| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1037 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1037 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "beacon" | | 10 | "gloom" | | 11 | "unreadable" | | 12 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1035 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 934 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 18 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Earth | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Isolde | 9 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Nyx | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Dymas" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.536 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 74.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like drowning in honey" | | 1 | "looked like dried blood" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.966 | | wordCount | 1035 | | matches | | 0 | "not burning now, but pulling, a current in her bloodstream directing her left" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 32.34 | | std | 16.19 | | cv | 0.501 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 76 | | 10 | 64 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 57 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 29 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.55% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "The vines twisted in spirals, heavy with fruit that pulsed with inner light—grapes the size of plums, glowing faint blue, and apples that dripped nectar like wax from a candle." | | 1 | "A fire burned blue beneath a cauldron large enough to bathe in, and something moved within the broth—shapes that might have been vegetables or something else, swimming in patterns that hurt to follow." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 939 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.01810436634717785 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0010649627263045794 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 10.56 | | std | 6.72 | | cv | 0.636 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 33 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 52.04% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3673469387755102 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 43.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Just that bruised, golden light" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "It burned against her skin," | | 2 | "Their violet eyes glowed in" | | 3 | "Her feet sank into the" | | 4 | "They stood at the edge" | | 5 | "She moved between the rows" | | 6 | "She could feel it, a" | | 7 | "They walked deeper." | | 8 | "She followed it, away from" | | 9 | "She didn't enter." | | 10 | "They reformed beside Aurora, their" | | 11 | "Her eyes held no pupils," | | 12 | "It gave a hard pulse," | | 13 | "Its mouth opened, revealing rows" | | 14 | "Her grip was iron, her" | | 15 | "They reached out, their hand" | | 16 | "They reached the edge of" | | 17 | "She landed on her knees" | | 18 | "She looked at the closing" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 6.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The rift tore open in" | | 1 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 2 | "It burned against her skin," | | 3 | "Nyx solidified beside her, shadows" | | 4 | "Their violet eyes glowed in" | | 5 | "Isolde stepped forward, her silver" | | 6 | "Her feet sank into the" | | 7 | "The scar on her left" | | 8 | "The transition felt like drowning" | | 9 | "The next, the air tasted" | | 10 | "The sky above blazed amber," | | 11 | "They stood at the edge" | | 12 | "The vines twisted in spirals," | | 13 | "The roots emerged from the" | | 14 | "Nyx's voice carried on a" | | 15 | "Isolde walked ahead, her lavender" | | 16 | "She moved between the rows" | | 17 | "Aurora kept her hands in" | | 18 | "The Fae-Forged Blade hung at" | | 19 | "She could feel it, a" |
| | ratio | 0.908 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "It burned against her skin, a coal of crimson warmth that matched the heat building in her chest." | | 1 | "The vines twisted in spirals, heavy with fruit that pulsed with inner light—grapes the size of plums, glowing faint blue, and apples that dripped nectar like wa…" | | 2 | "She moved between the rows of vines, her fingers brushing leaves that chimed like glass bells." | | 3 | "Orchards rose on either side, trees bearing fruit that wept syrup onto the ground." | | 4 | "Bees the size of hummingbirds drifted between the blossoms, their wings leaving trails of pollen that glittered like dust." | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant tugged at her chest, not burning now, but pulling, a current in her bloodstream directing her left." | | 6 | "Copper pots hung from chains that stretched into the amber sky, swaying without wind." | | 7 | "A fire burned blue beneath a cauldron large enough to bathe in, and something moved within the broth—shapes that might have been vegetables or something else, s…" | | 8 | "They reached out, their hand passing through Aurora's shoulder, solidifying just enough to push her forward." | | 9 | "Isolde led, her silver hair whipping in a wind that touched them, cold and smelling of iron and rosemary." | | 10 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their chest heaving, shadows writhing at their edges." | | 11 | "Isolde stood over them, her feet hovering a fraction above the moss, no prints marking her passage." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.063 | | leniency | 0.125 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |