 0.869 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 90.59% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She recognised that silhouette—too tall, too still, shoulders squared beneath a charcoal suit that cost more than her monthly rent." | | 1 | "The motion was fluid, practised—the grace of a man who made his living navigating danger." | | 2 | "Ptolemy wove between Lucien's ankles, purring like a motor, rubbing against the charcoal wool of his trousers." |
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| 72.37% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She touched, the scar there pale and crescent-shaped against her skin" | | 1 | "He leaned, his forehead nearly touching hers" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.02 | | leniency | 0.04 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.04 | |