| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "they broke apart [apart]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.464 | | leniency | 0.929 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 96.39% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1386 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1386 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "coded" | | 1 | "glint" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "blown wide" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "throbbed" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 58 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 1372 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "I have to fix this. Don’t wait up." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 990 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.91 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Avaros | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Aurora | 9 | | English | 1 | | Three | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Lucien | 8 | | London | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "Avaros" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 96.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if memorizing its shape, as if he could read her history in the pale tissue" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1372 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.37% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "hated that it" | | 1 | "learned that love" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 47.31 | | std | 26.09 | | cv | 0.552 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 84 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 72 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 83 | | 17 | 73 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 60 | | 20 | 58 | | 21 | 63 | | 22 | 74 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 112 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 88 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.122 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half past nine—three sharp raps, a pause, two more—the coded rhythm they’d used when the world below was too dangerous to name names aloud." | | 1 | "Heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—met hers through the glass, and something in her chest twisted, tight and traitorous." | | 2 | "The door swung inward with a sigh of old hinges, and the smell of him rushed in—bergamot and ozone and something darker, like rain on hot stone." | | 3 | "His voice was the same—low, accented, four languages layered underneath the English like sediment." | | 4 | "She hadn’t heard him say it—hadn’t heard anyone say it—since the night he’d left without a word, leaving only a note on the kitchen table that said *I have to fix this." | | 5 | "The flat was chaos—books stacked to the ceiling, scrolls unfurled across the small kitchen table, research notes papering the walls like a madwoman’s wallpaper." | | 6 | "Malphora—one of her aliases, the one she’d used in the underworld, the one that meant she’d been seen, marked, targeted." | | 7 | "His were inches away—amber and black, so close she could see the flecks of gold in the amber, the absolute void of the black." | | 8 | "He kissed her then, and it was like coming home after a long, terrible winter—his mouth warm against hers, tasting of the mint he always chewed, asking permission with every press, every question." | | 9 | "The flat around them blurred—the books, the scrolls, the curry house below, the world of delivery routes and abusive exes and childhood scars." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1009 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.02180376610505451 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004955401387512388 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 16.73 | | std | 13.17 | | cv | 0.787 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 58 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 47 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 58.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3780487804878049 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 54.64% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she undid the locks" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 56.07% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "She should have kept the" | | 1 | "She should have slid the" | | 2 | "His voice was the same—low," | | 3 | "His amber eye flickered." | | 4 | "She hadn’t heard him say" | | 5 | "she said, stepping back to" | | 6 | "He stood in the narrow" | | 7 | "Her voice cracked on the" | | 8 | "She hated that it cracked." | | 9 | "She was cool-headed Aurora, quick-thinking" | | 10 | "She didn’t crack." | | 11 | "She laughed, sharp and brittle." | | 12 | "she gestured at his eyes," | | 13 | "He took a step closer" | | 14 | "Her hand found the scar" | | 15 | "His fingers were long, elegant," | | 16 | "Her breath hitched." | | 17 | "He closed the distance." | | 18 | "His hand finally touched her" | | 19 | "His other hand found her" |
| | ratio | 0.41 | |
| 33.77% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half" | | 1 | "Aurora’s hand went to the" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau filled the frame." | | 3 | "She should have kept the" | | 4 | "She should have slid the" | | 5 | "The door swung inward with" | | 6 | "Lucien stepped across the threshold," | | 7 | "The curry house below sent" | | 8 | "His voice was the same—low," | | 9 | "Aurora crossed her arms." | | 10 | "The black sleeve of her" | | 11 | "His amber eye flickered." | | 12 | "The black one stayed steady," | | 13 | "The name landed like a" | | 14 | "She hadn’t heard him say" | | 15 | "she said, stepping back to" | | 16 | "The flat was chaos—books stacked" | | 17 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, yowled" | | 18 | "Lucien didn’t move toward the" | | 19 | "He stood in the narrow" |
| | ratio | 0.852 | |
| 81.97% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Even through the fisheye lens," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Even through the fisheye lens, distorted and grimy, she saw the charcoal suit, the ivory glint of his cane propped against the doorframe, the platinum hair slic…" | | 1 | "She should have slid the third deadbolt home and told him to go to hell, or to Avaros, or wherever half-demons went when they abandoned the people who loved the…" | | 2 | "The curry house below sent up a warm scent of cumin and fried onions, mixing with the scent of old paper and incense that clung to every surface here." | | 3 | "She was cool-headed Aurora, quick-thinking Rory, the girl who’d fled Cardiff and an abusive ex and built a life delivering dumplings above a bar." | | 4 | "His fingers were long, elegant, the kind of hands that could snap a neck or play a piano with equal precision." | | 5 | "His hand finally touched her face, thumb brushing her cheekbone, and Aurora leaned into it before she could stop herself, her eyes fluttering closed." | | 6 | "Lucien smiled, and it transformed his face, humanizing the sharp angles, warming the too-perfect symmetry." | | 7 | "There was only this: the press of his body, the heat of his mouth, the way his thumb traced the crescent scar on her wrist as if memorizing its shape, as if he …" |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "they broke apart, foreheads resting together, breathing each other in, Lucien whispered," | | 1 | "she said, and the words were a surrender and a battle cry all at once" |
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| 42.86% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.214 | |